37. Zeitgeist 3-1 vs 38. Copywritten 3-4

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  1. Serge dot T

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  2. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    Holler. I'm good for 14.
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    SAYONCE New Member

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  4. SAYONCE

    SAYONCE New Member

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    Look on the bright side....son,you'll never get bitten
    Lets face facts..even wack cats wouldnt Copy Written
    A blatent raving homo..but atleast this faggots proud
    Copy flips more Cock Tales than Tom Cruise and Brian Brown
    It's a slaying now...you aint skilled enough to bother me
    Cause its a fact that ALL Copy's produce lower quality
    In honesty..im dropping C...This wanksta's a loser
    And Zeit brakes all Copy write's,just like a Napster user
    I'll confuse ya and elude ya..then decease you best drops
    And punch out more Copy lines than Korean sweatshops
    Im know for my consitance..rippin fools and droppin fire,G
    ...While this Writtens more shaky than J Fox's Diary
    There should be laws against ya Technique..its paved with imbelishments
    And Zeit's got This Written down....and taken in evidence

    ....
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  5. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    For Zeit, between them, there's a fine line
    He jumps back and forth to straight, from whack, every 9 times
    I write fine rhymes, you 'whack' with one pump ya spermin', G
    Focusin' my concentration, on you like a ûûû, comin' from Germany
    Ain't gonna be Saved by the Bell this time Zeit, Just go the hell home..
    Cuz my margin of victory's as big, as Zack Morris's cell phone
    His chances be known, yeah, his chance to win
    Zeit comin' victorious is the same as..
    Zeit prayin' to God, and God comin' down to answer him
    This man is grim, I'll thread him like a needle
    and leave 'em hangin' by a thread
    Next to the linen closet, danglin' by his head


    Sorry, my power went out and it didn't come back on 'til now..
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  6. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    up over no shows
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  7. Pacific

    Pacific your epidermis is showing

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    vote- Zeitgeist

    I felt his verse was more consistant throughout. He had some creative ish, wasn't really feeling alot of CW's verse except maybe the concentration line. I liked the opener and napster lines especially from Zeitgeist.
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  8. Allanon

    Allanon New Member

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    vote = copy..

    had a nice flow..zack morris line was funny cuz i member dat big ass phone..lol..he had more original lines..

    zeit - verse was nice..my problem was all the "copy" punches - meaning u used 2 many..about half ya verse was wordplay on his name..monotonous, boring, & predictable...predicatable punches lack creativity & th verse loses something when i know what a punch is by reading the setup...

    good battle.

    *does the mc hammer*
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  9. Tha Talent

    Tha Talent , Tha Master.

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    vote=Zeitgeist.

    Copy's only semi-original line was the Zach Morris line.
    Zeit's strength has always been his name plays
    and he had plenty of dope ones.
    all that was dope from Zeit

    plus i think he had a more consistant flow
    so he gets the vote
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  10. G Status

    G Status New Member

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    ahahahaha that line had me rollin. with a better flow and and that line i think copy took this. copy didnt have as many name punches but everything else was good
    zeit came strong with a lot of name punches, nothing really stood out though and i've seen a lot of those lines already used against copy

    vote - copy
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  11. aura

    aura unityyyyyy

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    zeitgeist

    "It's a slaying now...you aint skilled enough to bother me
    Cause its a fact that ALL Copy's produce lower quality
    In honesty..im dropping C...This wanksta's a loser
    And Zeit brakes all Copy write's,just like a Napster user
    I'll confuse ya and elude ya..then decease you best drops
    And punch out more Copy lines than Korean sweatshops"

    copywritten

    "Ain't gonna be Saved by the Bell this time Zeit, Just go the hell home..
    Cuz my margin of victory's as big, as Zack Morris's cell phone"

    vote - zeitgeist
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  12. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    Votes go herre..

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  13. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    Can we get some votes please?:-/
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  14. Grimage

    Grimage things lookin grim

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    vote- zeitgeist

    beter punches and personals
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  15. M-theory

    M-theory Saint Esprit

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    vote: zeit

    a bit of a tough vote when it came down to it... i just think zeit was a little more productive even if most of his lines were plays on the name... copy's needle and thread shit was wack...
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    euphemism .

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  17. eye of the tiger

    eye of the tiger New Member

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    V - Zeitgeist

    He's gonna be Top20 easily soon

    He's nice, he murdered this Copy guy, and it's not like Copy came whack either, he came pretty cool.

    Nice battle
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  18. VerbalWeaponz

    VerbalWeaponz Unholy-Syndicate

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    zeit--"It's a slaying now...you aint skilled enough to bother me
    Cause its a fact that ALL Copy's produce lower quality
    In honesty..im dropping C...This wanksta's a loser
    And Zeit brakes all Copy write's,just like a Napster user
    I'll confuse ya and elude ya..then decease you best drops
    And punch out more Copy lines than Korean sweatshops"
    (these lines had me goi.....very origional style from u..keep it up 8/10)

    copy--
    I write fine rhymes, you 'whack' with one pump ya spermin', G
    Focusin' my concentration, on you like a ûûû, comin' from Germany
    Ain't gonna be Saved by the Bell this time Zeit, Just go the hell home..
    Cuz my margin of victory's as big, as Zack Morris's cell phone
    (these r tha only lines i liked from u..but i dun think that they r enough to take zeit..7/10)

    V-Zeit

    Verbal
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  19. Ra Ill

    Ra Ill New Member

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    This was a hot battle but to me the harder hitting punches came from..

    My VoTe - Zeitgeist

    Heres what took it..
    Nice..
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  20. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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    Zeitgeist .wins.

    -m.CRUMB
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