23. Prem0nition 4-0 vs. 24. Alpengiest 4-0

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  1. Mr.Perfect

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  2. prem0nition

    prem0nition pre·dom·i·nant

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  3. Alpengiest

    Alpengiest Wit-Eeyore..like pooh.

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  4. prem0nition

    prem0nition pre·dom·i·nant

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    ^ it took you 2 days to come up with those wack ass concepts?


    this alias content with being nobody & gettin stuck with the L
    won't ever sell, he's not makin any bucks to excel
    so when he says he's laid back & comfortable, that's Alp in a nut shell
    his persona describes his sex life... jerk n' average
    you don't have to practice abstinence, you're already perfect at it
    and Alp's workin tactics that are a lot different from me
    but he's not smellin success, he's just sniffin ki's
    of low-grade since about the time he dropped out of a low grade
    his shit cut with Alcaselzer, talcom powder and Roll Aids
    homie's slippin, only flippin played concepts, it's all true, B
    although it makes sense... his pirated punchlines are all booty
    and speakin of pirates, Alp's been surfin for respect
    tryna catch wreck, but obviously it ain't workin with the net
    how this cat make the top 30?! ...it ain't hard to dis chumps
    not usin cum lines must'a been a rough transition like how I got through this punch,
    but the fans'll still love me...
    and if you're ahead of your time shit's about to get real ugly
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  5. Alpengiest

    Alpengiest Wit-Eeyore..like pooh.

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    2 days..this dude's fazed..he admits he's lame--
    --When he says i come up with wack concepts by mentionin his name--

    ...My missions plain..to beat u an then kill ya fam too
    I know every trick of the trade...how u think i knew about u?...
    ..Ya job is painly..an every1's bettin their 1000 on me..
    Cus International racing's the only time ull see a grand with 'prix'..
    ...Ya rhythm leans stray..an ya lines come off soft..
    I'll keep you at bay..with a string attached to a concrete block..
    ...But really, whats the point of battlin an dukin it out kid?
    I thought we were bigger than that, until ya girl told me the truth about it..
    ..And he's got issues with dating..it sucks an its awful..
    He used beer as a substitute 4 women an got his dick stuck in the bottle..
    ..Fuck this queer..lets keep it real..u soft an blank..
    The time u Diss-Geist..will be the time ur robbin a bank..
    ..U lost ya rank..while i' droppin flames..roastin ya text..
    Cus Pre started out with nothin..an still has most of it left..
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  6. Super.

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    how this cat make the top 30?! ...it ain't hard to dis chumps
    not usin cum lines must'a been a rough transition like how I got through this punch,


    that was nice..the rest didnt have any impact on me. all i thought the other lines were, were filler and flow. decent drop though monstar.


    ...But really, whats the point of battlin an dukin it out kid?
    I thought we were bigger than that, until ya girl told me the truth about it..
    ..And he's got issues with dating..it sucks an its awful..
    He used beer as a substitute 4 women an got his dick stuck in the bottle..

    that was nice to me..the rest was pretty played and blahish. after talking all this shit i thought u were dope or something.


    v/alp


    better bars than monster by a little


    EDIT: Alp ur still a wack pice of shit
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  7. prem0nition

    prem0nition pre·dom·i·nant

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    average? you the only thing average in this thread
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  8. Super.

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    monstar stop

    :frown:
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  9. Con God

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    this alias content with being nobody & gettin stuck with the L
    won't ever sell, he's not makin any bucks to excel
    so when he says he's laid back & comfortable, that's Alp in a nut shell
    last bar was aight... rest was ehh
    his persona describes his sex life... jerk n' average
    you don't have to practice abstinence, you're already perfect at it
    coo
    and Alp's workin tactics that are a lot different from me
    but he's not smellin success, he's just sniffin ki's
    lol... coo
    of low-grade since about the time he dropped out of a low grade
    his shit cut with Alcaselzer, talcom powder and Roll Aids
    lmao... nice
    homie's slippin, only flippin played concepts, it's all true, B
    although it makes sense... his pirated punchlines are all booty
    coo
    and speakin of pirates, Alp's been surfin for respect
    tryna catch wreck, but obviously it ain't workin with the net
    coo
    how this cat make the top 30?! ...it ain't hard to dis chumps
    not usin cum lines must'a been a rough transition like how I got through this punch,
    lmao... nice
    but the fans'll still love me...
    and if you're ahead of your time shit's about to get real ugly
    lmao.. nice closer

    2 days..this dude's fazed..he admits he's lame--
    --When he says i come up with wack concepts by mentionin his name--
    ehh
    ...My missions plain..to beat u an then kill ya fam too
    I know every trick of the trade...how u think i knew about u?...
    its aight...
    ..Ya job is painly..an every1's bettin their 1000 on me..
    Cus International racing's the only time ull see a grand with 'prix'..
    no
    ...Ya rhythm leans stray..an ya lines come off soft..
    I'll keep you at bay..with a string attached to a concrete block..
    this was coo
    ...But really, whats the point of battlin an dukin it out kid?
    I thought we were bigger than that, until ya girl told me the truth about it..
    ehh... streached and cuda been worded better
    ..And he's got issues with dating..it sucks an its awful..
    He used beer as a substitute 4 women an got his dick stuck in the bottle..
    another streched bar but this one was funny. lol
    ..Fuck this queer..lets keep it real..u soft an blank..
    The time u Diss-Geist..will be the time ur robbin a bank..
    ehhh
    ..U lost ya rank..while i' droppin flames..roastin ya text..
    Cus Pre started out with nothin..an still has most of it left..
    lmao... this is bitin but fuck it, its garbage anyway


    Monster just came with a more appealing verse to me. more set on witty instead of the plain sarcastic aproach alp took. Shit gets boring if you do it for most of ya verse. mix it up dunny. Moster came with flames toward the end of his verse with a mix of nice bars.

    Vote = prem0nition
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  10. Anchor.

    Anchor. Holdin' It Down

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    of low-grade since about the time he dropped out of a low grade
    his shit cut with Alcaselzer, talcom powder and Roll Aids

    What was this? I didn't get that line and I didn't get some other lines either. Monster had one or two nice lines and the rest was horrible at best. I liked the pirated punchlines line but that's about it.

    Alp had the bay and beer bottle lines I liked. Everything else sucked. Diss-Geist was so horrible.


    My vote is alp. This battle was mediocre at best and Alpengeist dropped less wack. He had two lines I liked and Monster had only one. Step up your game guys.
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  11. spooky tooth

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    Premonition's flow was definetly on point, it was nice as fuck. It took away from his punches though, I liked that cut with rolaids line.. it was pretty funny, so was the transistion line. But other than that your punches were lacking pretty bad.

    Alp.. well I couldn't really find even one punch that was original to me at all in your verse. You did have harder punches.. but they were still all obviously flipped.. the cinderblock in the lake or whatever it was is soooo played, you flipped it alright.. but still.

    I feel sooo bad actually doing this.. but vote - alp
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  12. perma frost

    perma frost gay stars suck taint

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    these votes are crazay man, monster killed it.
    alps verse was yuck.
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  13. Alpengiest

    Alpengiest Wit-Eeyore..like pooh.

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    thanks for swaying for monster, u can leave now :smile:
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  14. prem0nition

    prem0nition pre·dom·i·nant

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    this battle NEEDS more votes!
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  15. -Oz-

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    Vote Premonition

    iunno, ive seen much better from both. Alp bored me to death with old cliches and predictable punches. Where Prem was on some other shit, I dont even really know, but talking about alot of drugs lol. Still, punchlines for punchlines I gotta give it to Prem, way more original at least, and the ones of his I didnt like, at least werent played to death. Alp your pretty good, better than I would have thought, you just need to bring some fresher shit, and be more creative. Cliches and concepts are pretty much done for, unless their done extremely well. Some people still like them, but ME as a voter, someone coming with cliches, vs somoene original....the dude with cliches almost always loses, iunno, maybe thats just my prefrence. Good battle guys =)
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  16. Alpengiest

    Alpengiest Wit-Eeyore..like pooh.

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    wtf @ ppl votin that aint even in the league...this is madness
    3-1 my way
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  17. -Oz-

    -Oz- ^^^^^

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    Ive always allowed any votes. Who the fuck cares about whether they in the league or not.
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  18. Type Flow

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    vote= prem....alps verse was wack as fuck...he had 1 good line, the rest was garbo....monsters ish wasnt much better...but had a couple better lines in there...
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  19. Type Flow

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    lol word@oz
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  20. prem0nition

    prem0nition pre·dom·i·nant

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    it's 4-3 me, but 3-3 if you don't want to count Oz's vote



    everyone else is in the league
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