53. Black Ways 0-0 vs. 54. MC4SiGHT 0-0

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Omen, Jul 12, 2003.

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  1. Omen

    Omen O Luh Da Kids

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  2. MC4SiGHT

    MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO

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  3. Black Ways

    Black Ways Long nights, short days

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  4. Black Ways

    Black Ways Long nights, short days

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    Negativity

    you wake up, make sum breakfast, when theres a knock at the door, you look outside and the police are waitin impatiently outside.


    KNOCK, KNOCK, who the fuck is knocking at my door?/
    shit what i been doin the night before?who the fuck's this whore?/
    she sayin 'what, you dont want me anymore'?/
    im like 'bitch' who are you, and why's there cops galore?/
    OK GET ON THE FLOOR PUT YOUR HANDS IN THE AIR/
    she's like thanks for the affair, prepare for jail/
    she gives me this glare, then leaves me, i feel frail/
    confused and dazed i jus fall to the ground, bound to make sence of this soon/
    the cops surround me, move in pound me im bleedin like this a monsoon/
    then im told im been arrested on suspection of drug dealin'/
    i cant be dealin' with this,im just feelin' sick now wonderin who been sqealin'/
    faces start runnin' through my brain, who's the fuckin snitch/
    im feelin pain, not jail again, then i realise the snitch gotta be the bitch/
    flashes come back of the night before last, now i remember this woman passed me a glass of liquor/
    i was smokin my grass, checkin out ass, when my mind started to flicker, quicker/
    the next thing i know, she be lyin in my bed, givin my head/
    damn i cant even remember a word that was said/
    then i wake up this morning, and with no warning/
    cops is outside and i'm heading back where i belong
    this bitch is a cop, she found my coke, it was all planned, all along/
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  5. MC4SiGHT

    MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO

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    ....10 minute key, seriously...

    all ima say tho is the best of luck....1ne

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    you wake up in a backwards world... just describe what it's like.. and what you try to do .. compare it with your current world.. is it better??

    Awoke in a broken eclipse, pupils open only facing eyelids..
    In silence i hear sound, fearing flowers instead near violence...
    Dumbfound, or am i just evil, but truely innocent upside down...
    My towns a massive city now, me chest got titties...HOW?
    Plowing through memories confusion, flip-flopping allusion...
    My feet are writing this down, my hands are my movement..
    Across the earth, and after eighty-or-so years I am birthed...
    I work frolicking in fields, i play lifting heavy objects in yeild..
    Concealed in pure light, hiding in the darkness of mere fright...
    I flight running on gravel,& walk skimin clouds as i grappel...
    I tackle with a hug and kiss, I love with a punching fist...
    Attemptin to cross a bridge, i guess i meant to go for a swim..
    In deep waters, which are puddles i wade, standin i laid...
    Confused yet? , nah cause all this is as clear as a shadow..
    Battles and wars, their handshakes where peace is forced...
    Remorse is felt for newborns, and yes god does have two horns...
    As for if this is better, while if better means worse, of coarse...
    Opening walls not doors, constantly trying to find my before...
    I'm torn but my inners feels complete, strong my soul is weak...
    Has it been weeks, or has it been seconds, since i awoke...
    In this backwords world, where my silence is what i spoke...
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  6. Ruthless Mic

    Ruthless Mic New Member

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    easy vote, goes to mc4sight

    reason - his vocab and storyline was just so fuckin dope, the imagery stayed in my head throughout the whole time. while black's just fuckin cussed in every single line. his imagery wa sin my head also but ms took this hands down.
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  7. DahLohner

    DahLohner Straight Up Un-Holy

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    hmmm

    Black Ways- this verse was mad simple, shows you were a bit lazy with the scheme and story. Flow was ok, just stretched...

    Mc4Sight- Very nice verse, well written and the topic shined through, and the length even worked well,..I see you going far in this RSTL if you keep up dropping verses like these.

    VOte-Mc4Sight

    IMOUT
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  8. exstacy

    exstacy New Member

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    My vote for McForsight very creative.
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  9. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    .. ^ Over No Shows
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  10. ILLMC0615

    ILLMC0615 The Eminent Lyricist

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    vote= MC4SIGHT

    He got this one pretty easily and though I read each verse twice, you could tell who had the better verse within the first two bars or so...MC had the better vocab, flow, content...everything...Black Ways, your verse was aight but very simplistic and lacked creativity...but stay up
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  11. MC4SiGHT

    MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO

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  12. Black Ways

    Black Ways Long nights, short days

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    i seriously couldn't give a shit, my verse waqs typed in 5 minutes and i was too tired to care what it was like...

    congratz 4sight, tight verse man
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  13. MC4SiGHT

    MC4SiGHT JOE COMMiSSO

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  14. Cigma

    Cigma Maxwell's Demon

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    Vote - Mc4

    Black ways...story was incomplete. Not enough details or build up. Story was very sketchy. Basics were there, but not enough meat on the skeleton. Mc4 took this in basically all categories.
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  15. Text

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    Vote- mc4sight

    he took this pretty easy his story & content was a lot more developed. black did'nt come as descriptive as 4sight either.
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  16. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    Winner: MC4SIGHT 1-0
    Loser: Black Ways 0-1
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