3. Papermate 6-0 vs 4. Orbit 10-4

Discussion in 'RBL TOP 20' started by Serge dot T, Nov 20, 2003.

Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.
  1. Serge dot T

    Serge dot T Guest




    RBL Verses Due: Friday's:12 (Midnight-Eastern Time)
    RBL Voting Due: Sunday's:11.P.M (PM-Eastern Time)

    -Each battler is allowed to up their threads TWICE in a match.
    before the battler(s) is penalized -1 vote for each up after the
    entitled amount. Upping: (vote count,discussing votes,or just
    replying period)

    -You MUST vote on 6 battles EACH week & EDIT the vote links
    in your "check in" posts. Failure to vote on ALL 6 will result in a
    deduction of votes for the links you're missing. Meaning.. you
    drop 4 links, you LOSE 2 votes automatically.

    -No: Dickriding/ Favortism/ Crew/ Hate/ Unexplained Votes!!

    -RBL "Under 300 Posts" List: If an opponent has LESS than 300
    posts, check this list to see if his RBL name is on there. If not
    contact a mod, immediately.

    -Mininum Lines: 4 (2 Couplets)/ Max. Lines: 30 (15 Couplets)!
    Also, battlers MUST agree on the amount of lines to be written
    for each verse. If not, whoever drops first determines the MAX
    line amount. For example, If I drop 16 first, without agreeing
    my opponent cannot go MORE than 16 lines.

    -NO EDITING!!!! If your opponent comes and tell us you edited a
    verse, EVEN if it's only a fucking word or phrase, you're done &
    will be given an AUTOMATIC disqualifcation.

    -Late verses will result in an AUTOMATIC disqualification, don't
    even care if it's 5 minutes late. Even if s mod late with closing
    the no shows, the deadline will still be enforced. Yes, there are
    extensions..but you will be deducted 3 votes for recieiving one.

    -Closed battles are finalized. Unless the mod made a mistake in
    closing your thread, any problem regarding the battle AFTER it
    has been closed..you will have to deal with it. But../If the mod
    just messed up something, then it's cool for it to be changed.

    IF YOU BREAK A RULE, IT'S YOUR FAULT AND YOURS ALONE!!

    -The Rapmusic Battle League
    test
  2. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

    Joined:
    Oct 2, 2003
    Messages:
    463
    test
  3. orbit the great

    orbit the great another gay white kid

    Joined:
    Oct 6, 2003
    Messages:
    1,518
    yoyo keyboard check, 1,2 grrrrrr




    Truth be told...I got riders on me
    Enough to make paper fold to oragami
    Its astonishing, even a wonder
    How I got more fans on me than Rosanne in the summer
    Now im battlin three groupies that cant even rhyme
    Kids got me seein more pussy than they have in their life combined
    Hybrid, Invert, Lokk, whoever...aint a test
    Its obvious im the best...
    ...with more nerds on me at once than Everquest
    Im too dope to digest, ya verse...Ima ruin it
    And leave ya so embarassed...
    ...Youll hide your face more than the neighbor on Home Improvement
    Ya dome aint fluent, dudes a newbie fumbler
    Go back to the gutter...
    ...Since everybody knows 'Mate came from down under
    My flow is butter, all punches turn quotes
    The margin of victory will be so high I wont need to post votes
    Hope ya ghost, or if ya post its just filler
    Ya next ranking'll hithered...
    ...Cause im knockin three down the net like Reggie Miller


    o damn, 5 minutes takin down all ya prewrittens
    test
  4. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

    Joined:
    Oct 2, 2003
    Messages:
    463
    Home Improvement line - seen it. Down under line - seen it. Post votes line - seen it. Damn, you just proved everything in my verse.





    None of ya shits original, nor is it even close to perfect
    Ya writers blocks so big, it got a paper route & postal service
    Orbits a bald ugly midget, isn’t that clearly set out dude?
    You ‘adore’ ya bitch – she’d rather have one to get out through
    When storm wrote for you, we read harder text from Orb
    But history repeats itself
    Apparently yours cant recall what it said before
    Ya made a turn around? But ya shit don’t impress me fag
    Your only a Cinderella story cuz you clean my floors dressed in rags
    God said to kill you, he’s had it with gays
    So if ya strapped with a peace
    I’m strapped with Mormons and Latter-day Saints
    My concerts populate the arena, your crowds seat none that’s it
    I make each ‘Row Gain’ a fan – While your scalp needs some of it
    And ya all over Drinkin's balls, the facts is provin me perfect
    You love the Citizen so much, DS's dick started a community service
    And I know you hate seein storm insults, they tedious words
    I hate storm lines too– so why bother even readin ya verse?



    .. Militia is more like Salvation Army with those two pieces of garbage in it
    test
  5. Storm Bringa

    Storm Bringa Mad as Hell

    Joined:
    Aug 5, 2000
    Messages:
    9,515
    VOTE = Papermate

    Mate's verse was aight. Nothin too great. Standard verse. But Orb's verse was jus ass. The few punches that were in there were direct, but they dissipated before they could hit. You also stretched those bars more than a torture rack. The rest of the verse was straight filler.
    test
  6. NeQro

    NeQro Drunken Master

    Joined:
    Nov 9, 2002
    Messages:
    758
    Vote- Papermate

    Overall a harder verse in my opinion.
    test
  7. Whiz_Kid

    Whiz_Kid Registered User™

    Joined:
    Sep 4, 2003
    Messages:
    12,814
    Truth be told...I got riders on me
    Enough to make paper fold to oragami
    Its astonishing, even a wonder
    How I got more fans on me than Rosanne in the summer

    WTF?

    Storm didn't ghostwrite this.
    test
  8. UG MC

    UG MC Captain Zapp Brannagin

    Joined:
    Jul 26, 2003
    Messages:
    1,238
    wow.. was expecting much more, Orbit had aboslutely no word play, N his punches were simple as fuck. Whiiel Papermate came with a bunch of played shit, N one decent persoanl

    but- Paper edged it
    test
  9. Sur*5*ILL

    Sur*5*ILL Kangs

    Joined:
    Jul 16, 2001
    Messages:
    10,427
    Vote - Paper...

    Had Some Tough Stuff And Some Sketchy Stuff But He Still Raped This Kid...
    test
  10. Break it

    Break it TEXTACY

    Joined:
    Aug 24, 2000
    Messages:
    1,639
    My vote goes for papermate just overall better punches in this orbit didn't prepare himself for papercuts

    vote-papermate
    test
  11. Craven Moorehead

    Craven Moorehead Big Sloppy

    Joined:
    May 3, 2002
    Messages:
    759
    I got Papermate easy on this - flow and content outmatched Orbit by a long shit. His verse was up and down, but had some dope shit. Orbit's shit was real old - no real creative flips or anything. Just a bland verse.

    Vote: Papermate
    test
  12. Masyre

    Masyre New Member

    Joined:
    Jan 9, 2000
    Messages:
    1,148
    vote papermate


    read the verses!
    test
  13. Resen

    Resen Do i need a title?

    Joined:
    Aug 27, 2003
    Messages:
    1,387
    vote - papermate

    orbit had a cool verse, the opener was nice, papermate came cool some good lines some ok lines but enough to beat orbit
    test
  14. Worst Enemy

    Worst Enemy ex-rbl champ, so?

    Joined:
    Apr 26, 2001
    Messages:
    5,411
    Orbit got ate.

    Vote- Paper
    test
  15. Vern Acular

    Vern Acular 12x RSTL Champ

    Joined:
    Oct 10, 2001
    Messages:
    5,344
    paper mate > orbit
    test
  16. Donis

    Donis New Member

    Joined:
    May 15, 2003
    Messages:
    682
    Papermate took it.


    v - Papermate
    test
  17. S-M-O-K-E

    S-M-O-K-E DUH DUH DUH DUH!

    Joined:
    Jun 26, 2000
    Messages:
    24,553
    vote = papermater..

    but LOL @ how he dissed orbit for using old concepts when i used a writer's block line last week.. yeah man. real clever.
    test
  18. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

    Joined:
    Oct 2, 2003
    Messages:
    463
    Yea but nobody reads your shit.
    test
  19. S-M-O-K-E

    S-M-O-K-E DUH DUH DUH DUH!

    Joined:
    Jun 26, 2000
    Messages:
    24,553
    yeah, that could be why.
    test
  20. Gregory Rhymeston

    Gregory Rhymeston New Member

    Joined:
    Jul 12, 2002
    Messages:
    1,002
    Vote - Papermate, quite easily.

    Orbit not sure if tried or not but your verse was just blah, a maybe a good punch or two, everything else was played to all hell. Papermate just came more original, some real nice lines too. GL to PM next week.

    And if anyone one complains Im Formal Logic.
    test
Thread Status:
Not open for further replies.

Share This Page

Users Viewing Thread (Users: 0, Guests: 0)