27. Butler 8-2 vs 28. Dark Nebula 6-2

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  1. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Tone down the complaining PLZ :)
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  2. IgloS

    IgloS Eye Glows

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    I don't see why butler is getting so much hate... he had a hot verse...his style is simple and raw.. a good battle style... but so is dark's... however.. dark had 1 2 many butler name flips for me and they really got tiresome... I think butler took it

    v-butler
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  3. Etch is a G

    Etch is a G The Forefront Kid

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    Wow... Butler ripped his ass bad... most of Dark's verse was filler and not really hittin too hard... and I loved the "alter ya face" line... shit was mad dope...

    Anyways v- Butler...
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  4. Complete Chaos

    Complete Chaos I'm Drugs.

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    Butler:
    i woulda said to match me, but that ain't probable
    cuz
    judging by ya last battle, that would be impossible..
    ---ehh, alright, nothin special
    you drop spots while i beat these hoes..
    shit the only good rank u'v ever seen, signed out weeks ago..
    ---didn't like
    i'll serve ya dumbass, Butler's text is hell..
    my shit'll have u droppin' more stories then the RSTL..
    ---alright, didn't really get how that dissed him too bad tho
    theres no question my toast'll burn this faggot
    the clips'll alter ya face so much, i'll fuckin preach a sermon at it..
    ---pretty good, been done, but alright
    kid i could beat u just on nameplays, throwin out puns
    cuz wit a name like Dark?..... ya goin down sun..
    ---son/sun stuff is ehh
    fuckin.. i'm gonna leave a pop in ya heart
    i don't kno who the hell u are, ..so here's a shot in the dark
    ---decent, he's probably heard this before
    i'm so pissed u better watch ya children
    Dark's verse may be decent, but i doubtfire like robin williams
    ---decent, coulda been a little better
    you suck dick, nobody likes ya prose.
    he knew he had to show the god respect, so he sacraficed his flow..
    ---lol, this was better
    in terms a' skill i'd say this guy is empty..
    so i'm gonna fuckin push ya wig back.. to 1960
    ---noo
    I'll spit a round to ya mother's ribs
    my shit's hot, urs is fuckin chilly.. kinda like usher did
    ---decent, doubt it's a direct bite

    overall not bad, a lot of decent stuff, no real holy shit lines but not the worst showing in rbl

    dark:
    Wup ya ass til it’s bleedin… ya soars and gashes are leakin
    cuz the Butler didn’t listen when his master was speakin
    ---no, master's don't beat butlers. woulda worked if his name was slave.
    My laughter’s increasing…. you thought we’re concerned what you think
    We’re just waiting for you to do your job and serve us our drinks
    ---c'mon, anyone could write these typa lines
    You taking shots in the Dark… cus your vision is blinded
    Put Nut used that on me already and you’ve just bitten his rhymin
    ---shitty wording, decent reversal
    Whatever the case it’s fair to say you’re not as tough as you’re wishin
    Not even on the list of suspects cuz this Butler ain’t did shit
    ---fuckin sucked
    You’re big and you’re wak… you need to just submit to the facts
    This bitch is so fat….. he has double D cup tits on his back
    ---pretty good fat joke
    While you’re making ya hobbies include one for escaping ya body
    You’ll be needing a brain transplant and a tape for Palates
    ---ehhh
    Butthead votes under different names to try and fake his scores
    Cuz this fag has more Identities than Jason Bourn
    ---basic
    Switching from Butler to his real position of being the maid
    Along with Mario’s Bros but even those fools can see they’ve been played
    ---so are video game/played lines
    Uninstall ya hopes and download an anti-virus for failures
    Then upgrade your life in the bars and apply as a waiter
    ---alright i guess
    fuck you… I’ll save a couple lines to finish the blow
    like this crackhead Butler does wit that shit in his nose
    ---crack's usually smoked through the mouth, but the blow shit was alright i guess

    not a good verse at all really, not top 30 worthy

    v- butler, even his played stuff was worded better and more effective than dark's. Both came pretty weak, dark came much weaker. Butler wins.
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  5. .Ess-Ess.

    .Ess-Ess. a lost cause

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    Wup ya ass til it’s bleedin… ya soars and gashes are leakin
    cuz the Butler didn’t listen when his master was speakin

    lol..dont know why i found that so funny..

    but vote - dark space or whatever

    close shit...but dark had a few stronger lines..while butler had problems wording some of his punches..decent battle.
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  6. DIVINITY FLOWZ

    DIVINITY FLOWZ New Member

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    most of you bitches aren't even in the rbl and some of you are fuckin newby ass niglets... get the fuck outta here stupid

    YOU CAN'T VOTE IN THIS IF YOU AREN'T IN THE RBL... GO AWAY

    lmao

    that leaves the score a bit different....
    regret, wizerd and stoopid aren't in the league.. .so it's 5-3 butler...
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  7. Deadly Weapon

    Deadly Weapon Fuck off

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    face it, butler rips kidz.
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  8. spooky tooth

    spooky tooth nigglet

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    I can't even beleive Dark Nebula is debating the votes and shit.. you have GOT to know that you lost this battle kid. No bullshit.
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  9. DIVINITY FLOWZ

    DIVINITY FLOWZ New Member

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    Why are all you new bitches even posting in here....

    I know that I killed this bitch... but I know that this league is full of fagots that hated on Lyrical S so whatever... keep hating bitches... it seems to be what yall do best anyway


    pz out
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  10. Richard Corey

    Richard Corey battle like a savage

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    DaRk NeBuLa, Oneduh, dicnyaeye, if any of you ACTUALLY think that Butler 'bit' that line...you have to be out of your COT DAYUM minds! That has got to be the dumbest damn thing I've ever read on this site...

    Butler:

    i woulda said to match me, but that ain't probable
    cuz
    judging by ya last battle, that would be impossible..


    this was cool, I get it, but still nothing overly explosive to me...

    you drop spots while i beat these hoes..
    shit the only good rank u'v ever seen, signed out weeks ago..
    i'll serve ya dumbass, Butler's text is hell..
    my shit'll have u droppin' more stories then the RSTL..


    The 'rank' line was pretty nice...the RSTL line was cool...

    theres no question my toast'll burn this faggot
    the clips'll alter ya face so much, i'll fuckin preach a sermon at it..
    kid i could beat u just on nameplays, throwin out puns
    cuz wit a name like Dark?..... ya goin down sun..


    the 'alter' line was fuckin' vicious...and the 'goin' down son' line was heated. Pretty witty, flipped an entire phrase. You're starting to warm up now...

    fuckin.. i'm gonna leave a pop in ya heart
    i don't kno who the hell u are, ..so here's a shot in the dark
    i'm so pissed u better watch ya children
    Dark's verse may be decent, but i doubtfire like robin williams


    okay...here's the butler I know. Ill shot in the dark line, but I wonder how many of these name plays will work on him, such an easy name to diss. The doubtfire line was illness...

    you suck dick, nobody likes ya prose.
    he knew he had to show the god respect, so he sacraficed his flow..


    eh...didn't like this..

    in terms a' skill i'd say this guy is empty..
    so i'm gonna fuckin push ya wig back.. to 1960
    I'll spit a round to ya mother's ribs
    my shit's hot, urs is fuckin chilly.. kinda like usher did


    Wig line, okay. But the 'chilly' line seemed very obvious, still it was ill to me, and obviously everyone else who voted on Butler's verse. Overall, shit was cool, ill in spots, especially near the end. I like that you didn't wear out the 'nameplay' thing. Coulda came sharper in the beginning, but let's continue.

    Lyrical Sorcery:

    Wup ya ass til it’s bleedin… ya soars and gashes are leakin
    cuz the Butler didn’t listen when his master was speakin


    pretty mean. Simple. But still mean. But remember, just like his nameplays had to have been obvious on 'dark' the same goes for a concept as easy to manipulate as 'butler.'

    My laughter’s increasing…. you thought we’re concerned what you think
    We’re just waiting for you to do your job and serve us our drinks


    I like the rhyme carry-over into this bar. Lyricism isn't dead, damnit! but again, the punch is just mean. Nothing more. And with such an obvious, easy concept, that's not that good. No wit, just insult.

    You taking shots in the Dark… cus your vision is blinded
    Put Nut used that on me already and you’ve just bitten his rhymin


    OKAY, HOL' UP! HOL' UP! How come ain't nobody said nothing about him playing off of Butler's verse! Come on now! I'm kinda happy Butler's ahead in the vote count, if Dark won by pulling something like this it'd be a bigger tragedy than when I.Deal recycled a quarter of his verse and 'beat' me in the RBL title match! You gets no points for this...hell, in fact you lose some...

    Whatever the case it’s fair to say you’re not as tough as you’re wishin
    Not even on the list of suspects cuz this Butler ain’t did shit
    You’re big and you’re wak… you need to just submit to the facts
    This bitch is so fat….. he has double D cup tits on his back


    wait, is the Butler fat? Is this a real personal, or did you just make this up? Funny line tho, so either way...but you have a very straight forward style. A lot of mean disses, but nothing that shows you are anymore gifted in dissing an opponent than the average kid.

    While you’re making ya hobbies include one for escaping ya body
    You’ll be needing a brain transplant and a tape for Palates
    Butthead votes under different names to try and fake his scores
    Cuz this fag has more Identities than Jason Bourn


    Okay, these last four lines were just blah... I mean, really simple and not mean at all. And the mean diss was your bread and butter.

    Switching from Butler to his real position of being the maid
    Along with Mario’s Bros but even those fools can see they’ve been played
    Uninstall ya hopes and download an anti-virus for failures
    Then upgrade your life in the bars and apply as a waiter


    ew... again, really simple with tempered meaness. What does the Mario Bros have to do with anything? lol. Another thing that I think will hurt you, you hung to heavy on his name... Trust me...not just on other sites, but in the bottom 30 'butler' as a nameplay diss has been done to death... But you circumvented that by just hitting him with mean dissses..

    fuck you… I’ll save a couple lines to finish the blow
    like this crackhead Butler does wit that shit in his nose


    lmao! damn, took you long enough. But...possibly too little too late. I don't think that'll be enough. Butler had some ill lines that were ill because they were above what the average writer online can do. Dark had some lines that were nice, but because they were mean...but meaness can only go so far. Whether we want to admit it or not, this is still text. And being that this is text we have a lot more 'visual' freedom that we SHOULD exploit...

    I don't think Dark did, or could ever, do that as well as Butler did. He had some nice lines, but nothing folks who've read a Butler battle have seen before. Butler on the other hand 'doubtfire' 'going down, sun' and 'alter your face' lines were fresh in comparison. And in my opinion, I think Butler came wackashell, so....


    vote: Butler
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  11. Razah Aiyo

    Razah Aiyo New Member

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    Butler:
    i'm so pissed u better watch ya children
    Dark's verse may be decent, but i doubtfire like robin williams

    Corny, but ok, rest sucked.


    LS:
    You taking shots in the Dark… cus your vision is blinded
    Put Nut used that on me already and you’ve just bitten his rhymin

    Corny, but rest sucked.


    LS wins cuz he had better flow, both had one decent/corny line.
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  12. -Oz-

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    to the top
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  13. The Royal Penis

    The Royal Penis God.

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    i fucking knew you two fucks were the same person.. omg...you fucking faggot, had to alias vote in our fucking battle...


    you should be banned right now.. OZ...
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  14. -Oz-

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    Butler wins
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