25. theFRANCHISE 5-1 vs. 26. Awtasee 5-2

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Awtasee

    Awtasee Your Favourite Celeb'

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  3. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    count 'em and match.......

    listen tough guy awtasee, quit flossin’ geek book a fight
    how can I take him serious this Dawson Creek look a like
    i’ll beat the proof with ease… kid barks and he blunders there
    the streak he claims he’s on are the skidmarks in his underwear
    prolly say I’m old and bald.. but enough of the silly shit
    heard you got your name since we awtasee how you really spit
    stutters, slurs, mumbles words and with a lisp he dreams
    that one day we’ll think he’s phat without the aid of krispy kremes
    see I’ll stop your run quicker than when you hear the ref’s whistle blow
    so you can kiss my ass and my tailbone contains no mistletoe
    franchise always keys his verses since it doesn’t pay to think
    you need to supplement your punches try centrum with A to Zinc
    awtasee is kind of chubby time to lose some blubber champ
    plus he’s beat up since I left him punched more than a rubber stamp

    another victory for theFRANCHISE..........
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  4. Awtasee

    Awtasee Your Favourite Celeb'

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    you gay liar…

    this kid was talking smack, imma gore this gay wack
    I’ll put stars around ya dome like where the cowboys play at
    and when I say that, and tell him ‘dont even diss me’
    cuz im above your control.. like ya mothafuckin shift key
    im about ta get shifty.. is this little bitch soft?
    when im gettin No L, and christmas is still a little bit off…
    and when ya friggin lost, and your a total wack disgrace…
    I’ll give you such a ‘maulin’.. I’ll open GAPs in ya face
    infact its distasteful, how I gave you mad hurt
    with ya stitched up lines lookin like yer fuckin plaid shirt
    you’re a bad jerk who thinks hes gassed, but not…
    he has talent on ‘mere’ levels.. like Russian astronauts
    ^^but that shit blew up, and I guess its swell
    Cuz hes a badly ending FRANCHISE, worse then XFL
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  5. TimmayB

    TimmayB Stay Up.

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    The Franchise:


    listen tough guy awtasee, quit flossin’ geek book a fight
    how can I take him serious this Dawson Creek look a like
    blah opener 2/5
    i’ll beat the proof with ease… kid barks and he blunders there
    the streak he claims he’s on are the skidmarks in his underwear
    Heh... aight 3.25/5
    prolly say I’m old and bald.. but enough of the silly shit
    heard you got your name since we awtasee how you really spit
    errrrr.... nah 1.5/5
    stutters, slurs, mumbles words and with a lisp he dreams
    that one day we’ll think he’s phat without the aid of krispy kremes
    decent 3/5
    see I’ll stop your run quicker than when you hear the ref’s whistle blow
    so you can kiss my ass and my tailbone contains no mistletoe
    dope concept, didn't use it right.... 2.25/5
    franchise always keys his verses since it doesn’t pay to think
    you need to supplement your punches try centrum with A to Zinc
    nothing outstanding 2.5/5
    awtasee is kind of chubby time to lose some blubber champ
    plus he’s beat up since I left him punched more than a rubber stamp
    Wow that's a bad closer.... 1/5

    Awtasee:

    this kid was talking smack, imma gore this gay wack
    I’ll put stars around ya dome like where the cowboys play at
    decent opener 2.5/5
    and when I say that, and tell him ‘dont even diss me’
    cuz im above your control.. like ya mothafuckin shift key
    okay, okay feelin that for sure 4/5
    im about ta get shifty.. is this little bitch soft?
    when im gettin No L, and christmas is still a little bit off…
    decent 2.5/5
    and when ya friggin lost, and your a total wack disgrace…
    I’ll give you such a ‘maulin’.. I’ll open GAPs in ya face
    ehhhhhhh.... tiiiiight flip 4/5
    infact its distasteful, how I gave you mad hurt
    with ya stitched up lines lookin like yer fuckin plaid shirt
    blah 1/5
    you’re a bad jerk who thinks hes gassed, but not…
    he has talent on ‘mere’ levels.. like Russian astronauts
    not feelin 1.75/5
    ^^but that shit blew up, and I guess its swell
    Cuz hes a badly ending FRANCHISE, worse then XFL
    dcent closer played though 2.5/5

    Vote -- Awtasee. Just a better verse. Neither was spectacular.
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  6. ~sincere~

    ~sincere~ New Member

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    like he said..neither was very hot...Franchise, I posted b/f fore you and flipped two lines that i said...whatever, maybe I'm buggin. Best line was the Krispy Kreme line...pretty hot.

    Awtasee had weak ass setups but saved them with clever punches, your checkmate was garbage though...but overall a pretty nice spit.

    vote=Awtasee.
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  7. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    Up' Over No Shows
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  8. Awtasee

    Awtasee Your Favourite Celeb'

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  9. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    hmmm..interesting battle

    i thought french eye's came pretty decent, YOU STILL NEED TO WRITE A VERSE FOOLIO....um, ya...nothing negative about his verse, some lines didnt hit others did

    awtasee- pretty cool verse as well, some played lines...cowboy's shit, shift key, no L,

    that gap line was aight, nothing real special...the plaid shirts line didnt work, and the russian line was wordplay for the sake of wordplay

    i gotta say vote french eyes...on a second read, awes verse was just filled with a bunch of lines i didnt like



    but, this is one man's opinion


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  10. Resen

    Resen Do i need a title?

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    cool battle, both came cool franchise came preety good awtasee came nice too i felt the noel line

    vote - awtasee
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  11. Resilient.

    Resilient. .. . ..

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    Eh battle to be honest.

    Franchinse - You had a weak verse. The only line I really liked, well the concept, was how you used his name as "Ought To See". That was clever. The lines itself sucked. The opener was wack. How do you know he looks like Dawson Creek Characters? Who from Dawson's Creek anyways? Very bland line. Flow was okay. YOu had some decent end-bar rhyming, but the lines sucked.. oh well

    Awtasee - I like the No L line, and that's about it from your verse. YOu tried too hard to diss him I thought, and you concentrated more on rhymescheme than you did on punches and personals. That was your only mistake. Concepts were okay, but you should re-word them a little bit. Your content sucked though. "Bad Jerk", "Mad Hurt", "Wack Disgrace" - being that you said wack about 30 times.

    Vote - Awtasee, though
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  12. Parable-Dot-Comm

    Parable-Dot-Comm New Member

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    vote- the FRANCHISE.. i feel he edged out aw in every area in this one.... more stand out lines to me..
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  13. Alamo IV

    Alamo IV God Has A Name!

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    Vote/Awatasee

    I was felling his punches hit harder than Franch
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  14. Break it

    Break it TEXTACY

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    awatasee just came out harder punches where connecting more than franchise flow was also on pt just an overall better verse

    vote-awatasee
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  15. Tri Optix

    Tri Optix erator

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    awtasee whooped a little ass in this one...surprised me actually..

    Franchise..blech..your setups to your punches need to make a little sense..looks like your just tryin to rhyme words..


    vote=awtasee
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  16. Dust-1

    Dust-1 seeeleyetee

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    vote - theFranchise


    felt he had a more solid verse


    that shift key punch of Awt's was nice tho


    but i felt Franchise had the edge

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  17. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    Vote-Awtasee

    I felt his maulin line...and the above control joint...some concepts were old but he also had a few nice joints

    i didnt feel fran this time around...didnt really have any standout lines
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  18. Retulen Reactus

    Retulen Reactus Text Legend.

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    vote-thefranchise

    had more lines i liked

    awtasee

    stutters, slurs, mumbles words and with a lisp he dreams
    that one day we’ll think he’s phat without the aid of krispy kremes

    that was horrible. that and your closer were "no." the rest of the verse was decent, only standout line to me was your opener, which was nice
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  19. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    Awatese Wins
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