43.Retulen Reactus Vs 44.Vember

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Nebz, Oct 5, 2003.

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  1. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    VERSES DUE Wednesday 10:00pm PACIFIC/1:00am EST
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    VOTE ON 6 BATTLES!!!!!


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    This week and following we will enforce this rule



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    if you win by no-show u are encouraged to vote still in other matches!!!!!


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  2. Vember

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    umm....i forgot to mention in My sign in-i should be 1-0(adversary), seein as how this is the alias, anyways, holla
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  3. Vember

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    20. You've been murdered. After death you have a chance to come back and do what you

    Spittin now since i have nothin better to do

    JUST ANOTHER VICTIM-struck down by marksman's play,
    it was about 2:00 that day, I was walkin home from work and heard the shots that sprayed.
    Felt the release haunt the fate of my chest, On the ground crying, contemplatin with death,
    But it was too late, intense blood loss mixed with the operation of theft.
    My body was weightless, Legs off the ground ascendin above,
    With a message of god, It was about that time I started confessin my love.

    He spoke words and visions:-"I can come back to earth for one mission"
    It was already in my head, I was gonna get revenge with a witness.

    Redirect with my original body, back to life with a thought up sacrifice,
    There lay on the street, A gat and knife, I put them in my coat-Fastened tight.
    I remember the face and gang sign of the man that did the evil,
    Went down the street a little further, heart full of splittin needles.
    No fear by god, My eyes started to near with fog,
    I felt a spooky prescence, then looked past tears and sob...
    Saw the man, approached and put a hand on his shoulder,
    with threatining tones I told him to come with me to brief business over.
    He didnt seem to recognize me, We went inside a church recital,
    Then i calmed him, and pulled out a furnished bible.
    Told him not to sin, Good things come in the future,not the gun that youre used to,
    Dont let the fast money confuse ya...
    The lord pays you back for good deeds, practice should teach,
    Its more valuable than livin day to day doin crack and more trees.
    Finally i had gotten my revenge, upon the devil,
    That hopefully I can move on with my conscience settled.
    I was about to leave, then he started speakin and stopped,
    I retreat with a pause, and listened to him reachin for god.

    He asked me for my name, and anything he could do to fulfill my wish,
    I pulled out an object, and said---"This is the gun you killed me with"............
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  4. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    lmao.
    Im here.
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  5. Vember

    Vember New Member

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    ^are you mocking my verse?

    this is my up then, as your punishment, we'll just have our battle voted on slower
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  6. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    Vember Wins
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