45. Narsil vs. 46. Copywritten

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  1. Mr.Perfect

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    Narsil the unbreakable

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    3. Become your abusive father...why do you hit your son? (which is you)...what happened to you when you were younger that you have become so violent? - DipSet

    good luck cop I'll use this...I'll prolly jus take the role as father tho...I aint gonna be 2 persons at one
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    Narsil the unbreakable

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    3. Become your abusive father...why do you hit your son? (which is you)...what happened to you when you were younger that you have become so violent? - DipSet


    italics is me
    " momma"
    phat is daddy

    present day​


    Screams and thunder its like the heavens is mad…
    When a beer glass shatters against the back of ma head…
    Bruised and beaten beggin for death why does he touch me
    All he does is hit and rush me..
    why couldnt he be a cosby and jus love me…
    now I got a chair and even some mayonaise on top of me…
    Gaspin for breath tryna duck and hide….
    Dad no ! your drunk how did you get so fucked up inside!!


    *Mavis passes out the room moves and starts spinning REAL FAST finds his father at home prolly around 7 years pryor to his birth..*



    mommy mommy..! I got an B in school!!
    “Thass nice honey mommy needs you to clean the pool..
    and after that we’ll see if you…deserve yer special treat
    And you know its our secret so repeat it after me…
    Mommy’s special milk…will help you to grow strong…
    And if the boogie man comes..it ell keep you holdin on…”
    But mommy I dont like the salty taste..and it makes my breath smell…
    “LISTEN TO YOUR MOTHER BEFORE YER DEAD AND GO TO HELL!”
    Mommy stop screamin I didnt mean to make you mad!
    I’ll do whutever you ask I dont ever wanna play bad…
    “Now thats a goodboy mommy will lay down for the trip…
    and you can put they pouty lips right around my hips…
    You know where to go and you dont stop untill I scream…
    So keep goin before mommy has to bitch and get mean…”
    I didnt believe whut I saw..she brestfed with her clit…
    My dad gasped for breath and mommy retalliated mad quick
    A swift kick to the ball right left of his dick
    The lil boy on the ground... coughin that piss.. mommy wuz sick!

    I didnt mean to stop but mommy I need to breathe!!
    “Well thass quite alright cuz the boogy man needs to feed…
    And when he takes you and leaves…all I’ll have to say…
    You shoulda listened to mom and now yell have to pay”
    The talk became indistinct everything beomes a blurr…
    Felt a foot against my ribs..now I know I’m home for sure…


    *Mavis wakes up again and his dad is screamin at him standin with a knife in his hand*


    You look to much like yer mother..and I cant take the sight….
    And all this maddness has to end right here tanight…
    Its your fault she is dead…and you’ll pay with your life…
    Cuz in your birth you killed both my mother and my wife…
    And fuck it it ell never be alright…you jus have to be erased…
    Cuz everytime you grin I jus see her face and its somethin I cant take…
    But its yer lucki day cuz I got the knife but before I put it trough…
    You can come here and suck some of daddys superjuice
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  4. Mr.Perfect

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    Copywritten NO SHOWS
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