27 Dr Cause 9-3 vs 28 Ashen Horse 9-3

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  1. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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  2. Dr.Cause

    Dr.Cause Peep The Sig

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    who are you?


    10 lines...im down to do more if you want
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  3. Ashen Horse

    Ashen Horse Ashen Horse

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    I'm the RBLVIS beyotch!

    no for real though... I was going to go 10-12... its up to you
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  4. Dr.Cause

    Dr.Cause Peep The Sig

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    ditch ya body leave you in the middle of no where,word son-
    cuz Ashen Horse?sounds like a shit kicker if i ever herd one-
    battles i bomb it,Cause is going atomic-
    if your verse didnt need such a clean up....
    no one would ever COMETon it-
    take my nuts and palm it,battles ima trouble you-
    you could have cali love...
    but genst me still cant throw up a W-
    im comming threw,ashen is pretty weak tho-
    unzip my pants....
    beat you with a big head till it matches your ego-
    splurgin,the doctor repping this i watch you faint-
    winning?you need to pull a miracle out ya ass....
    and i wouldnt call OZ's cock a saint-
    he thinks he hot but think,they comming at em-
    "your the next Vinilla Ice"
    ehhhhhh i guess he didn't catch the sarcasim-


    12 linnnnnes in this what-what


    drop soon
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  5. Ashen Horse

    Ashen Horse Ashen Horse

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    ?? [funny]

    This RBLs my pimpin business, and bitch you're goin out tonight...
    to fuck- up one of your wack ass beats with this wack ass text you write...
    I was doin it when you were grounded- dreamin battle fame dreams...
    Wanna be a legend? Cement your ankles and throw you in the mainstream...
    I'm not here to discontinue your soundclick, which'll be obsolete...
    Your voice is muffled... confidence troubled, it sounds like you read off a sheet...
    Cause's verse is like a suicide bomber, won't live to see the effects...
    I'll stand in place, you suck at text, audio, What you gonna do sign language next?
    5 minutes till you're blind to the deaf, but don't look back in anger...
    Cause everyones laughin at you, your cheap ass mic-n-how you said it was "gangsta"...
    Yeah, like, the Grounded Gangsta, get that user name! but then...
    After this you're loggin out, and beggin them to take your computer away again...

    go on with your cum lines... soundin like Paul Hamm on helium...
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  6. SmokaJoka666

    SmokaJoka666 PostmorteM

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    Dr. Cause's Overall Verse: 29/60
    Overall:
    You came nice in two lines....and decent in two...and compete ass in two...matter of fact..the only lines I really disliked are the opener and closer...and the Cali. line looks really familiar...but I can't remember where it would've come from...so bleh...


    Ashen Horse's Overall Verse: 27/60
    Overall:
    80% of your damn verse was based on his audios.....you had alot of personals, but you didn't put good use to them....you had mostly average lines the whole time



    Vote - Dr.Cause
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  7. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    this was disgusting really, but doc cause had a bit of a swagger goin on


    he gets it
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  8. Andrew`

    Andrew` fascinoso

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    What I liked from Dr Cause

    ditch ya body leave you in the middle of no where,word son-
    cuz Ashen Horse?sounds like a shit kicker if i ever herd one-
    battles i bomb it,Cause is going atomic-
    if your verse didnt need such a clean up....
    no one would ever COMETon it-
    splurgin,the doctor repping this i watch you faint-
    winning?you need to pull a miracle out ya ass....
    and i wouldnt call OZ's cock a saint-


    what I liked from Ashen Horse

    I was doin it when you were grounded- dreamin battle fame dreams...
    Wanna be a legend? Cement your ankles and throw you in the mainstream...
    5 minutes till you're blind to the deaf, but don't look back in anger...
    Cause everyones laughin at you, your cheap ass mic-n-how you said it was "gangsta"...

    ^first lacks wording though...

    Down to what I didn't like...I'd say the ego line from Dr Cause was meh to the fullest. Ashen Horse had the sheet and sign language that just didn't land.That bomber concept could of been used as a punch if you could of set it up properly.Your closer also could of been hilarious if you had used it differently....


    Vote Dr Cause
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  9. Haides

    Haides All In That A$$

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    I really dont know what the hell ya'll be basing your votes on... Ashen Horse's verse was way harder then the other dude... Neither had a hard ass punch but overall I was feeling Ashen's more... it just floed better and had more potency... But thats just me... I respect everyones opinion...

    Vote- Ashen Horse
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  10. FLAMES.

    FLAMES. dboy fresh.

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    I really didn't liek anyone's verse much.

    Though I'd have to give it to Dr. for the same reason I.deal did, the Swag.

    & for his verse seeming to be a lil' more educated & thought out.

    This really wasn't a good showing for top 30 battle guys.

    Sorry.

    Vote-Dr. Cause, for a wordplay.. if I had to "COMET on it"
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  11. Dr.Cause

    Dr.Cause Peep The Sig

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    ^ohhhhh that is just poontang

    bleh i guess cali lines are played out by now :-/
    and thanx for peeping my audios/threads ass-hen ;-)


    ughhh that make it like 4-1
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  12. Ibeechur Moms

    Ibeechur Moms IF

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    vote= dr.cause

    ashen had too many bad personals that needed to be worded better....Dr.cause at least made an attempt to be clever
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  13. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    vote = Dr. Cause
    way better in the sense of writing better

    flow
    punches
    creativity
    more appealling


    all lines had potential, but Dr. C worded them better
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  14. hardhat harry

    hardhat harry Watch yah Head

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    DAMN COMETon SHIT ILLLyoDOPE
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  15. Dr.Cause

    Dr.Cause Peep The Sig

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    ^are you drunk?
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  16. ill pav

    ill pav New Member

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    Vote dr

    Cheah
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  17. john hensley

    john hensley 7xRBL

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    ehh, not feelin this battle too much...

    Doc basically just came better in this one, the comet line was forced but still it was creative. Ashen was just too basic for this.
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  18. Con God

    Con God New Member

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    vote = dr cuase.... shit was pretty nice. had quite a bit of lines i liked. ash came decent but the lines really didnt have that creativity that I was looking for. you two cats stay up and keep doing ya thing. both got potential
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  19. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    vote-dr cause

    he just came with the better verse...ashen was sorda ehish....nothin really made me go lol or w/e...

    anywase...dr got this
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  20. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    lol @ Disgusting
    Dr Cause Wins
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