5. Eyedeal 3-0 v.s 6. N. Taverez 1-0

Discussion in 'RBL TOP 20' started by Oneduh, Sep 18, 2006.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    [​IMG]

    RBL Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due FRIDAY night 12:00am Pacific
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Eastern
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

    -Line Limit-
    agree on an amount with your opponent
    in your check in. if no agreement is reached
    2nd person to drop must match the 1st person who dropped
    (2nd person can drop less but NOT more)

    -Voting-
    5 Votes must be posted in your battle per battler. (links)
    1 Vote deduction for each missing vote. An extra
    vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
    Voting is open to anyone with at least 200 posts.
    No 1 line voting! It wont be counted!
    One vote must be cast in either Contender or Championship Match, and Labeled as such.
    Failure for winner to not produce all links will result in no win being added to their record.



    -General Rules-
    ---1st person cant edit after 2nd person posts
    2nd person cant edit after a vote has been made

    --Freeposting in a battle before both verses are posted
    will result in a 2 vote deduction from your own battle!
    --No bitching, crying, freeposting, swaying...GROW UP!
    --Mods are ultimate law of the land. We can & will bend
    rules to maintain the prestige of the league.

    -Mod AIM Contacts-
    SPuL -- mo2v8ed4life
    Oneduh -- Anthraxspitz​
    test
  2. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

    Joined:
    Feb 11, 2006
    Messages:
    221
    down for like 10-14 lines..............................
    test
  3. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

    Joined:
    Aug 22, 2000
    Messages:
    26,171
    test
  4. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

    Joined:
    Feb 11, 2006
    Messages:
    221
    Look kid
    ya rapping is lame, verse sucks bitch you acting insane
    Your being Frank? Its good to see they gave wackness a name
    Ya girl be passing us brains, straight acting unruly
    we've taken turns so many times you'd think we're practicing UE's
    Cocky bitch walks in demanding..... thinks we probably feel em
    Dont get too high on yourself, Ill make U land on somebody and kill em
    Skank you crusty.......You winning is a prank son trust me
    How you needed three times the wins to get ranked above me?
    This fag is gone..... you cant come for the ride, get dragged along
    Or get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!
    Im in a groove son its over your dead
    YOu'll be in a groove too, when my car wheels run over ya head
    bitch!
    test
  5. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

    Joined:
    Aug 22, 2000
    Messages:
    26,171
    Ayo,

    This clown’s lame.. He can act gangsta within his town’s frame
    But here, he’ll get hit harder than Chad Johnson in the browns game
    I’m takin’ aim.. On the top, & if you try to destroy me
    You would'nt make an eye drop, bein' a visine employee
    You fuckin’ annoy me.. The inaugural tourney champ's half the man, son
    & that's why the league didn't even mention you in the mag after ya won
    You’re a pussy, it's so true.. it's why ya baby's one to be pissed
    Cuz he adds a whole new meaning to bein' a son of a bitch
    I’ma don.. & if he’s an icon who plans to excel with wins
    Then I’ma put the star on his head.. Like Terrell Owens
    You’ll lose cuz you didn’t concentrate.. You gotta release ya whit
    But don’t be mad you lost ya focus.. That car was a piece of shit

    haha
    test
  6. youngflow

    youngflow New Member

    Joined:
    Aug 16, 2006
    Messages:
    228
    this was by far the best battle i have seen so far.....but ima give it to N.

    for harder punches and better wordplay



    ya rapping is lame, verse sucks bitch you acting insane
    Your being Frank? Its good to see they gave wackness a name-line that did it


    vote-N.
    test
  7. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

    Joined:
    Feb 11, 2006
    Messages:
    221
    test
  8. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

    Joined:
    Aug 23, 2004
    Messages:
    7,229
    ya rapping is lame, verse sucks bitch you acting insane
    Your being Frank? Its good to see they gave wackness a name
    Skank you crusty.......You winning is a prank son trust me
    How you needed three times the wins to get ranked above me?
    Im in a groove son its over your dead
    YOu'll be in a groove too, when my car wheels run over ya head

    vs

    This clown’s lame.. He can act gangsta within his town’s frame
    But here, he’ll get hit harder than Chad Johnson in the browns game
    I’m takin’ aim.. On the top, & if you try to destroy me
    You would'nt make an eye drop, bein' a visine employee
    You fuckin’ annoy me.. The inaugural tourney champ's half the man, son
    & that's why the league didn't even mention you in the mag after ya won
    You’re a pussy, it's so true.. it's why ya baby's one to be pissed
    Cuz he adds a whole new meaning to bein' a son of a bitch



    i think eyedeal had one more line i was feeling, i didnt like the scheme of the terell owens line, and the closer has been flipped before...

    N tav had a couple lines i wasnt feelin....and soime i diid...


    overall, Eye had more i was feeling...


    Good battle folks,


    Vote-Eyedeal
    test
  9. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

    Joined:
    Aug 22, 2000
    Messages:
    26,171
    test
  10. SPuL

    SPuL SP

    Joined:
    Mar 31, 2004
    Messages:
    1,131
    ya rapping is lame, verse sucks bitch you acting insane
    Your being Frank? Its good to see they gave wackness a name
    This fag is gone..... you cant come for the ride, get dragged along
    Or get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!
    Im in a groove son its over your dead
    YOu'll be in a groove too, when my car wheels run over ya head

    v.s.

    I’m takin’ aim.. On the top, & if you try to destroy me
    You would'nt make an eye drop, bein' a visine employee
    I’ma don.. & if he’s an icon who plans to excel with wins
    Then I’ma put the star on his head.. Like Terrell Owens

    Overall this was a cool little battle here. NT came pretty cool. Had some good lines. Wasn't as good as his previous verse, but it was still a pretty good effort. That Frank one i thought was dope as hell. He was fallin' off after that, but finished pretty strong so cool shit there. Eyedeal also came cool. The eyedeal and TO lines were nice. rest of your verse was coo, but the Son of a bitch line I seen done over 100 times. shit's playedddd. But other than that you had cool verse too. But I think NT got this by a bit tho for being a bit more consistent.

    v/NT
    test
  11. MagTzu

    MagTzu METAPHYSICAL MASTERMIND

    Joined:
    Jul 3, 1999
    Messages:
    652
    Ohhh shit, the legend is back...

    and it looks like some freshness is in the vacinity...

    Eyedeal, no doubt.
    test
  12. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

    Joined:
    Aug 14, 2002
    Messages:
    2,717
    Look kid
    ya rapping is lame, verse sucks bitch you acting insane
    Your being Frank? Its good to see they gave wackness a name
    Skank you crusty.......You winning is a prank son trust me
    How you needed three times the wins to get ranked above me?
    This fag is gone..... you cant come for the ride, get dragged along
    Or get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!

    &


    I’m takin’ aim.. On the top, & if you try to destroy me
    You would'nt make an eye drop, bein' a visine employee
    You’re a pussy, it's so true.. it's why ya baby's one to be pissed
    Cuz he adds a whole new meaning to bein' a son of a bitch

    I don't know who Johnson or Owens is bro sorry, lines went right over my head, try mentioning some better known people

    vote- Tavererz
    test
  13. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

    Joined:
    Mar 21, 2004
    Messages:
    1,933
    Look kid
    ya rapping is lame, verse sucks bitch you acting insane
    Your being Frank? Its good to see they gave wackness a name
    alright, this is an ok flip. i've seen plenty of i'm gonna be frank with you type of lines though.
    Ya girl be passing us brains, straight acting unruly
    we've taken turns so many times you'd think we're practicing UE's
    i saw you use this not too long ago, i thought it was tight. kinda loses value for not being the 1st time you dropped it tho, sorry bro
    Cocky bitch walks in demanding..... thinks we probably feel em
    Dont get too high on yourself, Ill make U land on somebody and kill em
    ehh
    Skank you crusty.......You winning is a prank son trust me
    How you needed three times the wins to get ranked above me?
    if he was like 9-0 and you were 3-0 this would have worked, but there's not much of a disparity with 2 wins
    This fag is gone..... you cant come for the ride, get dragged along
    Or get such a beatdown, I'll just throw you a hook...you'll almost have song!
    ehh, not bad
    Im in a groove son its over your dead
    YOu'll be in a groove too, when my car wheels run over ya head
    bitch!
    yea i thought this was pretty good, not dope. but solid

    overall, you dropped above average i'd say. nothing real standout, nothing bad. i've seen better and i've seen worse from you, so not much criticism. the only thing that really hurt your verse were some kinda older concepts, which i will admit you flipped well. that and the 3 times the win line, but i just thought that one wasnt very good. closer was cool.


    Ayo,

    This clown’s lame.. He can act gangsta within his town’s frame
    But here, he’ll get hit harder than Chad Johnson in the browns game
    that was a hard hit lol. but this line is pretty simple
    I’m takin’ aim.. On the top, & if you try to destroy me
    You would'nt make an eye drop, bein' a visine employee
    thought this was cool
    You fuckin’ annoy me.. The inaugural tourney champ's half the man, son
    & that's why the league didn't even mention you in the mag after ya won
    personal, so that's a plus. but not real creative
    You’re a pussy, it's so true.. it's why ya baby's one to be pissed
    Cuz he adds a whole new meaning to bein' a son of a bitch
    eh
    I’ma don.. & if he’s an icon who plans to excel with wins
    Then I’ma put the star on his head.. Like Terrell Owens
    ehhh
    You’ll lose cuz you didn’t concentrate.. You gotta release ya whit
    But don’t be mad you lost ya focus.. That car was a piece of shit
    lol. seen focus lines, was funny tho



    this was a pretty close battle to me. i liked Deals eye drop and his personal. the rest was ehh. Tav had the in the groove line i liked. Most of your verse was cliches though, which is taking a chance alot of times nowadays, so the frank/high on yourself lines were concepts ive seen before. The UE line was recycled, when i first read it on RV i liked it. But i cant give the same props to the line now as i did then. Close battle. Lines i didnt like: i didnt like tavs 3 time the win line at all. the beatdown line was ok, but ive seen beatdown lines before too. um from Deal: i thought the TO line sucked. the Chad Johnson line wasnt really bad, but not that creative. Ok, and for best line of the battle i thought Deals eyedrop line took it. my instincts are sayin Eyedeal. i could see it going either way, but i cant give credit to cliches ive seen alot. but i wouldnt be surrpised if Tav wins.
    test
  14. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

    Joined:
    Aug 22, 2000
    Messages:
    26,171
    LMFAO.. u don't know who TO and Chad Johnson is?

    bwahahaha [funny]

    they're two of the best wide receivers in the NFL
    test
  15. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    N. Taverez wins.
    test
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Share This Page

Users Viewing Thread (Users: 0, Guests: 0)