5. Namix 7-1 Vs 6. Retulen Reactus 7-2

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  1. U S E R

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  2. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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  3. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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  4. Retulen Reactus

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    Beat cryo last week, but your not touchin my steez
    Ya girls known to ‘Tour Ret’, like the yelling disease!
    Micheal Jackson and R Kelley think ya real nice
    They both said your fresh n tite…and I don’t mean skill wise!
    Im untouchable geek , your still jockin b-boys g
    So Call me sea, the way your 20,000 leagues below me!
    win? please, all ya shits played n wheathered
    You’ve bitten ‘resin’ so much, that ya lips stick together!
    Ret's quick to rip, my lines are crowned majestic
    Nam’s concert’s a rodeo, everyone stampeding for the exit!
    This kid's dyslexic, i can't be phased by your weak slurs
    I'll Put more shells into ya frame, then beach pictures!
    Half your wins are from dickriders, the other half is luck
    Cause The closest you’ll get to Victory, is at the strip club!
    Last Setup= where I prepare for the final dissing.
    Last Punch= …what your entire verse was missing!
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  5. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    fuck thanksgivin kid, u lost ground faster than the Indians did
    speakin of which,
    ...ur train of thoughts like the ‘little Injin’ that couldnt do shit
    u can blame the dog, cars, obstacle courses or the fake car toy
    …but none of those explain why you couldnt beat Paper, boy
    ya tongue-tied like shoe laces.. so quit thinking u’ll blaze this
    its over with the fat lady, and the bitch isnt singing ur praises
    i go ape like king kong, on ya ass like your creepin pink thong
    ur only in Ex-T cuz ya ‘rode Mud’ like the dirt street u live on
    u can think a battle wit me’s more Fair than albino hair ‘n skin
    but like old Michael Jackson pictures.. ya pale in comparison
    everything u types fuckin pitiful, you probably even log-on sad
    all ur drops are like the end of Old Yeller…cuz ya doggone bad
    lol@u usin a adam n eve punch, now your verse’ll get Eden too
    ‘n if we banned the ‘bad-apples’ in RBL..u’d be forbidden, fruit
    finishin clowns! fuck throwin it in, wipe my piss wit the towel
    kids never make-out wit muh ass, but u can start kissing it now


    ur like a one-legged man in an ass kicking contest. :)
    heh, g/l man..
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  6. U S E R

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  7. Donis

    Donis New Member

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    funny that ret called out the other cat for resin biting, when the last two lines of his ish are earily similar to a frac couplet in PBA 1.


    but I digress.


    i think namix took this by a bit. retulen had the flow edge, but namix's punches were wittier (with the exception of the MJ line - which was HORRID).


    v - Namix.
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  8. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    up

    ...and yea, i have never bit in my life.. making up personals is gay ret lol.

    (lol and word at the MJ line roadblock, except i hope u've at least heard the phrase 'u pale in comparison to me'- but im not defending it lol)
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  9. Donis

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    lol


    yes.



    i've heard the phrase. tooooooo many times.
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  10. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    iight, here's the breakdown...


    Retulen Reactus:
    Beat cryo last week, but your not touchin my steez
    Ya girls known to ‘Tour Ret’, like the yelling disease!
    haha, cool opener.. 2.5/5
    Micheal Jackson and R Kelley think ya real nice
    They both said your fresh n tite…and I don’t mean skill wise!
    ehh, decent.. 2/5
    Im untouchable geek , your still jockin b-boys g
    So Call me sea, the way your 20,000 leagues below me!
    haha, liked the concept, could've been worded better tho.. 3/5
    win? please, all ya shits played n wheathered
    You’ve bitten ‘resin’ so much, that ya lips stick together!
    haha, i liked that.. 3.5/5
    Ret's quick to rip, my lines are crowned majestic
    Nam’s concert’s a rodeo, everyone stampeding for the exit!
    ehhh, decent.. 2/5
    This kid's dyslexic, i can't be phased by your weak slurs
    I'll Put more shells into ya frame, then beach pictures!
    haha, good wordplay.. 3/5
    Half your wins are from dickriders, the other half is luck
    Cause The closest you’ll get to Victory, is at the strip club!
    hmm, it's decent.. 2/5
    Last Setup= where I prepare for the final dissing.
    Last Punch= …what your entire verse was missing!
    nice ending.. 3/5

    pretty cool verse
    wasn't really top quality
    I've seen better from u
    but it was pretty str8
    ur total score is.. 21/40


    Namix:
    fuck thanksgivin kid, u lost ground faster than the Indians did
    speakin of which,
    ...ur train of thoughts like the ‘little Injin’ that couldnt do shit
    nah.. 2/5
    u can blame the dog, cars, obstacle courses or the fake car toy
    …but none of those explain why you couldnt beat Paper, boy
    this was cool.. 3/5
    ya tongue-tied like shoe laces.. so quit thinking u’ll blaze this
    its over with the fat lady, and the bitch isnt singing ur praises
    wtf, nah man.. 1/5
    i go ape like king kong, on ya ass like your creepin pink thong
    ur only in Ex-T cuz ya ‘rode Mud’ like the dirt street u live on
    haha, cool concept.. 3/5
    u can think a battle wit me’s more Fair than albino hair ‘n skin
    but like old Michael Jackson pictures.. ya pale in comparison
    nope, played.. 1/5
    everything u types fuckin pitiful, you probably even log-on sad
    all ur drops are like the end of Old Yeller…cuz ya doggone bad
    wtf? ahahahaha, that's a newbie punch if I ever seen one.. 1/5
    lol@u usin a adam n eve punch, now your verse’ll get Eden too
    ‘n if we banned the ‘bad-apples’ in RBL..u’d be forbidden, fruit
    haha, that was cool.. 3/5
    finishin clowns! fuck throwin it in, wipe my piss wit the towel
    kids never make-out wit muh ass, but u can start kissing it now
    very bad ending.. [1/5

    not really a good verse
    this was my first time peepin u
    not really impressive at all
    work on ur wording and content kiddo
    ur overall score is... 15/40


    so both total scores are...


    Retulen Reactus: 21/40
    Namix: 15/40


    vote=Retulen

    He was more consistent and thought out
    namix just seemed bland and needed better wording too
    some of his concepts were good but most weren't
    retulen edged 'em out in this one

    holler!!
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  11. Craven Moorehead

    Craven Moorehead Big Sloppy

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    RR had little appeal - a lot of flipped shit that wasn't that nice. How the fuck did I lose to you? Haha - anyways. namix had the 'paper, boy' line, the 'rode mud' and the last section of his verse were all dopeness. He had better content which made for the easy dub-ya.

    Vote: namix
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  12. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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  13. eye of the tiger

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    V - Retulen Reactus

    Namix seemed rushed a little, I dont know how much time you put into that verse, but some of those lines were just .. Not up to par with your other shits.

    RR came decent, your closer has been done an infinite amount of times though.

    The Tour-Rets line was pretty good

    Namix has the Rode Mud line, but I felt Retulen had a tad bit more material IMO.

    Nice battle.
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  14. Desenut§

    Desenut§ Lean mean nuttin machine!

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    Ret had a pretty goood verse.. I was impressed.. and figured he had it.....

    but from line one.. namix took control.. and kept it.. just with better wording.. flow.. and punch concepts..

    vote-Namix
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  15. Charles

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    namix was niiice..paper boy,and eden lines were fuckin nice...wow...ret made up personals?!?!wha?

    Vote - Namix,easy
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  16. Retulen Reactus

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    STFU
    WITH THESE MADE UP PERSONALS, look on b-boys, and if read my verse you could tell it was one line

    ill edit this with votes
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  17. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    Namix - Came with a nice verse, I DID like the paper boy and eden lines.. but I didnt think they were ground breaking and that was more or less the only thing standing out

    Ret - Resin line, shells line, closer..<--basically those won it for you, the rest of your verse was about = to namix's rest of his verse.. but you had 3 stand out lines..

    vote = double R
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  18. Break it

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    ima have to go with RR on this one just took this in my case both came out aggresive and had a real clean fight..lol naw but in my opinion for flow, punches and pers i'm goin wit RR on this

    vote-Retulen
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  19. X sample

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    vote = namix..

    pretty clear winner IMO...brought a dope verse, namix is proly the freshest writer in the rbl right now...

    retulen - nice verse, pretty consistent, but i thought the only standout line was the beach/shells line...
    some of them were a bit played..still good shit

    namix - u brought fire...that MJ line was a bit played, but it was still flipped good..thanksgivin line was dope, as was the mud and adam and eve line...got this..

    vote = namix
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  20. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    Vote = Retulen Reactus

    Had some nicer punches, pretty clean verse

    Namix .. Came weak this time, usually he does much better than what I'm seeing from him now.

    Retulen had a good flow, aswell.
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