27. ill nik-a (3-0) vs 28. Craven Moorehead (3-0)

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  1. U S E R

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  2. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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  3. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    I’m a legend, u won some matches but facing me...u regret it/
    Cuz u painted urself into a corner & now I'm using ur blood to detail the edges/
    Imma relay the message, u a born mistake who deserves to get tortured,
    & all good things go unpunished…why u think ur mom works in the corner/
    While u servicing boredom, she’s playing hooky, working to push me,
    & I’d give u a dose of ur own medicine but u’re allergic to pussy/
    Look C…I’ll let u take the first hit it in…u’re no real menace/
    Cuz when u make a move…only bums feel threatened/
    No question, U actually think u got what it takes to give me the L?
    Don’t let ur mind wander off, its too small to be outside by itself/
    Better cry out for help, & ask ur fellow Canadians for support/
    Out came Owen Hart to the rescue & fell first face on the floor!!
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  4. Craven Moorehead

    Craven Moorehead Big Sloppy

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  5. Craven Moorehead

    Craven Moorehead Big Sloppy

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    Fuuuck - please grant me extension until tomorrow.

    :)
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  6. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Read rules!!
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  7. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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    Extension Granted

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  8. Craven Moorehead

    Craven Moorehead Big Sloppy

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    This is whut happens when a cuban steps up.....


    I love smoking Cubans – plus I love toking that bomb grass
    Did I say smoking Cubans? I meant sticking my dick in your mom’s ass
    I remember you on HipHopHeads – you were as whack as they came
    Basically you sucked on HHH like Stephanie McMahon back in the day
    Members will cheer and give props when they see that I’m dope
    Ill nik-A will scream Yay’ too – but only when he’s fiendin’ for coke
    If I win you’ll say that I cheated, but fag, you’s really a loner
    Look, sucka, the only string to be pulled is the one when ya period’s over
    Trash is all you spit – bahahahah, I’m lovin’ it, dummy
    I’m so good, bitch, I could give Stephen Hawking a run for his money
    And that’s sayin’ a lot since the guy’s a paraplegic
    You darin’ me, bitch? Watch, I’ma win…I guarantee it ;)
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  9. .Ra.

    .Ra. New Member

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    Vote - Craven.

    The HHH line won it basically.
    Funnier verse...
    Period line was nice too...
    Good battle.
    pZ.
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  10. Mr. E

    Mr. E I play for the team I own

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    Vote- Craven

    Yes that HHH line was sick. ill nik-A sorry man but you had a lot of played concepts. You flipped them nicely but it was nothin new really. Craven came fresh and had basically a better verse all around. Cool battle though.
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  11. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    Craven

    I love smoking Cubans – plus I love toking that bomb grass
    Did I say smoking Cubans? I meant sticking my dick in your mom’s ass
    -ehh, this was an ok start.. nice concept for an opener, but i wasnt feeling the punch too much, not a far cry from just another momma joke.. but it was aiight

    I remember you on HipHopHeads – you were as whack as they came
    Basically you sucked on HHH like Stephanie McMahon back in the day
    --congradulations, this is about the 2nd wrestling punch i have ever liked lol.. for real, I think the concept is normally pretty week and the flips sound 'newbie'ish' a lot of times, but this was pretty nice, good personal too.. cool shit

    Members will cheer and give props when they see that I’m dope
    Ill nik-A will scream Yay’ too – but only when he’s fiendin’ for coke
    .........aiight aiight, havent heard it before, pretty coo.. borderline personal i s'pose.. funny

    If I win you’ll say that I cheated, but fag, you’s really a loner
    Look, sucka, the only string to be pulled is the one when ya period’s over
    ......ehh some how this concept has been getting a lot of use lately.. the string/tampon thing.. it has a little room to be flipped tho, u had one of the nicer flips of it, but since i have been seeing it a bit lately it didnt have the impact it woulda otherwise..

    Trash is all you spit – bahahahah, I’m lovin’ it, dummy
    I’m so good, bitch, I could give Stephen Hawking a run for his money
    ........aiight.. to be real man, run for ur money shit is played in this context too.. yours was a lil nicer because you mentioned someone specific, normally its just flipped like 'make u a paraplegic n try to gimme a run for my money'.. type shit.. but it was aiight

    And that’s sayin’ a lot since the guy’s a paraplegic
    You darin’ me, bitch? Watch, I’ma win…I guarantee it ;)
    ........lol i dunno man, i wasnt feeling this for an ender.. overall you had a couple real nice lines and a couple decent flips on some more played concepts but coo verse..



    ill nik-A
    I’m a legend, u won some matches but facing me...u regret it/
    Cuz u painted urself into a corner & now I'm using ur blood to detail the edges/
    .....nice start, pretty decent imagery.. I think a lil touch-up on your wording and you coulda made this a lil more vicious.. but it was a pretty nice punch, didnt really have the feel of an 'opener', so it mighta fit nicer somewhere in the body of ur verse, but it was nice nonetheless

    Imma relay the message, u a born mistake who deserves to get tortured,
    & all good things go unpunished…why u think ur mom works in the corner/
    .....this was a dope concept i thought man, cool shit.. BUT i think that you could have flipped it even nicer man.. the good things go unpunished was a nice lil pun to work off of, and then being in the corner is cool too.. But it has more of a context with 'kids' being sent to the corner.. by the end of your punch, you indirectly say his mom is being punished since she's in the corner, and in turn, she is getting punished, so she must not be a 'good thing'.. but i think it woulda been nicer if you flipped it into HIM or his skills not being a good thing.. maybe his career is getting cornered.. or he's cornered.. or deaths around the corner heh i dunno, but cool idea anyway man..

    While u servicing boredom, she’s playing hooky, working to push me,
    & I’d give u a dose of ur own medicine but u’re allergic to pussy/
    .....nah playa, dose of ur own medicine has been flipped over and over, and allergic to pussy type 'ish just really doesnt impress me anymore.. but really, you are saying his medicine is pussy.. and he's allergic to it.. what does being allergic to pussy really even mean.. i mean, even fags arent ALLERGIC to pussy, y'kno what im sayin? i wasnt really feeling this one..

    Look C…I’ll let u take the first hit it in…u’re no real menace/
    Cuz when u make a move…only bums feel threatened/
    ....eh, this was ok.. i see what your getting at with the move/bum connection, but it really wasnt all that hard hitting punch-wise.. Maybe if you brought it into reference in your setup it woulda been more wooooh'ish.. i guess by even mentioning he's poor or something, or ur rich with skills or anything of the like.. this was aiight

    No question, U actually think u got what it takes to give me the L?
    Don’t let ur mind wander off, its too small to be outside by itself/
    .....lol, i was feeling this one.. ur punch was simple enough, but it was still to the point and pretty funny.. coo..

    Better cry out for help, & ask ur fellow Canadians for support/
    Out came Owen Hart to the rescue & fell first face on the floor!!
    ......naah.. like i said in the above breakdown i dont really dig wrestling punches normally.. i think warbux or someone once said 'i can drop off the dome harder than owen hart'.. so really, having heard that before, this punch was way in the shadow of it.. i didnt really dig it much for an ending especially.. Overall though, you had some nice stuff too man.. ur opener was pretty cool, second bar was prolly the best in your verse.. i really thought the concept was fresh but you coulda come thru with it a little nicer.. if you had flipped it a little different i think it woulda been the punch of the battle..


    vote- craven

    why? hmm.. i dont know.. the triple H line was really the KO punch i guess.. I honestly think that it was by far the best punch of the battle, and then following that was ill nika's corner line.. I think if craven didnt have the hhh line that ill nika woulda taken this probably.. But Craven, tho a handful were cuban jokes, kept it more personal a lil, and that helped him edge it.. that all being said, i think ill nika is still going to get this if its minus seven votes off the bat for craven lol.. aiight stuff here tho boys, pc...
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  12. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    Vote-Craven

    I just felt his shit a lil more...this was a nice battle and both came pretty good...i just liked the HHH punch by Craven and also the Yay too line...those were both nice...Nik-A had the works on the corner line that i liked...this was a hard vote but i just felt Craven's lines hit slightly harder so he gets my vote
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  13. Craven Moorehead

    Craven Moorehead Big Sloppy

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    4-0. Let's get a couple mo'.
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  14. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    Shiiit. I love readin both these heads, and my boy Craven surely didnt dissapoint. DAMN!

    Both verses were tight, I was just feelin Craven's more in this battle. Nice shit though, Craven you little bastard needs to get on AIM though.

    LMAO @ The Stephen Hawking line, that shit was pure gold. Lovin it. Nice battle by two very ill heads though.

    Vote - Craven Moorehead


    .if you could, return the favor - the battle aint gettin much views : http://board.rapmusic.com/showthread.php?t=664460
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  15. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    vote - craven moorehead

    that stephen hawking line was fuckin ill

    and that stephanie mcmhaon line was nice too. fire verse
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  16. Craven Moorehead

    Craven Moorehead Big Sloppy

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    Quick question: since when are drugs harmful?
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  17. 2krukid

    2krukid Unregistered User

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    lol @ stephen hawkings

    nik got that usual clever shit, but dang craven killed it with the steph lines

    vote craven moorehead. nice battle.
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  18. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    love me biatches!!

    Good shiat Canada,
    u still know last time i was robbed


    pz & die!!
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  19. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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    [Craven Moorhead] wins

    Holla!!
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