29.maddest of Men 1-0 Vs 30.Nu-Sense 1-0

Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Nebz, Oct 5, 2003.

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  1. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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  2. Maddest of Men

    Maddest of Men Just Call Me Madman

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  3. Nu-SeNsE

    Nu-SeNsE WHERE THE $$$'S COME FROM

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    HERE'S MY TOPIC.....

    9.you have just jumped off a skyscraper and you are plummeting towards the ground... what's going through your head?-Kon

    HOLY SHIT, WHY THE FUCK DID I DO THIS
    I WAS SO CONFUSED, WHAT ABOUT THE BUISNESS
    I'LL BE GONE TO MY WIFES RELIEF
    IM SO SELFISH I WISH THIS WAS ALL MAKE BELIEF
    THE BITCH IS SLEEPIN AROUND I FOUND HER LETTERS
    AND IT WASNT MY AFTERSHAVE...SMEARED ALL OVER HER SWEATER
    THE GROUNDS GETIN CLOSER WITH EVERY THOUGHT I THINK
    THIS SHITS GONNA HURT....30 SECS I'LL BE EXSTINCT
    FUCKIN CRAZY I DIDNT THINK I WAS THIS 'ILL'
    SHOULD'VE TAKEN THE EASY WAY....SHOULD'VE TAKEN THE PILLS
    THIS FEELS LIKE A LIFETIME WAITIN TO HIT
    OH NO!... WHEN THEY FIND ME IM GONNA SMELL OF SHIT
    JUST FILLED A DIPER AND PISSED MY PANTS
    I CAN ONLY IMAGINE MY ENEMIES CRUEL CHANTS!
    MY KIDS WILL BE BULLIED 4 THE DAD WHO HAD WEAK BLADDER
    THINKIN OF THEIR FACE WHEN THEY SEE ME ONLY MAKES ME SADDER
    DROPPIN LIKE A BOMB WAITIN TO EXPLODE
    UNLIKE DOC DRE I AINT GONNA HAVE A "NEXT EPISODE"
    WHERES MY PEN I'LL TRY TO WRITE A NOTE
    AHH STUPID AS FUCK I LEFT IT IN MY COAT
    IT DONT MATTER IM SCREAMIN LIKE HELL
    IF I WAS TURTLE I'D BE HIDIN IN MY SHELL
    IM JUST LIKE A PUSSY SOAKIN WET
    I HOPE HALF WAY DOWN I FALL INTO A NET
    I DONT WANNA DIE I JUST WANT LOVE
    IM GOIN INTO THAT PHASE NOW...AWW LOOK 2 TURTLE DOVES
    SEEIN SHIT THAT AINT EVEN THERE....
    THE ONLY THING I CAN FEEL IS THE COLD ICY AIR
    5 STORIES LEFT THEN ITS SPLAT
    WHY WAS I SO DEPRESSED I AINT EVEN FAT!
    I SHOULD'VE AT LEAST SHOT MY BOSS
    TO LATE NOW.... THATS MY LOSS
    IMPACT NOW,OVER IN A FLASH
    LOOK UP AS MY SPRIT AND I SEE SOME1 DASH
    RACE TO THE TOP TO OF THE BUILDING LOOK WHAT I FIND
    JUST LIKE TONY MONTANA IN SCARFACE "I WAS KILLED FROM BEHIND"
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  4. Nu-SeNsE

    Nu-SeNsE WHERE THE $$$'S COME FROM

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  5. Maddest of Men

    Maddest of Men Just Call Me Madman

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    20. You've been murdered. After death you have a chance to come back and do what you feel needs done..so what would that be? Tell someone or do something yourself? Room for creativity...-Mac



    My death is something I don't wish to discuss here
    Got killed when I wasn't looking by my brother who shed no tears
    He killed me to pay off his debts for his gambling addiction
    I said I'd let him borrow the money, but he wouldn't listen
    And I passed from existance without much interaction
    Justice not carried out, to my Mom's satisfaction
    But as a ghost with my existance not complete
    I got the chance to carry out one last deed
    So I sat and I pondered how I'd go about my plan
    Thinking so quickly my thoughts rapidly ran
    And under the cover of night, I went to carry out my last act
    But revenge wasn't it, it was love as a matter of fact.
    For killing my brother would have made nothing right
    So what did I accomplish on that somber winter night?
    I walked into my old house, and went to my old bed
    And I walked up to my wife, and I kissed her on the head
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  6. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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  7. Dah Alpha Male

    Dah Alpha Male New Member

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    grrrr...

    this has to be a close battle... fuckers.. lol


    Nu-
    I see some potential... I liked the aftershave line.. lol, overall a good performance..

    Maddest-
    I really enjoyed that short, but good verse... you played it like you were gonna off your brother.. strong performance...


    VOTE= MADDEST OF MEN
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  8. SamGoodY

    SamGoodY trully inspired...

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    maddest of men.... solid short verse... one of the most solid short verses i ever read. actually touched me dog... real sincere.
    nu, verse was aight, but simple rhyme scheme is what did you in here....
    vote=madman
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  9. SIN2

    SIN2 as we speak

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    NU-u came correct.....but ya verse was simple...and its hard to pick a good ending to that so i wasnt feelin it.....tha ending that is....u had some iight imagry...tha flow was nice 2...

    Maddest...like they say short and solid....but i didnt really feel it....u needed to keep it goin...so vote.....

    Nu
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  10. LDogg The King

    LDogg The King The High Life

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    nu'sense.. the story was coo.. went along ok..one thing that i didnt like was the use of cap lock.. but i guess falling from the air would be sorta extreme and acceptible for such thing.

    although mom (lol) had a short piece.. it was straight forward and complete. maybe even a little to simplistic.. ending was so so.. but i can tell u got potential for writing a great piece.

    vote mom

    best of luck to you both.
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  11. Den-S

    Den-S .:.The Chosen One.:.

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    yeh i felt both could have done more wit their topics...Nu, you had some nice lines but I dont feel you developed the topic well enough...

    MoM had one of the best short topic verses I've seen in a long time...contained emotion and imagery, had nice vocab and flow and structure...I felt that he developed his topic more through his verse than Nu-Sense did...

    vote= MoM
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  12. Nu-SeNsE

    Nu-SeNsE WHERE THE $$$'S COME FROM

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    4-1 that was a dope piece mom i have to admit....
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  13. prophetional

    prophetional hokey muh-fuckin' pokey

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    this to me reminds me of a 3 round knockout in damn good fight. not to take away from the talent of the opponent in any way, shape or form, but mom just landed that beautiful, never seen it coming, cross and hook, right on the sweet spot early in the fight, and just like that... ding ding ding... it's over...

    vote= m.o.m.
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  14. WiSDoM

    WiSDoM I t0k yer wifes virginity

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    this battle was decent..nusense u could of came a lot better with it..u were simplistic in the telling of the story..content was weak in sum points..had a couple good lines..like player said, there is some potetional..keep it up..and just come more correct next week..str8 verse

    Mom- verse was average..but it was enough to beat nu..felt what u had to say, short and sweet to the point like everybody said..nice decent drop..ur flow was the best aspect of the verse...

    vote = mom
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  15. Gummo

    Gummo New Member

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    Vote: Maddest of Men

    ... Had the style I liked, sense, your verse wasnt bad but when i read a verse it just wasnt what i look for and enjoy while i read. had some great points and topics flow was exact, but just felt like it need MORE.. MORE MORE... maddest, your verse was nice, right to the point, and easy and enjoyful read.. overall not a bad battle. keep it up
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  16. WHITETRASH

    WHITETRASH New Member

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    i don't know wat u guys r thinking but NU was a way better rapper in this.....who cares if he didn't use big words.....his rap was actually entertaining... and i love the aftershave part man ..that was tight...

    vote=NU
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  17. Tha Talent

    Tha Talent , Tha Master.

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    this was simple.
    NuSense told a mediocre story, but he didn't tell it well
    everything was so basic.
    didn't entertain me

    Maddest of Men told a mediocre story
    but he showed skill in telling it
    and he entertained me somewhat.

    quality of quantity
    vote=Maddest of Men
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  18. Nebz

    Nebz R.I.P. Point Game

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    m.O.m Wins
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