5. Black Writer (5-0) vs. 6. Ill William (6-0)

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  1. Super.

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  2. Black Writer

    Black Writer I'm THAT dude.

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    go thirty, post early, flow dirty & vote-worthy.
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  3. Ill William

    Ill William New Member

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    more like 24
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  4. Ill William

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    30 huh? I'll just start typing, & i'll stop when I feel like it.

    This Black heads....
    A crackhead, saying "you going to rehab, just not today"
    Infact you've been putting off Detox longer then Docter Dre
    Glocks'll spray at this fad, you'll duck when I spark beef
    Only Permanent Black Writer I know of is a fucking Sharpie
    My verse is shoveling ya grave, lord knows it's easy to dig
    Who can't beat a kid with lines from another textcee in his sig?
    Still he's really sick, a canine fucker, you should be vexed for it
    Got a policedog so he could lay down the Law & have sex with it
    Test me kid? You're 5-0? You aint been toasted yet?
    Know you'll lose, that's why you say post early & aint posted yet
    Now girls got insomnia, how can they keep sleep intact?
    When everytime they close their eyes, their FUCKING SEEING BLACK!
    We can see he's wack, I'm wondering why, you would rhyme
    & Ya wanna go 30? When you're best shit has two good lines
    They say with age comes change, then we retire, right?
    But this virgin will keep the SAME 'lifestyle' his entire life
    Why try to write? You're not Hova, you just be a laugh
    As for a Black Album? Yeah, "Your first song" will be your last
    You'll need a casket, this verse is murder, this man will see...
    His death, and when the "Will" is read, it'll kill your family
    Damnit B, you know you suck, another over-rated head...
    Who floods threads with enough shit to leave 100,000 asians dead
    Your fake I said, RBLs future? It must cause the mods more stress
    If this is 'the new danger', well then I feel sorry for Mos Def
    Coke leaves you broke, so you just say no to boasters
    But this G Unit rider still spends all his money on Yayo...posters
    You got to stripclubs, but you just sit & you stare
    No! You aint gettin a dance, unless lured into an electrical chair

    looks like a no show for you huh??
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  5. -ion-

    -ion- Tough Guys Wear Pink

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    lmao@the detox line
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  6. Black Writer

    Black Writer I'm THAT dude.

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    pfft.. all that talk, & u aint sayin nothin.



    how is ur name nice, pookie? u be da judge
    only time i met ill will, was seeing nas & his QB crew wit a grudge
    but u? a lonely herb wit a fucked up geek grill,
    makin ayeone run.. even dying people go to da notary jus to leave will
    fuck da face of this coward
    watch black aim da inf beam at ur dome till people mistake u for Prowess
    cause wit da weapons, black been born sick
    so ima put da arms to ya eyes..like residual watchin a straight porn flick
    this flamboyant homo keeps da hammers in holsters
    but privates fire at will - & trust me, i aint talking panicking soldiers
    known fo hot shit, watch me expose this novice
    bitch nicca ur nose so deformed i can use it to open locks wit
    & whatever you write is boring as fuck
    got dirt on u, but it's a clean win when i wipe da floor with this scrub
    im raw enough ta take ur style, start writing some good verses
    then watch will get jealous as fuck and actually bite the improved version
    this nig is pissed cause ayething he reads is better
    so he gets green wit envy like those two faggots buy weed together
    lil scrappa, ur gangsta days are long gone
    nowadays, when u smell pussy.. u should wash yo shit or put ur thong on
    u need heat ta claim that da crook is back
    fuck that, ill give it to u raw, duke ur wack if u need ta cook that crack, YES!
    ur gettin schooled since everything you type is worthless
    plus ur in dire need of special ed... to come over and write ur verses
    carry the heat like shaq & leave this hairy male shook
    ur rough youth is lost, ever since i tore that page out da fairytale book


    looks like u were better off no showin, huh?
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  7. Ethiquette

    Ethiquette Blackberries

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    Vote-Black Writer

    Quite nice battle, check the breakdown:

    Ill WIll:

    This Black heads....
    A crackhead, saying "you going to rehab, just not today"
    Infact you've been putting off Detox longer then Docter Dre
    ...okey, not v.hard tho

    Glocks'll spray at this fad, you'll duck when I spark beef
    Only Permanent Black Writer I know of is a fucking Sharpie
    ...rofl, dope

    My verse is shoveling ya grave, lord knows it's easy to dig
    Who can't beat a kid with lines from another textcee in his sig?
    ... huh, what?

    Still he's really sick, a canine fucker, you should be vexed for it
    Got a policedog so he could lay down the Law & have sex with it
    ... okey

    Test me kid? You're 5-0? You aint been toasted yet?
    Know you'll lose, that's why you say post early & aint posted yet
    ...true, I hate that shit

    Now girls got insomnia, how can they keep sleep intact?
    When everytime they close their eyes, their FUCKING SEEING BLACK!
    ...niice, niice

    We can see he's wack, I'm wondering why, you would rhyme
    & Ya wanna go 30? When you're best shit has two good lines
    ...ok

    They say with age comes change, then we retire, right?
    But this virgin will keep the SAME 'lifestyle' his entire life
    ...lol

    Why try to write? You're not Hova, you just be a laugh
    As for a Black Album? Yeah, "Your first song" will be your last
    ...coo

    You'll need a casket, this verse is murder, this man will see...
    His death, and when the "Will" is read, it'll kill your family
    ...lol, funny

    Damnit B, you know you suck, another over-rated head...
    Who floods threads with enough shit to leave 100,000 asians dead
    ...

    Your fake I said, RBLs future? It must cause the mods more stress
    If this is 'the new danger', well then I feel sorry for Mos Def
    ...lol, nice

    Coke leaves you broke, so you just say no to boasters
    But this G Unit rider still spends all his money on Yayo...posters
    ... nice again

    You got to stripclubs, but you just sit & you stare
    No! You aint gettin a dance, unless lured into an electrical chair
    ...ok

    Black Writer:

    how is ur name nice, pookie? u be da judge
    only time i met ill will, was seeing nas & his QB crew wit a grudge
    ...ok

    but u? a lonely herb wit a fucked up geek grill,
    makin ayeone run.. even dying people go to da notary jus to leave will
    ...lol, cool

    fuck da face of this coward
    watch black aim da inf beam at ur dome till people mistake u for Prowess
    ...rofl, dope

    cause wit da weapons, black been born sick
    so ima put da arms to ya eyes..like residual watchin a straight porn flick
    ...funny shit

    this flamboyant homo keeps da hammers in holsters
    but privates fire at will - & trust me, i aint talking panicking soldiers
    ...nice flip, ok

    known fo hot shit, watch me expose this novice
    bitch nicca ur nose so deformed i can use it to open locks wit
    ...

    & whatever you write is boring as fuck
    got dirt on u, but it's a clean win when i wipe da floor with this scrub
    ...seen stuff like that

    im raw enough ta take ur style, start writing some good verses
    then watch will get jealous as fuck and actually bite the improved version
    ...ok

    this nig is pissed cause ayething he reads is better
    so he gets green wit envy like those two faggots buy weed together
    ...lol, funny

    lil scrappa, ur gangsta days are long gone
    nowadays, when u smell pussy.. u should wash yo shit or put ur thong on
    ...ok

    u need heat ta claim that da crook is back
    fuck that, ill give it to u raw, duke ur wack if u need ta cook that crack, YES!
    ...

    ur gettin schooled since everything you type is worthless
    plus ur in dire need of special ed... to come over and write ur verses
    ...lol, not v.hard tho

    carry the heat like shaq & leave this hairy male shook
    ur rough youth is lost, ever since i tore that page out da fairytale book
    ...ok


    Althoug Black fell off a bit at the end, his first lines were dope, not the residual & prowess lines. Ill Will had some nice stuff, particularly the Sharpie line & black in sleep
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  8. D.A.N.G.E.R.

    D.A.N.G.E.R. Fresh Emcee!

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    Vote-Black Writer

    BW:


    known fo hot shit, watch me expose this novice
    bitch nicca ur nose so deformed i can use it to open locks wit
    ^^fav line

    n whole ya verse was good, but u definetly took this


    Ill William:

    A crackhead, saying "you going to rehab, just not today"
    Infact you've been putting off Detox longer then Docter Dre
    ^^ Not bad

    ya verse was also good but it didnt come hard enough to beat BW

    good battle...
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  9. sumwhite emcee

    sumwhite emcee FRESSSHHHHHHH

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    fuck da face of this coward
    watch black aim da inf beam at ur dome till people mistake u for Prowess

    that sir, was good.
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  10. Ill William

    Ill William New Member

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  11. montana Grimey

    montana Grimey tony montana's crackbaby.

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    but u? a lonely herb wit a fucked up geek grill,
    makin ayeone run.. even dying people go to da notary jus to leave will

    cause wit da weapons, black been born sick
    so ima put da arms to ya eyes..like residual watchin a straight porn flick

    this flamboyant homo keeps da hammers in holsters
    but privates fire at will - & trust me, i aint talking panicking soldiers


    lil scrappa, ur gangsta days are long gone
    nowadays, when u smell pussy.. u should wash yo shit or put ur thong on

    ^^
    These r my favs. from Black Writer...
    U had sum other nice lines also..
    Ya verse was Tightwork, i aint gon Hate





    VERSUS.....









    This Black heads....
    A crackhead, saying "you going to rehab, just not today"
    Infact you've been putting off Detox longer then Docter Dre

    Glocks'll spray at this fad, you'll duck when I spark beef
    Only Permanent Black Writer I know of is a fucking Sharpie

    My verse is shoveling ya grave, lord knows it's easy to dig
    Who can't beat a kid with lines from another textcee in his sig?

    Test me kid? You're 5-0? You aint been toasted yet?
    Know you'll lose, that's why you say post early & aint posted yet

    Now girls got insomnia, how can they keep sleep intact?
    When everytime they close their eyes, their FUCKING SEEING BLACK!

    We can see he's wack, I'm wondering why, you would rhyme
    & Ya wanna go 30? When you're best shit has two good lines


    Why try to write? You're not Hova, you just be a laugh
    As for a Black Album? Yeah, "Your first song" will be your last

    You'll need a casket, this verse is murder, this man will see...
    His death, and when the "Will" is read, it'll kill your family

    Damnit B, you know you suck, another over-rated head...
    Who floods threads with enough shit to leave 100,000 asians dead

    Your fake I said, RBLs future? It must cause the mods more stress
    If this is 'the new danger', well then I feel sorry for Mos Def

    Coke leaves you broke, so you just say no to boasters
    But this G Unit rider still spends all his money on Yayo...posters

    You got to stripclubs, but you just sit & you stare
    No! You aint gettin a dance, unless lured into an electrical chair

    ^^^Favs. from Ill Will

    This battle was off the chain...
    Both came ill but Ill Will came murdering tho

    Too me eventho Black has skills to be the top 10 in the RBL
    Ill Will took this by a landslide,


    Ill Will came with Personals up the yin yang


    Both of u get props and respect,
    Yall tight
    BUT



    Ill William
    Fa sho Won dis Hands Down....
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  12. Super.

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    anyone in the RBL can vote on any RBL battle they choose to.
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  13. -Calamity-

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    Ill William -

    A crackhead, saying "you going to rehab, just not today"
    Infact you've been putting off Detox longer then Docter Dre
    Glocks'll spray at this fad, you'll duck when I spark beef
    Only Permanent Black Writer I know of is a fucking Sharpie
    (Nice)
    Test me kid? You're 5-0? You aint been toasted yet?
    Know you'll lose, that's why you say post early & aint posted yet
    (True)
    Now girls got insomnia, how can they keep sleep intact?
    When everytime they close their eyes, their FUCKING SEEING BLACK!
    (Lol)
    We can see he's wack, I'm wondering why, you would rhyme
    & Ya wanna go 30? When you're best shit has two good lines
    (Damn)
    They say with age comes change, then we retire, right?
    But this virgin will keep the SAME 'lifestyle' his entire life
    (Damn ohh shit)
    Why try to write? You're not Hova, you just be a laugh
    As for a Black Album? Yeah, "Your first song" will be your last
    (Nice)


    Black Writer-

    how is ur name nice, pookie? u be da judge
    only time i met ill will, was seeing nas & his QB crew wit a grudge
    (nice but you stretched this)
    & whatever you write is boring as fuck
    got dirt on u, but it's a clean win when i wipe da floor with this scrub
    (nice)


    Vote - Ill William
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  14. Super.

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  15. Black Writer

    Black Writer I'm THAT dude.

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    calamity aint in da rbl.. & william.. lets keep that lovely swaying in hookups, shall we.
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  16. Force

    Force cmon man

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    A crackhead, saying "you going to rehab, just not today"
    Infact you've been putting off Detox longer then Docter Dre
    My verse is shoveling ya grave, lord knows it's easy to dig
    Who can't beat a kid with lines from another textcee in his sig?
    Why try to write? You're not Hova, you just be a laugh
    As for a Black Album? Yeah, "Your first song" will be your last
    Damnit B, you know you suck, another over-rated head...
    Who floods threads with enough shit to leave 100,000 asians dead


    v


    fuck da face of this coward
    watch black aim da inf beam at ur dome till people mistake u for Prowess
    known fo hot shit, watch me expose this novice
    bitch nicca ur nose so deformed i can use it to open locks wit
    this nig is pissed cause ayething he reads is better
    so he gets green wit envy like those two faggots buy weed together


    Vote= Ill William
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  17. Reflexx

    Reflexx [insert cool thing here]

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    black writer came too net gangsta and im REALLY not feelin that kinda style, you came good with punches though..just didnt really impress me........ill william just came sick as hell, his flow was good, his punches were nice, he came witty and fresh..will just took everything a text battle is suppost to have, and black supported him in a category by means of gangsta netceein'

    william takes this.

    vote -- ill william


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  18. Ill William

    Ill William New Member

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  19. Black Writer

    Black Writer I'm THAT dude.

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  20. perma frost

    perma frost gay stars suck taint

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    My verse is shoveling ya grave, lord knows it's easy to dig
    Who can't beat a kid with lines from another textcee in his sig?

    oh shit
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