23. theFRANCHISE 5-2 Vs. 24. OleBuzzard 3-1

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  1. U S E R

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  2. god_son

    god_son Hollow Shellz

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  3. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    i need to default unless i can get a one day extension ..

    you can even minus a few votes for this...

    if not, oh well.... i thought i signed out..
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  4. god_son

    god_son Hollow Shellz

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    Franchise aka PROOF aka 30 old rapper
    you falling off bro.


    yo son/
    im so far ahead of my time...
    before we battled, cats been saying you aint been the same since O-1//
    sounding like storm-g in all the rhymes you drop/
    you trace nigg'as perfect, oB goes outside the box//
    could bring out the guns, but imma keep it music/
    can't push back your wig, cuz old age beat me to it//
    past your prime, and imma tell it blunt/
    you no different from any other Great White that goes belly up////
    the old heads can argue, that vet's raps dont suck/
    but aint it a shame when Proof can't back that up?//
    we can do this live, you'll be the next man to fall/
    deaf kids in the crowd even notice you have no chants at all//
    and after the battle, doubt that Proof will cry/
    i know was you fitting to lose, so the outcome'll suit you fine//
    so ill go as far maybe as to force some rap lines/
    but Fran, i wont use weak punches just so we can match lines!//
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  5. U S E R

    U S E R NON-DOHPE.squad

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    ext. granted
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  6. U S E R

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    uppin over no shows
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  7. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    you in trouble dawg........

    weather it's a storm, g or textcee I've beatin' all ask Gots
    oleBuzzard you're just a Pirate... one of Seton Hall's mascots
    typed your verse in a leotard but keep your fairy glitz barreled
    bet you wouldn't catch my flow if you were Larry Fitzgerald
    i don't mean to very rude but you dress real scary dude
    it'll take a wizard to beat me.. and you ain't Larry Hughes
    plus you need to pen multi's and join a men's cult, why?
    cuz faggits like you are the reason proofie insults guys
    oleBuzzard you bastard bet you're fearin' this hip toss
    closest thing to a Mac is when he's smearin' his lip gloss
    i work at G4 play Halo plus my flow is heavenly too
    dumb f*uck i'll even beat you with a verse i wrote in seventy two

    stay out of the RBL until you master flow and punchlines with multi's......

    peace!
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  8. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    vote=Olebuzzard

    nothing was really great in fanchises verse IMO
    none of his punches hit hard
    his flow was good, that was about it
    olebuzzard had the proof can't back it up line
    and the suit u fine line and match lines line
    he was just more clever and thought out

    decent battle tho, holla!!
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  9. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    vote - ole buzz

    he had some nice punches,wasnt feelin alotta franchises,but he was straight.buzz had the wig line n chants line..they were niceness..felt he came harder,nice battle..
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  10. S-M-O-K-E

    S-M-O-K-E DUH DUH DUH DUH!

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    vote = ole buzzard. better lines, IMO.
    both were nice, franchise wasnt effective on the lines. very weak, non hard hitting lines.
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  11. Tri Optix

    Tri Optix erator

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    i dont know

    this battle lacked too many componets to even list

    buzzard had a few punches that connected

    franchise did not

    vote=olebuzzard
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  12. namix

    namix u flip shit, i refine it

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    theFranchise

    oleBuzzard you bastard bet you're fearin' this hip toss
    closest thing to a Mac is when he's smearin' his lip gloss
    ---hah, that was pretty funny i thought.. but to be real this isnt the normal caliber i seen you spit at, you are just comming off sounding a little rushed though.. i feel you, trust me, happens to me alot lol.. but still, at this point this is the only line im reaally feeling.. the wizard line was a cool flip, but i have seen a grip full of wiz lines in the last few months..

    i work at G4 play Halo plus my flow is heavenly too
    dumb f*uck i'll even beat you with a verse i wrote in seventy two
    ---hahhaha, i thought that was hilarious since he did reference that your like a old ass rapper, so it was a nice rebuttle for sure.. but i wouldnt even of dug it if i didnt read off his verse first so i dunno... still not the heat you normally bring partna..


    oleBuzzard


    could bring out the guns, but imma keep it music/
    can't push back your wig, cuz old age beat me to it//
    ---haha, it was a nice flip man.. good wording with it.. i have seen similar 'ish before, but you had a nice touch to it.

    past your prime, and imma tell it blunt/
    you no different from any other Great White that goes belly up////
    ----reaal fresh concept, its just not good wording at all right here playa.. i think with a lil more work on the wording with this bar you coulda made it pretty dope, but it was aiight


    we can do this live, you'll be the next man to fall/
    deaf kids in the crowd even notice you have no chants at all//
    ----to make this work a lil better i think you would have needed to be more clear with your chance/chants wordplay that i think you were going for, but i wasnt feeling it that much just because i have used it before, i just wanted to point out that i could see kids overlookin the line cuz of your wording.. like i said 'kids scream 'dynamix, dynamix' when im packin stands // while ur shows are more like winning this, cuz u have no chants'... it just brings both concepts into the line a little better feel me dog? aint no thang tho, maybe you didnt even really intend for the wordplay lol.. but good thought.

    and after the battle, doubt that Proof will cry/
    i know was you fitting to lose, so the outcome'll suit you fine//
    .....an older concept, but you flipped it with pretty cool wording..

    overall: i dug your verse man, i think your getting hated on more than i would have thought.. I do want to say that i think franch slept on you a little tho, or was rushed or something, because he definately coulda brought fire to match yours pretty easy.. but i did think you had a nice showing kid, dont sweat the hate lol.. good stuff


    vote: Buzzard

    why? His lines just had better wording, and his concepts were delivered a little better, while not always completely fresh, he definately had nice flips to them.. i still am convinced Tfran slept on this match, but maybe thats me.. good shit tho guys. pc
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  13. lil hot sauce

    lil hot sauce Dallas Mavericks

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    vote- buzzard

    ive seen franchise do better than that....but, ole buzzard hit harder..so.....he gets the vote
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  14. Calefaction

    Calefaction The Lone Wolf

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    I felt this was a pretty one sided battle

    ob - the wig line was nice, chants ant suit line was good too.. pretty consistant verse, me likes

    fran - yeah you know you half ass..but this verse was just really lack luster..

    vote = BUZZZZ
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  15. Scientz

    Scientz Im Good Writtens Bitch!

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    Vote-Buzzard

    came kinda nice...the belly up line was tight...and the old age joint was funny as hell...franchise didnt really have nothin that caught my eye...flow was there but the punches didnt connect...so i got buzz takin it
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  16. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    OldeBuzzard def. theFRANCHISE
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