25. Frame 6-1 vs 26. Dr. Cause 10-3

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  1. U S E R

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  2. Dr.Cause

    Dr.Cause Peep The Sig

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    finaly someone i can diss their name!


    ;-)

    im thinking 10-16

    your call
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  3. Frame

    Frame RBC Legend

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  4. Frame

    Frame RBC Legend

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    couldnt wait no longer


    you`ll never be a thug, faggot - you just a fraud to me;
    only time you`ll see a life sentence is in an auto biography/
    youza a gay kid from the burbs, ya mind in a sad place;
    cuz he thinks runnin with a crew of fags means he can drag race/
    so imma stomp the shit outta you till you quit ya rival act;
    and have you out the league quicker than J cee after a title match/
    also i been disapointed with rbl - ive been noticing flaws;
    so i asked why it was so whack, and oz just gave me the Cause/
    and i`mma end it today - when i father you, no use to run;
    cuz my gunz is like planets, watch the nine will circle you sun/
    and when it comes to spittin flames, you a tough cookie;
    cuz ya career been on the ice so long u make gretzky look like a rookie/
    plus you stay broke - always askin n.iggaz for cheddar;
    cuz da only time u controlled the rap game was playin def jam vendetta/
    even ya family hates you, cuz when i finally cool this dud;
    they decided to celebrate by playin marco polo in his pool of blood/


    WHAT UP WIT IT HOE, ahah s`all jokes my wegro


    Peeeeeeeeeace
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  5. Dr.Cause

    Dr.Cause Peep The Sig

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    Frame more like......SHAME oooooooooh


    yeah-yeah

    comming at your ass where the salid toss is-
    some people counts z's at night...frame counts his loses-
    going on the crosses,ditch you out in the cold-
    throw you down a cliff......NOW YOUR ON A ROLL!!!-
    around your soul,dickride?nah you cockblock-
    you aint getting past square one....
    like being one legged in a game of hopscotch-
    stop watch,your alias you should never of reped it-
    your on the same old sp!ce...
    and im talking about your music preference-
    quick to end this,blastin it and hey-
    it'll be more one sided than last minute school essays-
    getting messy,detach ya ass try and match me-
    if you say you eat MC's....
    then i guess today you desided to start fasting-
    I'll bend ya fram,so what you wanna smile bitch-
    you'll need so much bodywork...
    it'll put atleast 5 mechanics in early retirment-


    14 lines to get it over with

    thats a big 10/4 big buddy
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  6. Dr.Cause

    Dr.Cause Peep The Sig

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    ah,poontang

    i'll put my link hurrrr
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  7. Type Flow

    Type Flow New Member

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    vote-Frame easily

    simply outcassed this cause cat

    also i been disapointed with rbl - ive been noticing flaws;
    so i asked why it was so whack, and oz just gave me the Cause/

    that line ended it right there
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  8. Ibeechur Moms

    Ibeechur Moms IF

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    also i been disapointed with rbl - ive been noticing flaws;
    so i asked why it was so whack, and oz just gave me the Cause/
    and when it comes to spittin flames, you a tough cookie;
    cuz ya career been on the ice so long u make gretzky look like a rookie/
    plus you stay broke - always askin n.iggaz for cheddar;
    cuz da only time u controlled the rap game was playin def jam vendetta/

    ^^ that was all good from Frame...that def jam vendetta line was kinda a joe budden flip....sort of, so i didn't feel as much...im sure others might though


    quick to end this,blastin it and hey-
    it'll be more one sided than last minute school essays-


    stop watch,your alias you should never of reped it-
    your on the same old sp!ce...
    and im talking about your music preference-


    ....i disagree with opshins...i thought this was pretty close....but i felt Dr. Cause coulda worded shit a little better....

    like the opener...nobody counts Z's...they count sheep......prolly just a slip up..but whatever....the on a roll punch coulda been setup a little better for it to really have impact..

    anyways

    vote= Frame

    maybe if cause had an extra bar..or reworded his shit a little better...he woulda got the W...but frame pretty much had more punches i liked
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  9. The Royal Penis

    The Royal Penis God.

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    frame won pretty easily.


    decent top 30 match i suppose.
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  10. Dr.Cause

    Dr.Cause Peep The Sig

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    oooooh shit lmao

    yeah i ment counting sheep bwahahaha


    good shit frame
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  11. Donis

    Donis New Member

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    hmm


    frame took this....although, he might need to step it up with the creativity a bit to compete with some of the better heads in this league...had some good ideas, but also had some very simple ones (i.e., gretzky, drag race)


    still...this wasnt very close...


    v - Frame.
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  12. Junya

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    you`ll never be a thug, faggot - you just a fraud to me;
    only time you`ll see a life sentence is in an auto biography/
    youza a gay kid from the burbs, ya mind in a sad place;
    cuz he thinks runnin with a crew of fags means he can drag race/
    ...YOUCH!

    and im talking about your music preference-
    quick to end this,blastin it and hey-
    it'll be more one sided than last minute school essays-
    ...likin it

    vote - frame

    if Cause's whole verse came to the level of the quote above, it wouldve been a close one...but Frame's verse was just nasty, real real consistant
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  13. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    vote frame


    the style was a bit played out, but it was hittin consistently...


    nice verse duke
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  14. Frame

    Frame RBC Legend

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    thanks for the tips, ill try to come a lil harder next time



    good battle Cauuuuuuuuuuuse
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  15. Snikka

    Snikka Vision Action Execution

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    Frame,

    //cuz he thinks runnin with a crew of fags means he can drag race/

    nice

    //so i asked why it was so whack, and oz just gave me the Cause/

    nice

    //cuz da only time u controlled the rap game was playin def jam vendetta/

    hahaha


    those were my fav lines... solid verse tho.... the closer could have been better IMO...



    Dr. Cause


    //you aint getting past square one....
    like being one legged in a game of hopscotch-//

    lol

    //if you say you eat MC's....
    then i guess today you desided to start fasting-//

    good


    closer was aight....


    I think Frame took this, consistancy mostly.... both had some fillers in there (like Frame using gunplay ish) and Cause would hit off a good line and then like skip 2 before another good line.... So, IMO, Frame edged this one... stay up both.


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  16. Dr.Cause

    Dr.Cause Peep The Sig

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    ooooh no my textcee carrer is ruined!

    i'll vote for my self to regain my internet dignity

    vote- muh fucken dr.cause because he a fiiiine looking white guy
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  17. Yuno Alwin

    Yuno Alwin ..as usual

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    you lost wit that comment pretty much....
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  18. ArgonTheWise

    ArgonTheWise Just Call Me Argon

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    Frame:
    Opener was ok. Drag race line wasn't that great. All gay oriented disses are tired now. J Cee line was ok. Oz line was your best by far, I was impressed with that one. Planets line was ok. I'm starting to notice the lack of multies in your verse. Ice line was nice enough, I was toying with a flip like that for my verse this week. Didn't end up using it, tho. Last two couplets were pretty weak. All in all, your verse was decent enough.

    Dr. Cause:
    Opener made me chuckle, not bad. Cliff line was bad. Hopscotch line was an ok concept but you flipped it wrong. e girls? Jeez, that line was ehh. One sided line was awesome, definately your best line. Mechanics closer was weak. I notice you made attempts at multies, but the syllables weren't lined up correctly for the most part. Work on that. Put some real thought into how you want to flip your lines.


    Frame came more polsihed and more consistant.

    Vote---Frame
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  19. Etch is a G

    Etch is a G The Forefront Kid

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    V. Frame

    Cause you used a "on a roll" line? Pitiful.... =/

    Frame came hard with his shit... opener was funny... so he gets it on consistancy
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  20. FLAMES.

    FLAMES. dboy fresh.

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    Vote-Frame

    He easily one this...

    Damn, nothing real outstanding besides the Gretsky line. Real smart on his part.

    But damn.. Cause had nothing again.

    I'm not hating or nothing.. but I don't know..

    You've just been getting creamed in ya last 2 brah.

    It was a below average verse.

    Seemed as if you were trying too hard or something.

    It got real boring after the 1st 6 lines..

    & even that wasn't very entertaining. Keep at..
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