49. Wordage 2-1 vs 50. Smoke Trail 2-1

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. Smoke Trail

    Smoke Trail Writing My Life

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    checkin in, goin like 14-18 lines
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  3. Wordage

    Wordage The Coming of Age....

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  4. Wordage

    Wordage The Coming of Age....

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    IV, schmivy..
    ²²²²² dont try me..

    Word'll blaze a Trail n' leave a pile of ashes
    only reason your hot....
    is cause all yo opponents are 'throwing matches'

    here to get off on the right foot, ²²²²² pay attention
    Word'll put on brass knucks n' leave a good impression
    toss ya up into the air, let tha remains..fall to pieces
    forget head of ya class, Word is yo mutha-fuckin teacher
    don't get it twisted...it's ya neck I mean
    what goes around comes around, like an exorcist scene
    360 or 1,2,3...whatever check ya datebook
    your days are numbered...
    ya turned right, but that's the opposite direction 'great' took
    leave you lookin lost, like some kinda foreigner
    you ain't fit for the title...
    Word'll drop ya like the AOL from Time Warner
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  5. Smoke Trail

    Smoke Trail Writing My Life

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    nice begining, but every1 gets good nameplay aint u seen
    but this is your end dawg, nuthin can save u, not even IV//

    yea you should have picked the no show option
    you aint hot, pop your color, casue your record is droppin//
    i rip out your heart and shoove it down your throat
    you expeirenced, your 'words' have age' only way u recive votes//
    dawg it time to turn you off, hand me the remote
    after this battle youll have my lines in your sig as your quote//
    so you think you rep our culture
    you almost dead dawg check out my vultures//
    flyin over your head, ready to rip off your legs
    oh well, smoke came to knock you down a few pegs//
    on these rap boards, but your picked to win ofcourse
    you stiff as a board and ligts as a feather, but bkus i made u a corpse//
    get shyt straight, casue you message is kinda unclear
    i know you scared of me, but its good you tryin to face your fears//
    i went 18, 9 to you lower and 9 to your upper
    other MC's are appitizers, im eatin you bitch for my supper//


    g/luck, did this kinda on the moment when i just got home, so whatever not complainin thiou, 1, g/luck​
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    Smoke Trail Writing My Life

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    Smoke Trail Writing My Life

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  8. EnMity

    EnMity New Member

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    Wordage- Openin line wasnt too good, Teacher line ..ight ....excersist line ..eh, OK ....And the Time warner , Pretty good, landed solid .

    6/10

    Smoke Trail - Blah, Filler all the way thru ...Only line i liked is face ya fears and thats a lil played,

    4/10

    Vote- Wordage
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  9. SAYONCE

    SAYONCE New Member

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    Vote=Wordage

    Wordage
    The "time warner" line was nice..and i kinda liked the "throwin matchies" ish..
    The rest was average IMO.

    Smoke
    Nothing stood out for me in this verse at all..not one line grabbed my attention..punchies were weak..and switching from 2 bar rhymes to 4 bar rhymes,and the back again,didnt really help the flow of the verse..

    Word took it..

    pz.
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  10. Tony Elbow

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    word took it mostly coz smoke was terrible flow was shit punches were shit the lot

    Word had a couple of nice lines:
    Word'll blaze a Trail n' leave a pile of ashes
    only reason your hot....
    is cause all yo opponents are 'throwing matches'
    ^^was ya best

    Vote: Wordage
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  11. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    vote = Wordage

    His punches are better, and more hard hitting, even though he should slack some times, Smoke didnt appeal too much at all

    yall both can work on the multi's, na mean but overall decent battle

    Best line to me

    Word'll blaze a Trail n' leave a pile of ashes
    only reason your hot....
    is cause all yo opponents are 'throwing matches'

    .........Sherlock.........
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  12. Desenut§

    Desenut§ Lean mean nuttin machine!

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    Word'll blaze a Trail n' leave a pile of ashes
    only reason your hot....
    is cause all yo opponents are 'throwing matches'

    360 or 1,2,3...whatever check ya datebook
    your days are numbered...
    ya turned right, but that's the opposite direction 'great' took

    decent if played concepts..

    Trail had all poor concepts.. and they weren't flipped well...

    Vote- Wordage
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  13. R.A.M.

    R.A.M. New Member

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    word smashed this ²²²²² in this battle. some fuckin hard lines real fresh shit good to see. closer was dopeness. some other ill stuff..

    Word'll put on brass knucks n' leave a good impression
    toss ya up into the air, let tha remains..fall to pieces
    forget head of ya class, Word is yo mutha-fuckin teacher
    don't get it twisted...it's ya neck I mean
    what goes around comes around, like an exorcist scene

    that shit was raw man.

    next man WAS mostly filler. gotta come with some nice punches man. thats what seems to win nowadays..

    vote: wordage
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  14. Jason123

    Jason123 New Member

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    Smokes shit was bad.....up ya game dawg.....wordage had some coo shit..

    My vote - wordage.
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  15. Scinema

    Scinema renegade.

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    smoke still on that old style tip.
    switch it up a little homie..and focus more on multis and punches.


    Wordage took this withoutta doubt.
    alot word's shit was 'meh' .


    vote : wordage
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  16. Diphtheria

    Diphtheria Tazz Says "Fuck U"

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    up over noshows
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  17. Wordage

    Wordage The Coming of Age....

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    Using my one post to thank everyone who voted and critiqued the battle so far. Appreciate it.


    props to Smoke as well.
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  18. Diphtheria

    Diphtheria Tazz Says "Fuck U"

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    Wordage wins

    Wordage 3-1
    Smoke Trail 2-2
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