5. MisterE (0-1) vs 6. | Origin | (0-0)

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  1. Brown Jesus

    Brown Jesus Menso is for Dummies

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    VERSES DUE THURSDAY @ 11:59 PST
    Line Limit: Minimum 8 lines, Maximum 40 (If opponent agrees, you may go over the line limit)
    NO BITING OR RECYCLING
    Biting/Recycling is the equivalent of a no show
    Extensions must be requested in your battle thread before the Thursday evening deadline. It is the opponents choice whether to allow the extension or not. Failure to accept/deny the request prior to the first vote being cast will result in the extension being allowed.
    If granted, the extension overrides the deadline for BOTH battlers
    A No Show results in a loss and automatic sign out
    If your opponent fails to show, you must still post at least 4 lines and 3 voting links for your victory.
    A title wont change hands by no show
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST THREE TIMES IN THEIR MATCH. A CHECK IN, THEIR VERSE, AND THEIR LINKS. EXCESSIVE POSTING WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES.
    COMPETITORS MAY ONLY POST ONCE IN AN OPPONENTS BATTLE. A VOTE. ANYTHING UNNECCESARY WILL RESULT IN A LOSS OF VOTES. IF YOU HAVE SOMETHING TO SAY, EITHER TAKE IT TO THE LOUNGE OR PM THE PERSON.
    First battler to post is allowed to edit their verse up until the second battler posts theirs. Once the second battler posts, they are allowed to edit their verse until the first vote is casted.
    The Second battler to post cannot post more lines than the first. Doing so will result in DQ.
    Disruptive members will be banned from the league will and have their posts moved to the garbage bin thread.
    UNDER NO CIRCUMSTANCES CAN A NON-MOD MAKE A THREAD IN THE LEAGUE. YOU WILL BE BANNED FROM THE SITE FOR A WEEK. THIS IS YOUR WARNING!!!!!

    VOTING RULES:
    VOTES ARE DUE SUNDAY NIGHT @ 8:59 PST
    You must vote on at least 5 matches(provided there are 5 matches to vote on, if no vote on whichever battles are open) and post the links in your thread. For every link not posted you will lose a vote.
    Votes MUST be at least two lines per verse, and must have a vote casted. There is no voting for ties.
    Voting is open past the deadline in the case that I’m late starting the new week.
    Voting is open to current participants, RBL mods, and former champs. Former champs must vote on at least three matches to have their vote counted, and must adhere to the same voting rules.


    Any changes must be agreed upon by both participants and a forum mod.

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  2. l Origin l

    l Origin l Member

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    I am checking in. I'm cool with the extension. Take your time.
    1.Sonny Daze vs Rico Suave.
    2. Muti (0-0) vs 10. Resilent (0-0) vs 11. Blue Tongue
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  3. MisterE

    MisterE Look @ His Face Now!

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  4. l Origin l

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    Here to take E off the map since I heard he was sitting on X.
    Caught up to him, he wasn't spitting no threats.
    Don't know why he hyped those visuals,
    Mister E wasn't even cheefin, it was all smoke signals.
    Still on principle, I gotta beat him within an inch of death.
    With the hands, Imma precision vet. Judo chops hitting face chin and neck,
    til pupils get expelled from skull like E cheated on a written test.
    I keep traditions fresh, all is not forgiven yet.
    We'll see eye to eye when you're back from your vision quest.
    Your dame is proof my game spittin is fine, my dick on her mind.
    Nothing would get her out of those jeans faster.
    No glove in sight, she say "we still fucking right?"
    I pulled your favorite team trackshirt out the clean hamper,
    and was about to use it as her dream catcher.
    Til her old John told me that a poke could haunt us, (pocahontas)
    Cus when your chick got to smoking ganja,
    she got horny and would take tokes from used broken condoms.
    Licked every man from scrotum to hole.
    Dirty hoe left lice in sheets, wasn't piped in peace,
    She was dug out like ground under a totem pole.
    Some things can only be solved with spraying and shootin.
    E runs away from all that and prays for improvement,
    Only natural a MisterE stays away from solution.
    So don't go to him when settling biz,
    He'll suck dick if it means letting him live,
    E has no heart like the tin man from the Wiz,
    Only thing in the MisterE machine is metal N kids.
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  5. MisterE

    MisterE Look @ His Face Now!

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    Your deaths enclosed: switchblade shanking his Memento’s
    Take a letter opener to his envelope and empty out his mental notes
    Origin hasn’t e-volved yet, so I'm in his sweet doll’s neck
    Skanky splattered…she was taking baby batter's like a T Ball set
    Gagging while drool falls, the nasty scag clambered from zoo walls
    With Amazon mule calls and left my back with more scratches than an amateur pool hall
    Fake faggot, watch this lil kid get laced, he’s concealed in dense haze
    Your not gangsta, bitch…you thought Jada kiss was a Will Smith sex tape
    Dip shit, your sparring armless…so starch ya garments with tar for hardness
    You harmless carcass, signing Bizarre’s fan club don’t make you a Marshall Artist
    Watch me upgrade Origin’s faggoty dork noise
    He‘d love, ’I’m a Hoagie sandwich with pork loin…goin ham on you Poor Boy‘s!’
    I’ll learn the little child, paternal with the style
    Birthed from my canal, then shoved a hunting blade in his throat and put Gerber in his mouth…faggot

    thanks for the ext's man, good luck!
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  6. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    Origin - Nice concepts. Your content was pretty on point. I have to say I liked the way your structure was for this verse. A little hard to read in the beginning until I caught on to how someone would spit this. Decent lines, though. Your close - I don't get it.. Tin man from the Wiz? Or Oz? Anyways, nothing stood out - just decent concepts. Wasn't feelin' that Pocahontus line, either. And that fact you explained it took away from it's impact..

    MisterE - That opener was flames..Amateur pool ball setup/punch combo was the line of the match. That shit was fire, man. Consistent flow throughout. Concepts were all fresh though. That closer was a cool way to end it.

    Vote - Mister E Easy Margin
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  7. Rated-Are

    Rated-Are New Member

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    vote Mister E
    hands down
    Origin didnt really have any appealing lines
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  8. SonnyDaze

    SonnyDaze 7 train heavyweight

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    Origin: Not a bad verse, no real weak points, but heavy punches were lacking. You had some dope lines though. I liked the "written test" and "solution" punches in particular. The Pocahantas scheme would've been better if it wasn't intertwined within the "fuckin' yo bitch" scheme which ended up being way long drawn out. You can definitely rhyme though so just tighten up the schemes next time around.

    MisterE: Pretty much went ham from start to finish. Keep dropping verses like that and you're gonna be a problem dude. But like I said last week, it wouldn't hurt to add a few more personals.

    Vote: MisterE

    Battle of the week for me.
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  9. Blue Tongue

    Blue Tongue Say awhhhh

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    Origin:

    Here to take E off the map since I heard he was sitting on X.
    Caught up to him, he wasn't spitting no threats.

    I dont understand anything with this set up. way over my head.
    catching up with him why? theres no hitter here... i dont get it

    Don't know why he hyped those visuals,
    Mister E wasn't even cheefin, it was all smoke signals.

    i dont think cheefin was the best word to use for this concept,
    i believe you could have switched something up here to make it better.

    Still on principle, I gotta beat him within an inch of death.
    With the hands, Imma precision vet. Judo chops hitting face chin and neck,

    filler...

    til pupils get expelled from skull like E cheated on a written test.
    I keep traditions fresh, all is not forgiven yet.

    Filler... i caught your skull/school meaning but its forced and has no impact.

    We'll see eye to eye when you're back from your vision quest.
    Your dame is proof my game spittin is fine, my dick on her mind.
    Nothing would get her out of those jeans faster.
    No glove in sight, she say "we still fucking right?"
    I pulled your favorite team trackshirt out the clean hamper,
    and was about to use it as her dream catcher.

    Filler...

    Til her old John told me that a poke could haunt us, (pocahontas)
    Cus when your chick got to smoking ganja,
    she got horny and would take tokes from used broken condoms.

    it came off sounding good, rhymed flowed well and such.
    but didnt make sense. the pocahontas play was for nothing...
    which made me feel lost... and tokes from broken condoms?? over my head

    Licked every man from scrotum to hole.
    Dirty hoe left lice in sheets, wasn't piped in peace,
    She was dug out like ground under a totem pole.
    Some things can only be solved with spraying and shootin.
    E runs away from all that and prays for improvement,

    im starting to get bored... no name flips.. no direct personals..
    no nothing...

    Only natural a MisterE stays away from solution.
    So don't go to him when settling biz,
    He'll suck dick if it means letting him live,
    E has no heart like the tin man from the Wiz,
    Only thing in the MisterE machine is metal N kids.

    i dont get what metal N kids means...
    hes full of metal and kids... makes no sense...






    Mister E:


    Your deaths enclosed: switchblade shanking his Memento’s
    Take a letter opener to his envelope and empty out his mental notes

    i liked the flow, the ryhmes good too... but seemd like filler.
    it has nothing to do with your opponent. so i dont like it.

    Origin hasn’t e-volved yet, so I'm in his sweet doll’s neck
    Skanky splattered…she was taking baby batter's like a T Ball set

    i think im missing something... i dont know what baby batters are.
    this is over my head.

    Gagging while drool falls, the nasty scag clambered from zoo walls
    With Amazon mule calls and left my back with more scratches than an amateur pool hall

    LOL @ the scratches and pool hall but this is way too many bars in
    to still be dissing his girl...

    Fake faggot, watch this lil kid get laced, he’s concealed in dense haze
    Your not gangsta, bitch…you thought Jada kiss was a Will Smith sex tape

    LOL... if its true, its even better. but overall its still not a good punch.

    Dip shit, your sparring armless…so starch ya garments with tar for hardness
    You harmless carcass, signing Bizarre’s fan club don’t make you a Marshall Artist

    .... idk ... no...

    Watch me upgrade Origin’s faggoty dork noise
    He‘d love, ’I’m a Hoagie sandwich with pork loin…goin ham on you Poor Boy‘s!’

    i dont get it... i feel like im missing something.

    I’ll learn the little child, paternal with the style
    Birthed from my canal, then shoved a hunting blade in his throat and put Gerber in his mouth…faggot

    Filler...



    Overall... i got Mister E taking this.
    Sorry Origin.
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