5. Scientz 10-3 Vs. 6. Charles 11-5

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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  3. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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  4. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    u wore ya scientz lines out last time doggie...now pure skill comes in...somethin that u lack...what ya gon do!!

    scientz this, scientz that...come original when gruding me
    ya name plays so fuckin bad,
    they should be traded to another team
    u suck it seems, n with fat jokes, i can prove it hurts u
    ur so chunky,
    we could mix u wit veggies, n do a soup commercial
    get ya arms n legs broken, wit most of ya men killed
    u'll be left inside fourcasts,
    ...like temperature n wind chill
    this kids ill, n hotter of course, after poppin this broad
    i'll fill ya life wit so much drama, u'll recieve an oscar award
    goin a different route, no wordplay i'll drop, hardly
    just hit 'kid' wit more punches, than the bullies on house party
    teflon is nothin, when i pop it breaks, shit i can drop a tank
    so u better be wearing more metal gear, than solid snake
    please say thanks, u poor kid, what i delivered is viscious
    hoped i opened some whoopass,
    so ya fam could have dinner on christmas
    he'd dodge me, rather than fight...or settle wit words in court
    so when he sees me its a running situation, like 3rd n short
    ya skin must soak up lotion, or either u wear it wrong
    cuz ya body's filled wit enough ash,
    to air a damn pokemon marathon
    homo why dont u play sports? staying strapped to ya couch
    i admit u wear shoulder pads,
    but usually they're attatched to ya blouse
    my blows r viscious, mad damage when i hit fellas
    shits so on target,
    that walmart n circuit city get jealous
    ya mom got std's from hooking, men around the way, scared
    but if tricks are for kids,
    that bitch should be running a day care
    this "one time at bandcamp", nah but its the same system
    in high school i played the sax,
    n u were known for playing with them
    after a whiff of ya breath, im not sure i can get up
    fuck just scope,
    u need a whole navel base, plus the sniper's setup
    invest in karate school, cuz i find this real, funny
    even when times get rough,
    they r capable of taking ya milk money

    thats 30 lines....time to move up in the rankings!!
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  5. Charles

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    I THOUGHT I TOLD YOU,GET OUT OF HERE!

    i could flip his lines.. that'd be utter defiance
    if i wantd to make up wack,i'd put blusher to Scientz
    ya names deceiving..beef shows i'll beat ya ass..
    n if ur styles raw..mines still walkin n eatin grass
    your gay antics are tedious now, ya boring kid
    get kicks from makin passes at guys,like Jordan did
    go dildo fuck..ya ranking shows for real,ya suck
    and i can Take 5 easier than Spielburg does
    b-boys on rm were noticed,they whoopin some ass
    see they caused a stir..your in a cookery class
    a geek with glasses, ya mashed when im bomin ya
    turned his life around
    ..and now only sees the back of his moniter
    killed ya before.. use no prewrittens to dent asses
    beat you wit keys,like ya taught in defense classes
    your a walking joke.. check how ironic this is
    my punches & flow go hand in hand..
    which is further then you ever got with a bitch
    fuck your momma disses..you got nothin to harm me
    cuz if mines just a trick..
    yours is the magic show.. plus the finale
    my bars do sometimes need tweakin,yeh,i know that
    but almost all the time..
    yours in need of a 360 flip,twist,with a nose grab
    i got a Ruthless Record..so believe I down kids
    when u Bone Thugs..worse then the group Easy founded
    if ya think rippin sci is tough or manly, ya wrong
    cuz I took him to the cleaners
    and he brought along pink panties with thongs
    talk on the hood,but the cops only pretend to act
    so u'll Splinter under pressure,cuz we Sensai rat
    never won a b-boys tourny,wont blaze a sick verse
    ya only face scientz in the finals,takin midterms

    Fuckin punk..
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  6. U S E R

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    uppin over no shows
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  7. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    hahaha...u really tried flippin my lines

    its all good fam...let the votes begin...g/l

    *votes will be edited here*
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  8. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    No i didnt...

    Why vote sway??

    pshh..but nice verse..g'luck..

    this is my 1st up..
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  9. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    Scientz:
    scientz this, scientz that...come original when gruding me
    ya name plays so fuckin bad,
    they should be traded to another team
    haha, cool open
    u suck it seems, n with fat jokes, i can prove it hurts u
    ur so chunky,
    we could mix u wit veggies, n do a soup commercial
    ehh
    get ya arms n legs broken, wit most of ya men killed
    u'll be left inside fourcasts,
    ...like temperature n wind chill
    haha!!
    this kids ill, n hotter of course, after poppin this broad
    i'll fill ya life wit so much drama, u'll recieve an oscar award
    nice, nice
    goin a different route, no wordplay i'll drop, hardly
    just hit 'kid' wit more punches, than the bullies on house party
    iight
    teflon is nothin, when i pop it breaks, shit i can drop a tank
    so u better be wearing more metal gear, than solid snake
    haha, I liked this
    please say thanks, u poor kid, what i delivered is viscious
    hoped i opened some whoopass,
    so ya fam could have dinner on christmas
    ahahahahaha
    he'd dodge me, rather than fight...or settle wit words in court
    so when he sees me its a running situation, like 3rd n short
    nice concept
    ya skin must soak up lotion, or either u wear it wrong
    cuz ya body's filled wit enough ash,
    to air a damn pokemon marathon
    ahaha
    homo why dont u play sports? staying strapped to ya couch
    i admit u wear shoulder pads,
    but usually they're attatched to ya blouse
    lmao
    my blows r viscious, mad damage when i hit fellas
    shits so on target,
    that walmart n circuit city get jealous
    was iight, not really aimed at him tho
    ya mom got std's from hooking, men around the way, scared
    but if tricks are for kids,
    that bitch should be running a day care
    ahahaha, nice
    this "one time at bandcamp", nah but its the same system
    in high school i played the sax,
    n u were known for playing with them
    haha, dope
    after a whiff of ya breath, im not sure i can get up
    fuck just scope,
    u need a whole navel base, plus the sniper's setup
    yup, another nice concept
    invest in karate school, cuz i find this real, funny
    even when times get rough,
    they r capable of taking ya milk money
    ehh, decent ending

    overall was a nice verse homie
    concepts were there
    flow was there
    good shit dookie


    Charles:
    i could flip his lines.. that'd be utter defiance
    if i wantd to make up wack,i'd put blusher to Scientz
    haha
    ya names deceiving..beef shows i'll beat ya ass..
    n if ur styles raw..mines still walkin n eatin grass
    ehh, its cool
    your gay antics are tedious now, ya boring kid
    get kicks from makin passes at guys,like Jordan did
    nah
    go dildo fuck..ya ranking shows for real,ya suck
    and i can Take 5 easier than Spielburg does
    lol, cool concept
    b-boys on rm were noticed,they whoopin some ass
    see they caused a stir..your in a cookery class
    nah man lol
    a geek with glasses, ya mashed when im bomin ya
    turned his life around
    ..and now only sees the back of his moniter
    bwahahahahhahaa
    killed ya before.. use no prewrittens to dent asses
    beat you wit keys,like ya taught in defense classes
    haha
    your a walking joke.. check how ironic this is
    my punches & flow go hand in hand..
    which is further then you ever got with a bitch
    ha, pretty nice
    fuck your momma disses..you got nothin to harm me
    cuz if mines just a trick..
    yours is the magic show.. plus the finale
    nice, connected well
    my bars do sometimes need tweakin,yeh,i know that
    but almost all the time..
    yours in need of a 360 flip,twist,with a nose grab
    ahaha, nice concept
    i got a Ruthless Record..so believe I down kids
    when u Bone Thugs..worse then the group Easy founded
    haha
    if ya think rippin sci is tough or manly, ya wrong
    cuz I took him to the cleaners
    and he brought along pink panties with thongs
    lol
    talk on the hood,but the cops only pretend to act
    so u'll Splinter under pressure,cuz we Sensai rat
    bwahaha, that was dope, i liked that
    never won a b-boys tourny,wont blaze a sick verse
    ya only face scientz in the finals,takin midterms
    nah, not a good closer

    overall was a dope verse
    had some good concepts and flow was good
    i liked this verse


    this is a VERY close battle
    both had their share of witty concepts and punches
    and both were consistent flow wise
    u both basically went line for line in this battle
    but I felt like scientz was a little more creative with some of his concepts
    don't get me wrong tho, charles did have a good verse
    but I just felt like scientz edged this one out by a hair

    vote = scientz

    good battle, enjoyed reading it, props to both.
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  10. Imperial

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    Wow, i cant vote cuz im signed out this week..

    but damn, this is one of the best battles ive read in a long time.

    Nice consistent new good concepts from both. DOPE BATTLE
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  11. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Best battle in a long fucking time. Scientz came raw..

    this kids ill, n hotter of course, after poppin this broad
    i'll fill ya life wit so much drama, u'll recieve an oscar award
    he'd dodge me, rather than fight...or settle wit words in court
    so when he sees me its a running situation, like 3rd n short
    invest in karate school, cuz i find this real, funny
    even when times get rough,
    they r capable of taking ya milk money

    Niceness right there,

    But.. Charles' whole verse was quotable, maybe 2 or 3 couplets I wasn't feeling, too much for Sci this time.

    your a walking joke.. check how ironic this is
    my punches & flow go hand in hand..
    which is further then you ever got with a bitch

    Muawahah

    Vote- Charles
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  12. -Kolli$ion-

    -Kolli$ion- 3-1-5

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    Vote=Scientz

    This kid, especially for the OPENING verse.....phewy boy. Lemme tell ya...

    The Chunky line---funny as fuck...
    Fourcasts....heard it before, but not like that.
    Blouse line, had me rollin.

    Charles--You came RAW as FUCK...and i do not hate your verse the least bit. Like said above, this is one of the tightest battles i've read in a hot one...and to me, Scientz' punches were harder by the skin of his teeth.

    Nice one, boys

    -K
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  13. Resen

    Resen Do i need a title?

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    tight battle, scientz came doppppe, alot of nice lines, the oscar award line was sick, charles came correct the hand in hand line was crazy dope, sensai rat line was nice too, well yall both came nice but ima give this one to charles

    dope battle
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  14. god_son

    god_son Hollow Shellz

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    shit this was close as hell. both ya nukkas came raw as hell.i liked how charles flipped scientz punch, man that was hot.

    fuck your momma disses..you got nothin to harm me
    cuz if mines just a trick..
    yours is the magic show.. plus the finale

    but its a shame thats when you started with the hotness, in the middleof the verse. scientz was comming hot from the beginning and kept it consistent.

    scientz this, scientz that...come original when gruding me
    ya name plays so fuckin bad,
    they should be traded to another team

    and he kept it going.

    nice battle tho. best i read so far. props for both for showin.
    holla
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  15. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    wow.....nice battle, charles nice verse...good flow, good punches, & scientz, whoa, dope verse, good flow, punches were really dope, just an overall a WOW verse

    i broke it down the best i could

    vote-scientz
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  16. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    Scientz def. Charles
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