Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by l jack, Jun 7, 2003.
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Piece.. ill key soon
these rap-addicts.. too many he boot licked
4gotten bust cap's.. but they come in package's
Your room's evicted.. my punches will embed
He's not a dope head.. but litterary a dope head
instead of leavin you dead.. ill give u a smack
If i wanted to be for gotten.. i'd just spit wack
Your on crack.. on ur mom's lap in your prime
I can tell your real creative!.. usin a beef line!
u cant rhyme, ur not an emcee nor cut out to be
Plus he said he was ill.. to use reverse phycology
i think Jack needs talent raise ur hand if u think so to...
god forbids he's riding 4's dick but yet verb owns u...
Jack wants it wit me?y borther spittin that bullshit...
this niccas wacker then porno watchin lil' kids...
u can tell this is a wack MC when he sucks at pre-written...
he's not that nice to key his shit in a period of 5 mins...
and we have a smart one here-rap classes r excel...
he needs to go back and edit he's shit-words misspelled...
Jack goin around yappin on about he's tha best...
Shy-town's finest-ha only in a Drag-Queen contest...
upp for votes
hit me on aim SN is tha4thdesiple
don't got aim.. only msn
vote - 4gotten
one reason...he had some punches, i jack didnt
4Gotten easily won this battle.
Jack didnt flow well, it was odd an almost didnt flow.
Tha concepts he used were weak.
4Gottens flow was smooth, it went along like it should have, his concepts were kinda weak, too. though.
Vote - 4Gotten ..
Had punches ... flow was better ..
4gotton got it.. like others said.. punches came a lil more... but yo you sound like you on some eminem tip str8 off lol..lose that
4 G's def got this one with better punches
i liked the last punch..mad me laugh
jack..all u had was ur name which wasent much..lol..you had some disses but nothin real strong ..better luck next time
damn thats 5 to 0 battle through wit cuzz
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