53. Jay Reez 1-0 vs. 54. Overhead 2-0

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  1. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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  2. Out of Site

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    what...16-18
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  3. Out of Site

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    no personals, never heard of you










    heard he was battlin OH....


    then planned suicide, just picture this when the battles over
    piece to his chest....kissin himself goodbye like sammy sosa
    his plan to show up couldn't even be decent with help given
    i told em he needs an act of god, and he called up mel gibson
    well, listen......reez is a virgin, doesnt know what lifes about
    so once he heard love was blind, he poked his eyeballs out
    i aint got time for clowns, put ya life on the line i'll take it quick
    ya verse couldnt raise eyebrows if it came with a make up kit
    i aint tryin to hate, but theirs no way you'll rank in front of me
    so this aint going down the wire 'less u call ya cable company
    want to see this dummy breathe, hope i dont handle the bullets
    cause i'll have him seeing more blood than family reunions
    fuck the excuses, i can simply suggest to come with ya best
    but if u went the whole 9 yards, u'll probably run out of breath
    no one wants to hear ur opinions....not becuz ur a known joke
    bcuz...............................
    if you put your two cents in......ur pockets'll go broke




    3-0...
    more u wait, the worse it makes u look bitch
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  4. Jay ReEz

    Jay ReEz Ridin' fo' da WestSide VV

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  5. Jay ReEz

    Jay ReEz Ridin' fo' da WestSide VV

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    since u bitchin so much, i jus key'ed this...

    Bitch...

    Wut sex is this niqqa, most can tell from the hips...
    But this bitch doesnt even know if hes a male or a chick...
    If he got a mail order dick, maybe then hed sprout balls...
    Im derailin this bitch, his impatience is his downfall...
    I doubt yall can honestly say that this niqqa’s nice...
    When he takes played concepts and flips them twice, lets get it right...
    Who else can have the same lines in six different battles at a time?...
    But babygurl recycles and shes automatically disqualified?...
    Thats a bigger tragedy then columbine, Cause u recylce a lot of rhymes...
    If them bitches was soda cans ya punk ass would have alotta dimes...
    But shit,u probally stilll would be about as broke as you are...
    So like a car wit flat tires your rap CAReer aint goin too fear...
    I aint playin like a broken guitar, betta believe u been warned...
    ill stuff u In ya moms puss, have u feedin off placenta right now like befiore u were born...
    So who ever don’t think ima kill Over is crazy...
    Ima send him to an early grave like mothers that over feed babies...

    W/E...up
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  6. Touch1

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    then planned suicide, just picture this when the battles over
    piece to his chest....kissin himself goodbye like sammy sosa
    ^^^ok
    his plan to show up couldn't even be decent with help given
    i told em he needs an act of god, and he called up mel gibson
    ^^eh
    well, listen......reez is a virgin, doesnt know what lifes about
    so once he heard love was blind, he poked his eyeballs out
    ^^no
    i aint got time for clowns, put ya life on the line i'll take it quick
    ya verse couldnt raise eyebrows if it came with a make up kit
    ^^^ok
    i aint tryin to hate, but theirs no way you'll rank in front of me
    so this aint going down the wire 'less u call ya cable company
    ^^coo
    want to see this dummy breathe, hope i dont handle the bullets
    cause i'll have him seeing more blood than family reunions
    ^^ nah bullets doesnt rhyme with reunion
    fuck the excuses, i can simply suggest to come with ya best
    but if u went the whole 9 yards, u'll probably run out of breath
    ^^^no
    no one wants to hear ur opinions....not becuz ur a known joke
    bcuz...............................
    if you put your two cents in......ur pockets'll go broke
    ^^old




    Wut sex is this niqqa, most can tell from the hips...
    But this bitch doesnt even know if hes a male or a chick...
    ^^^no
    If he got a mail order dick, maybe then hed sprout balls...
    Im derailin this bitch, his impatience is his downfall...
    ^^no
    I doubt yall can honestly say that this niqqa’s nice...
    When he takes played concepts and flips them twice, lets get it right...
    ^^^filler basically
    Who else can have the same lines in six different battles at a time?...
    But babygurl recycles and shes automatically disqualified?...
    ^^^these are two different battles
    Thats a bigger tragedy then columbine, Cause u recylce a lot of rhymes...
    If them bitches was soda cans ya punk ass would have alotta dimes...
    ^^^poor wording old concept
    But shit,u probally stilll would be about as broke as you are...
    So like a car wit flat tires your rap CAReer aint goin too fear...
    ^^^lol....no
    I aint playin like a broken guitar, betta believe u been warned...
    ill stuff u In ya moms puss, have u feedin off placenta right now like befiore u were born...
    ^^^stretched and weak
    So who ever don’t think ima kill Over is crazy...
    Ima send him to an early grave like mothers that over feed babies...
    ^^^ lol...only good line

    vote overhead...more consistant
    dude threw personals at overhead but they really werent hard disses
    if you didnt have soo many run ons and atacked with punchs you coulda prob came better
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  7. Part II

    Part II The next best thing

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    Nice little battle here, really I felt it would boild down to who came hardest wit the punches but Jay came from the blind side & sucker punched over head wit this nice personal:


    lol Thats was nice & hit hard should've grabbed more personals cause if that had kept up through the rest of your verse you might've out shined lines like these:

    Though Jay came wit that Killer personal, overhead still managed to keep the Advantage wit a more consistantly strong hitting verse. Seems after that stanza jay trailed off on me.

    Vote=Overhead

    Nice battle to both edge of the seat type shit lol Keep bangin'
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  8. $(_)6-Û®ß@|\|

    $(_)6-Û®ß@|\| Got Nuggetz

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    overhead
    decent verse here, had a few crappy lines but also some nice ones
    basically the ones dude above me quoted

    jay reeze
    not a bad verse here a little to much filer
    "If he got a mail order dick, maybe then hed sprout balls...
    Im derailin this bitch, his impatience is his downfall..."
    shit like this, no punch here really
    you did come with some personals and i wouldnt say you failed
    but they werent real hard hittin in my opinion

    vote - overhead a little more consistent and hard hitting punches
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  9. Keynote

    Keynote aka Jux Czar

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    Overhead took this easy.

    he had a couple of good solid lines...some were blah. but Jay didn't have one quotable punch...no was he at all entertaining.

    v/Over
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  10. Jay ReEz

    Jay ReEz Ridin' fo' da WestSide VV

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    thanx yall...i do appreciate the feedback, and i know consistantcy is wut really wins battles, i kinda rused, i coulda did witout those four bars...and id add in a couple other things, but i dont wanna sway...


    good shit o


    lets get some more votes
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  11. Ra Ill

    Ra Ill New Member

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    this was a ok battle it was hard to vote cuz i didnt really enjoy any of the punches you guys thre but there were like one or two punches that you guys threw that i liked so..

    My VoTe - Overhead
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  12. Eddie.

    Eddie. Weee

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    vote-overhead

    do i really need to explain?

    jay really didnt have a punch...perhaps he attempted...but failed

    anywase overhead had a decent verse

    thats why he got the vote
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  13. Tony Elbow

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    I vote overhead..shit wasn't very direct but it was solid and funny I liked
    cause i'll have him seeing more blood than family reunions
    and make up thing

    Jay you had personals but they were too basic


    Vote: Overhead
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  14. !ron HorSe

    !ron HorSe New Member

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    thats why I own overhead =]
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  15. ..ThundaH..

    ..ThundaH.. ..Reign Wright..

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    ..OH took this with know problem, with his consitancY..

    ..I really liked this linE..

    i aint tryin to hate, but theirs no way you'll rank in front of me
    so this aint going down the wire 'less u call ya cable company



    Reez's verse annoyed me with the ultra bright yellow fonT..

    I almost didn't even bother reading iT..

    ..I just wasn't feeling Reez at all, needs better directioN..
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  16. Robin Steel

    Robin Steel The 'K' to the '9'

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    Overhead took this with ease. Solid punches, decent flow, aiight wordplay, proper font, gave it the works. Cable company line was nice too.
    Vote=Over
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  17. Just Rich

    Just Rich And You Are?

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    both were alrite verses, i was feelin overheads more tho, he had more consistency, n considerin he neva knew jay, i htink he did pretty well, had sum nice bars.
    fav line-
    so once he heard love was blind, he poked his eyeballs out

    jay urs was ok, but cud have dun with a lil more work

    fav lines-
    ill stuff u In ya moms puss, have u feedin off placenta right now like
    lol that got me laffin

    VOTE-Overhead
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  18. Out of Site

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    haha..good shit..
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  19. itzconstant

    itzconstant T00 ILL

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    i was feelin overhead more on this, better flow punches and wordplay...Jay had a couple personals but nothin too good, and the punches were pretty weak, disses too. Overhead fav line
    ...this was aight, ok punch. I felt you came with more punches though. so

    vote-OH
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    uppin....ay oz close the battle...ITS OVER
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