27. Butler 8-2 vs 28. Dark Nebula 6-2

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  1. U S E R

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  2. DIVINITY FLOWZ

    DIVINITY FLOWZ New Member

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    I'm in..... going 16

    come as early as you want and I'll post when you do... otherwise I'm posting Friday

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  3. Butler

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    listen stupid..


    i woulda said to match me, but that ain't probable
    cuz
    judging by ya last battle, that would be impossible..
    you drop spots while i beat these hoes..
    shit the only good rank u'v ever seen, signed out weeks ago..
    i'll serve ya dumbass, Butler's text is hell..
    my shit'll have u droppin' more stories then the RSTL..
    theres no question my toast'll burn this faggot
    the clips'll alter ya face so much, i'll fuckin preach a sermon at it..
    kid i could beat u just on nameplays, throwin out puns
    cuz wit a name like Dark?..... ya goin down sun..
    fuckin.. i'm gonna leave a pop in ya heart
    i don't kno who the hell u are, ..so here's a shot in the dark
    i'm so pissed u better watch ya children
    Dark's verse may be decent, but i doubtfire like robin williams
    you suck dick, nobody likes ya prose.
    he knew he had to show the god respect, so he sacraficed his flow..
    in terms a' skill i'd say this guy is empty..
    so i'm gonna fuckin push ya wig back.. to 1960
    I'll spit a round to ya mother's ribs
    my shit's hot, urs is fuckin chilly.. kinda like usher did
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  4. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

    is that all you got.... lmao.. you're a joke... no pun intended

    Wup ya ass til it’s bleedin… ya soars and gashes are leakin
    cuz the Butler didn’t listen when his master was speakin
    My laughter’s increasing…. you thought we’re concerned what you think
    We’re just waiting for you to do your job and serve us our drinks
    You taking shots in the Dark… cus your vision is blinded
    Put Nut used that on me already and you’ve just bitten his rhymin
    Whatever the case it’s fair to say you’re not as tough as you’re wishin
    Not even on the list of suspects cuz this Butler ain’t did shit
    You’re big and you’re wak… you need to just submit to the facts
    This bitch is so fat….. he has double D cup tits on his back
    While you’re making ya hobbies include one for escaping ya body
    You’ll be needing a brain transplant and a tape for Palates
    Butthead votes under different names to try and fake his scores
    Cuz this fag has more Identities than Jason Bourn
    Switching from Butler to his real position of being the maid
    Along with Mario’s Bros but even those fools can see they’ve been played
    Uninstall ya hopes and download an anti-virus for failures
    Then upgrade your life in the bars and apply as a waiter

    fuck you… I’ll save a couple lines to finish the blow
    like this crackhead Butler does wit that shit in his nose
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  5. stOOpid

    stOOpid will lean ya maaan

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    butler
    i'll serve ya dumbass, Butler's text is hell..
    my shit'll have u droppin' more stories then the RSTL..
    theres no question my toast'll burn this faggot
    the clips'll alter ya face so much, i'll fuckin preach a sermon at it..
    you suck dick, nobody likes ya prose.
    he knew he had to show the god respect, so he sacraficed his flow..

    hehe ^ dope is dope

    dark
    Wup ya ass til it’s bleedin… ya soars and gashes are leakin
    cuz the Butler didn’t listen when his master was speakin
    ^nice.

    all the rest was ehh to me .. too many familar concepts..

    over all butler drop some fire shit and some solid shit and dark came sub par..

    vote butler
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  6. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

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  7. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    ^^^HAHAHAHAHA

    nah, i'm the butler.. dawgs

    and i like the way u posted under YOUR alias..
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  8. Con God

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    those lines fuckin roasted Dark. He didnt even need half those lines to win match. lmao @ robin williams, and fuckin chilly lines. Dark, step ya rap game up next week duke. Didnt see one line i liked from you but the butler flip, but I seen it coming a mile away.

    vote Butler... Not even close here
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  9. MANchyld

    MANchyld Guest

    lmao at all these fake ass votes... but ok black bitch...
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  10. Butler

    Butler New Member

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  11. Oneduh

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    "You can call my watch usher, cuz it's fuckin chilly"- Ave.

    Welcome to the banned list
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  12. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    well, i'v personally NEVER seen nor heard that shit before.. and didn't seem like any of the voters so far had..

    so, if ur trying to say I bit.. i definitly did not..

    and if ur trying to say my concept is the same, thats ridiculous.. becuz then EVERYONE on this entire site would be banned for similar concepts..
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  13. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    Butler
    i woulda said to match me, but that ain't probable
    cuz
    judging by ya last battle, that would be impossible..
    no...
    you drop spots while i beat these hoes..
    shit the only good rank u'v ever seen, signed out weeks ago..
    nah...
    i'll serve ya dumbass, Butler's text is hell..
    my shit'll have u droppin' more stories then the RSTL..
    up urself...blah...
    theres no question my toast'll burn this faggot
    the clips'll alter ya face so much, i'll fuckin preach a sermon at it..
    coo...
    kid i could beat u just on nameplays, throwin out puns
    cuz wit a name like Dark?..... ya goin down sun..
    nah...
    fuckin.. i'm gonna leave a pop in ya heart
    i don't kno who the hell u are, ..so here's a shot in the dark
    nah...
    i'm so pissed u better watch ya children
    Dark's verse may be decent, but i doubtfire like robin williams
    ok...
    you suck dick, nobody likes ya prose.
    he knew he had to show the god respect, so he sacraficed his flow..
    nah...
    in terms a' skill i'd say this guy is empty..
    so i'm gonna fuckin push ya wig back.. to 1960
    no...
    I'll spit a round to ya mother's ribs
    my shit's hot, urs is fuckin chilly.. kinda like usher did
    seen b4...blah...



    Lyrical Sorcery
    Wup ya ass til it’s bleedin… ya soars and gashes are leakin
    cuz the Butler didn’t listen when his master was speakin
    ok...
    My laughter’s increasing…. you thought we’re concerned what you think
    We’re just waiting for you to do your job and serve us our drinks
    ok...
    You taking shots in the Dark… cus your vision is blinded
    Put Nut used that on me already and you’ve just bitten his rhymin
    heh...
    Whatever the case it’s fair to say you’re not as tough as you’re wishin
    Not even on the list of suspects cuz this Butler ain’t did shit
    coo...
    You’re big and you’re wak… you need to just submit to the facts
    This bitch is so fat….. he has double D cup tits on his back
    got a smirk outta me...
    While you’re making ya hobbies include one for escaping ya body
    You’ll be needing a brain transplant and a tape for Palates
    nah...
    Butthead votes under different names to try and fake his scores
    Cuz this fag has more Identities than Jason Bourn
    ehh...
    Switching from Butler to his real position of being the maid
    Along with Mario’s Bros but even those fools can see they’ve been played
    ehh...
    Uninstall ya hopes and download an anti-virus for failures
    Then upgrade your life in the bars and apply as a waiter
    ok...
    fuck you… I’ll save a couple lines to finish the blow
    like this crackhead Butler does wit that shit in his nose
    nah...



    overall
    I got dark winnin this...butler had 2 ok lines...tha alter one and tha doubtfire...but he also upped himself and used sum lines I've seen done against dark b4...dark had a few more in my eyes so he wins...


    vote=dark

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  14. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    I'm not trying to say anything, I AM saying you're a fucking geek.

    You may continue to suck now
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  15. dicnyaeye

    dicnyaeye Guest

    lmao @ Butler... you actually bit that weak ass punch you fuckin idiot

    it's not like it matters anyway cuz you whole verse was wak ass filler, a p nut punch and obviously somebody elses punch too

    LS fuckin killed this faggot with this stanza

    My laughter’s increasing…. you thought we’re concerned what you think
    We’re just waiting for you to do your job and serve us our drinks
    You taking shots in the Dark… cus your vision is blinded
    Put Nut used that on me already and you’ve just bitten his rhymin
    Whatever the case it’s fair to say you’re not as tough as you’re wishin
    Not even on the list of suspects cuz this Butler ain’t did shit
    You’re big and you’re wak… you need to just submit to the facts
    This bitch is so fat….. he has double D cup tits on his back

    he didn't even need the rest of his verse

    Vote LS/DN
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  16. Sonz1

    Sonz1 Registration Please

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    i woulda said to match me, but that ain't probable
    cuz
    judging by ya last battle, that would be impossible..
    you drop spots while i beat these hoes..
    shit the only good rank u'v ever seen, signed out weeks ago

    theres no question my toast'll burn this faggot
    the clips'll alter ya face so much, i'll fuckin preach a sermon at it..

    i'm so pissed u better watch ya children
    Dark's verse may be decent, but i doubtfire like robin williams

    you suck dick, nobody likes ya prose.
    he knew he had to show the god respect, so he sacraficed his flow..

    ^^^ I thought all of these lines were pretty good...i dunno what everybody is talkin about....

    Dark:

    Whatever the case it’s fair to say you’re not as tough as you’re wishin
    Not even on the list of suspects cuz this Butler ain’t did shit

    ^^ only line I was really feelin from Dark...too many obvious name playes...like the first 4 lines...and the personals could've been reworded a lil better..


    I thought this was very one sided....

    If yall don't like the vote...tell oz not to count it...both of yall stop swayin...got damn

    vote= butler
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  17. Orthodoxx

    Orthodoxx Fuck you

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    Word, both were kind of wack to be honest.
    And Butler's shit ... I've seen half the concepts.
    Nebula came aight, nothing good..
    just overall harder punches.

    V/DN
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  18. DIVINITY FLOWZ

    DIVINITY FLOWZ New Member

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    No Bitch.. He's Not Saying The Simuliar.. He's Saying It's The Same Shit...

    You Fuckin Biter

    I Didn't Even Catch The One He's Talking Bout.... But That P-nut.. Shot In The Dark Line... Same Exact Wording Fag

    Like He Said... Continue To Suck Bitch
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  19. Butler

    Butler New Member

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    i guess its 3-3
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  20. wizerd

    wizerd the yze say fah-Q...

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    Butler...

    i woulda said to match me, but that ain't probable
    cuz
    judging by ya last battle, that would be impossible..
    eh... weak opener

    you drop spots while i beat these hoes..
    shit the only good rank u'v ever seen, signed out weeks ago..
    aiight, nice jab

    i'll serve ya dumbass, Butler's text is hell..
    my shit'll have u droppin' more stories then the RSTL..
    its a nice line but needed more of the falling out of a building reference in it... took me a min to figure the wordplay...

    theres no question my toast'll burn this faggot
    the clips'll alter ya face so much, i'll fuckin preach a sermon at it..
    lmfao

    kid i could beat u just on nameplays, throwin out puns
    cuz wit a name like Dark?..... ya goin down sun..
    nice wordplay, simple... but nice

    fuckin.. i'm gonna leave a pop in ya heart
    i don't kno who the hell u are, ..so here's a shot in the dark
    decent nameplay...

    i'm so pissed u better watch ya children
    Dark's verse may be decent, but i doubtfire like robin williams
    nice wordplay... good concept, but could you have reworded it without bringin robin williams into it? i unno... maybe jus me, but i don't like the use of celeb names in verses...

    you suck dick, nobody likes ya prose.
    he knew he had to show the god respect, so he sacraficed his flow..
    hahaha... now thas comedy...

    in terms a' skill i'd say this guy is empty..
    so i'm gonna fuckin push ya wig back.. to 1960
    filler, didnt like it at all really

    I'll spit a round to ya mother's ribs
    my shit's hot, urs is fuckin chilly.. kinda like usher did
    i don't get it, call me ignorant...

    punches were short, precise, on point for the most part... few fillers here n there but the majority of the verse was nice... didn't particularly like the opener, line before close, OR the closer... but the rest was nice enough to neglect 3 lines



    Dark Nebula...

    Wup ya ass til it’s bleedin… ya soars and gashes are leakin
    cuz the Butler didn’t listen when his master was speakin
    predictable

    My laughter’s increasing…. you thought we’re concerned what you think
    We’re just waiting for you to do your job and serve us our drinks
    kinda the same concept as last line?

    You taking shots in the Dark… cus your vision is blinded
    Put Nut used that on me already and you’ve just bitten his rhymin
    are you ever gonna diss this kid? I'm gettin impatient....

    Whatever the case it’s fair to say you’re not as tough as you’re wishin
    Not even on the list of suspects cuz this Butler ain’t did shit
    eh

    You’re big and you’re wak… you need to just submit to the facts
    This bitch is so fat….. he has double D cup tits on his back
    punch was funny, the setup for it is fuckin horrid...

    While you’re making ya hobbies include one for escaping ya body
    You’ll be needing a brain transplant and a tape for Palates
    eh

    Butthead votes under different names to try and fake his scores
    Cuz this fag has more Identities than Jason Bourn
    eh

    Switching from Butler to his real position of being the maid
    Along with Mario’s Bros but even those fools can see they’ve been played
    ... not een eh, this was jus wack...

    Uninstall ya hopes and download an anti-virus for failures
    Then upgrade your life in the bars and apply as a waiter
    ok...

    fuck you… I’ll save a couple lines to finish the blow
    like this crackhead Butler does wit that shit in his nose
    if you're gonna use a concept as simple as this, at least list the right drug.... if you tried to snort crack you'd plug your nostrils or some shit, and damn.... the drainage off that'd be brutal... but anyways... COKEHEAD if you have to use such a wack concept...


    honestly... i don't see how you got a vote... rhyme schemes tight, but the content is jus trash... one good punch in the whole verse and the setup almost fucked up any impact it had... now butler's setups weren't great, most weren't even mediocrely relevant... but they weren't wack...another good rule of thumb is to avoid calling someone butthead or fag... i must say though... never seen butthead in a verse cept for that ask beavis line... so at least it's original :)


    VOTE....

    hmm... tough one... but butler...
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