37. Fatal literature 3-1 vs 38. visualize 3-1

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  1. Serge dot T

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    ..The RBL Rules & Regulations..

    RBL Verses Due Friday, 12 Midnight: Eastern Time
    RBL Votes Due Sun. @ 11 o’clock PM:Eastern Time

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  2. JABBER JAW

    JABBER JAW New Member

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    yeah just show, cuz it's real.....it's on.
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  3. visualize

    visualize ..........

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  4. visualize

    visualize ..........

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    heres 12, gL

    i'll get the W easy, against this kid consider me sick
    .. have him grabbin a L quick like jerkin off with a bent dick
    you'd think you was a beach.. my verse just seems to crash-ya
    instead, i put you out cold as if you was homeless in alaska
    literature thats fatal? well i suppose your board names true
    .. i died laughin at your wackness, then froze you at 3 and 2
    besides the fact your weak and the voters already started to dig
    .. the only thing ill in your post, is the fuckin quote in your sig
    respect your elders bitch, learn to only speak to when spoken
    you know i got this one stitched up, like your nose after i broke it
    winnin is hopeless, ive read your shit, completely borin son
    born in america, but im the only kid that resembles the 4 an 1

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  5. JABBER JAW

    JABBER JAW New Member

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    good shit kid

    o and i almost forgot......

    not a chance, nor another second will u last....
    cuz my foot up your ass...just apart of my craft. (whatever)

    visualize, getting victimized, tears in eyez/
    cuz your in touch with your feminime side/
    so dick applies -
    you a rookie in this game,wanted a tour, i gave you torture/
    FATAL literature just ain't my name, it's my CULTURE/
    your nothing more but a bleeding corpse, for sharks and vulture's/
    i'm honoring you, with a 21 gun salute all aiming at u/
    you lack the balls, and minus the talent/
    so it won't be much of a problem for my hollows to divide you/
    right out your new balance -
    u going against the god broad u know the deal/
    as i jack my ace all over your grill/
    i'm a king for real-
    i crush your faith, and i know it's hard for u to believe again/
    cuz opposite of sixth sense, you open your eyes just to semen/
    and u ain't even in the navy, you's a cream puff/
    and i cover u in all gravy/
    let me stop cuz i know u like that fag shit but i ain't your boo/
    so i terminate the bull shit like sarah connor use to do...


    qoute the god...........

    nevermore


    ain't sure what i posted, just went off the top.
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  6. Jay Slimm

    Jay Slimm 6-1-6ko's

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    DAAAAAAAMMMMMNNNNNN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    ^^^^nuff said

    Vote - Visualize



    peace.....
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  7. visualize

    visualize ..........

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    ...votes...
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  8. Cassanova Storm

    Cassanova Storm " The Beretta"

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    lol good shit bruh, visual pretty tight 2 nice battle, up fo the both of u.
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  9. Rusty Knife

    Rusty Knife New Member

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    vote = Visualize..

    just a better verse....but this battle was pretty blah...now that i read Fatal's verse...i wish i hadnt..sarah conner line was tha only thing that he had that resembled decent...
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  10. DA SAINT

    DA SAINT New Member

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    visualize nice verse nice everything u beat this guy shit was a nice battle u had a better structure then fatal literature
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  11. Shakes Fear

    Shakes Fear New Member

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    pretty much obvious the first guy took this, better punches flow structure, other guy really aint come with much, punches aint hit hard at all... battle was kind of ... eh... but nice work from both i suppose, peece

    vote: visualize
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  12. JABBER JAW

    JABBER JAW New Member

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    u saying this cat murdered me? are u 4real, i refuse to explain my verse to rookies. yet even if u think i lost i didn't guess i slid with him not putting the VERSE OF THE WEEK in his ryhme. fucked up there homes but i'm suer we'll meet again.
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  13. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    nah fatal, he got you


    u came with a real weak verse, diss wise.......even in an audio, this lacked a great deal of punchlines (though typical "text" punchlines are overated, this still lacked enough real originality to win...



    winnin is hopeless, ive read your shit, completely borin son
    born in america, but im the only kid that resembles the 4 an 1




    vote = visual
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  14. Identity™

    Identity™ Wrd.

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    v/ - visualize.

    The 4& 1 line was pretty creative, over all nice verse.Fatal had flow, thats about it

    Ok battle.
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  15. Vember2

    Vember2 New Member

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  16. visualize

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    --^ just to explain..

    i dunno.. we're both 3-1 and the winner would be 4-1.. i dunno.. shit..

    i tought it was kind of snazzy..

    ill check your tomarrow im bout to pass out
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  17. visualize

    visualize ..........

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  18. Anechoic

    Anechoic Sellin' seXtasy tablets..

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    vote - visualize


    punches from him where 10 Xs better than fatals... bisual just came more prepared and more skillful.. the other doods verse seemed like a 1 minute key
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  19. Light Saber

    Light Saber I LoVe AsiaN ChicKs

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    this was actually pretty close

    fatal had the more enjoyable verse it was better flowed and seemed put together nicely although there was a lack of hard hittin lines.. still good though.. i also enjoyed visualizes verse, the flow was there and it was hard hittin with great content.. no lines were that great but it got the job done like the "4 n 1" line... so vis edges this battle.. good job both of u

    vote - visualize
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  20. capitalVSperiod

    capitalVSperiod yeah...i'm that nice

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    me neither...possible the wackest two first bars i've seen for each person...horrible starts...but the first one picked up steam and ended strong.

    vote=visualize

    peace.
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