#5. X Sample 11-5 vs. #6. Dough Jordan 8-0

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  1. headless verseman

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  2. X sample

    X sample New Member

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    inned..

    18 - 20 lines hombre?
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  3. Dough Jordan

    Dough Jordan Sky's No Limit Of Mine...

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    20 lines it is.......
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  4. Dough Jordan

    Dough Jordan Sky's No Limit Of Mine...

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    I hope u dont come at me with some picture disses, chin jokes, or "dough" name flips...

    jay brushed his shoulder off, it never dealt with u/
    cuz when u brush yours it's cuz you need selson blue/
    now I got ur whole fan club like this vet's hot son/
    guns are like wins vs me, no one on the net's got one/
    stop all the tough talk, admit u get no love/
    inf beams'll have your house lookin like a techno club/
    dont worry about your verse, glare at the lines left/
    when I say fix ya face it's not repairen ya timex/
    u getting gored in two, this win is more than due/
    haven't seen a 5 this bad since the retro jordan shoe/
    u came horrible in 2003 but still ur new here fam/
    got such a ugly mug sales dropped for the rootbeer brand/
    ya face is that bad, plus ya girl's a pretty low dame/
    she proved double dribble aint just a video game/
    its what her mouth do, feel free ta lie see.../
    I'm the real sample cuz everyone wanna try me/
    u still get made fun of and we choke on this laughter/
    call u laffy taffy the way I got jokes on this rapper/
    onta ya moms who pussy stinks, I'ma stop the verse/
    since even the homeless stay from that box of hers/

    stop playin...
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  5. X sample

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    They say doughs brainy, in fact he rocks the college,
    So i'll only need my fists - to 'drop some knowledge'
    This thin geek should know..im agressive with the text,
    Ya muscles are 'ripped' & now we'll see the 'flecks'
    Fuck you, whos next? Dough's so ugly it offends me,
    Had 51 dates,
    & 51 gurls wish they could lose their memory
    Ya text is frail, Anal toys pleasure u round the bend,
    Like playin Venus Williams, theres Beads 'up your end'
    Tha ill agenda, wit half a mind to have my shit cocked,
    Surely only resulting in u having half a mind full stop
    Doughs a fav for the dickryders, man its over the top,
    When under his cock u can spot Calibre starting to rot
    Now just drop, Dough knows hes cant fight the X force,
    Kid'll still get fucked - like parents and their sex talks
    Short bus riding, tilted bike helmet wearing homeslice,
    My boxing 'double header', involves hittin ya dome twice
    Im so nice, suffice to say i gamble steady and sigh,
    & im not warming up dice when im 'getting u ready 2 die'
    So hold ya head high, though u dont mean shit to me,
    Cause now ya 8-1...like the tallest man in history..


    g'luck dough boy..
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  6. QuicK SyllaBle

    QuicK SyllaBle New Member

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    jay brushed his shoulder off, it never dealt with u/
    cuz when u brush yours it's cuz you need selson blue/
    lol nice
    now I got ur whole fan club like this vet's hot son/
    guns are like wins vs me, no one on the net's got one/
    haha
    stop all the tough talk, admit u get no love/
    inf beams'll have your house lookin like a techno club/
    dont worry about your verse, glare at the lines left/
    when I say fix ya face it's not repairen ya timex/
    didnt like
    u getting gored in two, this win is more than due/
    haven't seen a 5 this bad since the retro jordan shoe/
    lol.
    u came horrible in 2003 but still ur new here fam/
    got such a ugly mug sales dropped for the rootbeer brand/
    haha this one was really funny
    ya face is that bad, plus ya girl's a pretty low dame/
    she proved double dribble aint just a video game/
    nah
    its what her mouth do, feel free ta lie see.../
    I'm the real sample cuz everyone wanna try me/
    ok name play
    u still get made fun of and we choke on this laughter/
    call u laffy taffy the way I got jokes on this rapper/
    ehhh
    onta ya moms who pussy stinks, I'ma stop the verse/
    since even the homeless stay from that box of hers/
    ok closer



    They say doughs brainy, in fact he rocks the college,
    So i'll only need my fists - to 'drop some knowledge'
    ok word play
    This thin geek should know..im agressive with the text,
    Ya muscles are 'ripped' & now we'll see the 'flecks'
    no...
    Fuck you, whos next? Dough's so ugly it offends me,
    Had 51 dates,
    & 51 gurls wish they could lose their memory
    not good
    Ya text is frail, Anal toys pleasure u round the bend,
    Like playin Venus Williams, theres Beads 'up your end'
    talkin about anal toys isnt funny
    Tha ill agenda, wit half a mind to have my shit cocked,
    Surely only resulting in u having half a mind full stop
    ehhhh
    Doughs a fav for the dickryders, man its over the top,
    When under his cock u can spot Calibre starting to rot
    what happened to ur flow top rot...cmon now
    Now just drop, Dough knows hes cant fight the X force,
    Kid'll still get fucked - like parents and their sex talks
    Short bus riding, tilted bike helmet wearing homeslice,
    My boxing 'double header', involves hittin ya dome twice
    no.
    Im so nice, suffice to say i gamble steady and sigh,
    & im not warming up dice when im 'getting u ready 2 die'
    wtf no
    So hold ya head high, though u dont mean shit to me,
    Cause now ya 8-1...like the tallest man in history..
    weak closer

    overall i see dough winnin this one.....the mug line was pure comedy...X i was only really feelin ur opener after that it was kidna ehhh.....i liked more of dough's lines then X's...he was more consistant with good punches more polished flow vote=Dough
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  7. Macabre

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    decent battle, top 30's lookin good

    Dough
    jay brushed his shoulder off, it never dealt with u/
    cuz when u brush yours it's cuz you need selson blue/
    cool opener
    now I got ur whole fan club like this vet's hot son/
    guns are like wins vs me, no one on the net's got one/
    This was alright
    stop all the tough talk, admit u get no love/
    inf beams'll have your house lookin like a techno club/
    thought this was dope
    dont worry about your verse, glare at the lines left/
    when I say fix ya face it's not repairen ya timex/
    didn't like
    u getting gored in two, this win is more than due/
    haven't seen a 5 this bad since the retro jordan shoe/
    decent
    u came horrible in 2003 but still ur new here fam/
    got such a ugly mug sales dropped for the rootbeer brand/
    I don't like mug wordplays much, but this was decent
    ya face is that bad, plus ya girl's a pretty low dame/
    she proved double dribble aint just a video game/
    lol, pretty good
    its what her mouth do, feel free ta lie see.../
    I'm the real sample cuz everyone wanna try me/
    haha, simple but effective
    u still get made fun of and we choke on this laughter/
    call u laffy taffy the way I got jokes on this rapper/
    Seen these type of lines before, but decent
    onta ya moms who pussy stinks, I'ma stop the verse/
    since even the homeless stay from that box of hers/
    cool close


    Samp
    They say doughs brainy, in fact he rocks the college,
    So i'll only need my fists - to 'drop some knowledge'
    played
    This thin geek should know..im agressive with the text,
    Ya muscles are 'ripped' & now we'll see the 'flecks'
    wasn't feelin
    Fuck you, whos next? Dough's so ugly it offends me,
    Had 51 dates,
    & 51 gurls wish they could lose their memory
    I thought this was hilarious
    Ya text is frail, Anal toys pleasure u round the bend,
    Like playin Venus Williams, theres Beads 'up your end'
    decent
    Tha ill agenda, wit half a mind to have my shit cocked,
    Surely only resulting in u having half a mind full stop
    nah
    Doughs a fav for the dickryders, man its over the top,
    When under his cock u can spot Calibre starting to rot
    more of a calibre diss than a punch to hit dough
    Now just drop, Dough knows hes cant fight the X force,
    Kid'll still get fucked - like parents and their sex talks
    cool, could've been worded much better
    Short bus riding, tilted bike helmet wearing homeslice,
    My boxing 'double header', involves hittin ya dome twice
    wasn't feelin, could've been worded a little better
    Im so nice, suffice to say i gamble steady and sigh,
    & im not warming up dice when im 'getting u ready 2 die'
    played, but decent
    So hold ya head high, though u dont mean shit to me,
    Cause now ya 8-1...like the tallest man in history..
    I was actually feelin this as a closer

    v- Dough

    Although the breakdown might not show it, I enjoyed reading both verses. But when it goes line to line Dough got this. More creativity, better wording mostly. A better polished verse, but I wouldn't call this a complete blowout. Props to both.
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  8. Still Nameless

    Still Nameless Money Motivation.

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    Dough:
    u came horrible in 2003 but still ur new here fam/
    got such a ugly mug sales dropped for the rootbeer brand/

    X sample:
    So hold ya head high, though u dont mean shit to me,
    Cause now ya 8-1...like the tallest man in history..

    Not a bad battle but Dough easily took dis, he had better overall lines.. Jus dat simple .. More thought out and more to the point ..

    V - Dough
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  9. X sample

    X sample New Member

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    wtf @ opshins breakdown...i hate to see how you would rate your own lines if u think mine are wak...lmao.........and 'top' and 'rot' rhyme fine...ahhhh...
    .. have u no sense of humour?

    3-0
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  10. QuicK SyllaBle

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    X some weeks u come with fire..this just wasnt one of them
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  11. S-M-O-K-E

    S-M-O-K-E DUH DUH DUH DUH!

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    vote = dough.

    after reading dough's verse i thought sample would pull this one out, because dough did not impress me like he usually does. nothing jawdropping, some nice lines sure but nothing spec. sample just didnt do anything for me .. too many quotations around words, whatever .. i dont know what you were tryna get at .. didnt feel it.
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  12. KroniK

    KroniK R.I.P. U

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    dough came witta a lot more wit and funnier lines..flow was better than x's an multi's hit hard..x just didn't have anythin in tha comedy section an that was his main fault..also throwin in sum multi's here an there coulda helped too..i was tryin to get into x's flow but it didn't seem like much was there..normally tho i do enjoy ya verses..here it just seemed like another x sample verse an ya can't do that against dough

    vote= dough
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  13. Mr.Perfect

    Mr.Perfect New Member

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    over no shows
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  14. Anaphora

    Anaphora was here

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    Dough: Well I haven't even really looked at a net battle since the RWF, so I'm not sure what all is played, but I thought the laffy taffy line was your best... the selson blue line was pretty good too...

    X: I liked your closer, and I think anal toy jokes are funny, it may hit a little too close to home for some, haha, but fuck it. But, there was quite a bit of either filler, or very mediocre lines in your verse... like mine. haha. It happens.

    Vote: Dough
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  15. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    X shit was aight, your getting better, not enough to counter a known heavy weight like dough jordan tho.

    Dough

    jay brushed his shoulder off, it never dealt with u/
    cuz when u brush yours it's cuz you need selson blue/


    stop all the tough talk, admit u get no love/
    inf beams'll have your house lookin like a techno club/


    onta ya moms who pussy stinks, I'ma stop the verse/
    since even the homeless stay from that box of hers/

    Were all very nice, rest was good, these were stand out to me tho.


    V/Dough
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  16. ThePeoplesAlias

    ThePeoplesAlias Life In The Trash....

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    ok, these verses weren't any good. don't listen to what they tell you. dough, im sure your good cuz your undefeated. thats prolly hard to do here. but this verses was ass. drop better next week. to the other kid - your verse was also only average. for RM it was bad, not horrible, but bad. drop better next week. lines like "51 girls wish they could lose their memory" won't cut it. those kind of lines aren't witty, just plain obvious and easy to make.

    vote - dough
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  17. Affluent

    Affluent Hush

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    ya face is that bad, plus ya girl's a pretty low dame/
    she proved double dribble aint just a video game/
    its what her mouth do, feel free ta lie see.../
    I'm the real sample cuz everyone wanna try me/

    ha iLL
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  18. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    that techno club joint is the line of the week
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  19. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    v/ doughster

    better verse overall, dough is the monster of the moment man, for real.....top 5 ever, and this aint even his prime, bet.
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  20. Dough Jordan

    Dough Jordan Sky's No Limit Of Mine...

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    my prime wont be for another 10 years my man.......appreciate the love
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