31 Hash Brown 5-3 vs 32 Charles 4-2

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  1. Insanevillian

    Insanevillian STILL in CHARGE

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  2. Hash Brown

    Hash Brown New Member

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  3. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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  4. Hash Brown

    Hash Brown New Member

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    fuck charles man, i'll wreck this loser's frame..
    who'll try his hand at winning.. when most textcee's use their brain..
    you've been wack from the start, i guess ur lyrics were meant to stink..
    passed all tests in flying colours..........purple, magenta and pink.
    so they say time flies when your having fun....
    i read your verse and the clock blew up, before the take-off had begun.
    wtf is that name? ima keep going on at ya..
    especially when i find that ya latest moniker..... is Monica,
    i've prepared all the facts, but i wont swear that he's wack..
    i'll fuck, shit, cunt, dick and any other word comparable with that.
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  5. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    this dude is stupid,wont get a chance ta ever son a vet..
    take a good look at the top 30..this is the closest u'll EVER gonna get!!!

    ............

    aint never seen a gunfight son,watch as i grind this liar..
    when i mention ya name ina verse..only time ya in a line of fire..
    i gotta question bout ya crew..i wont be the last to ask..
    check ya sig..dont all the freaks come out after Dark?
    i write with suspense,while sonnin n sendin him shivers..
    im the type to finish on a cliff-hanger..n step on ya fingers..
    im the realest cuz,make ya feel the dust when i kill this slut..
    If actions speak louder than words..so you must be still as fuck!
    Lotta people goin down in the ranks,this is a lesson bitch..
    check ya keyboard..even on that is says hash is next to shift!
    Please let it go kiddie,i gotta tell ya your not worthy..
    I'll be seein ya around duke..but definatly not in the top 30!!!!

    Bitch..
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  6. ARIZCATZ

    ARIZCATZ Game Of Death

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    Hash Brown
    fuck charles man, i'll wreck this loser's frame..
    who'll try his hand at winning.. when most textcee's use their brain..
    Dopeness.
    you've been wack from the start, i guess ur lyrics were meant to stink..
    passed all tests in flying colours..........purple, magenta and pink.
    Hot right there. hahaha.
    so they say time flies when your having fun....
    i read your verse and the clock blew up, before the take-off had begun.
    Great setup and concept.
    wtf is that name? ima keep going on at ya..
    especially when i find that ya latest moniker..... is Monica,
    Raw.
    i've prepared all the facts, but i wont swear that he's wack..
    i'll fuck, shit, cunt, dick and any other word comparable with that.
    Haha. Coo closer.

    Charles
    this dude is stupid,wont get a chance ta ever son a vet..
    take a good look at the top 30..this is the closest u'll EVER gonna get!!!
    Decent opener.
    aint never seen a gunfight son,watch as i grind this liar..
    when i mention ya name ina verse..only time ya in a line of fire..
    Doesn't hit for me really. Seen better line of fire lines.
    i gotta question bout ya crew..i wont be the last to ask..
    check ya sig..dont all the freaks come out after Dark?
    Good punch but no rhyme makes it only average. Had a lot of potential here.
    i write with suspense,while sonnin n sendin him shivers..
    im the type to finish on a cliff-hanger..n step on ya fingers..
    Pretty hot.
    im the realest cuz,make ya feel the dust when i kill this slut..
    If actions speak louder than words..so you must be still as fuck!
    Hot.
    Lotta people goin down in the ranks,this is a lesson bitch..
    check ya keyboard..even on that is says hash is next to shift!
    Nah. Hash? I don't see it.
    Please let it go kiddie,i gotta tell ya your not worthy..
    I'll be seein ya around duke..but definatly not in the top 30!!!!
    Decent closer.

    Got Hash taking this one. Just a more consistent verse from start to finish. The flying colors line was it for me.
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  7. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    vote - hash


    i gotta question bout ya crew..i wont be the last to ask..
    check ya sig..dont all the freaks come out after Dark?

    ^^ does that rhyme?


    hash had some nice concepts.. he gets the w
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  8. M-theory

    M-theory Saint Esprit

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    - fuck charles man, i'll wreck this loser's frame..
    who'll try his hand at winning.. when most textcee's use their brain..

    - so they say time flies when your having fun....
    i read your verse and the clock blew up, before the take-off had begun.

    charles
    - i gotta question bout ya crew..i wont be the last to ask..
    check ya sig..dont all the freaks come out after Dark?

    -i write with suspense,while sonnin n sendin him shivers..
    im the type to finish on a cliff-hanger..n step on ya fingers..

    - im the realest cuz,make ya feel the dust when i kill this slut..
    If actions speak louder than words..so you must be still as fuck!

    ..........

    Both verses seem comparable... structure was nice... i think i'm going to have to vote for Charles here... I mean that Dark line didn't seem to rhyme with the set up and it is text.... but it still did something for me while the stuff i didn't post of Hash's didn't really do as much for me...

    i don't know...

    vote = charles...

    (edit: more to explain)=> it was real close for me but i just seemed to relate to charles's way of wit over hash's. i think it might end close.)
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  9. Martyr da Great

    Martyr da Great .Is Jiggy wit It.

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    Vote=Hash
    He came more consistant with some pretty fresh concepts.. This was a pretty good battle but hash gets the W.

    Fav lines Hash:
    you've been wack from the start, i guess ur lyrics were meant to stink..
    passed all tests in flying colours..........purple, magenta and pink.
    so they say time flies when your having fun....
    i read your verse and the clock blew up, before the take-off had begun.

    Fav Charles:
    im the realest cuz,make ya feel the dust when i kill this slut..
    If actions speak louder than words..so you must be still as fuck!
    i write with suspense,while sonnin n sendin him shivers..
    im the type to finish on a cliff-hanger..n step on ya fingers..

    Vote=hash
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  10. Super.

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    vote-hash

    fuck charles man, i'll wreck this loser's frame..
    who'll try his hand at winning.. when most textcee's use their brain..
    you've been wack from the start, i guess ur lyrics were meant to stink..
    passed all tests in flying colours..........purple, magenta and pink.
    so they say time flies when your having fun....
    i read your verse and the clock blew up, before the take-off had begun.

    ^^^nice opener and the rest were all nicely worded with nice set ups

    gotta question bout ya crew..i wont be the last to ask..
    check ya sig..dont all the freaks come out after Dark?

    that would have been so ill..but it didnt rhyme

    aint never seen a gunfight son,watch as i grind this liar..
    when i mention ya name ina verse..only time ya in a line of fire..

    niceness..

    i vote hash
    he just came more consistent with more witty punches
    and better concepts
    charles came decent with some nice lines
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  11. Hybrid Angel

    Hybrid Angel Inkwell Q Thompson

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    V - Hash Brown

    Came with some tigher punches.

    Charles had some, but it was a matter of who had more, and it was Hash

    Nice battle.
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  12. The Grimm One

    The Grimm One No place like the ghetto.

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    VOTE=Charles


    For one simple reason:
    HASH BROWN used the same EXACT line as he used vs. Kollision a few weeks ago...
    "wtf is that name? ima keep going on at ya..
    especially when i find that ya latest moniker..... is Monica,"


    Good verse Hash, excellent verse, but damn. Don't do that. I can't be mad at ya...but I remember that line like yesterday...i was at kollision's crib when u dropped it.


    >>Grimm<<
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  13. Yukon & Eyeon.

    Yukon & Eyeon. New Member

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    Vote = Hash Brown

    He drop a more consistence verse from start to finish, a few hot punches. Charles verse was decent but wasn't enough to take this.
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  14. Hash Brown

    Hash Brown New Member

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    Thanks for all the votes.. this is my up..
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  15. Scales

    Scales I hold weight here

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    vote=charles


    i was feelin his a lil more but the flying colors line was a tad funny from hash brown
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  16. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    Charles

    this dude is stupid,wont get a chance ta ever son a vet..
    take a good look at the top 30..this is the closest u'll EVER gonna get!!!
    .....haha, at first i was like eh, this is a little too simple.. but you guys are both so close to it i had to laugh a little not a bad start

    aint never seen a gunfight son,watch as i grind this liar..
    when i mention ya name ina verse..only time ya in a line of fire..
    ...........that was a pretty cool concept man, i think you could have clowned on him a little more if you reworded it a bit stronger though, feel me? It coceptually lost a little flow from the first and second line, not bad or anything, but just sounds a lil fillerish 'watch as i grind this liar'.. eh, just a heads up partna it was still a cool line..

    i gotta question bout ya crew..i wont be the last to ask..
    check ya sig..dont all the freaks come out after Dark?
    ..........(imma check his sig depending how close your verses are)
    ..........ya, this battle was close.. haha @ your punch here, i dont really normally dig sig plays, especially when its this specific, but it struck a chord with me no doubt.. but ask and dark didnt rhyme well.. ask, task, mask (even stretchin it to past crasched harassed would maybe cut it), but dark spark lark shark (stretch to start part chart maybe).. but ask and dark, u must have a crazy ass accent man lol

    i write with suspense,while sonnin n sendin him shivers..
    im the type to finish on a cliff-hanger..n step on ya fingers..
    ...........that was pretty cool, cliff hanger is flipped alot these days, but 'stepping on ur fingers' made it more specific, almost sounds cliche`ish, so i dug it..

    im the realest cuz,make ya feel the dust when i kill this slut..
    If actions speak louder than words..so you must be still as fuck!
    ........pretty cool hit, alot of times ending with a one word similie, especially fuck, doesnt sound nice, but u pulled it off aiight.. dope punch though lol

    Lotta people goin down in the ranks,this is a lesson bitch..
    check ya keyboard..even on that is says hash is next to shift!
    .........haha, well since you know who i am you prolly know why this made me laugh huh? lol.. nice thinking though, everyone else woulda gone 'smoking hash' routes prolly.. but 'next to shift' doesnt sound THAT bad lol you should'a said my "cuz you've got NOTHING under control" or "When it comes to Escape, you'll be left stuck up in a corner alone" :)

    Please let it go kiddie,i gotta tell ya your not worthy..
    I'll be seein ya around duke..but definatly not in the top 30!!!!
    ....heh, that was ok.. i sorta like it because of your start, seemed like an appropriate ending, but nothing really hard hitting..
    coo verse as a whole..

    Bitch..
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    Hash Brown

    fuck charles man, i'll wreck this loser's frame..
    who'll try his hand at winning.. when most textcee's use their brain..
    ........haha, i thought this was a pretty dope flip.. definately thought of the hand at winning concept in a different light.. pretty cool

    you've been wack from the start, i guess ur lyrics were meant to stink..
    passed all tests in flying colours..........purple, magenta and pink.
    ..............that was ok i guess, i think it woulda been a little more relevent or maybe funny if you said passed the gay test with flying colors or something.. its aiight tho

    so they say time flies when your having fun....
    i read your verse and the clock blew up, before the take-off had begun.
    .........haha, at first i didnt like this man, i dont know, are you basically calling the 'clock' the plane for 'time', thats almost like topical-style.. but you flipped that shit sort of dope, i think i dig it because its original, to me at least.. cool shit (its nit picky, but just a heads up on using the word 'fly' in two lines in a row)


    wtf is that name? ima keep going on at ya..
    especially when i find that ya latest moniker..... is Monica,
    heh, ehhh, i hate monika references, and this wasnt the best partna....

    i've prepared all the facts, but i wont swear that he's wack..
    i'll fuck, shit, cunt, dick and any other word comparable with that.
    ........ i'll fuck , shit, cunt, dick, and any other word comparable with that (maybe schlong, jock, or cock? lol).. i just wanted to show you why i wasnt feeling this as an ender that much hommie..

    ...this was a close battle, imma go check your sig to see if Charle's punch about it is enough to pull the win because i think hash has the two best lines in the battle.. he might have this, charles seemed a lil more consisten tho lemme see..


    Charles: actions speak louder than words, line of fire, and freaks after dark were cool

    Hash: time flies and hand at winning, time flies was the most creative one in the battle along with his freaks after dark.. you guys both flipped real nice, but i heard almost all the others used before differently..


    Vote: Charles?

    why? Hmm, close battle here.. only thing is, he had attempted to keep his shit more personal, and that really only matters to me when a battle is close, so i definately edges it there.. That "Freaks after dark" was the best personal punch of the battle i'd say, so you know he's keepin it fresh.. good battle though guys.. peace
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  17. Hash Brown

    Hash Brown New Member

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    WOW @ that vote..

    Cool breakdown.
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  18. Copywritten

    Copywritten Copy Me

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    vote - hash, I felt basically the same way about these verses.
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  19. KhemikaL*PhusionZ

    KhemikaL*PhusionZ Green+Need=Weed

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    Cool match here. Hash was consistant, no real eye openers but this was my fav.

    fuck charles man, i'll wreck this loser's frame..
    who'll try his hand at winning.. when most textcee's use their brain..

    Charles, you need to realize 90% of this board is from the US... so they aint gunna understand why you have ask and Dark rhymin.

    But, you brought flames... I liked almost every line
    aint never seen a gunfight son,watch as i grind this liar..
    when i mention ya name ina verse..only time ya in a line of fire..

    WOWOWOWO

    the realest cuz,make ya feel the dust when i kill this slut..
    If actions speak louder than words..so you must be still as fuck!
    Lotta people goin down in the ranks,this is a lesson bitch..
    check ya keyboard..even on that is says hash is next to shift!


    That's that crack right there

    vote- Charles
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  20. MiC TypsOn

    MiC TypsOn informer

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    HASH BROWN


    uck charles man, i'll wreck this loser's frame..
    who'll try his hand at winning.. when most textcee's use their brain..
    you've been wack from the start, i guess ur lyrics were meant to stink..
    passed all tests in flying colours..........purple, magenta and pink.

    lol the first was quite nice.. switched up cooly.... second was ok... but i just wasn't feeling it too much

    so they say time flies when your having fun....
    i read your verse and the clock blew up, before the take-off had begun.

    not really feeling seemed like you tried to throw an xtra meaning into this.. when ur set-up coulda been worked with alot easier.

    wtf is that name? ima keep going on at ya..
    especially when i find that ya latest moniker..... is Monica,
    i've prepared all the facts, but i wont swear that he's wack..
    i'll fuck, shit, cunt, dick and any other word comparable with that.
    closer was cool.. never sen that... dope.. the moniker 1 was ok...



    in the end decent verse.. ive shown what i like and dislike and why






    CHARLES


    this dude is stupid,wont get a chance ta ever son a vet..
    take a good look at the top 30..this is the closest u'll EVER gonna get!!!

    ............
    started cool.. lol since he's number 31 feels ike it has a little edge lol


    aint never seen a gunfight son,watch as i grind this liar..
    when i mention ya name ina verse..only time ya in a line of fire..
    i gotta question bout ya crew..i wont be the last to ask..
    check ya sig..dont all the freaks come out after Dark?

    liked that first line quite creative.. but wording was HORRIBLE =(.. but still feeling it, which says something bout it.... and the second was was lol. and quite coo

    i write with suspense,while sonnin n sendin him shivers..
    im the type to finish on a cliff-hanger..n step on ya fingers..
    im the realest cuz,make ya feel the dust when i kill this slut..
    If actions speak louder than words..so you must be still as fuck!
    Lotta people goin down in the ranks,this is a lesson bitch..
    check ya keyboard..even on that is says hash is next to shift!
    Please let it go kiddie,i gotta tell ya your not worthy..
    I'll be seein ya around duke..but definatly not in the top 30!!!!

    this last section killed it.. was really feeling this.... stand on his fingers was a dope switch... still as fuck was cool..... the next to shift was lmao, feeling it.....
    then ur closer was cool.. already used the top 30 thing.. but was feeling this again



    in the end.. hash had a nice verse, brought a few nice lines.. but charles killed him with his last few couplet's.. dope.

    nice battle fellas..

    vote- charles
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