23 Storm G 5-0 vs 24 Kingcity 7-2

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. KingCity

    KingCity aka Smarty Pants

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  3. Mister Gots

    Mister Gots New Member

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    ur a fucking idiot.. and thats what i think son
    tried to hide it by naming yaself kingcity instead of kingdumb
    stick to riding my dick.. ur not a worthy contender
    ur a nut hugging smarty pants like erkels suspenders
    all ur shit is well.. well and i got them sick quotes
    u rely on returned favors weekly to get six votes
    ur shit isnt dope under any circumstance
    it wont enhance..
    stick to posting quick replies and go advanced
    you'd give anything to be in my crew, I oughta laugh
    asking for my signature youll get my autograph
    ur prolly wearing a fubu jersey and underneath is a chain
    and its as fake as that fuckin bling on your name
    im bringing the pain, easily leave ya torn up..
    theres no need for a closer, my pen hasnt even warmed up
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  4. KingCity

    KingCity aka Smarty Pants

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    Spielberg the director...made millions with special effects...
    And you claim your the perfect Storm...................................
    .................................Because the movie had four rednecks
    You bitch ho, you don't wanna see what I do to this nerd...
    I tried to play off your verse, but all I got was played words
    Won't be head of the cheese, if you was fan of the Packers
    ......Peeps told you to flip a line...but it ended up backwards
    Dawg, how you win when your verse was full of laughter...
    Fuck it, I'll make 23 hang up the mic ....................................
    ...............And retire quicker than the United Centers rafters
    Your skills are not showin'...since you not close to hittin' me
    .........When ever G says "You Can't See Me"...take it literally
    Them airport checks are something you need to have delt...
    Got so many bags under your eyes.......................................
    ............................They make you stare at the convayer belt
    Just a warning...shouldn't test my nines if you had a clue...
    ...........Fuck you being in the Mag...the Mag gonna be in you
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  5. Etch is a G

    Etch is a G The Forefront Kid

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    Vote - Storm G... blah.. I wasn't really feelin ya verse... but on the other hand, King's verse was even worse.. no hate, but damn... both of ya'll seemed like you weren't in it to win it... ehh... only line I was feelin from King was his closer.. shit was pretty nice.. on the other hand Storm had his opener that I was really feelin.. so basiclly it was between King's closer and Storm's opener.. everything else was garbage but my vote goes to S.G.
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  6. Mister Gots

    Mister Gots New Member

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    14 year olds
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  7. Eternalpath

    Eternalpath I am FEMALE!!!!

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    mister guts, storm g fav line

    stick to riding my dick.. ur not a worthy contender
    ur a nut hugging smarty pants like erkels suspenders

    kingcity

    Just a warning...shouldn't test my nines if you had a clue...
    ...........Fuck you being in the Mag...the Mag gonna be in you

    neither was good to me...i thought the erkel line prolly was the best in this battle king seemed to try hard but that bag/coveour belt line was butt and the mag line was aight

    my vote Storm G
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  8. micshimmie

    micshimmie New Member

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    ur a fucking idiot.. and thats what i think son
    tried to hide it by naming yaself kingcity instead of kingdumb

    ur a nut hugging smarty pants like erkels suspenders

    theres no need for a closer, my pen hasnt even warmed up

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    Spielberg the director...made millions with special effects...
    And you claim your the perfect Storm .Because the movie had four rednecks


    Kingcity came aight. Storm came fresh. More quotables.


    Vote - Storm-G
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  9. Etch is a G

    Etch is a G The Forefront Kid

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    "14 yr olds" - Mister Gots...


    This 14 yr old can still beat you.. =/
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  10. PHENOMENON

    PHENOMENON Blessed By The Beats..

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  11. Mister Gots

    Mister Gots New Member

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    phe phe dobson

    out of my thread


    stupid guy
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  12. J Dot C

    J Dot C 1x RBL Champion

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    Mister Gots
    ur a fucking idiot.. and thats what i think son
    tried to hide it by naming yaself kingcity instead of kingdumb
    coo opener...
    stick to riding my dick.. ur not a worthy contender
    ur a nut hugging smarty pants like erkels suspenders
    ok...
    all ur shit is well.. well and i got them sick quotes
    u rely on returned favors weekly to get six votes
    ok...
    ur shit isnt dope under any circumstance
    it wont enhance..
    stick to posting quick replies and go advanced
    ok...
    you'd give anything to be in my crew, I oughta laugh
    asking for my signature youll get my autograph
    heh...
    ur prolly wearing a fubu jersey and underneath is a chain
    and its as fake as that fuckin bling on your name
    nah...
    im bringing the pain, easily leave ya torn up..
    theres no need for a closer, my pen hasnt even warmed up
    ehh...



    KingCity
    ]Spielberg the director...made millions with special effects...
    And you claim your the perfect Storm...................................
    .................................Because the movie had four rednecks
    coo...
    You bitch ho, you don't wanna see what I do to this nerd...
    I tried to play off your verse, but all I got was played words
    ehh...
    Won't be head of the cheese, if you was fan of the Packers
    ......Peeps told you to flip a line...but it ended up backwards
    nah...
    Dawg, how you win when your verse was full of laughter...
    Fuck it, I'll make 23 hang up the mic ....................................
    ...............And retire quicker than the United Centers rafters
    nah...
    Your skills are not showin'...since you not close to hittin' me
    .........When ever G says "You Can't See Me"...take it literally
    ehh...
    Them airport checks are something you need to have delt...
    Got so many bags under your eyes.......................................
    ............................They make you stare at the convayer belt
    ok...
    Just a warning...shouldn't test my nines if you had a clue...
    ...........Fuck you being in the Mag...the Mag gonna be in you
    ok...



    overall
    I got storm winnin this...his line were a lil bit more clever...tha only line I wuz really feelin from king wuz his opener...


    vote=storm

    1Ne
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  13. funeral holmes

    funeral holmes Attention Deficit uh what

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    vote- kingcity for obvious reasons.
    why yall voting for textgod idiot fucks






    n/m



    vote-storm g
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  14. Eulogy

    Eulogy OG Hybrid Angel'

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    Storm's 1st too couplets were good, i liked the ending, simple verse. Wasnt to much put into it. Kingdumb line was the punch of the battle. Kingcity's verse was alright. I dont like your format.............its.........kinda........ annoying. I liked the redneck line, but thats about it.

    Vote Storm G
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  15. Scales

    Scales I hold weight here

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    vote=storm Gizzle

    he got a way of writing simple but complicated at the same time that stands out a lil more

    smarty pants you came kinda choppy not that flow is a major factor but its just annoying reading all choppy...but that wasnt what made u lose this...you were kinda predictable with your verse where as storm g was more creative in my opin..
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  16. -KaZper-

    -KaZper- BrainDead....

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    Vote-Gizm...

    Blah storm had it hands down no need for page.. smarty pants line was dope... some other witty shit...

    Storm takes it

    Sup G
    <<< Esentrik
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  17. Synthesis

    Synthesis applied

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    vote - storm G...

    easy vote, shitty battle...

    lmao@storms urkle line.. a lot of it was bleh...

    good enough
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  18. Rygar's Penis

    Rygar's Penis New Member

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    ur a fucking idiot.. and thats what i think son
    tried to hide it by naming yaself kingcity instead of kingdumb

    ha...dope

    stick to riding my dick.. ur not a worthy contender
    ur a nut hugging smarty pants like erkels suspenders

    lmao..

    all ur shit is well.. well and i got them sick quotes
    u rely on returned favors weekly to get six votes

    clever..but nah..didnt like

    ur shit isnt dope under any circumstance
    it wont enhance.. stick to posting quick replies and go advanced

    decent

    you'd give anything to be in my crew, I oughta laugh
    asking for my signature youll get my autograph

    nice

    ur prolly wearing a fubu jersey and underneath is a chain
    and its as fake as that fuckin bling on your name

    lol

    im bringing the pain, easily leave ya torn up..
    theres no need for a closer, my pen hasnt even warmed up

    chea..
    dope verse.

    KingCity

    Spielberg the director...made millions with special effects.
    And you claim your the perfect Storm, because the movie had four rednecks

    stop tryna hide them long ass lines lol...decent line

    You bitch ho, you don't wanna see what I do to this nerd...
    I tried to play off your verse, but all I got was played words

    played...how ironic.

    Won't be head of the cheese, if you was fan of the Packers
    Peeps told you to flip a line...but it ended up backwards

    nah

    Dawg, how you win when your verse was full of laughter...
    Fuck it, I'll make 23 hang up the mic and retire quicker than the United Centers rafters

    no..

    Your skills are not showin'...since you not close to hittin' me
    When ever G says "You Can't See Me"...take it literally

    just no..

    Them airport checks are something you need to have delt...
    Got so many bags under your eyes, they make you stare at the convayer belt

    naw...

    Just a warning...shouldn't test my nines if you had a clue...
    Fuck you being in the Mag...the Mag gonna be in you

    decent

    vote = storm
    blowout...hoffa.
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  19. Mr. Skull

    Mr. Skull G.T.P.

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    vote - storm g, the urkel suspenders was witty as fuck, I dug it... and the closer was nice... the only nice line KingCity had was the Perfect Storm line... good shit tho
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  20. Razah Aiyo

    Razah Aiyo New Member

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    Storm G didn't come dope, he came alright.

    But KingCity just came really blah. His structure sucked too.

    vStorm G
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