5 Phrenic 8-3 vs 6 Toil 6-0

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  1. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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  2. toil

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  3. Citizen X

    Citizen X UGHHHHHHHHHHH

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    16 is good

    goodluck too
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  4. Citizen X

    Citizen X UGHHHHHHHHHHH

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    Im dropping early cause Ill be gone

    Toil.... hmmmmmmmmmmm

    i see u won last week, the verse was wack though
    cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole
    smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars
    & watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars
    believins hard, but all this u and i shit..
    u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option
    u drop shit, im here to be hanging you
    ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you
    spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her
    toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl
    nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed
    cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms
    toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die
    because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified
    imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas
    Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match
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  5. toil

    toil New Member

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    your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit
    ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it
    hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame
    hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne
    when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude
    hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do
    radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known
    so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone!
    ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute
    cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit
    i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly
    but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie
    no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
    its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together
    ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too
    but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you


    dont even TRY to tell me i lost
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  6. Deadly Weapon

    Deadly Weapon Fuck off

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    quit swaying

    anyways..............................................

    Citi

    i see u won last week, the verse was wack though
    cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole
    that is funny as fuck,nice

    smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars
    & watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars
    that was also funny an very creative with the wordplay

    believins hard, but all this u and i shit..
    u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option
    aight, nothin special,

    u drop shit, im here to be hanging you
    ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you
    hahahahaha... funny

    spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her
    toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl
    eehhhhhh...decent

    nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed
    cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms
    aight

    toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die
    because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified
    aight

    imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas
    Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match
    aight



    Toil
    your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit
    ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it
    ehhhh....didnt like, maybe its over my head

    hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame
    hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne
    o.k

    when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude
    hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do
    aight

    radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known
    so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone!
    that was nice

    ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute
    cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit
    nice

    i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly
    but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie
    didnt like

    no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
    its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together
    damn, nice name play

    ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too
    but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you
    aight


    damn this was a good battle, kinda hard to decide, but ima vote

    Cit

    his verse was funny ass hell
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  7. Wordage

    Wordage The Coming of Age....

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    Phrenic

    i see u won last week, the verse was wack though
    cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole
    8/10
    smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars
    & watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars
    7.5/10
    believins hard, but all this u and i shit..
    u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option
    7.5/10
    u drop shit, im here to be hanging you
    ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you
    8/10
    spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her
    toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl
    7.5/10
    nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed
    cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms
    8.5/10
    toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die
    because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified
    7/10
    imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas
    Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match
    7.5/10

    total= 61.5/80


    Toil

    your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit
    ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it
    7.5/10
    hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame
    hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne
    7/10
    when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude
    hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do
    7.5/10
    radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known
    so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone!
    8/10
    ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute
    cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit
    7.5/10
    i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly
    but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie
    7/10
    no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
    its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together
    7.5/10
    ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too
    but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you
    7/10

    total= 59/80

    vote= Phrenic. Both came with some funny lines, good flow and interesting concepts. Blackhole and Fruit of the Loom lines were hilarious. Toil had the cell phone line I thought was pretty good but other than that the rest was just decent. Goodluck to both of you.
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  8. VyRiS

    VyRiS Come Get Infected

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    vote = Phrenic

    toil was str8
    but.. Phrenic took this with more thought out
    lines and a better overall verse..

    decent battle.. holla
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  9. RP2G

    RP2G I'll sh** on you

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    HAhahaHAhaHaHAHaHAHAHAHhAhAhAhAhAhAHAH... damn can this dood write punches or what?! jesus, that was great! not to take anything away from citizen X, his verse was better than decent, but toil just killed that shit man, each bar just more demoralizing than the other, NO DICK RIDING HERE, JUST HONESTLY WHAT I SAW...

    Vote: TOIL!
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  10. Edgar. Poe

    Edgar. Poe New Member

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    Toil got this...

    Cits shit was nice but these lines killed it

    i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly
    but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie
    no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
    its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together
    ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too
    but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you
    ^Nice

    Beginning was slow though but picked up

    Cit ur shit was funny but kinda corny
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  11. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    daaamn, toil.. bringin heat
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  12. WarLoKK

    WarLoKK www.espbeats.com

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    This wasnt too bad..

    ..at first I thought Cit had this.. cuz I was readin toil's shit and I was just totally unimpressed with the beginning.. I was like "what the?? he really didnt try this time around".. then I hit that "a-peal" line and from there to the end was just flames.. that was dope.. Thats what got it for him..

    ..Cit didnt really impress me this week that much.. he doesnt seem like he gives a fuck anymore.. He had a few iight lines.. the continue option was iight, creative juices was dope.. but toil just snatched it this week

    Vote = toil
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  13. Whiz_Kid

    Whiz_Kid Registered User™

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    toil needs a spell-checker
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  14. CATATONIC

    CATATONIC Blk Man Dat Gets Big Head

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    ^ lol at that


    vote = toil


    the niccas sick wit the punches... doesnt use too many other techniques, but this is one occasion its not needed... the whole phuckin fruit... bearfaced lie... were hell nice


    Cit and silence go together is punchline pandam material...

    cit had a nice verse, feelin alot of his ideas and shyt... but toil got this one.
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  15. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
    its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together




    hahahah, he wins
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  16. afraid knot.

    afraid knot. Mr. Get Jerk'd In The RBL

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    jesus.. citizen came completely unoriginal in this.. i used a version of almost every single line just last week. basically why i lost.

    toil came nice, but the bear-faced lie line is stupid as fuck.. it's a bold-faced lie.. bear-faced isnt even a saying.

    vote = toil.
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  17. EYE-Z

    EYE-Z rote my vrse playing Bout

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    toil wins...too many groupies at rm

    cit line was dope

    rest was solid, nice fresh comedic appeal


    cit came aiight alot of old concepts, train of thought, creative juices, seein stars

    short leash coudla been nice
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  18. Sabath VII

    Sabath VII God's Mercy

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    i see u won last week, the verse was wack though
    cus the only time u actually passed orbit, is coming out ur moms blackhole
    Ehh, not a bad opener, but not a good one.

    smack toil, im leavin scars while ur free'n bars
    & watch ur boyfriend leave u when i have u seein stars
    Umm, alright I suppose.

    believins hard, but all this u and i shit..
    u'll be so use to losing, ur character'll have a continue option
    Nice

    u drop shit, im here to be hanging you
    ur so gay ur train of thought is 4 doods running a train on you
    LoL, Liking that

    spoil ur plans, ur bitch is a dog, im not fond of her
    toils on a short leash, but it should be on ur girl
    That was alright

    nerd, last week u got a top 10 punch, we all must be doomed
    cause u talk about creative juices, but u actually wet ur fruit of the looms
    Lmao

    toils old as fuck, wish this bum would die
    because toil and his verses 'aint shit', they're fucking mummified
    Nice

    imma run this guy, ur a hot head thats just blowing some gas
    Phren'll 'wind up' with the title, while ur just 'throwin' the match
    Nice closer


    Good verse overall.

    your flow is wack, no one mistakes that shit
    ya style is so Scrappy, only Scooby Doop could relate to it
    Not a bad opener

    hes a damn pain, so i shot this man's frame
    hes getting popped by the winner, just like champagne
    Ehh, alright

    when i attack like a rhino, ill batter this dude
    hell get 'charged and flatterned', like what batteries do
    Ok

    radiation fries ya brain, this fact is well known
    so ill stick ya head in a microwave, then ring ya neck...on its cell phone!
    Niicce

    ull only get votes, if ya dicksuck like a brute
    cus if youve got a-peal, ive got the whole fucking fruit
    Ehh

    i asked ya girl how ya look, she said ya rate fly
    but since she got a head like a Grizzly, thats just a bear-faced lie
    Best line so far

    no one applauds, when ya try to show youre clever
    its just like musical chairs, the way Cit and silence go together
    Tied with the one above it

    ya shuda never showed up, its got ya worrying too
    but no need to feel remorseful, cus everyone feels sorry for you
    Ok closer

    Nice verse.

    All in all toil edge this out, not by much though.

    Vote - Toil
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  19. Citizen X

    Citizen X UGHHHHHHHHHHH

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    this is my up, Bear Faced lie isnt even a term, its bold face. but anyways its cool. good shit
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  20. niquist

    niquist New Member

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    V - Toil

    That "ring ya neck" line was goofy. It could have been left out. just like the bear faced lie. Citizen isn't the only person that caught that. WTF? Citizen, your lines aren't clean. If they were worded better, they'd appear and read a lot nicer.
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