3. RBL Contendership Match: 3. Oneduh 4-0 vs 4. Eyedill 7-0

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  1. Axe Sent

    Axe Sent S T F UPPERCUT!

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    lol are you serious.. ima edit my vote in here after class... 50 minutes..
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  2. .Epical.

    .Epical. New Member

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    word, well..

    both came aiite, I got Oneduh on top of this cos he did come with more punches that were appealing, Dill came aiite.. some coo concepts.. some of em simple and eh.. One had some coo punches but also filler.. in the end .. the standout punches do the better deal.

    Don't even hafta pull out to see this wanksta get smoked
    Soon all that oil in ya pours will lead to Bush invadin ya dome
    -coo shit.

    V/ one

    straight battle.
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  3. Mentull

    Mentull Open Your Mind...

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    one...


    I don't know what's worse, the fact that you're taking his help
    Or that Cale's ghosting for you cuz he scared to face me himself
    Nice open..
    Erased your loss by winnin the cypher, but now you got problems
    It takes more than 2 good lines to keep One out of your loss column
    Feelin it...
    You needa invest in proactiv & make showers a routine
    If we take looks into account, your face value is dirt cheap
    Aight...
    Don't even hafta pull out to see this wanksta get smoked
    Soon all that oil in ya pours will lead to Bush invadin ya dome
    Heh..
    Bitches NEVER put out for Dill, he has to fuckin force it
    By telling them to touch it so much... it sounds like bustas chourus
    Not bad...
    Your girl stays on her knees for me, it's not even challengin now
    You'd have to ask what's tasty for Oneduh's dick to come outta her mouth
    Meh..
    Dont get me wrong, she's no prize.. but her ass
    Can be considered one, when I'm around its always up for grabs
    Not feelin it..
    Besides, you prefer men.. finding ways to suck them harder
    Just to get shot in the face by a dick like Chaneys hunting partner
    Aight...
    Jook wrote everything for Odin, ur lame & a joke
    But I guess u did half the work....... aim'n for votes
    Decent...
    Stop claimin ya dope, why would I write for you
    When I can win with leftovers from the site battle you weren't even invited to
    Good closer...


    eyedeal...


    Oh, U got the passion?.. well, they say I'ma lord livin',
    & u make the god look so good, they call u mel gibson,
    Aight...
    Matter fact, i can see ya wack as a rapper,
    U got the signs to show it.. & everything else by ^^ that actor,
    And a Lethal Weapon??... it was a good concept though...
    But ya got women? naw, u was born gay, this kid's soft,
    See, he was jumpin' for balls in the beginnin'.. like tipoffs,
    Good...
    On top of that ya poor, i got money.. buy cars & ride what's hot,
    But with u.. kids only say ya couped up cuz ya stay inside alot,
    Good...
    U fuckin loser.. ya punches ain't hittin', u're a by-stander,
    They confuse me with chris lambert, cuz every punch is a highlander,
    Not bad...
    That's why ya fulla frustration, so think before use all filler,
    Cuz i gotchu in a death situation.. like i'm the jigsaw killer,
    Not feelin this...
    I'ma god, provin' ya undefeated streak's a fraud,
    The only reason u made it this far.. is cuz u're a mod,
    Meh...
    So now ya dope? please.. take care of yaself & fuckin' quick,
    I gotta job.. he's gotta white collar, but it's from suckin' dick,
    AIght...
    I'll win with sheer ease.. drop the act, & stop witcha theory's,
    U tryin to be somethin ya not, like the new black white series,
    Good...
    & quit flippin lines.. stop actin' like u king fool,
    I guess it's hard for u to control yaself, like cool j's single,
    Decent...


    vote: oneduh...

    He stayed more consistent throughout the entire verse and I thought his good punches hit harder than eye's.
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  4. krisp

    krisp aka PhsyKris

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    ok Oneduh.. i think that these are the only good lines in the hole verse. i don't think any of those cock, or banging his girl lines were anygood really... for a text battle that is... opener was cool, that "one outta loss column " was fucking hot... the zit jokes made me laugh... and the closer was a cool personal.... overall 6/10.

    as for eyedill...

    im not going to repost your best lines, cause they were all about the same weight so to speak.... i like the way you used alot of wordplay and metaphors... tho oneduh did the same i felt yours were better, maybe not by a landslide, but better... it was more text freindly i guess.... oneduh's verse would of crushed you in an audio battle... but the thing is it's a text battle obviously ... so because of you having more consitant punches and wordplay .ALSO.. onduh used alot more fillers then dilly did.... i wanted to cocksmack dilly for the mod line... it was garbage.... but he didn't use as many as oneduh did...so with this being said.. im giving it to??????

    vote-EYEDILL
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  5. Hair Line

    Hair Line New Member

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    v/One

    he had better wordplay, harder punches and it seemed like he was talking down to his opponent like dill was a piece of shit...makes the disses seem grimier, Dill had some solid lines but his best lines couldn't match up with One's best lines n overall he was more consistent with it

    good battle by both
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  6. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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    Vote - Oneduh

    Oneduh:

    I don't know what's worse, the fact that you're taking his help
    Or that Cale's ghosting for you cuz he scared to face me himself
    Hahah, hot opener.
    Erased your loss by winnin the cypher, but now you got problems
    It takes more than 2 good lines to keep One out of your loss column
    Nicely worded.
    You needa invest in proactiv & make showers a routine
    If we take looks into account, your face value is dirt cheap
    I thought this could have been worded better for harder impact.
    Don't even hafta pull out to see this wanksta get smoked
    Soon all that oil in ya pours will lead to Bush invadin ya dome
    Nice.
    Bitches NEVER put out for Dill, he has to fuckin force it
    By telling them to touch it so much... it sounds like bustas chourus
    Seen this already.
    Your girl stays on her knees for me, it's not even challengin now
    You'd have to ask what's tasty for Oneduh's dick to come outta her mouth
    Cool.
    Dont get me wrong, she's no prize.. but her ass
    Can be considered one, when I'm around its always up for grabs
    Haha.
    Besides, you prefer men.. finding ways to suck them harder
    Just to get shot in the face by a dick like Chaneys hunting partner
    Nice.
    Jook wrote everything for Odin, ur lame & a joke
    But I guess u did half the work....... aim'n for votes
    Nah.
    Stop claimin ya dope, why would I write for you
    When I can win with leftovers from the site battle you weren't even invited to
    Nice.

    Eyedill

    Oh, U got the passion?.. well, they say I'ma lord livin',
    & u make the god look so good, they call u mel gibson,
    Haha.
    Matter fact, i can see ya wack as a rapper,
    U got the signs to show it.. & everything else by ^^ that actor,
    Nice.
    But ya got women? naw, u was born gay, this kid's soft,
    See, he was jumpin' for balls in the beginnin'.. like tipoffs,
    Nah.
    On top of that ya poor, i got money.. buy cars & ride what's hot,
    But with u.. kids only say ya couped up cuz ya stay inside alot,
    Nah again.
    U fuckin loser.. ya punches ain't hittin', u're a by-stander,
    They confuse me with chris lambert, cuz every punch is a highlander,
    Okay.
    That's why ya fulla frustration, so think before use all filler,
    Cuz i gotchu in a death situation.. like i'm the jigsaw killer,
    I didn't get this, I'll be honest.
    I'ma god, provin' ya undefeated streak's a fraud,
    The only reason u made it this far.. is cuz u're a mod,
    Decent personal.
    So now ya dope? please.. take care of yaself & fuckin' quick,
    I gotta job.. he's gotta white collar, but it's from suckin' dick,
    This was fuggin hilarious, haha.
    I'll win with sheer ease.. drop the act, & stop witcha theory's,
    U tryin to be somethin ya not, like the new black white series,
    Nice.
    & quit flippin lines.. stop actin' like u king fool,
    I guess it's hard for u to control yaself, like cool j's single,
    Okay I guess.

    I feel that you fell off a little bit at the end. It was a hot verse though, some hard and nice punches.

    Good battle.
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  7. Contemplate

    Contemplate New Member

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    Oneduh:
    I don't know what's worse, the fact that you're taking his help
    Or that Cale's ghosting for you cuz he scared to face me himself
    haha owned...
    Erased your loss by winnin the cypher, but now you got problems
    It takes more than 2 good lines to keep One out of your loss column
    hah ok
    You needa invest in proactiv & make showers a routine
    If we take looks into account, your face value is dirt cheap
    clever
    Don't even hafta pull out to see this wanksta get smoked
    Soon all that oil in ya pours will lead to Bush invadin ya dome
    decent
    Bitches NEVER put out for Dill, he has to fuckin force it
    By telling them to touch it so much... it sounds like bustas chourus
    lol where do u get this shit
    Your girl stays on her knees for me, it's not even challengin now
    You'd have to ask what's tasty for Oneduh's dick to come outta her mouth
    eh could be better worded
    Dont get me wrong, she's no prize.. but her ass
    Can be considered one, when I'm around its always up for grabs
    ok
    Besides, you prefer men.. finding ways to suck them harder
    Just to get shot in the face by a dick like Chaneys hunting partner
    hahaha
    Jook wrote everything for Odin, ur lame & a joke
    But I guess u did half the work....... aim'n for votes
    nice
    Stop claimin ya dope, why would I write for you
    When I can win with leftovers from the site battle you weren't even invited to
    strectehd but nice

    Eyedeal:
    Oh, U got the passion?.. well, they say I'ma lord livin',
    & u make the god look so good, they call u mel gibson,
    wack
    Matter fact, i can see ya wack as a rapper,
    U got the signs to show it.. & everything else by ^^ that actor,
    hahaha
    But ya got women? naw, u was born gay, this kid's soft,
    See, he was jumpin' for balls in the beginnin'.. like tipoffs,
    ohhh clever
    On top of that ya poor, i got money.. buy cars & ride what's hot,
    But with u.. kids only say ya couped up cuz ya stay inside alot,
    aiiitee
    U fuckin loser.. ya punches ain't hittin', u're a by-stander,
    They confuse me with chris lambert, cuz every punch is a highlander,
    decent
    That's why ya fulla frustration, so think before use all filler,
    Cuz i gotchu in a death situation.. like i'm the jigsaw killer,
    this sucked
    I'ma god, provin' ya undefeated streak's a fraud,
    The only reason u made it this far.. is cuz u're a mod,
    aren't you a mod?
    So now ya dope? please.. take care of yaself & fuckin' quick,
    I gotta job.. he's gotta white collar, but it's from suckin' dick,
    HAHAHAHAHAHA SHHIIIITT
    I'll win with sheer ease.. drop the act, & stop witcha theory's,
    U tryin to be somethin ya not, like the new black white series,
    hahah ok
    & quit flippin lines.. stop actin' like u king fool,
    I guess it's hard for u to control yaself, like cool j's single,
    bad closer

    nice tight battle if it came to choosing the best line i'd give it to eyedeal but oneduh was much consistent putting up good line after line..very tight.. um
    eyedeal went from hot lines to straight wack it was like the roller coaster line he used... eyedil came up just short

    v:eek:neduh
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  8. in fo

    in fo New Member

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    v/1 duh

    reason 1 was more consistent better with punches and had better wordplay had haymakers instead of jabs it seemed like Eyedill wasnt shit that how he made it seem
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  9. Vote oneduh

    oneduh:

    I don't know what's worse, the fact that you're taking his help
    Or that Cale's ghosting for you cuz he scared to face me himself
    Aight.
    Erased your loss by winnin the cypher, but now you got problems
    It takes more than 2 good lines to keep One out of your loss column
    I liked that.
    You needa invest in proactiv & make showers a routine
    If we take looks into account, your face value is dirt cheap
    Nice.
    Don't even hafta pull out to see this wanksta get smoked
    Soon all that oil in ya pours will lead to Bush invadin ya dome
    A bush line.. always good.
    Bitches NEVER put out for Dill, he has to fuckin force it
    By telling them to touch it so much... it sounds like bustas chourus
    played.
    Your girl stays on her knees for me, it's not even challengin now
    You'd have to ask what's tasty for Oneduh's dick to come outta her mouth
    ahhh.
    Dont get me wrong, she's no prize.. but her ass
    Can be considered one, when I'm around its always up for grabs
    nice.
    Besides, you prefer men.. finding ways to suck them harder
    Just to get shot in the face by a dick like Chaneys hunting partner
    Nice.
    Jook wrote everything for Odin, ur lame & a joke
    But I guess u did half the work....... aim'n for votes
    played.
    Stop claimin ya dope, why would I write for you
    When I can win with leftovers from the site battle you weren't even invited to
    Nice.

    eyedill

    Oh, U got the passion?.. well, they say I'ma lord livin',
    & u make the god look so good, they call u mel gibson,
    Nice.
    Matter fact, i can see ya wack as a rapper,
    U got the signs to show it.. & everything else by ^^ that actor,
    Nice.
    But ya got women? naw, u was born gay, this kid's soft,
    See, he was jumpin' for balls in the beginnin'.. like tipoffs,
    I liked it.
    On top of that ya poor, i got money.. buy cars & ride what's hot,
    But with u.. kids only say ya couped up cuz ya stay inside alot,
    No.
    U fuckin loser.. ya punches ain't hittin', u're a by-stander,
    They confuse me with chris lambert, cuz every punch is a highlander,
    heh.
    That's why ya fulla frustration, so think before use all filler,
    Cuz i gotchu in a death situation.. like i'm the jigsaw killer,
    Coulda been worded better.
    I'ma god, provin' ya undefeated streak's a fraud,
    The only reason u made it this far.. is cuz u're a mod,
    no.
    So now ya dope? please.. take care of yaself & fuckin' quick,
    I gotta job.. he's gotta white collar, but it's from suckin' dick,
    nice.
    I'll win with sheer ease.. drop the act, & stop witcha theory's,
    U tryin to be somethin ya not, like the new black white series,
    Nice.
    & quit flippin lines.. stop actin' like u king fool,
    I guess it's hard for u to control yaself, like cool j's single,
    heh.

    oneduh had the hotter lines and was more consistent.. I think oneduh coulda won if he would have worded some of his lines better.. Close
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  10. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    Good battle guys, very close. Eyedill, shouldn't you be 7-1 considering your using Odin's record and I beat you? Not trying to rub it in or anything, just saw you saying you would be 8-0 if you won this. Good stuff nonetheless.
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  11. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Go Away newb.
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  12. Mets

    Mets 40 Cal. Ripken

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    oneduh

    Erased your loss by winnin the cypher, but now you got problems
    It takes more than 2 good lines to keep One out of your loss column
    You needa invest in proactiv & make showers a routine
    If we take looks into account, your face value is dirt cheap
    Bitches NEVER put out for Dill, he has to fuckin force it
    By telling them to touch it so much... it sounds like bustas chourus
    Dont get me wrong, she's no prize.. but her ass
    Can be considered one, when I'm around its always up for grabs
    Besides, you prefer men.. finding ways to suck them harder
    Just to get shot in the face by a dick like Chaneys hunting partner

    tight verse dude, i dont like how you sway all the time, ahaha. but you came dope in this match. that chaney line was hot. flow was good, half the verse was doep you cant ask for much more in a text battle these days. props homie.

    dill

    On top of that ya poor, i got money.. buy cars & ride what's hot,
    But with u.. kids only say ya couped up cuz ya stay inside alot,
    fuckin loser.. ya punches ain't hittin', u're a by-stander,
    They confuse me with chris lambert, cuz every punch is a highlander,
    I'll win with sheer ease.. drop the act, & stop witcha theory's,
    U tryin to be somethin ya not, like the new black white series,

    probaly the verse ive felt the most from you, you had some tight shit too. your shit is too simple for me sometimes though. had some good shit in the verse no doubt but it wasnt enough here. tight shit though.

    overall oneduh came about 4-6 line better than dill. tight match though, its doper than the champ joint.

    v/ oneduh
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  13. dizthachozen1

    dizthachozen1 ...free your mind...

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    oneduh
    I don't know what's worse, the fact that you're taking his help
    Or that Cale's ghosting for you cuz he scared to face me himself
    --ill...just ill
    Erased your loss by winnin the cypher, but now you got problems
    It takes more than 2 good lines to keep One out of your loss column
    --another rather dope line. as stated by most...well worded
    You needa invest in proactiv & make showers a routine
    If we take looks into account, your face value is dirt cheap
    --a lil funny...lil bit of wordplay
    Don't even hafta pull out to see this wanksta get smoked
    Soon all that oil in ya pours will lead to Bush invadin ya dome
    --i liked this, although i woulda liked it more if you chose words that were more rhyme inclined
    Bitches NEVER put out for Dill, he has to fuckin force it
    By telling them to touch it so much... it sounds like bustas chourus
    --since the first time i seen a punch using the new busta song as a concept, i knew there wasn't gonna be much more to it than this. it's not played only because the song is so new, so hundreds of cats haven't used it to death, but it's a lil uncreative for me
    Your girl stays on her knees for me, it's not even challengin now
    You'd have to ask what's tasty for Oneduh's dick to come outta her mouth
    --eh, a girlfriend punch that isn't all that metaphoric...ill-fated attempt at a punch. filler compared to the rest of the verse
    Dont get me wrong, she's no prize.. but her ass
    Can be considered one, when I'm around its always up for grabs
    -- better than the last bar...seemed like the first bar was a set up for this one. which meanst you wasted a whole bar for a set up...not good. effective way to stretch one punch, but sorry, not feelin it
    Besides, you prefer men.. finding ways to suck them harder
    Just to get shot in the face by a dick like Chaneys hunting partner
    --this is another one that doesn't have to be used a hundred time to lose it's affect. i like the way it's worded and all, but i just saw a good one either last week or the week before
    Jook wrote everything for Odin, ur lame & a joke
    But I guess u did half the work....... aim'n for votes
    --how many times do i have to read a punch about somebody aimin' for votes? if he did, don't make a punch about it, please...go another route...there are more effective/harder hitting punches you could've used
    Stop claimin ya dope, why would I write for you
    When I can win with leftovers from the site battle you weren't even invited to
    --flame ass closer. nice and personal. trying to strike a certain chord?...lol nice


    eyedeal
    Oh, U got the passion?.. well, they say I'ma lord livin',
    & u make the god look so good, they call u mel gibson,
    --okay opener
    Matter fact, i can see ya wack as a rapper,
    U got the signs to show it.. & everything else by ^^ that actor,
    --diggin it. although, whoever said something about 'leathal weapon' did have a point.
    But ya got women? naw, u was born gay, this kid's soft,
    See, he was jumpin' for balls in the beginnin'.. like tipoffs,
    --this is fire.
    On top of that ya poor, i got money.. buy cars & ride what's hot,
    But with u.. kids only say ya couped up cuz ya stay inside alot,
    --another fire ass punch. this as well as the last bar are very well worded
    U fuckin loser.. ya punches ain't hittin', u're a by-stander,
    They confuse me with chris lambert, cuz every punch is a highlander,
    --yeah...this nigga ain't playin around
    That's why ya fulla frustration, so think before use all filler,
    Cuz i gotchu in a death situation.. like i'm the jigsaw killer,
    --i don't know why niggas ain't feelin this one. i mean it could be worded a lil better, but all in all i like it.
    I'ma god, provin' ya undefeated streak's a fraud,
    The only reason u made it this far.. is cuz u're a mod,
    --aiight...tryin to get personal. nothin great here
    So now ya dope? please.. take care of yaself & fuckin' quick,
    I gotta job.. he's gotta white collar, but it's from suckin' dick,
    --,aybe if you woulda started with 'yeah he got a job',but aside from that, there's not a good punch here
    I'll win with sheer ease.. drop the act, & stop witcha theory's,
    U tryin to be somethin ya not, like the new black white series,
    --notta killer punch, but it was decent
    & quit flippin lines.. stop actin' like u king fool,
    I guess it's hard for u to control yaself, like cool j's single,
    --not as fire of a closer as your opponent, but it hit. you prolly wanted to try and end this a lil harder

    well i thought that there were way more lines in eyedeal's that hit harder than oneduh's. oneduh had that slum in the middle of the verse whereas eyedeal really didn't fall off at all. maybe a line here or a line there, but not in the big chunks like oneduh.
    this match was better lyrically and creatively than the championship straight up. both had flow. eyedeal was more consistent with the punch throughout though.so i'm givving this one to eyedeal. good shit both of yall. definately a good read.
    VOTE=EYEDEAL
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  14. yuppi

    yuppi da raisin

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    i read the first votes and i was shocked ... how did eyedill get a vote???????

    lol he got murdered

    the two president lines did it for me lol

    eye had a good verse... very consistent, but alotta lines came off as weak to me.

    v/ oneduh
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  15. Oliver TwiZt

    Oliver TwiZt King Of Italy

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    that nikka 1 got shitted on... dill came solid with even bars and nice punches


    vote= dill
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  16. .EyERaC.

    .EyERaC. QuesTionZ?

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    V/ Oneduh

    both had some good punches but one's were hitting alot harder. i liked eye's but one took this battle in every category. his punches were raw and personal so he got my vote.
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  17. Noobie Ned

    Noobie Ned i'm noo here

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    Good Battle .fellas

    Both Had Some Nice Punches But Also Some Gay Lines And Other Shit I Wasnt Feeling ..eyedill Had Some Cool Wordplay But Ondedu's Verse Struck Me As Better

    Vote =oneduh
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  18. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    shut the fuck up Oz, I was in this league for less than half the time you were, and won the title twice, and have also probably beaten many people that have fucking slaughtered you. I was trying to prove a point, I have no problems with Dill. I don't come with disrespect to you, so don't start talkin shit.
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  19. Banned Name

    Banned Name Rebel From The Waist Down

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    in all fairness, that was when the league was at its absolute weakest
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  20. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    Haha, yeah when Hens and Butler were champs.. I'm done freeposting, wasn't trying to start shit up with this, just thought I might get an answer to my original question. Peace.
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