49 Premonition 2-0 vs 50 Jay Reez 5-3

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Mc KoRE_WReCkeD

    Mc KoRE_WReCkeD Mc To The Kore

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    this is jay


    16-20
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  3. prem0nition

    prem0nition pre·dom·i·nant

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  4. Mc KoRE_WReCkeD

    Mc KoRE_WReCkeD Mc To The Kore

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    ill catch u at ur mom's pad, pull out the chrome and pop that
    leave ur chest on her front porch...since home is where the heart's at
    its fuckin combat...and this square's the hunted, im not the haunted
    be real 4 a moment, only 6 year olds are actually afraid of monsters

    Ohhhhhhhhhhh...

    now i get it, it's pretty obvious, and makes alotta sense
    a girl said he had a scary face...N he took it as a compliment
    your future isnt promisin'...for you're about to go down in the ranks...
    im about to smoke you, Premo, like i threw some coke down with the dank
    this hoe's a Zero...gonna amount to very little in the game
    And he knows he's nothin...thats why it's in the middle of his name
    im belittling this dame, and it really aint hard to do
    when OZ could tell u that the tin man has more heart than you
    actin as if u got the hardest crew, but that i doubt honstly
    in reality u mobb less deep than Hav without Prodigy
    N when it comes to bitches, fuckin with him is not an option
    Cause when it comes to Pickles, his is the size of Tommy's johnson


    Tommy Johnson is one of his aliases
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  5. prem0nition

    prem0nition pre·dom·i·nant

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    everyone flippin Monster lines...

    these kids are all garbage now, Jay really need to improve his thoughts
    so shut up, 'cause if home is where the heart is you have no room to talk
    Jay need to quit rappin, ya lackin talent and can't get it right
    only way you could move the crowd is tellin them about your pathetic life
    you owe me for time, dog, it's kids like you I simply ignore
    n' you can thank me for the dense in ya head.. since it was empty before
    you dug you're own grave with the mouth ya speakin through
    n' that shit ain't poetry, but Mya Angelou couldn't get as deep as you
    n' since it's up to the voters, there's no way ya stayin in this
    what's the racket about? only time you get 'love' is playin tennis
    but shit, bring ya crew, they'll all freeze when the god start creepin
    'cause everyone'll get robbed like it's All-Star Weekend
    you lack sense and you're a fuckin loser.. he's nothing
    take a look at his verses, you'll never see 'Reez sonning'
    in ya mind ya ahead, but when I rhyme it's ya death
    you're just a couple minutes of my life.. killing time on the 'net
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  6. Mc KoRE_WReCkeD

    Mc KoRE_WReCkeD Mc To The Kore

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    FórmÅl LôGíc Black Listed

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  8. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    Jar Reez, your verse was nothing good really at all. Only line I thought was any good was your opener. So I will leave it at that but where is nothin in his name?

    ill catch u at ur mom's pad, pull out the chrome and pop that
    leave ur chest on her front porch...since home is where the heart's at

    Premonition

    n' since it's up to the voters, there's no way ya stayin in this
    what's the racket about? only time you get 'love' is playin tennis

    in ya mind ya ahead, but when I rhyme it's ya death
    you're just a couple minutes of my life.. killing time on the 'net

    Thats really only lines I was feeling. the others was eh and I didnt like the fact u fed off his with your 1st line..but anyway.. yours was better but not by much

    My vote Premonition
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  9. Con God

    Con God New Member

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    vote Premonition, both came ehh. close but these are the only lines i felt from these verse's.

    this hoe's a Zero...gonna amount to very little in the game
    And he knows he's nothin...thats why it's in the middle of his name
    that was dope

    ^^ it was that vrs. this

    n' since it's up to the voters, there's no way ya stayin in this
    what's the racket about? only time you get 'love' is playin tennis

    but shit, bring ya crew, they'll all freeze when the god start creepin
    'cause everyone'll get robbed like it's All-Star Weekend
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  10. Mc KoRE_WReCkeD

    Mc KoRE_WReCkeD Mc To The Kore

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    2-0


    prem0nition...Zero, middle of his name...


    i voted on every bottom 30 battle...

    im 2 away from every top 30...


    now let us get some votes, plz


    thank u,
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  11. Mr. Holiday

    Mr. Holiday New Member

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    i think the closer was pretty tight.


    i'd say monster took it with a more consistant verse, was a pretty cool bottom 30 battle.
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  12. Creatical

    Creatical Back up this bitch

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    only shit i felt from the first dude was the Premo line.

    everything else was iffy... lol got all into ur own shit with OHHH!'s but didn't get the reader in.. no good

    premo had some hot shit..

    "only way you could move the crowd is tellin them about your pathetic life"


    the All-Star weekend shit was fuckin sick too


    vote - mon
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  13. intro-vert

    intro-vert i could rip you

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    v- Perminition

    Good battle, i was feelin some of the lines in both verses..

    Perminition opener was nice i think and some other lines in between, the other dude also came iight..some decent lines..I just that it wasn't all good to go up against' per's verse but he still came iight..

    so I have to give it to Perminition for better punches and just a more consistent vere, pz

    v- Perminition
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  14. Srevir Rm

    Srevir Rm WentFromGodToGodDamn

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    good to see monster actually trying


    c'mon son, get that rank up and hit up the big kids for some battles



    where's your true SPIRIT, lmfao
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  15. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    vote- premonition


    this hoe's a Zero...gonna amount to very little in the game
    And he knows he's nothin...thats why it's in the middle of his name
    lol
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    n' since it's up to the voters, there's no way ya stayin in this
    what's the racket about? only time you get 'love' is playin tennis

    but shit, bring ya crew, they'll all freeze when the god start creepin
    'cause everyone'll get robbed like it's All-Star Weekend
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  16. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    these kids are all garbage now, Jay really need to improve his thoughts
    so shut up, 'cause if home is where the heart is you have no room to talk
    Jay need to quit rappin, ya lackin talent and can't get it right
    only way you could move the crowd is tellin them about your pathetic life


    thats all you needed

    V- Monster
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  17. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    PREMONITION wins.
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