23. Ivy League v.s 24. Venamis

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  1. Oneduh

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  2. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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    Check... 14, match me.
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  3. Ivy League

    Ivy League A League of his Own......

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    fuck a introducin..no excludin....me, myself & I


    my arts offical, your artifical so i will actual form filler
    cause your a natural born fruit...i'm a natural born killer
    j.dilla woody harrelson type'a gorrilla your a nigga a can see thru
    talkin about you roll with the clipse...ok, everybody meet mr. me too
    the impeccable flow that can't be stop by one crew, i'll son you
    while readin the art of war by sun tzu
    then deck you in the mouth & watch a patio -n- porch come too
    hes corny on tracks watch the beat break...out, now its deep hate
    he takes dates to the ice ring for fishin...definition of a cheapskate
    yea your hope is thru, i could'a wrote for you, takin notes for you
    ...cause my fuckin instrumentals have got more quotes than you!
    better yet i'm leave me choked & blue, broken in 2, in shadows no health
    & ivy league is fuckin garbage...there's help i spent two lines battlin myself
    my henchmen lynch men the same your flinchin in pain the tension has gain
    but the way, who are you?
    i just thought you were a lame cause i didn't have to mention your name.


    Hey Ven.......Venni Vetti Vecci........
    I'ma see you OneDuhhhhhhhh
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  4. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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    Kids tryna get a win in every way, so he ain't the best spitter
    Ivey went out on a limb to beat me, but I brought the hedge clippers
    For real, kid just predicts the future, check out the damage I leave
    Cause after I go 8-0, my opponets gonna be the real IV League
    And I'm for real about the record, ain't no limit to who I'm beating
    Cuz I'm about to cast more losers than the American Pie screening
    Fucking key for ages bout amounts of pain I portion out, you can't Aleve It
    I could spend the whole day writing about I' - but I ain't that concieted
    I am not usually the polite type of guy, but I'll wave at yo' clique
    But I'm just chucking the duece.. like you should do with YOUR shit
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  5. Ivy League

    Ivy League A League of his Own......

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    coo............
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  6. youngflow

    youngflow New Member

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    vote-venamis.......iv said absolutly nothing....that sound like some nore shit

    venamis had a hot line with.....the hedge clippers line
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  7. Linxz

    Linxz What!

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    V=venamis had some tight punches

    league came off wit the clips line and that thiers help line, but it wasn't enough to gain the vote.
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  8. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    dead..



    vote young flow


    J/k ill edit



    yea your hope is thru, i could'a wrote for you, takin notes for you
    ...cause my fuckin instrumentals have got more quotes than you!
    better yet i'm leave me choked & blue, broken in 2, in shadows no health
    & ivy league is fuckin garbage...there's help i spent two lines battlin myself

    vs

    Kids tryna get a win in every way, so he ain't the best spitter
    Ivey went out on a limb to beat me, but I brought the hedge clippers
    Fucking key for ages bout amounts of pain I portion out, you can't Aleve It
    I could spend the whole day writing about I' - but I ain't that concieted

    it was a tough one, actually alot closer than i originally thought.

    venamis had a few llines i wasnt feeling,


    where as IVY had about the same...


    Now, venamis definately knows what he's doing, but based on these 4 bars, i gotta give this one to ivy.


    of the lines i quoted, im partial to his...


    Vote-Ivy


    althogh, ivy needs to work on structure, shorten up his bars, and work on his wording.
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  9. Quite Strange

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    Vote-V....His Hedge Clippers Line Was Jus Sick, Ivy's Verse Didnt Hit Near As Hard
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  10. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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    better yet i'm leave me choked & blue, broken in 2, in shadows no health
    & ivy league is fuckin garbage...there's help i spent two lines battlin myself
    j.dilla woody harrelson type'a gorrilla your a nigga a can see thru
    talkin about you roll with the clipse...ok, everybody meet mr. me too


    vs


    Kids tryna get a win in every way, so he ain't the best spitter
    Ivey went out on a limb to beat me, but I brought the hedge clippers
    Fucking key for ages bout amounts of pain I portion out, you can't Aleve It
    I could spend the whole day writing about I' - but I ain't that concieted


    pretty close, i think the bars i didnt quote wont help me decide
    so ill do it based on the strnger qouter bars
    that clippers bar was line of the battle
    so v/ ven
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  11. 2triple0

    2triple0 New Member

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    vote: ivy league

    Fucking key for ages bout amounts of pain I portion out, you can't Aleve It
    I could spend the whole day writing about I' - but I ain't that concieted

    vs.

    yea your hope is thru, i could'a wrote for you, takin notes for you
    ...cause my fuckin instrumentals have got more quotes than you!
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  12. Oddwirdz

    Oddwirdz New Member

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    vote- V

    ivy didnt rally say anything at all.. but neither did V..but he had a nicer verse overall i guess..
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  13. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Over noshows.
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  14. SPuL

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    yo first off, no hate but:

    better yet i'm leave me choked & blue, broken in 2, in shadows no health
    & ivy league is fuckin garbage...there's help i spent two lines battlin myself

    ^don't do that again. lol It wasn't pulled off nicely, so it made it 10 times worse. But anyways..

    hes corny on tracks watch the beat break...out, now its deep hate
    he takes dates to the ice ring for fishin...definition of a cheapskate

    v.s.

    Kids tryna get a win in every way, so he ain't the best spitter
    Ivey went out on a limb to beat me, but I brought the hedge clippers

    Overall, this was aiight battle. IV came with some coo concepts, but worded wrong. So only one that was atleast coo, or somewhat cool was cheapskate line. Really didn't like that Ivy fuckin' garbage line again. lol wasn't executed right. Ven came aiight too. His opener was only line i thought was cool tho. All the other shit was played or wasn't that great. Overall, I got it a tie by quotables, but that line by IV dissing himself, took away some points from him IMO. So Ven got this.

    v/Ven
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  15. Mc Witha Temper

    Mc Witha Temper New Member

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    this was real close

    but I got Ivy league winnin this, his verse was longer an was pretty good overall, Venamis had agood verse also but was at a disadvantage by havin less lines, i know i know quality over quantity, but nothin of ivy's was that bad, so....

    vote= ivy league
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  16. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    tough decision but ima have to go with Ivy cuz he had more lines even though v's were better quality they just didn't add up

    vote- ivy
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  17. SPuL

    SPuL SP

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    6-4 venamis. uppin' to top for more votes
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  18. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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  19. The Second Comming

    The Second Comming you aint poison!!!

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    j.dilla woody harrelson type'a gorrilla your a nigga a can see thru
    talkin about you roll with the clipse...ok, everybody meet mr. me too

    vs.

    Kids tryna get a win in every way, so he ain't the best spitter
    Ivey went out on a limb to beat me, but I brought the hedge clippers
    For real, kid just predicts the future, check out the damage I leave
    Cause after I go 8-0, my opponets gonna be the real IV League
    And I'm for real about the record, ain't no limit to who I'm beating
    Cuz I'm about to cast more losers than the American Pie screening
    Fucking key for ages bout amounts of pain I portion out, you can't Aleve It
    I could spend the whole day writing about I' - but I ain't that concieted
    I am not usually the polite type of guy, but I'll wave at yo' clique
    But I'm just chucking the duece.. like you should do with YOUR shit

    Venamis had more effective punches

    vote: Venamis
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  20. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Venamis wins.
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