55 Eddie 3-2 vs 56 Snikka 2-1

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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  3. Snikka

    Snikka Vision Action Execution

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  4. Snikka

    Snikka Vision Action Execution

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    I don't know what it is, for some reason, I never felt you...


    Naked pictures with men. Wow.


    Time to clear out the closets............................



    With ill conviction, I'ma leave ya biography fiction//Taken two 'needles' and 'scratch' your rep like 'mixin'//Cutting your head two inches from the 'top's//to use as a bowl for ya many written brain 'clots'//......cause you must be insane//and it wasn't the fag pictures//I could already tell from your stupid ass name, you MUST be LAME//Using 'shear' rocks to cut your low intelligence in 'slots'//then drop ya dome with a bowling ball like posteurpedic 'cots'//Your style ALWAYS 'rots' under the written block//blast you with ink to leave ya eye's in 'shock'//and since you like suckin Cock, I got a Janitor complex//solution to silence the weak, cork ya grill with sanitary MOPS//steppin in here, you first need to grow up, mommy's little baby//soakin ya diapers in lighter fluid//as I 'smoke' you to burn past the nineth de-gree...............................





    haha.




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  5. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    ..Pedaphile filth, you come equipt with a whip
    You're in love with 'Brit's', so i'll 'spear' you with a chap on your lips
    You musta got lazy and slapped a verse together, in that case
    ...it seems God did the exact same thing to YOUR face
    Dont get me wrong big guy, let me explain it, see
    You're round and white and got shitted on, similar to toilet seats
    Check the first 2 letters of your name, i'll kill you dude
    Like aim conversations, i get read, while your just left in the blue
    This is the end of your chapter, watch my era engage
    and by the way, congratz, your record now resembles your age
    Just call me the bone collecter
    I dont know what was a bigger lie...Tekneek sayin he was leavin, or your record



    blah, i figure thats enough
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  6. ArchLyricist

    ArchLyricist Watch ya Mouth ~!!

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    Snikke - "With ill conviction, I'ma leave ya biography fiction//Taken two 'needles' and 'scratch' your rep like 'mixin".. not a bad intro son.. i actually liked it.. "and since you like suckin Cock" oh boy.. please.. fall back.. verse wack wack..

    lil hot sauce - I aint read ur verse yet.. but if u dont come w/ something better than that.. okay.. played intro, which was still better than most of his verse.. lol@"You musta got lazy and slapped a verse together, in that case ...it seems God did the exact same thing to YOUR face".. good shit.. you got this easy.. aint even had to go hard..

    vote = lil hot sizzle
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  7. Snikka

    Snikka Vision Action Execution

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    hahaha...... the kid has "I Sucked off the Janitor" in his name..... and he's gonna call shit played.....


    THINK before you vote.




    looks like 1-0 now...






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  8. Cheb's Theorum

    Cheb's Theorum Marquee MC

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    ok... not a bad battle here... i didn't catch some of the lines in either verse... so let me have a look at this.......re-reading each verse for the third time right now...

    ok... snikka... i liked the intro, and i also liked your unconventional flow... it actually reads nicely in most parts...i didn't get the middle part of your verse.. the bowling ball/cots and the cutting his head 2 inches/clots... whateva... don't try to explain it because it's not going to change anything...i didn't like the first two letters/left in the blue... i thought it was corny, didn't have much impact at all and i just wasn't feelin it...

    now on to lil hot sauce......intro didn't make sense.. dude is from Arizona... ok, i'm feelin the god/face line.. lol that was nice.... callin him on a fake record is played and corny, because Oz is the one that decides records... but whateva...

    all and all, i was feelin these verses about the same, but i think snikka got the edge for his unique flow and the janitor line... nice play on the name..

    vote: snikka

    ps: chill with the play by play on the voting.. it looks like you're trying to sway votes when you analyze every vote.. just let the magic happen.. plus if you put a bunch of comments in, it looks like more people have voted and that means people will look to other battles to vote...
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  9. phatkid

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    You musta got lazy and slapped a verse together, in that case
    ...it seems God did the exact same thing to YOUR face
    Dont get me wrong big guy, let me explain it, see
    You're round and white and got shitted on, similar to toilet seats
    Check the first 2 letters of your name, i'll kill you dude
    Like aim conversations, i get read, while your just left in the blue

    ^^^ this was some heatery right here

    I gotta give it to sause cause of the formentioned lines,
    plus lil flowed a lil better

    vote lil hot sauce
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  10. Alpengiest

    Alpengiest Wit-Eeyore..like pooh.

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    Sauce won this easy even tho is intro was horrid...snikka didnt have anything worth peepin an eye out. Sauce atleast attempted to entertain.
    V-Eddie
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  11. Jay ReEz

    Jay ReEz Ridin' fo' da WestSide VV

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    this verse sauce did impress me with, better than his other shit....snikka came weak
    no further explanation needed...


    nice shitauce...

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  12. Snikka

    Snikka Vision Action Execution

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  13. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    werd at my intro

    it was,
    your obsession with SOD explains why you got a chap on your lips

    but i changed it [dunno]
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  14. Def Angel

    Def Angel Fuck you

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    Vote= lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce:
    ..Pedaphile filth, you come equipt with a whip
    You're in love with 'Brit's', so i'll 'spear' you with a chap on your lips- Good one

    Check the first 2 letters of your name, i'll kill you dude
    Like aim conversations, i get read, while your just left in the blue- Good but not too good man. DOes the trick tho.

    Eddie/ Snikka:
    With ill conviction, I'ma leave ya biography fiction//Taken two 'needles' and 'scratch' your rep like 'mixin'//- ehh....okaaay.

    After this I could find any wordz that actually made since and rhymed dogg.

    That's why lil hot sauce gets it.
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  15. KiLaKaZ the BLackAttican

    KiLaKaZ the BLackAttican B L a C k A tt I C u S

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    this battle was ok, i can't say it was close
    i may have felt snikka waaaaay more if he had broken the verse down by linez, the run on style makes it hard to tell where your really pausing cause if it was at ever "//" then it was a tad off, over all the disses were direct, some were a bit abstract, and it was definitely battle material.

    ed, nice verse. nice flow.

    BOTH of you had some weak closers
    but due to that opener on edz, i'mma have to drop the vote his direction

    v- eddie

    keep rippin' both of yall.
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  16. Snikka

    Snikka Vision Action Execution

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    god damn sauce..... I guess props....



    looks 6-1 to me.




    VOTES!




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  17. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    Arizona? here goes 2 cheeper blows
    The last 'Ariz cat' that was dope signed out about 2 weeks ago

    *wonders why i didnt use that*

    anywase...werd...good battle
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  18. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    ^^^ that punch would of killed it


    but vote Eddie on the reason, his verse was way more structured
    opener was ok, god face line ok, toilet seat line blah, both couplet after that was coo


    Snikka if ya format ur verse for example

    With ill conviction, I'ma leave ya biography fiction//
    Taken two 'needles' and 'scratch' your rep like 'mixin'//
    Cutting your head two inches from the 'top's//
    to use as a bowl for ya many written brain 'clots'//
    ......cause you must be insane//and it wasn't the fag pictures/
    /I could already tell from your stupid ass name, you MUST be LAME//
    Using 'shear' rocks to cut your low intelligence in 'slots'//
    then drop ya dome with a bowling ball like posteurpedic 'cots'//
    Your style ALWAYS 'rots' under the written block//
    blast you with ink to leave ya eye's in 'shock'/
    /and since you like suckin Cock, I got a Janitor complex//
    solution to silence the weak, cork ya grill with sanitary MOPS//
    steppin in here, you first need to grow up, mommy's little baby//
    soakin ya diapers in lighter fluid//
    as I 'smoke' you to burn past the nineth de-gree...............................

    like that it would be easier on the reader, get rid of the "//" too
    first line blah, so is the second/ lame line aight i guess/ naw

    and ur flow is so off,

    hollah at ya boi shit


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  19. Snikka

    Snikka Vision Action Execution

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    ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ i couda saw that vote coming from a mile away.




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  20. Orthodoxx

    Orthodoxx Fuck you

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    Wow, your structure was ass which made ur punches less effective and flow was shit.

    V/Edward
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