3. Sephiroth 4-0 -vs- 4. Magus via The Dark 3-0 (Verses UP!)

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  1. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    3. Sephiroth 4-0 -vs- 4. Magus via The Dark 3-0
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  2. -=Blazin-Armor=-

    -=Blazin-Armor=- New Member

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    30.
    You wont win.
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  3. -Sephiroth-

    -Sephiroth- Geostigmatic

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  4. -=Blazin-Armor=-

    -=Blazin-Armor=- New Member

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    when matching verses, your most likely to get baked
    mines is here to prove your wack, yours is the icing on the cake -seph


    Since you're a poet, we can collab...I'll even do it tonight..
    The topic? me saying you suck, and you proving me right.. - Magus


    Amazing.


    Ladies and Gentleman. He's desperate. Dude's hungry.
    So he bites Mag's like a starvin User holding a food monthly.
    and you'll be back at 15, after this round's closer.
    Cuz your only rep says you like it in the butt on mouse over.
    Other than that. youre a nobody. you'll get no mention.
    youre the byproduct of 2 things..no shows and no interest.
    and line 4 got me pissed..his verses have no style.
    but HE'S the only one on the site with a personalized profile.
    you wont make it, you suck in text and it's blatant.
    cheer up tho.
    you get to go from riding the pine to interior decoration.
    so if it's votes youre aiming for..better get ya people.
    cuz seph is so super bad, he wont need evan for a sequel.
    they'll call me a pimp when i beat this whore stupid.
    the best line you ever had....i had.....2 weeks before you did
    it's no secret..i didn't try this week..you'll need to wait.
    and if my verse is sketchy...then yours are fingerpaint.
    you'll never make it to the top..i watched you..no joke
    half of ya wins are no show verses...the other half no shows.
    You and resilient both dropped shitty verses that bout
    he's resilient..he'll bounce back...you shouldve just bounced.
    there's no bad feelings..he know's it's jokes..
    he doesn't hold any punches...that's why i like em........and voters dont.


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1082332


    ^^^after that..you'd show face..what a daring gay
    that fish line was so stretched
    .......................you could pull crab off the bering strait.
    and your opener. classic. and you know it son.
    just lucky that pot took that battle over kettle, 4 votes to 1.
    you'll need a ghostwriter to get a vote, stop writing rhymes.
    and get on aim...cuz you'd need metasin to doctor your lines.
    i'd expect something in that bag. but sadly i think he's out.
    the Persephone's trickery, it's enough to make hades rethink his vows.




    I know. None of you get it.
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  5. -Sephiroth-

    -Sephiroth- Geostigmatic

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    lol, look...


    you shouldn't be in the RBL, your scrypts THAT boring
    cause 30 lines of nothing belongs in the sig check forum
    dude stays writing a book like it'll get him some clout
    you'll only get 'best cellar' ...
    ............... cause its cleaner then the rest of your house
    ^ see i can write like you, and do it from start to finish
    but then i'd have to explain why 28 of my bars are filler
    trying to compensate for quality, them tactics is foul
    his verse's Napoleon complex could boost France's morale
    the mods even punk you cause they know you a clown
    but Mag was done way before Grimet said "I'm posting it now"
    your style's bitchmade, it's like Versace invented dude
    you wouldn't do Jack, unless he was standing right next to you
    and the little fame you DO have won't help at all, dogg
    you only been mentioned cause we haven't cut the small talk
    bitches like you are simple, whining and fussing away
    with enough emotional baggage to hold up customs for days
    you ain't respected anywhere, so just quit and retire
    his credibility on the 'net zero', without switching providers
    your dickriders'll say shit like "Magus is going to win"
    but that bull is so backwards, it'll have matadors chargin at him
    your the definition of being finished, man your through
    so if we jump to conclusions, we'll probably land on you
    intellect, image and meaning is what my verse has plenty
    your marked for 'depth' ...
    not cause we want you dead, it's cause you don't have any
    your verse was wack, ain't nothing threatning about it
    that shit was clown shoes, and your wearing the rest of the outfit
    your in serious need of practice, and a few rehearsals
    his skills took a smoking break, and ended up on a truth commercial
    boog and charles beat you, but you escaped with the V ?
    you had so many close calls, your career should switch to AT&T

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  6. Mr.Perfect

    Mr.Perfect New Member

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    this was a dope battle



    Other than that. youre a nobody. you'll get no mention.
    youre the byproduct of 2 things..no shows and no interest.
    you wont make it, you suck in text and it's blatant.
    cheer up tho.
    you get to go from riding the pine to interior decoration.
    so if it's votes youre aiming for..better get ya people.
    cuz seph is so super bad, he wont need evan for a sequel.
    they'll call me a pimp when i beat this whore stupid.
    the best line you ever had....i had.....2 weeks before you did
    you'll never make it to the top..i watched you..no joke
    half of ya wins are no show verses...the other half no shows.


    vs



    ^ see i can write like you, and do it from start to finish
    but then i'd have to explain why 28 of my bars are filler
    trying to compensate for quality, them tactics is foul
    his verse's Napoleon complex could boost France's morale
    the mods even punk you cause they know you a clown
    but Mag was done way before Grimet said "I'm posting it now"
    bitches like you are simple, whining and fussing away
    with enough emotional baggage to hold up customs for days
    you ain't respected anywhere, so just quit and retire
    his credibility on the 'net zero', without switching providers
    intellect, image and meaning is what my verse has plenty
    your marked for 'depth' ...
    not cause we want you dead, it's cause you don't have any

    oh shit....

    this battle was close as fuck

    ive read this shit 3 times and am still finding new shit i like about each verse

    i think magus might have underestimated seph here, which led to seph gettin the surprise win...

    damn dope battle though

    V..Seph
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  7. Loot Beats

    Loot Beats Dope Beats are what I do.

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    this battle was dope. Im leanin one way, but can't really read... I'll be back.

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  8. Loot Beats

    Loot Beats Dope Beats are what I do.

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    Magus
    Ladies and Gentleman. He's desperate. Dude's hungry.
    So he bites Mag's like a starvin User holding a food monthly.
    lol... very good start.

    and you'll be back at 15, after this round's closer.
    Cuz your only rep says you like it in the butt on mouse over.
    LMAO!

    Other than that. youre a nobody. you'll get no mention.
    youre the byproduct of 2 things..no shows and no interest.
    coo

    and line 4 got me pissed..his verses have no style.
    but HE'S the only one on the site with a personalized profile.
    coo

    you wont make it, you suck in text and it's blatant.
    cheer up tho.
    you get to go from riding the pine to interior decoration.
    coo

    so if it's votes youre aiming for..better get ya people.
    cuz seph is so super bad, he wont need evan for a sequel.
    lol

    they'll call me a pimp when i beat this whore stupid.
    the best line you ever had....i had.....2 weeks before you did
    heh

    it's no secret..i didn't try this week..you'll need to wait.
    and if my verse is sketchy...then yours are fingerpaint.
    i like it.

    you'll never make it to the top..i watched you..no joke
    half of ya wins are no show verses...the other half no shows.
    You and resilient both dropped shitty verses that bout
    he's resilient..he'll bounce back...you shouldve just bounced.
    haha. good couplet

    there's no bad feelings..he know's it's jokes..
    he doesn't hold any punches...that's why i like em........and voters dont.
    nice... ionno if i've seen this one.


    http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=1082332


    ^^^after that..you'd show face..what a daring gay
    that fish line was so stretched
    .......................you could pull crab off the bering strait.
    goooooood line

    and your opener. classic. and you know it son.
    just lucky that pot took that battle over kettle, 4 votes to 1.
    lol.

    you'll need a ghostwriter to get a vote, stop writing rhymes.
    and get on aim...cuz you'd need metasin to doctor your lines.
    lol... this is aite

    i'd expect something in that bag. but sadly i think he's out.
    the Persephone's trickery, it's enough to make hades rethink his vows.
    ? ionno the story... eh..

    Strong Verse. One of My faves I've read in a while... You went AT him... whew...

    Seph

    you shouldn't be in the RBL, your scrypts THAT boring
    cause 30 lines of nothing belongs in the sig check forum
    aite

    dude stays writing a book like it'll get him some clout
    you'll only get 'best cellar' ...
    ............... cause its cleaner then the rest of your house
    ^ see i can write like you, and do it from start to finish
    but then i'd have to explain why 28 of my bars are filler
    ion like the finish/filler rhyme but this was a good 4 bars.

    trying to compensate for quality, them tactics is foul
    his verse's Napoleon complex could boost France's morale
    ouch. nice.

    the mods even punk you cause they know you a clown
    but Mag was done way before Grimet said "I'm posting it now"
    cool

    your style's bitchmade, it's like Versace invented dude
    you wouldn't do Jack, unless he was standing right next to you
    nice, but I seen this one... mighta been res...

    and the little fame you DO have won't help at all, dogg
    you only been mentioned cause we haven't cut the small talk
    aite.

    bitches like you are simple, whining and fussing away
    with enough emotional baggage to hold up customs for days
    nice.

    you ain't respected anywhere, so just quit and retire
    his credibility on the 'net zero', without switching providers
    cool

    your dickriders'll say shit like "Magus is going to win"
    but that bull is so backwards, it'll have matadors chargin at him
    lol

    your the definition of being finished, man your through
    so if we jump to conclusions, we'll probably land on you
    cool.

    intellect, image and meaning is what my verse has plenty
    your marked for 'depth' ...
    not cause we want you dead, it's cause you don't have any
    aite... kinda stretched...

    your verse was wack, ain't nothing threatning about it
    that shit was clown shoes, and your wearing the rest of the outfit
    aite.

    your in serious need of practice, and a few rehearsals
    his skills took a smoking break, and ended up on a truth commercial
    boog and charles beat you, but you escaped with the V ?
    you had so many close calls, your career should switch to AT&T
    i liked the last 4... lol.

    Dope Verse. Def made this my fave battle read in a minute. Yall Battled each other...

    Good Personals and The lil schemes were sufficient. Yall were clever, and a lotta the material was kinda fresh to me. Damn....

    After reading both verses i vote: Magus

    I think i liked his personals a bit more, and that put him over the edge... Good Read Fellas...

    Meta.
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  9. 4Matt

    4Matt On the money

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    Magus -

    Other than that. youre a nobody. you'll get no mention.
    youre the byproduct of 2 things..no shows and no interest.
    you wont make it, you suck in text and it's blatant.
    cheer up tho.
    you get to go from riding the pine to interior decoration.
    so if it's votes youre aiming for..better get ya people.
    cuz seph is so super bad, he wont need evan for a sequel.
    there's no bad feelings..he know's it's jokes..
    he doesn't hold any punches...that's why i like em........and voters dont.



    Seph -

    dude stays writing a book like it'll get him some clout
    you'll only get 'best cellar' ...
    ............... cause its cleaner then the rest of your house
    ^ see i can write like you, and do it from start to finish
    but then i'd have to explain why 28 of my bars are filler
    trying to compensate for quality, them tactics is foul
    his verse's Napoleon complex could boost France's morale
    bitches like you are simple, whining and fussing away
    with enough emotional baggage to hold up customs for days
    you ain't respected anywhere, so just quit and retire
    his credibility on the 'net zero', without switching providers
    intellect, image and meaning is what my verse has plenty
    your marked for 'depth' ...
    not cause we want you dead, it's cause you don't have any


    Yeah props guys, dope battle.

    Magus dropped a good verse, his best lines were in the middle of it. I wasnt really feeling the opener though, and the ending was kind of bad in my opinion. Everything after the "doesn't hold any punches" line seemed like filler.

    Seph, your opener was cool, after that the verse picked up momentum. A couple of your lines could have used better wording, but other than that you were pretty consistant and finished solidly.

    Basically, Magus had too many personal lines. Some hit and some were too simple, and the last section was kind of blah. I think he sort of underestimated Seph which isn't really hard to do(no offence to Seph). Seph was more creative and had some haymakers that i enjoyed. To be honest, this battle was close but it's pretty clear who won, i predicted Seph's luck to run out this week but...

    Vote goes to Seph
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  10. Everest

    Everest E=MC Eat my Shorts

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    vote= magus... will edit in explanation in if someone bitches
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  11. Taylormade`

    Taylormade` New Member

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    Magus:

    Other than that. youre a nobody. you'll get no mention.
    youre the byproduct of 2 things..no shows and no interest.
    you wont make it, you suck in text and it's blatant.
    cheer up tho.
    you get to go from riding the pine to interior decoration.
    there's no bad feelings..he know's it's jokes..
    he doesn't hold any punches...that's why i like em........and voters dont.
    ^^^after that..you'd show face..what a daring gay
    that fish line was so stretched
    .......................you could pull crab off the bering strait.

    verse was cool minus some pretty generic ish

    Sephiroth:

    dude stays writing a book like it'll get him some clout
    you'll only get 'best cellar' ...
    ............... cause its cleaner then the rest of your house
    ^ see i can write like you, and do it from start to finish
    but then i'd have to explain why 28 of my bars are filler
    trying to compensate for quality, them tactics is foul
    his verse's Napoleon complex could boost France's morale
    your style's bitchmade, it's like Versace invented dude
    you wouldn't do Jack, unless he was standing right next to you
    your dickriders'll say shit like "Magus is going to win"
    but that bull is so backwards, it'll have matadors chargin at him
    bitches like you are simple, whining and fussing away
    with enough emotional baggage to hold up customs for days
    your the definition of being finished, man your through
    so if we jump to conclusions, we'll probably land on you

    niiice verse

    it was consistent for the most part and your wording was nice and smooth

    v/ Seph

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  12. Schadenfreude

    Schadenfreude da nigga, Sha-Fue-Diggidy

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    versus

    GOT-DAMN!! This was easily the best battle I've read in the Ribble..lol, shit. Mag came with it and had a really consistant verse, if is ill within itself being he dropped 30 FUCKING lines, but good showing. And then that nigga Seph dropped an almost, in my opinion, perfect verse. Seph most definetely murdered, every line except maybe one, was haymaker status or at least laned every well, Vote - Sephiroth.

    Lol, Grimet was right for once, this is "Battle of the Week", sick battle gentlemen.
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  13. King Grimet

    King Grimet King Grimet

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    Edit it in. in a battle like this.
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  14. ExodusIII

    ExodusIII New Member

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    I had some long shit written out but the browser closed on me so I’ll just list the lines I liked

    Mag

    Ladies and Gentleman. He's desperate. Dude's hungry.
    So he bites Mag's like a starvin User holding a food monthly.

    youre the byproduct of 2 things..no shows and no interest.
    and line 4 got me pissed..his verses have no style.

    it's no secret..i didn't try this week..you'll need to wait.
    and if my verse is sketchy...then yours are fingerpaint.
    you'll never make it to the top..i watched you..no joke
    half of ya wins are no show verses...the other half no shows.

    you'll need a ghostwriter to get a vote, stop writing rhymes.
    and get on aim...cuz you'd need metasin to doctor your lines.


    Seph

    you shouldn't be in the RBL, your scrypts THAT boring
    cause 30 lines of nothing belongs in the sig check forum
    dude stays writing a book like it'll get him some clout
    you'll only get 'best cellar' ...
    ............... cause its cleaner then the rest of your house
    ^ see i can write like you, and do it from start to finish
    but then i'd have to explain why 28 of my bars are filler

    the mods even punk you cause they know you a clown
    but Mag was done way before Grimet said "I'm posting it now"

    and the little fame you DO have won't help at all, dogg
    you only been mentioned cause we haven't cut the small talk

    your dickriders'll say shit like "Magus is going to win"
    but that bull is so backwards, it'll have matadors chargin at him




    this was a pretty good battle……both of you brought some fresh lines…. It was a very close battle… not much in it at all… I just enjoyed sephs verse a little better… lines were more creative imo… I was just feelin his steez a little more… that’s pretty much all this battle came down to for me… my overall enjoyment of the verse… apart from that there wasn’t anything in it

    vote=seph
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  15. Ladies and Gentleman. He's desperate. Dude's hungry.
    So he bites Mag's like a starvin User holding a food monthly.
    and you'll be back at 15, after this round's closer.
    Cuz your only rep says you like it in the butt on mouse over.
    Other than that. youre a nobody. you'll get no mention.
    youre the byproduct of 2 things..no shows and no interest.
    and line 4 got me pissed..his verses have no style.
    but HE'S the only one on the site with a personalized profile.
    you wont make it, you suck in text and it's blatant.
    cheer up tho.
    you get to go from riding the pine to interior decoration.

    You and resilient both dropped shitty verses that bout
    he's resilient..he'll bounce back...you shouldve just bounced.
    there's no bad feelings..he know's it's jokes..
    he doesn't hold any punches...that's why i like em........and voters dont.

    you'll need a ghostwriter to get a vote, stop writing rhymes.
    and get on aim...cuz you'd need metasin to doctor your lines.

    VS.......


    dude stays writing a book like it'll get him some clout
    you'll only get 'best cellar' ...

    your dickriders'll say shit like "Magus is going to win"
    but that bull is so backwards, it'll have matadors chargin at him

    your the definition of being finished, man your through
    so if we jump to conclusions, we'll probably land on you
    intellect, image and meaning is what my verse has plenty
    your marked for 'depth' ...
    not cause we want you dead, it's cause you don't have any

    emotional baggage line too

    Props to both first of all...
    Both came wit fire, both dropped heat and the battle was close it could go either way i liked both n shyt but damn its hard right now to say who won i think ima have to go wit mag seph had a few lines that were hit and miss and mag didnt have many

    vote-mag

    good battle tho, whoever wins deserves it
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  16. DannyC

    DannyC Stay golden, pony boy.

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    5-3 seph
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    Rezor_X New Member

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    LINES OF THE BATTLE





    they'll call me a pimp when i beat this whore stupid.
    the best line you ever had....i had.....2 weeks before you did





    bitches like you are simple, whining and fussing away
    with enough emotional baggage to hold up customs for days

    dude stays writing a book like it'll get him some clout
    you'll only get 'best cellar' ...
    ............... cause its cleaner then the rest of your house




    Vote = Seph

    Seph took this one pretty easily. I've seen much better from Magus. I'm not sure what Mag was smokin before he posted but he needs to stay away from that shit. He's much better than the verse he posted this week. Seph came decent at best. I know he's better than what he posted this week as well. Bottom line, you're both better than what you posted but Seph came with the fresher verse and better overall lines.


    I was kind of picky about the rhymes this week. However some of the lines in this battle DID NOT RHYME. I try way too hard to make sure my rhymes are accurate. There's no way I'm letting shit like mention/interest filler/finish slide.
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  18. RYDOGG

    RYDOGG I've been a Beast b

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    the mods even punk you cause they know you a clown
    but Mag was done way before Grimet said "I'm posting it now"
    your style's bitchmade, it's like Versace invented dude
    you wouldn't do Jack, unless he was standing right next to you

    vs.

    they'll call me a pimp when i beat this whore stupid.
    the best line you ever had....i had.....2 weeks before you did
    you'll never make it to the top..i watched you..no joke
    half of ya wins are no show verses...the other half no shows

    vote - seph

    he just was more complex and his shit hit harder
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  19. DannyC

    DannyC Stay golden, pony boy.

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    I was just rereading this and i gotta put my two cents in. If you dont want to count you dont have to, but...

    I thought for real in my heart of hearts, even though we dont get along, magus took this. the guy's got some talent, as well as seph, fa sure no doubt.

    but magus comes with some personals that are just like where the fuck did that shit even come from.

    im not breakin it down line for line, i read it 3 times.

    v-magus
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  20. Porno_Lady

    Porno_Lady Educated and Beautiful

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    This battle was so dope I didn't even want to pick a winner. I'm going back over both verses right now before I pick....


    okay, back

    this is definitely battle of the week type material, so many quotables in this match


    you wont make it, you suck in text and it's blatant.
    cheer up tho.
    you get to go from riding the pine to interior decoration.
    so if it's votes youre aiming for..better get ya people.
    cuz seph is so super bad, he wont need evan for a sequel.
    they'll call me a pimp when i beat this whore stupid.
    the best line you ever had....i had.....2 weeks before you did
    it's no secret..i didn't try this week..you'll need to wait.
    and if my verse is sketchy...then yours are fingerpaint.
    you'll never make it to the top..i watched you..no joke
    half of ya wins are no show verses...the other half no shows.


    this shit right here was just straight flames, and I was feeling Mag's personals the most. He had good flow and a lot of hard hitting lines

    but Servical came through with fire also

    you shouldn't be in the RBL, your scrypts THAT boring
    cause 30 lines of nothing belongs in the sig check forum
    dude stays writing a book like it'll get him some clout
    you'll only get 'best cellar' ...
    ............... cause its cleaner then the rest of your house
    ^ see i can write like you, and do it from start to finish
    but then i'd have to explain why 28 of my bars are filler
    trying to compensate for quality, them tactics is foul
    his verse's Napoleon complex could boost France's morale


    and

    bitches like you are simple, whining and fussing away
    with enough emotional baggage to hold up customs for days


    and that clown outfit line were fire also, at first read, I thought magus had it, but then after a 2nd read, Servical was just too relentless, honestly it could have went either way, and this IS what the championship should have been like but wasn't, I felt Mag was more original with his approach and style, and had hard hitting personal, but Servical came hard straight from the opener and did hard punchline after another, I would like to see these 2 go at it again in the future

    good battle to the both of you

    Vote- Servical
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