43.O.D vs. 44.Mr. Nice Guy

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  1. Omen

    Omen O Luh Da Kids

    Jun 16, 2001
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  2. Mr. Nice Guy

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    Oct 3, 2003
    ok....signin in
  3. Mr. Nice Guy

    Mr. Nice Guy New Member

    Oct 3, 2003
    your homie just died from a horrific drive-by, you heard the news, and now youre sitting on your bed writing him a letter to place on his grave....What does the letter say? I'll tell you

    Dear Lo Dawg,

    October 15 of 2003, lost my homeboy,
    felt my whole world comin down on me...
    Can't face reality, runnin from my hardest fears
    How could u be there all my life an suddenly just dissapear//
    Tha gauntlet of pain combines anger an sadness
    Spinnin in a world of hurt inside of me dawg, cuz ya death was tragic//
    We grew up together an split up tha same way
    Remember them great days, memories surpassin my brainwaves//
    How ya life came up short when u were destined fa great thangs
    That brings me to tha point of revenge but that would be tha same thing//
    Tought me to count my blessins, u were a brother to me
    I can still look back like yesterday, an rememba u leave//
    No goodbye, i was left standin in complete confusion
    How could someone do this an not realize tha life they was takin was so prudent//
    Your invaluable, those bitches clueless discardin ya breath
    To think u were a hood rat that was useless watchin ya step//
    I was a footprint behind u, tha time we spent i'll always treasure
    And no matter how many people i meet, to you they'll never measure//
    I was thinkin of that time we got caught smokin pot
    See we went thru first times together, but this was a first time for gettin shot//
    You were a victim of an unemotional society of gangs
    We couldn't help where we lived but i was behind u all tha same//
    U had my back, i had yours, nothin more to say
    Cuz i can blame myself all i want but it was cowards who sent u to ya grave....

    U were my heart, soul, strength an inspiration
    An even in death, you find a way of reachin me to pace me//
    Lettin me know that i'm goin about things tha wrong way
    Its gonna be a long day, thinkin of you an how you felt tha hard pain//
    Since i started writin several things have crossed my mind
    Suicide, but mostly you an how u guided me when i was lost at times//
    See i never had love, but i found that thru a guy named L
    Went down tha wrong path together, but came back together eventually to grow as well//
    We used to stay up all night on tha porch just talkin
    U said one day shit would be different an we could go to college//
    I wanted to grow old with you, look back on old times
    Laugh at tha good, cry at tha sad, but then heaven rung tha gold chimes//
    Your not promised tomorrow...noone ever takes that serious
    An iff you fearin it, you should just respect that shit period//
    I may not have wealth in money but i had somethin better
    An i still do, with you in my heart to make my body leveled//
    Playin b-ball, gettin in fights an chillin wit our boyz
    Those times may be meaningless but now i wish for more//
    So i address the envelope of this letter to heaven
    Knowin you'll be waiting to hear from me since our love is endless with the credit//
    I have to let go now, not of you but of my comfort
    And i'll be at ya funeral waitin to finally say goodbye tha rite way,but it's even tougher//
    More written consents to come, so i place my heart on ya grave
    Hopen it'll find it's way to u some day, when tha wind blows it away//
    See, we shared a special bond, best friends for decades
    So many moments that we couldn't have, but tha ones we did were tha best days.......

    Friends forever,

    J Krown
  4. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

    Nov 21, 2002
    Mr. Nice Guy
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