23. C-FAL 1-0 v.s 24. Criteria

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  1. Oneduh

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  2. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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  3. C-FAL

    C-FAL New Member

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    check, 16 lines
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  4. C-FAL

    C-FAL New Member

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    my idea of criteria is a guy weary
    that im here cause my lines put fear in ya,
    a bachteria, spreadin his STD's in the rap game,
    this fag lame, it wont take antibiotics to keep this rat tamed,
    he never been on the streets, felt the heat, or seen the flame,
    would snitched when he seen fists, and real quick woulda got maimed,
    this the first time i seen u, so im makin sure u gettin knocked out,
    ya lines is like bb's, so i block ya shots like gettin boxed out,
    call me a titan cause my haynes (hanus) crimes...
    leave holes in ya head like rocks now.
    have u laid out like ya moms is when she sees my cocks out,
    i cant believe this bitch the criteria, i must be over achievin,
    im only dry heavin out a few words to make u stop breathin,
    a heathen, sent here to leave u bitch rappers bleedin,
    this dude just a critter,I Am here feedin,
    feed of my lines, wont help, cause im makin sure u aint comin back,
    this bitch aint criteria for shit but spittin wack lines and how to get cracked.
    why u on this site dude, ur ass be singin like janet jackson,
    i got a WHOLE lot of skill, u beatin me is just an irrational FRACTION.
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  5. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    I win, problem solved. got a prediction?..ya need to calm it dog
    but when i leave c-sectioned in a hospital a births not involved
    you seen the word of the week? puttin n ya verse is just weak
    & ya girls horrific, s'like im dyin' the way deaths flirting with me
    serving this geek and dudes get bent...c'mon then do ur worst
    out of a whole ya shits 2 percent & ppl 'skim' through ya verse
    youll be kissin the sky as an angel when your sentenced to die
    i'm piercing ya opticals here, C-FAIL, you were just 'missin an I'
    listen and write, your a damn pain...retributing this mans claim
    so get shook & popped... until your sprayed on like champagne
    I got fast game, & even microsoft will help me smash this queer
    cuz its best viewed through windows like your fuckin rap career
    your verse was SHIT kid, but were even now since i hate rebels
    i'll wipe my ass with my whole verse so we're on the same level
    just save the embarrassment, me & u? is no way of comparison
    see fucker i tower above u.. ya bombing out made ya a terrorist
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  6. IronMic

    IronMic New Member

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    decent battle

    best lines

    C-fal

    "i cant believe this bitch the criteria, i must be over achievin,
    im only dry heavin out a few words to make u stop breathin,"

    "why u on this site dude, ur ass be singin like janet jackson,
    i got a WHOLE lot of skill, u beatin me is just an irrational FRACTION."


    Criteria

    "youll be kissin the sky as an angel when your sentenced to die
    i'm piercing ya opticals here, C-FAIL, you were just 'missin an I' "

    " got fast game, & even microsoft will help me smash this queer
    cuz its best viewed through windows like your fuckin rap career"



    overall

    C-fal you had a decent verse. i like the aggressive attak. i think if you worded a few of ya bar differently or set-up ya punchez differently they woulda hit harder but ya verse wasnt bad at all.

    overall-7.0


    Criteria-ya bar structure was decent i thought you coulda came a little more aggressive. You had a couple nice punchez that i thought were the best 2 of the battle. next battle jus work on your attak a little more. but if you have the 2 hottest punchez in the battle i dont think you can lose.


    overall-7.5


    vote-Criteria



    nice battle niggaz,competitive. Big upps C-fal cuz dis shit was close.
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  7. C-FAL

    C-FAL New Member

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    props to criteria, good battle. thanks to sick for replyin 0-1 criteria
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  8. The Royal Penis

    The Royal Penis God.

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    this is pretty close, and it's cuz criteria couldn't hit hard...

    you seen the word of the week? puttin n ya verse is just weak
    & ya girls horrific, s'like im dyin' the way deaths flirting with me
    serving this geek and dudes get bent...c'mon then do ur worst
    out of a whole ya shits 2 percent & ppl 'skim' through ya verse

    the actual rhyming was cool but there are no punches.. how long you been holding that milk concept... you tried milking it too hard.

    but. also

    youll be kissin the sky as an angel when your sentenced to die
    i'm piercing ya opticals here, C-FAIL, you were just 'missin an I'

    I got fast game, & even microsoft will help me smash this queer
    cuz its best viewed through windows like your fuckin rap career
    your verse was SHIT kid, but were even now since i hate rebels
    i'll wipe my ass with my whole verse so we're on the same level

    this was a solid section opener was pretty tight, i guess after the opening i expected more..



    Umm C Fal, nothing really quotable, but you were consistant with punches, nothing witty, you tried with the critter, and the criteria line.. but definitly came up short.. anything more solid, and you could have taken this one..

    v- Criteria
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  9. Exon

    Exon That brand new shit

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    C-FAL, that verse was wayy to basic to win this, though it did show some potential if you work at it. It was ok at times, but overall lack luster I didnt see anything stand out in your verse though.

    Criteria, your verse was ok, alot of concepts could have been executed a little better becuase your verse seemed kind of boring too. But it was enough for the win.


    V/Criteria
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  10. youngflow

    youngflow New Member

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    nothing quotable from c-fal

    vs.

    I got fast game, & even microsoft will help me smash this queer
    cuz its best viewed through windows like your fuckin rap career

    nothing special, but criteria had that one line

    vote-criteria
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  11. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    C FAL...

    my idea of criteria is a guy weary
    that im here cause my lines put fear in ya,
    a bachteria, spreadin his STD's in the rap game,
    this fag lame, it wont take antibiotics to keep this rat tamed,
    he never been on the streets, felt the heat, or seen the flame,
    would snitched when he seen fists, and real quick woulda got maimed,
    ^^no punches

    this the first time i seen u, so im makin sure u gettin knocked out,
    ya lines is like bb's, so i block ya shots like gettin boxed out,
    call me a titan cause my haynes (hanus) crimes...
    leave holes in ya head like rocks now.
    have u laid out like ya moms is when she sees my cocks out,
    i cant believe this bitch the criteria, i must be over achievin,
    im only dry heavin out a few words to make u stop breathin,
    a heathen, sent here to leave u bitch rappers bleedin,
    this dude just a critter,I Am here feedin,
    feed of my lines, wont help, cause im makin sure u aint comin back,
    this bitch aint criteria for shit but spittin wack lines and how to get cracked.
    why u on this site dude, ur ass be singin like janet jackson,
    i got a WHOLE lot of skill, u beatin me is just an irrational FRACTION.
    ^^not a good verse

    Criteria...


    serving this geek and dudes get bent...c'mon then do ur worst
    out of a whole ya shits 2 percent & ppl 'skim' through ya verse


    your verse was SHIT kid, but were even now since i hate rebels
    i'll wipe my ass with my whole verse so we're on the same level

    vote Cri
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  12. Criteria

    Criteria Superman in this bitch!

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    hi.........ok
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  13. D-MONIK

    D-MONIK Active Member

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    vote=criteria

    nothin from cf al really, i saw some attempts at wordplay but didn't work

    criteria had some good lines, i liked the multies mostly, didnt have any stand out lines but had an allright verse with a couple of punches in there

    youll be kissin the sky as an angel when your sentenced to die
    i'm piercing ya opticals here, C-FAIL, you were just 'missin an I'

    i liked this concept

    C Fal didn't have any
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  14. Master Peace

    Master Peace coolest nigga yo mama kno

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    C-Fals flow wasn't as nice as Criteria
    nothing

    vs

    I got fast game, & even microsoft will help me smash this queer
    cuz its best viewed through windows like your fuckin rap career


    vote- Criteria
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  15. Ribonuclease

    Ribonuclease New Member

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    C-Fal - need to think outside the box, be more creative and get your wording game up. Write like you talk, alot of your shit didn't make much sense. Throwing random words in makes it seem wierd and don't write a line unless its a punch. Filler just throws your verse off.

    Criteria - couple good lines

    serving this geek and dudes get bent...c'mon then do ur worst
    out of a whole ya shits 2 percent & ppl 'skim' through ya verse
    I got fast game, & even microsoft will help me smash this queer
    cuz its best viewed through windows like your fuckin rap career

    milk line was dope, window thing was nice. much more consistent verse.

    vote - Criteria.
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  16. ºBabylonº

    ºBabylonº Novus Ordo Seclorum

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    win, problem solved. got a prediction?..ya need to calm it dog
    but when i leave c-sectioned in a hospital a births not involved
    you seen the word of the week? puttin n ya verse is just weak
    & ya girls horrific, s'like im dyin' the way deaths flirting with me
    I got fast game, & even microsoft will help me smash this queer
    cuz its best viewed through windows like your fuckin rap career

    vs

    what the fadduckk?

    ya lines is like bb's, so i block ya shots like gettin boxed out,

    You fuckin blow. Not only does that line suck ass, but it makes completely no sense. His lines are like bb's...so u block his shots okayyyyy.....but blocking shots isn't comparable to getting boxed out in basketball you fuckin idiot. boxing out is when you put a dude in back of you and gain position for a rebound, not block a shot cunt eater.

    V/the asian one
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  17. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    ^ lool.

    Crit wins.
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