5. Georgia 9-3 vs 6. Butler 16-2

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. Quriosity

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    blah
    i wont have time for this later








    Ayo,
    You’re hitched with a sire, and I bet you wish you were tighter
    But nigga if you were bein blunt, I’d be the lips and the lighter
    Q’s stickin this fighter, and whoever cares for a chauffeur..
    Whose ties with the in crowd is more like a fuckin pair of some loafers
    I’m darin this poser, and girls hate cos it'd break if they touched it
    Cos a Dick that limp would only pass for a Private Investigator on crutches
    And trust that if we ever feared wackness, then this whore’d be gifted
    Cos his verse’d raise terror until Bush’d declare a world war against it
    Now shores are shiftin, whenever I get to wieldin my pencil, and..
    If you ever made it reel big, then maybe you should stick to bein a fisherman
    But listen kid, you get props for battling Q wit that stretched shit
    Cos the last butler that close to fresh was Geoffrey off of Fresh Prince
    And this next stint‘ll off his face cos see my thoughts’ll rage
    ..Since butler's holdin my nuts so tight, I turned and coughed in place
    And speakin of holdin things, what kind of show is you after?
    When the only thing more forced than ya lines is voters holdin their laughter
    I’m chokin this bastard, and this chiseled pipe’ll fit tight in my pistol right
    But on a side note, his bland punches could outsell any type of a Crystal Light
    You silly kid, I got clout and they know what I really did
    Cos after my punches, you lose left eyes worse than Tboz and Chilli did
    But to hurt this henchman, I don’t really need the worth or mention
    Cos I’ma hit his temples so hard Arabs’ll come and convert to Christians
    And if there ever was a price on my head, he’s not the baller to lift it
    Cos with that verse, he’s such a cheapskate rink workers are startin to picket
    So to relieve em from stressin, I’ma end up puttin the heat to a brethren
    Who tried to be Q, and wound up leavin MC not even a question
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  3. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    if i post 1st, im goin more than 16, peaches
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  4. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    you're so gay




    i dont even know you, what is there to say?

    why dont you just go 16 like i said?

    but oh well, do what you do
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  5. Butler

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    sorry, mista 97 wordplay.
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    i dont know you either.. i guess i cant blame this fuck,
    ur right.. there isnt much to say. cuz, well... beatin u aint sayin much.
    u aint hav to catch an attitude. but i can see u startd to sound iffy
    i woulda just don 16 if i'da known u'd run outta concepts around 20...
    the detectivs just left the scene of ya verse. tryna decide where was the truble.
    but 1 look at ya creativity.. an they were able to conclude there was a struggle
    ur an old head. wit old concepts. i wish i could see ya hardest b
    id push back the hands of time. but this week, ya wigs #1 priority.
    Harmin me? garbagecee.. my pic even shows ya weak duke.,
    pleez, ya punchlines had less effect on me then sun-bathin at the beach do
    whiteboy still tryna learn slang. wit his hoodies, n jeans way too baggy
    went to the club. a girl asked him to grind.. Q strappd on his K2 phattys....
    then he pulledout his dance movies. the robot, wit alittle lame twist.
    n started doin a gayer shuffle then the 1 programmd on his nano's playlist..,
    i been champ little negro. but its ovr 10,000 posts wit no belt on the dood
    consider me book, Qs the film version.... simply put? im better than u
    ya soft. MCnobody ill bloody ya frame. Ima nice head.
    n patriotic enuff to hang ya corpse ovr the flag just to keep the stripes red,
    .....I seen ya chick dance the pole. while Qs broke ass is sorry..
    shit, this nggas more 'outta cake' then his girl was at my bachelor party.
    ur a pussy. it must b that time of the month. this guys faggg
    id say Qs known to flood the block - but its more like a thin, cotton, white pad.
    ima be responsible for the future personals this garbage guy'll get too...
    "bitch, u KNOW ya wack when Butler dont hav to stretch his lines against u"
    who's the illest out of us two?.. wit no shadow of doubt.
    ill hav more nggas sayin 'its not him' then they do to the Fracture account.

    'thefuckouttahere
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  6. Georgia

    Georgia New Member

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    1 im black
    2 ive been champ 3 times
    3 you saw mission impossible 3? cos he said that flag shit, i jus saw it yesterday



    but good shit tho

    solid last 3 bars
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  7. Butler

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    u washdup swaying garbageass ngga..

    oz, or 1... pleez delete that abov post bfore i post links to everysingle one of this nggas punchlines and str8up ruin this battle.

    and while we're at it.. editing after the other person drops is a no-no.. negro


    **since ur continuously editing ur verse (like 3 or 4xs now).., i left a word out.. so im editing that word in
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  8. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    sure thing guy


    who are you?
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  9. Orange407County

    Orange407County Well-Known Member

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    Q- rink line, bush line, fresh prince lien was ok..liked the left eye joint..temple, holdin their breath..

    good verse..some shit was ehh... cool shit tho..seen better from u

    Butler - 2nd couplet was coo..wig line kinda played..nano playliste line was coo..keep the stripes red coo..lol@bachelor party line..stretch my lines line..

    word word, good verse...

    ehh ithink its real close, both had some kinda trashy shit in-between the good lines...but, i think butlers ehh lines were too ehh.. the opener..the book/film line..detective/struggle shit..wig line...pad ilne..

    q had some bad shit too..blutn line? played...loafers...reel big...

    but... he had less that i didnt like i guess..and still had lines i liked...more consistent..

    vote - Georgia
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  10. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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  11. Brock Sampson

    Brock Sampson Shame on a nigga

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    Q....

    And this next stint‘ll off his face cos see my thoughts’ll rage
    ..Since butler's holdin my nuts so tight, I turned and coughed in place
    And speakin of holdin things, what kind of show is you after?
    When the only thing more forced than ya lines is voters holdin their laughter
    And if there ever was a price on my head, he’s not the baller to lift it
    Cos with that verse, he’s such a cheapskate rink workers are startin to picket

    ^these were the highlights in ya verse IMO. Alot of ur punches weren't effective...seemed outdated...like

    You’re hitched with a sire, and I bet you wish you were tighter
    But nigga if you were bein blunt, I’d be the lips and the lighter
    Q’s stickin this fighter, and whoever cares for a chauffeur..
    Whose ties with the in crowd is more like a fuckin pair of some loafers

    the bush, reel, butler/Geoff....but start picking up at the end with the lines I quoted.

    Butler..

    u aint hav to catch an attitude. but i can see u startd to sound iffy
    i woulda just don 16 if i'da known u'd run outta concepts around 20...
    the detectivs just left the scene of ya verse. tryna decide where was the truble.
    but 1 look at ya creativity.. an they were able to conclude there was a struggle
    ur an old head. wit old concepts. i wish i could see ya hardest b
    id push back the hands of time. but this week, ya wigs #1 priority.
    ya soft. MCnobody ill bloody ya frame. Ima nice head.
    n patriotic enuff to hang ya corpse ovr the flag just to keep the stripes red,
    .....I seen ya chick dance the pole. while Qs broke ass is sorry..
    shit, this nggas more 'outta cake' then his girl was at my bachelor party.
    ur a pussy. it must b that time of the month. this guys faggg
    id say Qs known to flood the block - but its more like a thin, cotton, white pad.
    ima be responsible for the future personals this garbage guy'll get too...
    "bitch, u KNOW ya wack when Butler dont hav to stretch his lines against u"

    ^werd...some better than the others here but solid no doubt.

    V/ Butler

    thought he took this rather easily. ... ..Q, if you came with more of what I quoted it woulda been a better show. The concepts u chose didn't hold much impact. No personnals either.
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  12. wilmer deryou

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    Georgia

    And if there ever was a price on my head, he’s not the baller to lift it
    Cos with that verse, he’s such a cheapskate rink workers are startin to picket
    So to relieve em from stressin, I’ma end up puttin the heat to a brethren
    Who tried to be Q, and wound up leavin MC not even a question

    vs

    butler

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    i dont know you either.. i guess i cant blame this fuck,
    ur right.. there isnt much to say. cuz, well... beatin u aint sayin much.

    the detectivs just left the scene of ya verse. tryna decide where was the truble.
    but 1 look at ya creativity.. an they were able to conclude there was a struggle
    ur an old head. wit old concepts. i wish i could see ya hardest b
    id push back the hands of time. but this week, ya wigs #1 priority.

    i been champ little negro. but its ovr 10,000 posts wit no belt on the dood
    consider me book, Qs the film version.... simply put? im better than u

    .....I seen ya chick dance the pole. while Qs broke ass is sorry..
    shit, this nggas more 'outta cake' then his girl was at my bachelor party.
    .
    ima be responsible for the future personals this garbage guy'll get too...
    "bitch, u KNOW ya wack when Butler dont hav to stretch his lines against u"


    ^^like all of this lines...LMAO at that 'struggle'' line thought that was dope...this wasn't close goergia had hella played shit...butler dropped mad orginal...not even close


    vote-butler
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  13. Chrit

    Chrit The Prodigy

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    ima be responsible for the future personals this garbage guy'll get too...
    "bitch, u KNOW ya wack when Butler dont hav to stretch his lines against u"
    who's the illest out of us two?.. wit no shadow of doubt.
    ill hav more nggas sayin 'its not him' then they do to the Fracture account.

    vs

    And speakin of holdin things, what kind of show is you after?
    When the only thing more forced than ya lines is voters holdin their laughter

    I have Butler taking this pretty easily. Q came with alot of relatively outdated stuff.


    v/ Butler
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  14. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Q had the cheapskate and laughter lines i liked.. but just about the entire rest of his verse was played concepts.. i dont know man, ya usually more fresh than that

    Butler didnt come his best, he had some played lines, but his verse wasnt bad at all.. there were plenty of fresh concepts, like the 2 at the end, those were nice.. verse was cool, good enough for the win here.

    Vote: Butler
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  15. Fracture

    Fracture Legion Of Dudes

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    yo just happened to look over this battle and gotta letcha both know.

    mc quo, my n!g. that was a good verse, clean ideas... and well, pretty witty. I can tell you aint that young n!g that use to make an ass out of himself in the chats n shit. props on some really clever concepts.

    however,

    butler got you n!gga. he had creativety aswell but aside from that had that refreshing comedy factor that not many verses have these days.

    i particulary liked this verse because there were ideas that most cats woulda not even let their microsoft word try to fuck with, (like the struggle line).. but you pulled it off. props fa sho.

    good battle, prolly the only one ill read this week.

    props to both, pz.
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  16. Amaze.

    Amaze. So Fly

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    And speakin of holdin things, what kind of show is you after?
    When the only thing more forced than ya lines is voters holdin their laughter
    But to hurt this henchman, I don’t really need the worth or mention
    Cos I’ma hit his temples so hard Arabs’ll come and convert to Christians
    And if there ever was a price on my head, he’s not the baller to lift it
    Cos with that verse, he’s such a cheapskate rink workers are startin to picket

    lots of played things imo, like the butler/fresh line & blunt line

    vs.


    i dont know you either.. i guess i cant blame this fuck,
    ur right.. there isnt much to say. cuz, well... beatin u aint sayin much.

    the detectivs just left the scene of ya verse. tryna decide where was the truble.
    but 1 look at ya creativity.. an they were able to conclude there was a struggle

    then he pulledout his dance movies. the robot, wit alittle lame twist.
    n started doin a gayer shuffle then the 1 programmd on his nano's playlist..,
    ima be responsible for the future personals this garbage guy'll get too...
    "bitch, u KNOW ya wack when Butler dont hav to stretch his lines against u"
    who's the illest out of us two?.. wit no shadow of doubt.
    ill hav more nggas sayin 'its not him' then they do to the Fracture account.

    vote: butler - funnier & more creative

    pz
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  17. intellectualmc

    intellectualmc New Member

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    g's good lines
    And this next stint‘ll off his face cos see my thoughts’ll rage
    ..Since butler's holdin my nuts so tight, I turned and coughed in place
    And speakin of holdin things, what kind of show is you after?
    When the only thing more forced than ya lines is voters holdin their laughter

    -vs-
    butler's good lines
    u aint hav to catch an attitude. but i can see u startd to sound iffy
    i woulda just don 16 if i'da known u'd run outta concepts around 20...
    the detectivs just left the scene of ya verse. tryna decide where was the truble.
    but 1 look at ya creativity.. an they were able to conclude there was a struggle
    ur an old head. wit old concepts. i wish i could see ya hardest b
    id push back the hands of time. but this week, ya wigs #1 priority.
    ya soft. MCnobody ill bloody ya frame. Ima nice head.
    n patriotic enuff to hang ya corpse ovr the flag just to keep the stripes red,
    .....I seen ya chick dance the pole. while Qs broke ass is sorry..
    shit, this nggas more 'outta cake' then his girl was at my bachelor party.

    v/butler
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  18. Quriosity

    Quriosity Moderator

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    sorry guys
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  19. Main Ingredient

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    vote - Georgia/MCQuriosity

    im new, i dont see what people are saying about unoriginality, maybe i just dont get it?

    every single line of his seemed coo to me, same with butlers, but georgia had the type of shit that made me laugh

    like the coughing line, shit was funny

    butler had some ok shit too struggle line was dope concept-wise...but it was sssssssssso stretched flow-wise unless you read like superman and shit

    still, good battle i just gotta give it to Georgia
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  20. Oneduh

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    And speakin of holdin things, what kind of show is you after?
    When the only thing more forced than ya lines is voters holdin their laughter

    vs.

    i dont know you either.. i guess i cant blame this fuck,
    ur right.. there isnt much to say. cuz, well... beatin u aint sayin much.
    the detectivs just left the scene of ya verse. tryna decide where was the truble.
    but 1 look at ya creativity.. an they were able to conclude there was a struggle.
    Harmin me? garbagecee.. my pic even shows ya weak duke.,
    pleez, ya punchlines had less effect on me then sun-bathin at the beach do
    .....I seen ya chick dance the pole. while Qs broke ass is sorry..
    shit, this nggas more 'outta cake' then his girl was at my bachelor party.
    who's the illest out of us two?.. wit no shadow of doubt.
    ill hav more nggas sayin 'its not him' then they do to the Fracture account.

    Well.. This wasn't close.

    Not a great verse from Butler by any means.. Alot of really easy oncepts that you made dope tho.. Q only came with 1 line I could quote.. Alot of played concepts

    Vote- Butler
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