35. Doc Richards 3-0 v. 36. Blaq Prodigy 3-0

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  1. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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  2. Paul Simon

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    doc's in

    12-16


    no more
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  3. Blaq Prodigy

    Blaq Prodigy fook u

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  4. Blaq Prodigy

    Blaq Prodigy fook u

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    12 lines...

    still haven't shown up?... either ya waiting dorment or docking...
    this bumbaclot' is sewn-up... next week i'll be foreign knot-ting...
    and at 3-0... ya probably suited fa' hype that Cass' got...
    but you gotta raise the bar... STUPID, stop typin in caps-lock...
    ya text is ok... but offline eeeh... let's not debate em'...
    cuz the only buzz you gettin' playing Doc... is Operation...
    pushin fa' 30... yet ya verses aren't written out compatibly...
    only action this kid got... comes seperate without the batteries...
    this guy's shook... can tell from his alias uppin' to break orders
    I'm in good states... this fucka's just runnin for state borders...
    must be wrestling ya conscience... Doc ya' need to back route...
    submit a verse to SHOW and call me when John Cena tap out...

    eeehhh...

    oh yea.. CASS' is CASSIDY...
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  5. Adolf Spitler

    Adolf Spitler I am homo hear me roar

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    To imagine this chick every blowin up is a ball, hard for me, see
    Folks take a trip to the repair shop when all they see is Blaq on TV
    Better yet Im smashin your dream world until the core sheers
    The mag still calls you a prospect..YOUVE BEEN HERE FOR FOUR YEARS
    And to go easy on a chick is wrong, never say this bastards nice
    Because Blaq's still chasin victory and it's about to pass her twice
    It's easy to explain the light shes goin towards, the top 30 its not
    Turns out she drifted into the wrong lane while thinkin of punches for doc
    To paint pictures for the punches with a 8x10 and make it polished guys
    But when she added in her margin for error the canvas turned out wallet sized
    Not that you suck..well ok, ill give you that, you just lack what you write
    This bitch put her best foot forward and ended up scuffin the back of my nikes



    gluckers
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  6. Alphabet

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    Blaq-

    this guy's shook... can tell from his alias uppin' to break orders
    I'm in good states... this fucka's just runnin for state borders...


    Doc-

    Better yet Im smashin your dream world until the core sheers
    The mag still calls you a prospect..YOUVE BEEN HERE FOR FOUR YEARS


    lol...

    vote=Doc
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  7. Def Angel

    Def Angel Fuck you

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    Vote= Doc

    That last bar wuz tight homie good flow and very good punches.

    Blaq

    Sorry...you came strong but jus' not strong enuff some shit wuz there but it didn't catch my eye when I wuz readin' it.
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  8. Noib Da Mutt

    Noib Da Mutt New Member

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    Um Blaq was pretty good with her punches, but I would've liked more flow and rhymin' to follow.



    Doc had better lyrical continuity and it was easier to follow. He didn't pull any played bitch concepts to diss a chick which was cool. Ithink Doc's punches were a little harder too. That been here for four years line was dope.



    vote= Doc

    more consistent and a bit stronger...


    Cool battle though
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  9. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    Blaq Prodigy -

    still haven't shown up?... either ya waiting dorment or docking...
    this bumbaclot' is sewn-up... next week i'll be foreign knot-ting...
    ok opener...
    and at 3-0... ya probably suited fa' hype that Cass' got...
    but you gotta raise the bar... STUPID, stop typin in caps-lock...
    nah...
    ya text is ok... but offline eeeh... let's not debate em'...
    cuz the only buzz you gettin' playing Doc... is Operation...
    coulda been done a lot better...
    pushin fa' 30... yet ya verses aren't written out compatibly...
    only action this kid got... comes seperate without the batteries...
    heh...
    this guy's shook... can tell from his alias uppin' to break orders
    I'm in good states... this fucka's just runnin for state borders...
    ok...
    must be wrestling ya conscience... Doc ya' need to back route...
    submit a verse to SHOW and call me when John Cena tap out...
    ehh...



    Doc Richards -

    To imagine this chick every blowin up is a ball, hard for me, see
    Folks take a trip to the repair shop when all they see is Blaq on TV
    ok...
    Better yet Im smashin your dream world until the core sheers
    The mag still calls you a prospect..YOUVE BEEN HERE FOR FOUR YEARS
    lolz...
    And to go easy on a chick is wrong, never say this bastards nice
    Because Blaq's still chasin victory and it's about to pass her twice
    coo...
    It's easy to explain the light shes goin towards, the top 30 its not
    Turns out she drifted into the wrong lane while thinkin of punches for doc
    nah...
    To paint pictures for the punches with a 8x10 and make it polished guys
    But when she added in her margin for error the canvas turned out wallet sized
    ok...
    Not that you suck..well ok, ill give you that, you just lack what you write
    This bitch put her best foot forward and ended up scuffin the back of my nikes
    ok closer...



    overall -

    I gotta give this to doc...his mag line wuz hilarious...his punches were just better than blaq's overall...she did good tho...just not good enough...

    vote=doc richards

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  10. PencILL

    PencILL OriGinaL TexT

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    dayum...doc came nicer than i expected....
    that prospect line had me laughin for awhile....in my eyes doc came with a nicer flow of words with better punches...although blaq came allright too....she just didnt have enough in this one to get the W...sooo vote=doc
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  11. ** P.Dëƒ **

    ** P.Dëƒ ** 85-8"Battle Machine"

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    OPENING STATEMENTS
    This wasnt that bad of a battle... congrats to both!

    BATTLE CHART
    PUNCH-LINES: Doc
    CREATIVITY: TIE
    MULIT'S: Doc
    FLOW: prodigy ... edgey
    OVR: Doc


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    Blaq:
    and at 3-0... ya probably suited fa' hype that Cass' got...
    but you gotta raise the bar... STUPID, stop typin in caps-lock...
    ya text is ok... but offline eeeh... let's not debate em'...
    cuz the only buzz you gettin' playing Doc... is Operation...

    Doc:
    And to go easy on a chick is wrong, never say this bastards nice
    Because Blaq's still chasin victory and it's about to pass her twice
    It's easy to explain the light shes goin towards, the top 30 its not
    Turns out she drifted into the wrong lane while thinkin of punches for doc


    VOTE: DOC
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  12. Lethargic

    Lethargic Inactive

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    Blaq - Okay verse. More average then anything else. Your best line, 'border line', was played. Nothing spectacular, but at least it wasn't utter garbage like a lot of these I've been seeing. You had a couple okay punches that at least made your verse worth reading.

    Doc - Took this hands down. Much harder punches, and that mag line was killer. Your lines are too long though. I use longer lines too, but I incorporate multi's. Get a couple more multi's in your verses or people are gonna think you're writing a book. Other than that, verse was on point. Took it in every category

    Vote ~ Doc
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  13. A.V.S.

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    Doc won....doc won....doc won
    rather easily.......He came nice point blank harder punches
    Killed the female
    And now he's deservant of being 4-0...

    Vote=Doc
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  14. ST_UC

    ST_UC Please Try Me

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    still haven't shown up?... either ya waiting dorment or docking...
    this bumbaclot' is sewn-up... next week i'll be foreign knot-ting...
    -- i liked this 4-0 punch ... cant get any more original than that

    and at 3-0... ya probably suited fa' hype that Cass' got...
    but you gotta raise the bar... STUPID, stop typin in caps-lock...
    i dont like this one

    ya text is ok... but offline eeeh... let's not debate em'...
    cuz the only buzz you gettin' playing Doc... is Operation...
    --aight punch ... couldve worded it better... so the doc was at the beginning or something

    pushin fa' 30... yet ya verses aren't written out compatibly...
    only action this kid got... comes seperate without the batteries...
    action needs batteries? .. oh u must be talking about a pocket pussy or something... aight

    this guy's shook... can tell from his alias uppin' to break orders
    I'm in good states... this fucka's just runnin for state borders...
    good one.. nothing great tho

    must be wrestling ya conscience... Doc ya' need to back route...
    submit a verse to SHOW and call me when John Cena tap out...

    is he the host of a show? i dunno who john cena is


    To imagine this chick every blowin up is a ball, hard for me, see
    Folks take a trip to the repair shop when all they see is Blaq on TV
    ahh... nah i didnt like this one
    Better yet Im smashin your dream world until the core sheers
    The mag still calls you a prospect..YOUVE BEEN HERE FOR FOUR YEARS
    damn... this was a nice one
    And to go easy on a chick is wrong, never say this bastards nice
    Because Blaq's still chasin victory and it's about to pass her twice
    haha... i liked this one
    It's easy to explain the light shes goin towards, the top 30 its not
    Turns out she drifted into the wrong lane while thinkin of punches for doc
    ehhh.. dont like
    To paint pictures for the punches with a 8x10 and make it polished guys
    But when she added in her margin for error the canvas turned out wallet sized
    this bar is 20 syllables long ... that shit dont work ... who are you? twista?
    Not that you suck..well ok, ill give you that, you just lack what you write
    This bitch put her best foot forward and ended up scuffin the back of my nikes

    i liked this one

    i dont know how peeps thought doc had better flow than blaq . his lines were 15-20 syllables long... try spitting that to a beat... each bar would take up at least 6 quarters

    ahh... vote goes to Doc ... better punches ... but blaq flow was better ... docs multis were a little bigger
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  15. GhettoSmurf

    GhettoSmurf Ganja Smurf

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    Vote - Doc..

    Blaq had some lines that were already played on..but she was still consistent and had good punchs

    Doc had creativity mixed with good punchs and a good flow, so he gets my vote..
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  16. G. O. A. T.

    G. O. A. T. Greatest Of All Time...

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    Blaq..sorry ma..i wasnt really feeling ur verse too much..no flow..nothing really outstanding expcept maybe that operation skit..Doc..ur verse seemed as bad as hers..but a lil better..therefore


    Vote:DOc
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  17. krysto

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    Definetly-Richards

    he went to work ...was feelin the concept he had alot more then blaq..she kinda had a blah concepts that were old..or at least ive heard similar ones before
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  18. ADubXJ03

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    blaq

    still haven't shown up?... either ya waiting dorment or docking...
    this bumbaclot' is sewn-up... next week i'll be foreign knot-ting...

    blehhh...knot-ting = kinda a stretch...

    and at 3-0... ya probably suited fa' hype that Cass' got...
    but you gotta raise the bar... STUPID, stop typin in caps-lock...

    nah.

    ya text is ok... but offline eeeh... let's not debate em'...
    cuz the only buzz you gettin' playing Doc... is Operation...

    haha.

    pushin fa' 30... yet ya verses aren't written out compatibly...
    only action this kid got... comes seperate without the batteries...

    ehh.

    this guy's shook... can tell from his alias uppin' to break orders
    I'm in good states... this fucka's just runnin for state borders...

    alright.

    must be wrestling ya conscience... Doc ya' need to back route...
    submit a verse to SHOW and call me when John Cena tap out...

    alright closer.

    doc

    To imagine this chick every blowin up is a ball, hard for me, see
    Folks take a trip to the repair shop when all they see is Blaq on TV\

    heh.

    Better yet Im smashin your dream world until the core sheers
    The mag still calls you a prospect..YOUVE BEEN HERE FOR FOUR YEARS

    ouch.

    And to go easy on a chick is wrong, never say this bastards nice
    Because Blaq's still chasin victory and it's about to pass her twice

    haha.

    It's easy to explain the light shes goin towards, the top 30 its not
    Turns out she drifted into the wrong lane while thinkin of punches for doc

    nah...

    To paint pictures for the punches with a 8x10 and make it polished guys
    But when she added in her margin for error the canvas turned out wallet sized

    ehh...

    Not that you suck..well ok, ill give you that, you just lack what you write
    This bitch put her best foot forward and ended up scuffin the back of my nikes

    haha nice closer.

    basically i got doc taking this. both of yall dropped well, but i think doc went punch for punch with blaq and edged her out...which i guess is an advantage of droppin second. but whatever, good read guys.

    vote- doc
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  19. XSePTiONs

    XSePTiONs LORDXsePTiONs

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    this-was-a-dope-battle..

    this guy's shook... can tell from his alias uppin' to break orders
    I'm in good states... this fucka's just runnin for state borders...
    must be wrestling ya conscience... Doc ya' need to back route...
    submit a verse to SHOW and call me when John Cena tap out...
    ^^feelin-um..nice

    Better yet Im smashin your dream world until the core sheers
    The mag still calls you a prospect..YOUVE BEEN HERE FOR FOUR YEARS
    ^lol..ouch,sick-personal...
    the-whole-verse-was-hot..that-was-a-standoutline-doh
    blaq-came-nice-too...but-Dock-edged-it
    vote-Doc
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  20. M.H.

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    blaq
    this guy's shook... can tell from his alias uppin' to break orders
    I'm in good states... this fucka's just runnin for state borders...
    -lol

    overall decent verse. punches were kinda iffy, but you were fairly consistent.

    doc
    Better yet Im smashin your dream world until the core sheers
    The mag still calls you a prospect..YOUVE BEEN HERE FOR FOUR YEARS
    -Lmfao, nice

    came harder than blaq in almost every aspect. nice verse.

    my vote = Doc Richards
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