5. Ski Mask VS Brown Jesus

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    RULES & REGULATIONS

    DEADLINES

    [01] - The deadline for verses is Thursday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [02] - The deadline for extensions is 24 hours ONLY, making it Friday @ 11:59pm EST.
    [03] - The deadline for voting is Sunday @ 11:59am EST.​

    VOTING

    [04] - You must post at least 5 valid voting links within your match.
    [05] - Within those 5 links, you must be sure to vote on both the Championship and Contender matches.
    [06] - Votes must be at least 2 full lines of feedback per competitor followed by the competitor's name in which you choose to vote for.
    [07] - Voting a tie result is deemed a failure to vote.
    [08] - Voting links must be posted in your battle thread with the Champ and Contender matches labeled clearly.
    [09] - Votes changed after 1 hour of posting will be deemed a failure to vote.
    [10] - Voting is open to current participants, past champions, and active RBL moderators ONLY.​

    VERSES

    [11] - All verses are to remain within the limits of 8 to 40 lines. Any breach of line limit must be agreed upon by both competitors prior to a verse being posted. Failure to comply will result in an automatic forfeit by all failing parties.
    [12] - An agreement of a line limit will serve as the maximum allowed; competitors are allowed to post under an agreed limit, but never over. An agreement is not required. Upon failure to agree to a line limit, the second competitor is thereby required to meet the limit set by the first competitor to post.
    [13] - You must not edit your verse once your opponent has posted, who in turn must not edit their verse after the first vote is cast.​

    Good luck.
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  2. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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  3. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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  4. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    R U serious? U can't even post the ranks right..

    Ayo,

    Jesus? It's funny I'M seen as the Higher Power, a known bruiser
    This mutha fucka's a Medium.. He even Predicted his own Future ^
    Fuck a Brown! U wanna measure up? Stick to the Mag & do us thanks
    I'll call U Barry Bonds how U took the wrong way through the Ranks
    Damn idiot.. Post battles right and don't drop bars as an imposter
    A top punch? U haven't had a Line-Up in years like the Cubs Roster
    The 2nd part of ya name, ya type shouldn't dare to please us
    We'll all live the Atheist life, and not have a care for Jesus
    Why'd U even post a verse.. Everything U have I'll crush
    Ya style's so irrelevant I expected a youtube link from Ravenous
    I should knock out ya lights since the league's in a downed drought
    But I don't need to, ya verse is failure enough to leave a Brownout
    Broke muthafucka! U might could win if U had the right skill
    U can have the W, B... But first U must pay ya satellite bill
    Post with no thought... I'll eat U & climb the ranks as the winner
    With a verse that turns this feather-brain to thanksgiving dinner

    Easy!
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  5. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Easier...

    This fag does not know me, so what you're prob gon' see...
    Is this "elite" drop trash like we're playing Diablo 3,
    This guy is very prideful, but you gotta bear in mind, dude,
    You only advanced in the Tag Tourney cus you were carried by Jook,
    If she smokes, she pokes, but this n**ga is hurtin',
    Cus ski doesn't have a sig and we know this bitch is a virgin,
    You fucking suck, bro, you never made noise in the ranks,
    But, really... its a Oneduh you were never poised to be Champ,
    Couldn't top the league in 06, now it's obvious, Ski...
    Mask hides an identity that's embarrassing and probably weak,
    So he comes back in 2012 and sucks in a watered down league,
    This motherfucker thinks he hotter than me; son, youre shit is garbage and weak,
    If you ever reign, man... its cus you're retarded and meek,
    Excuse the broken english; there's no defendin, but the fact is that,
    If I need a lift, I put ski on top, cus it's downhill after that,

    No bye weeks here, faggot...
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  6. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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  7. JQuality

    JQuality Jackoff Quality

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    I should knock out ya lights since the league's in a downed drought But I don't need to, ya verse is failure enough to leave a Brownout


    Nice



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    Excuse the broken english; there's no defendin, but the fact is that, If I need a lift, I put ski on top,cus it's downhill after that

    Nice could of hit super hard though


    Ski, I liked the flow but to many hard liners but I enjoyed it


    Brown, your for was choppy imo... No really hard hitting personals... The concepts were there but the actual punch was blah, the last line was best


    I went with hardest line cause that's how I vote


    W goes to ski...
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  8. eggo

    eggo gg

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    Jesus? It's funny I'M seen as the Higher Power, a known bruiser
    This mutha fucka's a Medium.. He even Predicted his own Future ^
    decent opener.
    Fuck a Brown! U wanna measure up? Stick to the Mag & do us thanks
    I'll call U Barry Bonds how U took the wrong way through the Ranks
    eh.
    Damn idiot.. Post battles right and don't drop bars as an imposter
    A top punch? U haven't had a Line-Up in years like the Cubs Roster
    aight
    The 2nd part of ya name, ya type shouldn't dare to please us
    We'll all live the Atheist life, and not have a care for Jesus
    na
    Why'd U even post a verse.. Everything U have I'll crush
    Ya style's so irrelevant I expected a youtube link from Ravenous
    lol
    I should knock out ya lights since the league's in a downed drought
    But I don't need to, ya verse is failure enough to leave a Brownout
    eh
    Broke muthafucka! U might could win if U had the right skill
    U can have the W, B... But first U must pay ya satellite bill
    not feeling this
    Post with no thought... I'll eat U & climb the ranks as the winner
    With a verse that turns this feather-brain to thanksgiving dinner
    weak closer.

    vs.

    This fag does not know me, so what you're prob gon' see...
    Is this "elite" drop trash like we're playing Diablo 3,
    eh opener.
    This guy is very prideful, but you gotta bear in mind, dude,
    You only advanced in the Tag Tourney cus you were carried by Jook,
    cool personal.
    If she smokes, she pokes, but this n**ga is hurtin',
    Cus ski doesn't have a sig and we know this bitch is a virgin,
    not feeling it
    You fucking suck, bro, you never made noise in the ranks,
    But, really... its a Oneduh you were never poised to be Champ,
    not hard hitting.
    Couldn't top the league in 06, now it's obvious, Ski...
    Mask hides an identity that's embarrassing and probably weak,
    decent
    So he comes back in 2012 and sucks in a watered down league,
    ^extra line?
    This motherfucker thinks he hotter than me; son, youre shit is garbage and weak,
    If you ever reign, man... its cus you're retarded and meek,
    lol aight
    Excuse the broken english; there's no defendin, but the fact is that,
    If I need a lift, I put ski on top, cus it's downhill after that,
    decent closer. don't know if its played but its first time i've seen.


    Ski, your ravenous and opener were cool. your barry bond and line up were just okay but just not hard hitting at all. wasn't feeling em, feel like you didn't expect much from brown and didn't take much time pulling up some dope concepts. but it is whqt it is.

    Brown, you came alright. started off weak, I didn't like the opener. Jook personal was nice. the sig n virgin line was just ehh to me. you picked it up at the end, the oneduh line was aight but not hard hitting. but your reign man, mask np, and ski np with the closer was pretty solid last few lines. felt like thats where ya edged it a little.

    pretty close but I feel ski didn't expect much and posted early and expected to win easily. brown got to see what he was up against and dropped an alright verse. but i feel like brown edges it by a punch or two.

    v/Brown
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  9. SiegeSupreme

    SiegeSupreme Well-Known Member

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    Vote/Brown

    Just barely. Wasn't extremely impressed with either verse tbh. Ski had LOTB with the Line-up bar, but tbh that was the only bar from you I felt hit. None of BJ's lines were really close to that in terms of impact, but he had more bars that I thought were atleast decent.

    BrownJesus - Like I said, your punches really lacked impact here. Mostly good concepts executed poorly. Also some style issues in your verse (extra line, noise in the ranks/poised to be champ not even rhyming slightly). But either way u were able to edge this battle just barely imo.
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  10. ski mask

    ski mask The Don

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    hmm

    1-2, uppin
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  11. EKGenius

    EKGenius New Member

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    Ski Mask Verse

    Jesus? It's funny I'M seen as the Higher Power, a known bruiser
    This mutha fucka's a Medium.. He even Predicted his own Future ^
    .. decent
    Fuck a Brown! U wanna measure up? Stick to the Mag & do us thanks
    I'll call U Barry Bonds how U took the wrong way through the Ranks
    ..not feeling it
    Damn idiot.. Post battles right and don't drop bars as an imposter
    A top punch? U haven't had a Line-Up in years like the Cubs Roster
    ..it was aight
    The 2nd part of ya name, ya type shouldn't dare to please us
    We'll all live the Atheist life, and not have a care for Jesus
    ..pretty sure this line would be played on anyone named Jesus.. predictable
    Why'd U even post a verse.. Everything U have I'll crush
    Ya style's so irrelevant I expected a youtube link from Ravenous
    ..fresh concept
    I should knock out ya lights since the league's in a downed drought
    But I don't need to, ya verse is failure enough to leave a Brownout
    ..different wording would’ve made it nicer for me
    Broke muthafucka! U might could win if U had the right skill
    U can have the W, B... But first U must pay ya satellite bill
    ..its ok
    Post with no thought... I'll eat U & climb the ranks as the winner
    With a verse that turns this feather-brain to thanksgiving dinner
    ..just sounds funny lol but not too hard hitting

    I’m half and half with this verse.. feel up and down reading it.. best line of the verse for me is a toss up with the ravenous line just because it’s new and the line-up line

    Brown Jesus Verse

    This fag does not know me, so what you're prob gon' see...
    Is this "elite" drop trash like we're playing Diablo 3,
    ..never seen this concept use, but could’ve been flipped better imo
    This guy is very prideful, but you gotta bear in mind, dude,
    You only advanced in the Tag Tourney cus you were carried by Jook,
    ..would’ve liked it if there was more creativity put in to it.. but points for a personal
    If she smokes, she pokes, but this n**ga is hurtin',
    Cus ski doesn't have a sig and we know this bitch is a virgin,
    ..not feeling it
    You fucking suck, bro, you never made noise in the ranks,
    But, really... its a Oneduh you were never poised to be Champ,
    ..no wording is off to me.. points for personal again tho
    Couldn't top the league in 06, now it's obvious, Ski...
    Mask hides an identity that's embarrassing and probably weak,
    So he comes back in 2012 and sucks in a watered down league,
    ..not sure what happen here.. three line punch?
    This motherfucker thinks he hotter than me; son, youre shit is garbage and weak,
    If you ever reign, man... its cus you're retarded and meek,
    ..its ok.. punch slightly off for me but it works
    Excuse the broken english; there's no defendin, but the fact is that,
    If I need a lift, I put ski on top, cus it's downhill after that,
    ..probably used against him already, but I like it

    I like the attempts at personals here since its more direct to the opponent.. but some punchlines was not executed too well.. probably different wording or so.. I feel the same way with mask’s verse that it was pretty up and down as well for you

    Each individual had about 3-4 lines that was ok… and both verses was not consistent to me.. it was really a close battle tbh.. i lean to brown just because of attempt on personals but not much creativity put in to it.. but I lean to ski because his two lines could be LOTB.

    v/Ski Mask

    leaned towards the slightly more creative concepts
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  12. coil grimely

    coil grimely Tears textcees to tidbits

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    I am on the fence with this one. Ski usually be consistant, onpoint, etc. I feel maybe you underestimated the opponent, and your verse reflexts that. BJ, was all over the place... punches that clearly don't rhyme should be a huge no-no lol Personals were cool, I liked the she smokes/virgin line. The youtube link line was LOL. Ski gets the edge on this tho...

    Vote - skimask
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  13. Tacky Jones

    Tacky Jones www.TaCsmassivecock.gov

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    Ski:

    Jesus? It's funny I'M seen as the Higher Power, a known bruiser
    This mutha fucka's a Medium.. He even Predicted his own Future ^

    Fuck a Brown! U wanna measure up? Stick to the Mag & do us thanks
    I'll call U Barry Bonds how U took the wrong way through the Ranks

    Damn idiot.. Post battles right and don't drop bars as an imposter
    A top punch? U haven't had a Line-Up in years like the Cubs Roster

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    BJ:

    This guy is very prideful, but you gotta bear in mind, dude,
    You only advanced in the Tag Tourney cus you were carried by Jook,

    Excuse the broken english; there's no defendin, but the fact is that,
    If I need a lift, I put ski on top, cus it's downhill after that,


    vote-Ski
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  14. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    Ski Mask wins 4-2.
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