4gotten vs l jack

Discussion in 'Emcee Battle Area' started by l jack, Jun 7, 2003.

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  1. l jack

    l jack New Member

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    10 lines max

    no min

    Due tonight

    Piece.. ill key soon
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  2. 4gotten

    4gotten Lryical Genius

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    checkin in
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  3. l jack

    l jack New Member

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    these rap-addicts.. too many he boot licked
    4gotten bust cap's.. but they come in package's
    Your room's evicted.. my punches will embed
    He's not a dope head.. but litterary a dope head
    instead of leavin you dead.. ill give u a smack
    If i wanted to be for gotten.. i'd just spit wack
    Your on crack.. on ur mom's lap in your prime
    I can tell your real creative!.. usin a beef line!
    u cant rhyme, ur not an emcee nor cut out to be
    Plus he said he was ill.. to use reverse phycology

    Post soon
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  4. 4gotten

    4gotten Lryical Genius

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    i think Jack needs talent raise ur hand if u think so to...
    god forbids he's riding 4's dick but yet verb owns u...
    Jack wants it wit me?y borther spittin that bullshit...
    this niccas wacker then porno watchin lil' kids...
    u can tell this is a wack MC when he sucks at pre-written...
    he's not that nice to key his shit in a period of 5 mins...
    and we have a smart one here-rap classes r excel...
    he needs to go back and edit he's shit-words misspelled...
    Jack goin around yappin on about he's tha best...
    Shy-town's finest-ha only in a Drag-Queen contest...
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  5. l jack

    l jack New Member

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    nice verse
    upp for votes
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  6. 4gotten

    4gotten Lryical Genius

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    urs too

    hit me on aim SN is tha4thdesiple
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  7. 4gotten

    4gotten Lryical Genius

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    uppin this
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  8. l jack

    l jack New Member

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    don't got aim.. only msn
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  9. Da Rokkwilda

    Da Rokkwilda RoKK WiLD.

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    vote - 4gotten

    one reason...he had some punches, i jack didnt
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  10. Lotty

    Lotty Young Amazin'

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    4Gotten easily won this battle.

    Jack didnt flow well, it was odd an almost didnt flow.

    Tha concepts he used were weak.

    4Gottens flow was smooth, it went along like it should have, his concepts were kinda weak, too. though.

    Vote=4Gotten
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  11. RockyaBlok

    RockyaBlok Knicks!!

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    Vote - 4Gotten ..
    Had punches ... flow was better ..
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  12. nOnni

    nOnni Active Member

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    4gotton got it.. like others said.. punches came a lil more... but yo you sound like you on some eminem tip str8 off lol..lose that

    peace
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  13. krysto

    krysto Chris Robba

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    4 G's def got this one with better punches

    i liked the last punch..mad me laugh

    jack..all u had was ur name which wasent much..lol..you had some disses but nothin real strong ..better luck next time

    vote-4gotten
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  14. 4gotten

    4gotten Lryical Genius

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    damn thats 5 to 0 battle through wit cuzz
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