55 MisterEThoughts vs. 56 White-Eyez

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Omen, Jun 28, 2003.

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  1. Omen

    Omen O Luh Da Kids

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    VERSES DUE Wednesday 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EST
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    Choose 1 topic here:

    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?threadid=592953

    and write your story for your match in this thread!


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    GO FOR IT!!!
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  2. White-Eyez

    White-Eyez Breed of iLLness

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    blah....
    checkin in
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  3. White-Eyez

    White-Eyez Breed of iLLness

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    The afternoon is late.. and the storm is coming down hard.... you walk out in the street... and see a baby all alone further down crying.. soaked... and lost... --- you look... and notice the baby is by himself... but when he turns head at your attention.. u find that the little boy is you as a child.... What did you feel? think? Do?


    Lighting Strikes, my vision is blurred by a blindin light
    Concentration dies, i didnt no what to do ,or what was right
    All alone, was this baby left to die, i couldn't help but wonder
    If this child, was forgotton about as i search for the mother


    Past memories flow through my mind,
    Abanded at birth, i begin to see my past life rewind

    So familiar, yet it couldn't be..how could i be this baby
    Our eyes lock, jaw dropps, damn i couldn't believe it was me
    configurations of despirtation, lead me to be a failure while
    Givin no chance as person, i resorted to the low life of denile

    Flashbacks

    Daddy was a drunk, momma was never there for me
    By the age of three, i was living cold alone, with no family
    Adopted... foster parents treated me like a king
    Bought me everything i wanted and everything i need
    Years go by i wondered where my parents where
    I asked the Kramers, but they didnt blurt a werd
    I got angry began to rip shit, through a hiphy fit
    Pissed as i was i controleld my anger, they told me to sit
    They explanded to me what kind of people my parents are
    told me they where no good, and i needed to stay afar

    Old enough to go to school, treated on fairly like gay
    I had no one to come, may 16 for career day
    I wondered, i asked, why me, god why me, as a prey
    It was like no one was listening to the words i had to say
    13 now, i began to understand, yet colors where bland
    Damn, i learned from Mr. Kramer how to hold emotions and be a man

    Jenny was my first girl friend, yet soon to be a bride
    I wanted a life, to feel what it felt like to have love on ur side

    17 now, i was engaged... left the struggles in the past
    lost my virginity, as i inserted my penis in the gap
    Started workin, at the local club it was alright
    hunsband by day, yet an underestimated bartender at night

    March 13, a Storm Was Coming, but i insested to work late
    Walkin alone, 3 miles from home pacing at a steady rate
    it began pouring all to soon, At that time i had lost my vision
    Heard the baby crying, picked it indesisfully with precision

    Flash backs end

    I open my eyes... heard no baby cries or lightning strikes
    Nothing in site except knowledge gained through the truth of my life
    test
  4. White-Eyez

    White-Eyez Breed of iLLness

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    votes will go herre
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  5. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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  6. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    i am wondering when this is due so i can drop it
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  7. White-Eyez

    White-Eyez Breed of iLLness

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    are you retarted..... read the rules
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  8. MisterEThoughts

    MisterEThoughts MysteryOfUntoldTruth

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    damn i am sorry for fuckin asking
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  9. Omen

    Omen O Luh Da Kids

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    White-Eyez wins 1-0

    Thoughts no shows
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