45. Copywritten 3-3 vs 46. VizzBlade 2-1

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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  4. 15-20 BARS MAX... I DID 15



    that records awful fittin.. look at ya competition..
    biters vote against me..cuz they cant 'get it, copywritten'
    you can bet that ill be winning.. no matter the vote count..
    cuz jeff'll see ur trash.. & this battle'll get thrown out..
    im slashin ur throat valve.. IV.. and mouth bro..
    copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads..
    ill slaughter you now, dont.. even bother to post..
    cuz this season ill son u.. like fathers' that coach..
    im rawer than most.. vizz is a blade..
    i either shame the ill, or-son welles*.. LIKE CITIZEN KANE..
    your verse is an 'accident profile'.. full of 'written mistakes'..
    fourty sixth is the same.. position i been had..
    ill still take u out the game, with a beating.. like gym class..
    bitch ass, u wana mesh?? come get tossed into fences..
    last week, u got beat like a girl.. when u lost to extensions..



    *Orson Welles directed, wrote, and starred in Citizen Kane
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  5. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    [bartblue] <-Vizz

    Saw Vizzes pic, face busted, no wonder he feels outta place
    Never touched a bitch, nevermind second base
    I'm wreckin' fakes, you ain't on my level blades
    Cuz I score so much, I could play for the Devil Rays
    Fuck tryin', that's all it takes...
    I'd cook ya somethin', but ya chances is baked
    Lyrical restraint, sayin' he's nice, still won't get crew calls
    Stop playin', with yaself, before ya get blue balls
    It’s true ya’ll, VB’s dick is miniature
    IV told me, fah sure dawg, but it’s colossal…
    Compared to the list’a wins in ya signature
    This isn’t fair, this kid smells like poop, pew (bwahaha =X)
    But I’d rather smell his ass, than look at him in a tutu (2-2)
    Only 2 wins you’ll get, were no shows, it’s true too
    Next week you can battle MADDRAPPER, but even he’ll do you
    Woohoo!, your mom's sick of the siamese twins, that she made
    Then cut Blade into two parts, and he still wouldn't B-Lade
    (be laid)
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  6. Narsil

    Narsil the unbreakable

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    copy came pretty ok...but viz came nice...only weak point I saw with vizz was the or son thing I hate that type a wordplay it seems unnatural to me..but to each its own..the sonning thing was kinda played...everything else was coo some nice lines...copys verse had like half a step less of everything everywhere...it jus never really appealed...but it was still pretty decent

    vote vizzzzz
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  7. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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  8. EnMity

    EnMity New Member

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    Vizz - Pretty solid verse , i was feelin it thru out, I liked the Trash Line ...Hit hard...Fathers that coach line was Ok ..The written mistakes line was Ight ...
    Last Bar was Good, pretty Good verse Overall...

    7/10


    Copy- Hmmm, started off a lil iffy , But really picked it up in the middle with the wins in ya signature line ...hit hard....tutu line was eh, But i did love the last bar ..The B-lade was creative,
    6.9/10

    overall i think Viz was a lil more consistent ...

    Vote- Vizz
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  9. Vadik

    Vadik New Member

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    Vizz came on point...flow was too nice...and most of the lines were good...Citizen Kane line was fresh as fuck.

    Copy came not good at all....horrible lines like the tu-tu (& how the hell are you gonna laugh at your own lines in brackets? WTF?)....I've seen so much better from you dogg...

    Vote = Vizz Blade v2.0
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  10. Tony Elbow

    Tony Elbow >>

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    vizz blade had more consistant better flowing punches..copy had nice shit too but I found it a lil borin at times...

    Best from VB:
    im slashin ur throat valve.. IV.. and mouth bro..
    copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads..

    best from copy:
    But I’d rather smell his ass, than look at him in a tutu (2-2)

    Vote: Vizz Blade
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  11. Wordage

    Wordage The Coming of Age....

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    vote= VB2

    Vizz' flow was hot and had some nice concepts. Liked the "Fed download" and the opener the best. Had some good wordplay as well.

    Copywritten wasn't as creative with his punches, flow was ok but lacked wordplay. Kinda liked the closer but that was all.

    Goodluck to both of ya.
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  12. ARIZCATZ

    ARIZCATZ Game Of Death

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    VizzBlade's best
    that records awful fittin.. look at ya competition..
    biters vote against me..cuz they cant 'get it, copywritten'
    you can bet that ill be winning.. no matter the vote count..
    cuz jeff'll see ur trash.. & this battle'll get thrown out..
    im slashin ur throat valve.. IV.. and mouth bro..
    copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads..
    Man, that was all hot. Nice flow.
    im rawer than most.. vizz is a blade..
    i either shame the ill, or-son welles*.. LIKE CITIZEN KANE..
    Line of the battle easy.

    Copy's best
    Saw Vizzes pic, face busted, no wonder he feels outta place
    Never touched a bitch, nevermind second base
    Pretty nice. Coulda been worded better.

    Vizz takes this one easy. Much more consistent from top to bottom and the Citizen Kane line has to be in the mag this week. Fire.
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  13. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    Hahaha, I was laughin' cuz I knew it was retarded.
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  14. The Grimm One

    The Grimm One No place like the ghetto.

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    Vote=Vizz Blade....

    Reason:
    Because, to me, Copy just came with too much homo irrelevent homo shit, while Vizz just came raw....

    Good battle all together y'all!

    >>Grimm<<
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  15. Monolith

    Monolith *slowly claps*

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    Vizz took this easily..

    Copywritten didnt really have any lines I could feel..

    vote=Vizz
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  16. Noggah

    Noggah Politically Incorrect

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    Vizz easily got this wit lines like

    copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads..

    shit along those lines, orson welles line was cool too... Overall he just had better punches n wordplay, etc.... Only Copywritten line i liked was the blue balls one, the rest just lacked...

    so vote = Vizz
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  17. fuck a count i win
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  18. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    Haha, good shit vizz...
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  19. R.A.M.

    R.A.M. New Member

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    copy did come hella ill fo sho, but he wasnt able to edge vizz out. a very strong shwoing by vizz. some really ill shit. the feds/copwrite line was raw. some real clever shit

    vote- vizz blade
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  20. IgloS

    IgloS Eye Glows

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    that records awful fittin.. look at ya competition..
    biters vote against me..cuz they cant 'get it, copywritten'
    ^nice

    im slashin ur throat valve.. IV.. and mouth bro..
    copywrittens got no defense.. like feds workin wit downloads..
    ^I liked this one too

    im rawer than most.. vizz is a blade..
    i either shame the ill, or-son welles*.. LIKE CITIZEN KANE..
    ^haha, that was some thing I havent seen before

    Saw Vizzes pic, face busted, no wonder he feels outta place

    VS

    Only 2 wins you’ll get, were no shows, it’s true too
    Next week you can battle MADDRAPPER, but even he’ll do you
    ^okay, worded strange tho
    Woohoo!, your mom's sick of the siamese twins, that she made
    Then cut Blade into two parts, and he still wouldn't B-Lade
    ^ehh, too forced for my taste


    vote-Vizz

    I don't know what to say coppy.. how can you expect to win by dropping set ups like this?

    This isn’t fair, this kid smells like poop, pew (bwahaha =X)
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