2liner Tourney: Jai-Z Vs Bless

Discussion in 'the Onslaught' started by Nebz, May 31, 2005.

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  1. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    Lines due by WED.11:59 Eastern Standard Time.
    Votes will be Due by Saturday june 4th.
    You must vote on Atleast 5 other battles its only two lines.
    TWO LINES MAX go over and you will be Dq'd.
    No spammin the thread or you will lose votes as well.

    Good Luck and come out swinging.
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  2. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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  3. Jai-Z

    Jai-Z Bangem, Jai

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    Fuck knives and guns.. I'll put them to rest with ya soul
    have ya body so shot up, it'll be considered a centerfolds
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  4. Blessense

    Blessense a Kilo is 1,000 grams..

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    Nice cliche.


    Slut. I throw punches. Crowds throw up hands n cause wreck.
    Ya gut gets punched....
    ....This Bitch is throwing up sons & daughters.
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  5. Blessense

    Blessense a Kilo is 1,000 grams..

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  6. Everybodys_Nig4ya

    Everybodys_Nig4ya New Member

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    both of you were lacking

    but vote=Bless

    Jai didn't make sense....you said you'll put the guns to rest......next line you talkin bout how many shots you given him.....
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  7. onblast

    onblast New Member

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    Yeah, Jai's setup was kind of contradictory. Without any wordplay to connect it in a funny way, that's a minus. The second line didn't spark much either. Bless kind of did a cum line. And I just keep missing the rhyme somehow, maybe it has to do with accent, IDK.

    Tie.
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  8. Tremendou$

    Tremendou$ The Best Out

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    Vote - Jai

    Bless you didnt make sense at all to me, and the wordplay was forced..and Jai your punch wasnt hard either
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  9. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    blah...

    vote=jai

    eventho his shit wuz contradictin it made more sense than bless' line...plus I cannot figure out how tha fuck cause wreck and daughters rhyme...
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  10. Grandiose

    Grandiose five large

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    vote- bless

    jai ur shit was in conflict, bless ur shit was forced rhyme. bless had the better punch tho. which i guess is what this comes down to. a punchline tourney.
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  11. Grandiose

    Grandiose five large

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    not feelin either...i barely laughed...
    wording wuz jacked up, n ya ideas were dated...

    vote=bless...he said she swallows...
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  12. Ninja Kid

    Ninja Kid AKA Jae Keeps

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    vote- jai,

    blesses shit didnt rhyme, or flow...
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  13. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    Rise Up
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  14. Extreme Venom

    Extreme Venom Well-Known Member

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    My Sentiments exactly.. what the hell was that A freeverse Punchline??

    Vote= Jai

    not only did her line make sense & hit harder but the shit rhymed.. Thats forefront shit..
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  15. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    rotf @ this motherfucker not rhyming any words
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  16. LDogg The King

    LDogg The King The High Life

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    vote jai.. both sucked
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  17. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    Jai Z moves on
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