56. iceheart 0-0 vs. 57. Tim McGraw 0-0

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Omen, Jul 5, 2003.

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  1. Omen

    Omen O Luh Da Kids

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  2. willy wonka

    willy wonka The Candy Man

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    24. Changing Times

    We used to chase that boy home from school
    We called him freckle faced red headed fool
    He was different, he wasn't cool like me
    Sticks and stones didn't break any bones
    But we never left well enough alone
    One day he ran away from home you see
    And I passed him as he walked away
    And in his eyes I heard him say

    One of these days you're gonna love me
    You'll sit down by yourself and think
    Of all the times you pushed and shoved me
    And what good friends we might have been
    And then you're gonna sigh a little
    And maybe even cry a little
    But one of these days you're gonna love me

    Patty Sue was a small town beauty
    I took one look at her and had to pull her to me
    Lord knows she should have seen right through me
    When I promised her the world
    But at 17 you only want one thing
    I left her standing with my high school ring
    Innocent tears in a pourin' rain
    As I walked away
    And I still see her in my dreams
    And to this day she's whispering

    One of these days you're gonna love me
    You'll sit down by yourself and think
    About the time you turned from me
    And what good friends we might have been
    And then you're gonna sigh a little
    And maybe even cry a little
    But one of these days, you're gonna love me

    Now everybody stands up
    The congregation sings
    It's a song of sweet forgiveness
    And as the chorus rings
    The wind blows clear my memory
    The pages start to turn
    And suddenly I'm singing
    The moment that I learn

    One of these days I'm gonna love me
    And feel the joy of sweet release
    One of these days I'll rise above me
    And at last I'll find some peace
    And then I'm gonna smile a little
    And maybe even laugh a little
    But one of these days...
    I'm gonna love me
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  3. iceheart

    iceheart The Frozen Poet

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    2.Nightmares and 3.Giving Up​

    each night i quickly fall asleep without the involvement of counting sheep//
    i transition from one hell to another, where each night seems worse than any other//
    a place where i am likely to be pitted against my deceased brother in a competition to see who's tougher//

    each night i put my soul on the line when i leave my body behind//
    to enter a realm where my only weapon is my mind, and i fight an uphill battle, hoping to find//
    a way to ensure that the next time i delve into darkness i will truly be blind//

    each night a different demon chooses to visit, bringing with it a dark gift of pain exquisite//
    visions of endless mazes, courses intricate, and visions of failure and rejection, undeniably realistic//
    it makes me go ballistic each night to realize i'm being treated like a statistic//
    whoever creates these dreams must be incredibly sadistic//

    each night brings a slightly more atrocius dream than the night before//
    every succesive dream chills me to the core, but tonight i have a trick of my own in store//
    tomorrow they'll find the wall covered with brains and gore//
    and i shall sleep a dreamless sleep forever more//

    iceheart
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  4. iceheart

    iceheart The Frozen Poet

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    why the hell did i keystyle that^? oh well, guess i'll have to see if it's good enough. peace

    iceheart
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  5. iceheart

    iceheart The Frozen Poet

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    shit what happens if i am short 2 lines?
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  6. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    .. ^ Over No Shows

    -Weez
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  7. kaszmo

    kaszmo New Member

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    vote: iceheart

    tim:
    this was nice, but i didnt feel ur rhyme scheme nur ur flow.. u wrote more of a poem here.. i really liked the emotions in this piece and the end had me like, damn.. but ur verses were short and simple written and like i said i couldnt catch ur flow really

    iceheart:
    damn freestyle? nice! started out a bit choopy with a weak rhyme another/other.. but u picked it up from then on.. flow was there and the contant was ill.. u also used a better vocab then tim.. and ur end was an even bigger DAMN.. like a shock! so u get my vote
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  8. iceheart

    iceheart The Frozen Poet

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  9. DahLohner

    DahLohner Straight Up Un-Holy

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    Mm..

    Tim- Nice verse, loved the chorus idea, and the emotion got strongest at the END, just that last line in terms of the central character "one of these days im gonna love ME!"
    Simple scheme kinda hurt you in my eyes, but the content was great.

    Iceheart- Nice verse, great scheme and creativity, but it lacked content and the ending was kinda lame.

    Vote-Tim McGraw

    IMOUT
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  10. Flow Da HoloGraff

    Flow Da HoloGraff Fuck Up!

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    omg are yall fucking serious .. see one thing about living in texas is that u hear country music .. yea so tim magraw .. just typed up a tim magraw song ... who is a famous country singer ... vote ice heart ... someone needs to check this shit ... that's why yall couldnt feel tim's rhyme scheme
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  11. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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    bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahah....

    now that is hilarious...

    ive never in my life seen someone bite a country song...

    vote iceheart...
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  12. FortiFied Killa

    FortiFied Killa New Member

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    vote-Iceheart

    that is sad mcgraw, if my vote has to be discounted because of lack of reasons then so be it
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  13. iceheart

    iceheart The Frozen Poet

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    can i waive the biter rule? i really want to know if i am better than whoever this is even if he can't come up with his own stuff.
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  14. AuThoR NYSE

    AuThoR NYSE Black Hand

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    Vote - Iceheart

    reasons have been stated above
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  15. DahLohner

    DahLohner Straight Up Un-Holy

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    What??

    BITER!

    IMOUT
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  16. Cocaine Charlie

    Cocaine Charlie shock aka solution

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    lmmfao..vote - iceheart..

    obviously..
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  17. Blazin'

    Blazin' SaviorLife

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    bwahahah..this was classic..


    vote= iceheart
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  18. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    I gotta say this was good for a laugh...damn, last thing I woulda expected. Sad thing is, I woulda never guessed, even though I do live in Texas and I worked at a place that played country for like hours upon on end. So blatant...dood had some balls to think no one would know...but biting is baaaaad.

    Vote - Ice
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  19. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

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    vote ice

    but tim dont take this to heart you'll pick up on everything the more you do it
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  20. Omen

    Omen O Luh Da Kids

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    Iceheart Win 1-0

    Tim McGraw Loss 0-1
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