5. Papermate vs 6. Retulen Reactus

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  1. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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  2. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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  3. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    12-14 ...sounds good
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  4. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    ‘’It’s a shame’’
    your still rocking net merchandise, acting like you part of-the-game
    With An Rbl shirt, username beanie baby, and an I love-jeff-keychain
    Heard you were destined for fame, but truthfully im better
    So I'll knockout Ink..... and Lokk Invert .....into my my cellar
    Beat me? never, you've blown your chance, now everyone clap
    Cause your run for the tittle, ended at the track meet in your memory ''lapse'
    Quit with the lame act’s, and comprehend Ret’s ya new ruler
    Hit you in the adams apple, and use your skull as a fruit juicer
    Fuck the three of you losers, I hate writing for nerds
    So I’ll redefine your alias, with the first three words of my verse
    Lets see I've already killed Ink, n fixing to leave ya staggering g
    So i guess there’ll only be two of you left...... like adam n eve
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  5. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    dot tee ex tee (11:19:37 PM): can i get an extension in rbl?
    BrooknamGiant (11:19:55 PM): Who are you??
    dot tee ex tee (11:20:01 PM): papermate
    BrooknamGiant (11:20:28 PM): Yeah, post this convo in your battle
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  6. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    Word, Cool with me
    I didnt think you where goin to show,

    I'll edit this with votes

    and posting an extension is -3 votes right?
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  7. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    Listenin to Perma's hoaxes will get you nowhere, peon

    Firstly, fuck this kid, there'll be no reports in the dune where ya found
    Cuz Papers leavin RR all over the streets, like DMX's crew was in town
    Ya nothin but overrated trash, and not to mention ya an annoyin name
    User tellin me how within 3 days of knowin you, he blocked you on AIM
    I don't see the competition agaist this fuckin nobodys undetected text
    Shit.. you shouldve expected this sonning more than unprotected sex
    Buck at ya chest, faggot, Papermate moves steadily jus to gash at vets
    Slash ya neck, since all ya punches "Ms. Mei" like a Chinese bachlorette
    Blast with techs, I get praise when I question heads how real is my text
    All I hear is 'FUCK SHIT BITCH' When I ask people their feelings 'To Ret's'
    Not even supposed to be so high in the ranks, your only fillin the battle
    N you're The Sexy Ox? Well then shit man, Papermate is killin the cattle

    .. Stay in your place.
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  8. Storm Bringa

    Storm Bringa Mad as Hell

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    Both verses were pretty damn hot, but this section, in my opinion, blew it wide open:

    I don't see the competition agaist this fuckin nobodys undetected text
    Shit.. you shouldve expected this sonning more than unprotected sex
    Buck at ya chest, faggot, Papermate moves steadily jus to gash at vets
    Slash ya neck, since all ya punches "Ms. Mei" like a Chinese bachlorette
    Blast with techs, I get praise when I question heads how real is my text
    All I hear is 'FUCK SHIT BITCH' When I ask people their feelings 'To Ret's'

    ^ That was some killa shit.

    VOTE = P-mate
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  9. Sur*5*ILL

    Sur*5*ILL Kangs

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    Eh...


    Punches: Papermate, Barely...
    Flow: Even
    Wordplay: Eh...Papermate
    Personals: Neither
    Appeal: Neither



    Vote - Papermate


    Blah.
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  10. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    I got papermate here... nice verse doggy..


    I liked rets closer, but the 'to rets' line was fiyah fire.


    v/ p.mate
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  11. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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    Vote - Paper mate

    He came with a pretty illin verse, there were very few flaws in his verse. I wasnt feeling RR's style.. It was kind of whack and his stuff didn't really hit as hard as PM's.. but ohh well..This is my two cents, should be explained enough.
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  12. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    kind of whack?
    stfu
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  13. 2krukid

    2krukid Unregistered User

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    ‘’It’s a shame’’
    your still rocking net merchandise, acting like you part of-the-game
    With An Rbl shirt, username beanie baby, and an I love-jeff-keychain
    -LOL
    Heard you were destined for fame, but truthfully im better
    So I'll knockout Ink..... and Lokk Invert .....into my my cellar
    -okay
    Beat me? never, you've blown your chance, now everyone clap
    Cause your run for the tittle, ended at the track meet in your memory ''lapse'
    -nice one
    Quit with the lame act’s, and comprehend Ret’s ya new ruler
    Hit you in the adams apple, and use your skull as a fruit juicer
    -hot shit
    Fuck the three of you losers, I hate writing for nerds
    So I’ll redefine your alias, with the first three words of my verse
    -nice
    Lets see I've already killed Ink, n fixing to leave ya staggering g
    So i guess there’ll only be two of you left...... like adam n eve
    -coo close

    Listenin to Perma's hoaxes will get you nowhere, peon

    Firstly, fuck this kid, there'll be no reports in the dune where ya found
    Cuz Papers leavin RR all over the streets, like DMX's crew was in town
    -nice start
    Ya nothin but overrated trash, and not to mention ya an annoyin name
    User tellin me how within 3 days of knowin you, he blocked you on AIM
    -aaight personal
    I don't see the competition agaist this fuckin nobodys undetected text
    Shit.. you shouldve expected this sonning more than unprotected sex
    -lol
    Buck at ya chest, faggot, Papermate moves steadily jus to gash at vets
    Slash ya neck, since all ya punches "Ms. Mei" like a Chinese bachlorette
    -oh hot
    Blast with techs, I get praise when I question heads how real is my text
    All I hear is 'FUCK SHIT BITCH' When I ask people their feelings 'To Ret's'
    -ha ha nice
    Not even supposed to be so high in the ranks, your only fillin the battle
    N you're The Sexy Ox? Well then shit man, Papermate is killin the cattle
    -coo close

    both had nice verses but papermate was more consistent.

    .. Stay in your place.
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  14. Resen

    Resen Do i need a title?

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    Papermates heat
    Buck at ya chest, faggot, Papermate moves steadily jus to gash at vets
    Slash ya neck, since all ya punches "Ms. Mei" like a Chinese bachlorette

    Retulens heat
    Lets see I've already killed Ink, n fixing to leave ya staggering g
    So i guess there’ll only be two of you left...... like adam n eve

    nice battle, both had good verses but im goin with papermate
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  15. X sample

    X sample New Member

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    papermate hit alot harder here...rets verse was still tight, but not enoguh to get paper...

    ret proly concentrated on a rumour that hasnt been verified a but to much, detracted from his verse..

    paper got better as the verse went on..

    vote = papermate
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  16. Awtasee

    Awtasee Your Favourite Celeb'

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    v/p.mate

    he was just more consistant overall..... retulen had 1 or 2 hard-hittin' punches that i liked.. but the rest of his verse was a little boring

    paper takes this one on consistancy
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  17. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    oh well,

    I guess i should have came a bit harder
    nice verse
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  18. orbit the great

    orbit the great another gay white kid

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    vote papermate, looks like ill be beatin you next week



    but he just came nicer and rr had a few lines a wasnt feeling, nice battle
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  19. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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    [Paper] wins!!

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