41 X sample 3-1 vs 42 Narsil 3-1

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  1. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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  2. X sample

    X sample New Member

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  3. Narsil

    Narsil the unbreakable

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  4. Narsil

    Narsil the unbreakable

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    40 % all I need...pz duke...

    Dude I'll punch you easy all the way to foreign hills...
    So you'll be an ex-factor like you were datin lauryn hill...
    Now dude you almost ill but its jus that I'm sick dude...
    And I'm thinkin yankee stadion
    when I talk about your room to improve
    Now dude fuck a bitchmove you best be standin still...
    Cause my slugs ell hump ya legs like some hariy animal…
    Yer jus anotha man to kill.. Niccas know I’m gettin violent…
    Yell lose and be in denial… like dough versus island…
    But know yer not an island … a piece of rock at best…
    See yer target was to win untill I took a shot at it…
    Now sil is not of flesh…. Duke I’m far exceedin you…
    They’re referrin to yer brain when they say ‘its greasy dude’
    Yell be on the ground and bleedin too.. kid I’m just to ill
    Cause yell need more then yer pimple goo jus to clear a sil…


    damn that flow was smooth...
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  5. X sample

    X sample New Member

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    ohhhh, cocky are we?
    lol, lets see wassup playa..

    Narsil this, Narsil that, it seems u always get mentioned,
    But not in the Mags fag... just at gay pride conventions
    This dudes a pansy, and gets more emotional than 3 whores,
    Like when he lost Control..and had to get a new keyboard..
    You could be called inspirational....i guess with no lies,
    Ya fantasise screwing guys, now ya 'keeping the dream alive'
    Me and Narsil are pretty similar..actually let me rephrase,
    All we got in common is our record, & thats about to change
    Im quick to move ahead...Narsils quick to stumble and fall,
    And like a gay couples dresser, only men open his drawers..
    Its true you got fame, and that means ties and black suits,
    You signed a life contract..no suprise its with Wak Juice
    This net geeks got problems...always blasting a fast cough,
    Heard a joke at skool, and he yelled "Laughing My Ass Off!"


    hollaaaa..

    g'luck dook
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  6. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    Dude I'll punch you easy all the way to foreign hills...
    So you'll be an ex-factor like you were datin lauryn hill...
    ok wordplay..nothing special though..
    Now dude you almost ill but its jus that I'm sick dude...
    And I'm thinkin yankee stadion
    when I talk about your room to improve
    kinda played,but worded nicely,good bar
    Now dude fuck a bitchmove you best be standin still...
    Cause my slugs ell hump ya legs like some hariy animal…
    not feelin this
    Yer jus anotha man to kill.. Niccas know I’m gettin violent…
    Yell lose and be in denial… like dough versus island…
    Ha ha!lol..
    But know yer not an island … a piece of rock at best…
    See yer target was to win untill I took a shot at it…
    Nice,nice,best line worded very nicely.
    Now sil is not of flesh…. Duke I’m far exceedin you…
    They’re referrin to yer brain when they say ‘its greasy dude’
    not feelin much
    Yell be on the ground and bleedin too.. kid I’m just to ill
    Cause yell need more then yer pimple goo jus to clear a sil…
    Not the best closer,but kidna hit

    nice verse..fell off a few times but overall it was nice


    Narsil this, Narsil that, it seems u always get mentioned,
    But not in the Mags fag... just at gay pride conventions
    Nice opener..
    This dudes a pansy, and gets more emotional than 3 whores,
    Like when he lost Control..and had to get a new keyboard..
    Lol,nice punch,kinda subtle..but nice..
    You could be called inspirational....i guess with no lies,
    Ya fantasise screwing guys, now ya 'keeping the dream alive'
    Not feelin much,still ok..
    Me and Narsil are pretty similar..actually let me rephrase,
    All we got in common is our record, & thats about to change
    Nice! loved this bar!
    Im quick to move ahead...Narsils quick to stumble and fall,
    And like a gay couples dresser, only men open his drawers..
    Ok,nothing great..
    Its true you got fame, and that means ties and black suits,
    You signed a life contract..no suprise its with Wak Juice
    Ok..
    This net geeks got problems...always blasting a fast cough,
    Heard a joke at skool, and he yelled "Laughing My Ass Off!"
    Nice closer..

    Im goin wit x-sample on this one, was a very close match, but i think that narsil came too inconsistant,had some fire bars,but x came decent throughout..good battle..

    Vote - X-sample..
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  7. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    Vote = X

    props to homie, on the verse, i actually enjoyed reading it, nice qoutes, more stand out lines, Narsil was a bit choppy at places, i love the X- factor/ Lauryn Hill line, but some places it didnt add up

    ........Sherlock
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  8. The Bionic MC

    The Bionic MC New Member

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    Vote=X

    Ok battle though
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  9. Acanthus

    Acanthus Member

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    Narsil-

    didn't like opener, rhymign with one word,- hill,
    wasn't feeling ya punches, and rhyme scheme was off a bit....
    alot of filler too...

    X Sample-

    And like a gay couples dresser, only men open his drawers
    << best line of the battle...

    punches were more decent than Narsil.. not all that of a verse,
    and ya flow was better too..

    vote- X Sample
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  10. .Archive.

    .Archive. .Something Like Hova.

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    vote - Narsil

    x came way 2 played... saw every punch he threw b4 flipped and reversed
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  11. Cassanova Storm

    Cassanova Storm " The Beretta"

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    yeah i gotta fuck with x to on this one, i thought that narsil punches was kinda stretched and i like x's ryheme scheme better which made it easier for me to flow. pretty decent battle though boyz. show love
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  12. Papa_Smurf

    Papa_Smurf Junior Jedi

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    Vote: X, Better punches all around.
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  13. The Royal Penis

    The Royal Penis God.

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    Yer jus anotha man to kill.. Niccas know I’m gettin violent…
    Yell lose and be in denial… like dough versus island…
    But know yer not an island … a piece of rock at best…
    See yer target was to win untill I took a shot at it…
    Now sil is not of flesh…. Duke I’m far exceedin you…
    They’re referrin to yer brain when they say ‘its greasy dude’
    Yell be on the ground and bleedin too.. kid I’m just to ill
    Cause yell need more then yer pimple goo jus to clear a sil…

    damn that was nice close...


    Xsample had one line i was really really feeling....

    This net geeks got problems...always blasting a fast cough,
    Heard a joke at skool, and he yelled "Laughing My Ass Off!"

    hah.. otherwise it's all played.. sorry homie.. seen all that shit before... and Nars just came original...


    good battle

    vote-Narsil


    peace
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  14. toil

    toil New Member

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    Narsil: ex-factor opener was nice, but it went down hill from there. lines like the greasy brain one were more bad than good.

    X Sample: 'lost control' and 'only men open his drawers' lines were nice. the 'wak juice' line was kinda lame tho. however your closer was also amusing.

    cool battle, X came with the better constructed punches tho..meaning he was able to diss Narsil better.

    vote=X Sample
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  15. X sample

    X sample New Member

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    yipeeeeee, lol

    this is my one up..

    and its 7-2
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  16. Vadik

    Vadik New Member

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    X came with a LOT of played shit, I was feeling the drawers & the LMAO line, but that was about it. Narsil came slightly more original, but not that great either...I liked the Clearasil line though, that was freeeeesh.


    Vote = Narsil, by a nutsack hair...
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  17. Strike

    Strike packin that metal

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    l..m..a..o...

    well uppin from the second page for fam

    I cant vote because I am biased and whatnot..

    good luck to both
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  18. MiC TypsOn

    MiC TypsOn informer

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    NARSIL



    Dude I'll punch you easy all the way to foreign hills...
    So you'll be an ex-factor like you were datin lauryn hill...
    Now dude you almost ill but its jus that I'm sick dude...
    And I'm thinkin yankee stadion
    when I talk about your room to improve

    opener was dope... really feeling it, the yankee standion was cool.. quite nice


    Now dude fuck a bitchmove you best be standin still...
    Cause my slugs ell hump ya legs like some hariy animal…
    Yer jus anotha man to kill.. Niccas know I’m gettin violent…
    Yell lose and be in denial… like dough versus island…

    the humps line was dope.. very creative... real nice.. the dough 1 was nice too


    But know yer not an island … a piece of rock at best…
    See yer target was to win untill I took a shot at it…
    Now sil is not of flesh…. Duke I’m far exceedin you…
    They’re referrin to yer brain when they say ‘its greasy dude’

    that target line was made nice and creative too..... the greasy line was coo... nice diss

    Yell be on the ground and bleedin too.. kid I’m just to ill
    Cause yell need more then yer pimple goo jus to clear a sil…

    closer was dope... really feeling this verse.. stayed on everything.. never fell off.. creative as fuck....


    X-SAMPLE



    Narsil this, Narsil that, it seems u always get mentioned,
    But not in the Mags fag... just at gay pride conventions
    This dudes a pansy, and gets more emotional than 3 whores,
    Like when he lost Control..and had to get a new keyboard..

    the gay poride was lol.. straight start..... the control was coo.. never really seen it

    You could be called inspirational....i guess with no lies,
    Ya fantasise screwing guys, now ya 'keeping the dream alive'
    Me and Narsil are pretty similar..actually let me rephrase,
    All we got in common is our record, & thats about to change

    that dream alive line was dope.. like'en it.... the record thing was bleh tho =(

    Im quick to move ahead...Narsils quick to stumble and fall,
    And like a gay couples dresser, only men open his drawers..
    Its true you got fame, and that means ties and black suits,
    You signed a life contract..no suprise its with Wak Juice

    the drawers line was nice.. feeling it.. but the second is eh.. not feeling


    This net geeks got problems...always blasting a fast cough,
    Heard a joke at skool, and he yelled "Laughing My Ass Off!"

    bleh at the closer.. coulda been better.. but not feeling it... in all x-sample amazed me, ive peeped him b4.. but he had some nice shit.... not consistant enough.... altho it was good.. it want enough to match the creativity of narsils....

    so vote NARSIL easily due to consistancy and creativity.. was really liken some of the ideas.
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  19. MiStA aRsOnIsT

    MiStA aRsOnIsT New Member

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    Vote: X Sample

    that LMAO line jsut killed the battle, it was a sick closer, the battle was pretty much even until that line
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  20. Diphtheria

    Diphtheria Tazz Says "Fuck U"

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    X wins

    X Sample 4-1
    Narsil 3-2

    and Strike.. next time you up some1 else's thread you will lose 5 votes in your battle
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