29. Concise 0-0 vs. 30. Eternalpath 0-0

Discussion in 'Rapmusic.com Battle League' started by Oneduh, Nov 13, 2006.

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  1. Oneduh

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    RBL Rules & Regulations.

    -Duedates-
    All Verses due FRIDAY night 12:00am Pacific
    All Voting (5 votes) Due Sunday Night 8:00pm Eastern
    (Voting is considered open until Mods close matches)

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    agree on an amount with your opponent
    in your check in. if no agreement is reached
    2nd person to drop must match the 1st person who dropped
    (2nd person can drop less but NOT more)

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    vote deduction if no links are posted at all.
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    One vote must be cast in either Contender or Championship Match, and Labeled as such.
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  2. Concise.

    Concise. New Member

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  3. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    14....i'll drop tomorrow most likely
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  4. Concise.

    Concise. New Member

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    ight 14 it is ..

    Im new to RM, but getting a name quick, and my werds are true
    its a shame you been here three years n still no1 heard of you
    now vote for me., im not swaying the debate just displaying ya fate
    cuz i'll simply flip your whole verse in one line by saying its great
    Come-on now.., this girl is a known slut probally with a list of std's
    i'll beat you w/ eaze, so keep your legs closed when i say 'bitch please'
    Your not a mc, everything about you is fake so i'll pull out ya weaves
    strangle u with em and dig a hole in ya path n bury ya with twigs n leaves
    dont take it personal plz..im gentleman, so i'll give ya a chance
    by posting and letting everyone know i won three days in advance
    EP? nigga you cant see me..i'll build a tee-pee on ya Path freely
    its like a deadend cuz im staying there till the day you beat me
    Im confident with my verse.. start staring at my text streak
    cuz this shit is over and im already preparing for next week



    yup yup..
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  5. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    This kids a rook..approached me with them straight lines..
    next time we hear about you..will be on dateline..
    around your neck shine?..fool's gold.. change your dreams..
    it seems at least we know..your trying to gain green..
    turn it up..concise?..never heard the name..
    your verse? like blondes..never used your brain..
    So your new around here? well shhhhh let me speak..
    you remind me of Artest..U should retire after the 1st week...
    don't get testy..I'll leave you dropped and gone..
    one slip up-your head'll crack like a runner in a marthon..
    this shorty wants to ride..so cise better be ducking..
    You can catch back shots..but I'm not talking fucking..
    plus your WACK..and I'm alergic to trash..
    As soon as you posted...I broke out in a rash...


    14


    got to dust the rust off its been a long azz time....
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  6. Out Write

    Out Write New Member

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    Concise,

    now vote for me., im not swaying the debate just displaying ya fate
    cuz i'll simply flip your whole verse in one line by saying its great
    ^^nice line, best part of ya verse

    Rest was decent, had some alright stuff in there...

    Eternal, sorry man I wasnt really feelin ur stuff, U didnt have any real punchlines, U got potential tho stay up.... Keep practicin' and you'll get better soon

    vote- Concise
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  7. The Royal Penis

    The Royal Penis God.

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    dont take it personal plz..im gentleman, so i'll give ya a chance
    by posting and letting everyone know i won three days in advance
    EP? nigga you cant see me..i'll build a tee-pee on ya Path freely
    its like a deadend cuz im staying there till the day you beat me
    Im confident with my verse.. start staring at my text streak
    cuz this shit is over and im already preparing for next week

    this was a nice way to finish a verse...


    This kids a rook..approached me with them straight lines..
    next time we hear about you..will be on dateline..
    around your neck shine?..fool's gold.. change your dreams..
    it seems at least we know..your trying to gain green..
    turn it up..concise?..never heard the name..
    your verse? like blondes..never used your brain..

    this is a decent start here... you just fell off after that..

    Concise was Consistant..

    Vote-Concise
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  8. DustrO

    DustrO Who Is I

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    Concise=good flow, a few good punches, good ending overall=78

    EP? nigga you cant see me..i'll build a tee-pee on ya Path freely
    its like a deadend cuz im staying there till the day you beat me
    Im confident with my verse.. start staring at my text streak
    cuz this shit is over and im already preparing for next week
    I like the ending good job

    Eternal=good flow, only couple good punchline not bad though overall=73

    This kids a rook..approached me with them straight lines..
    next time we hear about you..will be on dateline..
    best lines

    Winner=Concise
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  9. Concise.

    Concise. New Member

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  10. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    now vote for me., im not swaying the debate just displaying ya fate
    cuz i'll simply flip your whole verse in one line by saying its great
    dont take it personal plz..im gentleman, so i'll give ya a chance
    by posting and letting everyone know i won three days in advance

    vs

    nada.

    v/concise. i was feeling those punches up there. three days in advance was pretty funny with a wack setup though. and e-path, i know you can drop better. ive read better from you.

    decent battle, pz.
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  11. Are aye wy

    Are aye wy See what happens?

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    Vote-concise
    Was expecting more from eternal since she's been here for a while seen her improve though. Con just had a better verse, flat out and more consistant. Had some cool lines in there too.
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  12. kungfugrip

    kungfugrip New Member

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    pretty weak battle.

    to be honest, i wasn't really feeling anything in this battle, but Concise had funnier lines to me and was a little more consistent, even though it was consistently average.

    v/ Concise
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  13. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Concise wins.
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