33. Pay-O vs. 34. Mercules... vs. 35. Oliver Twist

Discussion in 'Rapmusic.com Battle League' started by Oneduh, Nov 6, 2006.

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  1. Oneduh

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  2. Mercules...

    Mercules... ya'll know the name

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    lets go 16 each
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  3. Oliver Twist

    Oliver Twist Leavin em twisted

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  4. Mercules...

    Mercules... ya'll know the name

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    aight 12 it is
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  5. Mercules...

    Mercules... ya'll know the name

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    O get a little bit lower now.. with a losing record
    I'll bring an end to The Twist.. plus pop 2 in Chubby Checker
    I seen ya weak ass rhymes.. with every line ending simple
    my drops are tounge-in-cheek, and so is this seizure i'm sending you in to
    ya unoriginal.. Merc nameplays? .save all that trash
    most of them are overdone.. ya'lls came out as balls of ash
    Dont bother rapping guys ..you see wont see money being so fake 'n
    I wouldnt Pay O.T. ...with indians hallucinating
    Twist BEEN wack...n posting trash won't ever get you fame none
    ..lets start from Scratch, and kill the Chicken that verse came from
    The tip of my blade end in a Twist.. I'll slash this fake up
    n downsize his boy's blood level, after making all these Pay cuts
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  6. Oliver Twist

    Oliver Twist Leavin em twisted

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    If u ain't sniffin the guns n' roses then I'ma ask if u hear
    So I'll come rockin some heavy metal that'll put a Slash to ya ear
    I'ma split up ya crew for usin shitty gimmics n' subtle tricks
    & create a riff between u that even Jimmy Hendrix would struggle wit
    Change ya wit, this nerd is enormously less smart
    Fuck turnin over a new leaf..
    ..u need an entire forest for a fresh start
    Ridin w/ ya clit riders that be tellin ya ur rhymes phatter
    While my steez is Grossman & I ain't even got any linebackers
    When I show u the knife work it gets dire surely homey
    I'll give u an opening hole that even Tiger Woods would bogey!
    In my heat u roast, yes u got an easy post
    Cuz rank 33 ain't the third battler..
    ..its what Oneduh told u to do just for me to keep it close



    Thanks for the bread
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  7. -Troublesome-

    -Troublesome- R.I.P. Point Game

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    Merc:

    I seen ya weak ass rhymes.. with every line ending simple
    my drops are tounge-in-cheek, and so is this seizure i'm sending you in to

    cool

    ya unoriginal.. Merc nameplays? .save all that trash
    most of them are overdone.. ya'lls came out as balls of ash

    ehh, this woulda been nice...IF you didn't post first, lol

    Twist BEEN wack...n posting trash won't ever get you fame none
    ..lets start from Scratch, and kill the Chicken that verse came from

    good concept...coulda been worded better

    The tip of my blade end in a Twist.. I'll slash this fake up
    n downsize his boy's blood level, after making all these Pay cuts

    cool


    Oliver:

    I'ma split up ya crew for usin shitty gimmics n' subtle tricks
    & create a riff between u that even Jimmy Hendrix would struggle wit
    Change ya wit, this nerd is enormously less smart
    Fuck turnin over a new leaf..
    ..u need an entire forest for a fresh start

    turnin over a leaf is a played concept, but i like how you flipped it, good shit

    Ridin w/ ya clit riders that be tellin ya ur rhymes phatter
    While my steez is Grossman & I ain't even got any linebackers

    cool

    When I show u the knife work it gets dire surely homey
    I'll give u an opening hole that even Tiger Woods would bogey!

    nice


    Merc had some cool lines, nothin to write home about though. Overall, Oliver just came harder, had some pretty nice lines, his verse was more consistent, my fav was the boogey line. Merc...you got some nice ideas, but the chicken scratch coulda been flipped better, and the balls of ash woulda been nice if he posted before you. I gotta give this to Oliver.

    vote = Oliver Twist
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  8. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    O get a little bit lower now.. with a losing record
    I'll bring an end to The Twist.. plus pop 2 in Chubby Checker
    Twist BEEN wack...n posting trash won't ever get you fame none
    ..lets start from Scratch, and kill the Chicken that verse came from
    The tip of my blade end in a Twist.. I'll slash this fake up
    n downsize his boy's blood level, after making all these Pay cuts

    vs

    I'ma split up ya crew for usin shitty gimmics n' subtle tricks
    & create a riff between u that even Jimmy Hendrix would struggle wit
    Ridin w/ ya clit riders that be tellin ya ur rhymes phatter
    While my steez is Grossman & I ain't even got any linebackers
    In my heat u roast, yes u got an easy post
    Cuz rank 33 ain't the third battler..
    ..its what Oneduh told u to do just for me to keep it close

    v/merc. man this was close. pound or pound, punch for punch. really, it could go either way in anyones eyes. i just felt merc was a lil more fresh. but riff line was pretty dope from twist.

    nice battle, pz.
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  9. The Royal Penis

    The Royal Penis God.

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    this is hard, twist had some dopeness but that leaf line brought his verse down a level..

    ehh merc was straight but no dopeness


    vote-Oliver, i just liked his verse more the second time through
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  10. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    pretty kool

    Twist BEEN wack...n posting trash won't ever get you fame none
    ..lets start from Scratch, and kill the Chicken that verse came from


    ^^line of the battle in my eyes
    close but MErc barely takes it
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  11. A.P.O.S.

    A.P.O.S. New Member

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    merc took this easily in my eyes. twist just didnt seem to have much. the rock punches were a tad redundant, didnt even get a few, really the grossman line was the only thing decent. mercs opener was tight, kinda obsolete with the 3 way disses since payo didnt showup, but nice none the less.

    vote=mercules

    peace to both.
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  12. Out Write

    Out Write New Member

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    The tip of my blade end in a Twist.. I'll slash this fake up
    n downsize his boy's blood level, after making all these Pay cuts

    vs

    Change ya wit, this nerd is enormously less smart
    Fuck turnin over a new leaf..
    ..u need an entire forest for a fresh start

    Hmm.. This was a hard one... Fave punch from Merc was pretty nice, & the one from Twist was a flip on a played concept, but i thought it was the hardest hitting punch of the battle.....

    So after some thought ima hafta give it to....

    vote-twist
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  13. Mercules...

    Mercules... ya'll know the name

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  14. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    the tiger line was hot, lol...fa real
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  15. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    4-3 Mercules wins 1-0
    Oliver Twist loses 0-1
    Pay-O no shows 0-1
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