21 Tony Elbow 10-4 vs 22 Ibeechu Farensquare 9-3

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  1. -Oz-

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  2. Sonz1

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    im prolly gonna drop tommorow night....like 16 or so
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  3. Tony Elbow

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    cool I'll drop then too
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  4. Sonz1

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    Imma knock you out first thing, first round, ur not as worthy
    I'll promise you this verse wont be the only thing droppin early
    I won't aim for ur face, if you wanna be left with a clean grill
    ur teeth won't need braces, but ur neck and ur knees will
    tony's record semi impressive, but still knew this dick was nuttin
    cause If tony ever had any elbow room, he woulda got evicted from it
    when the bullet holes surround him, tony will cry and yell
    and make no bones about it...
    when I put one in his wig like side show mel
    you never was intricate..poor tony, nobody likin ur raps?
    cause ur style went to shit...then came out without wipin its ass
    u had a chance wit Dis Honor, but he ended ur life faster
    face it, you wouldn't come before DH if you was the 9th batter
    u lose alot, ur excuse is u don't give a fuk about text
    and if that were the Case,
    then the people u lost to must've brought a couple of kegs
    this fight is worthless, especially since the end of your life is certain
    when Im the reason your always denied when u apply for life insurance
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  5. Tony Elbow

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    what’s with the no-show verse?
    you even called me impressive, mayne my head might swell
    ‘n as for the Elbow room..you can bet your bitch knows it quite well
    yeah my big dick’s crazy..fa’ real Tony rips sluts daily
    when it comes to your sexuality it’s all IF’s butts ‘n maybes
    bring dissy into this, like he’s your boy..herb your killing me
    coz the only dis been connected to you concerns ability
    need to sharpen your angles coz I spit darts that’ll mangle
    ‘n fuck farensquare, I beechu into a hole that’s dark ‘n rectangle
    you see hedz use alias once they’ve got proven game
    sad things is, your just a newbie lame, with a stupid name
    son is kinda dumb, I guess he needs love
    like how you gonna take a big bite of canibus..’n expect to beat drugs
    idiot, I’ll pack the infra red, just incase I miss ya head
    'n have ya body covered in more dots than a prediction thread
    my shoe’s ‘n feet will bruise ‘n beat this proven geek
    but still say big ups, on helping me out of my losing streak
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  6. -Oz-

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    Vote Ibeechu Farensquare.

    Iunno who dude is, but he pretty fucking ill.

    Imma knock you out first thing, first round, ur not as worthy
    I'll promise you this verse wont be the only thing droppin early
    I won't aim for ur face, if you wanna be left with a clean grill
    ur teeth won't need braces, but ur neck and ur knees will

    when the bullet holes surround him, tony will cry and yell
    and make no bones about it...
    when I put one in his wig like side show mel


    this fight is worthless, especially since the end of your life is certain
    when Im the reason your always denied when u apply for life insurance

    DH shit cool too.

    Tony, aint really have no quotes, and the linking shit is mad gay, especially since no one give a shit about that line.
    need to sharpen your angles coz I spit darts that’ll mangle
    ‘n fuck farensquare, I beechu into a hole that’s dark ‘n rectangle

    This coulda been better with some good wording. The newbie name line was cool too.
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  7. WordSmith!

    WordSmith! 1/3 of Goon Mob

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    vote farensquare

    he had a strong delivery first 4 bars where hott and had a couple more quoteables in the entire verse. he had much better wordplay than tony
    tony ya verse could have been better with wording like oz said but w/e
    keep da shit goin
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  8. DIVINITY FLOWZ

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    yeah... this is one sided all the way
    Ibeechu came with heat and wit in his punches and personals

    by the time he got to this line it was already over

    tony's record semi impressive, but still knew this dick was nuttin
    cause If tony ever had any elbow room, he woulda got evicted from it

    tony had an ok verse, but it didn't have much in it... the dark rectangle and prediction thread lines were ok, but that's about it

    Vote Ibeechu
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  9. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    cause If tony ever had any elbow room, he woulda got evicted from it

    omg, how played are "blank room" lines, lmfao

    cause ur style went to shit...then came out without wipin its ass


    wtf, shit lines........damn he sucks

    and if that were the Case,
    then the people u lost to must've brought a couple of kegs


    tell me you SERIOUSLy think these lines DONT SUCK



    vote tony.......his verse was well below mediocre to be honest, but i didnt see the same played shit over and over



    yea
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  10. Sonz1

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    u need to grow up....seriously
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  12. Mr. Skull

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    Don't mind Headless, he just talks shit a lot.. good verse Ibeechu and Tony, and umm... I'ma vote for IF, because the first 4 bars were a lot better than tony's verse. Nice delivery of your punches, nice job
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  13. Creatical

    Creatical Back up this bitch

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    and make no bones about it...
    when I put one in his wig like side show mel
    you never was intricate..poor tony, nobody likin ur raps?
    cause ur style went to shit...then came out without wipin its ass

    fuckin illness... that Side Show Mel line is fuckin fresh, heh, wish i thought of it

    that keg line was alright too...


    Tony came pretty decent.. I'm not a fan of playin off verses but you really did it nicely, could comeback on the Elbow room shit..
    The end of your verse got nice... the Canibus line - shoulda forgot the linkage, shit was kinda gay..
    the last two bars were good

    Tony came with alright shit all day.. while Faren had those two hotass lines amidst a good verse.... so he wins

    Vote - Ibeezy
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  14. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    lol, creatical voting opposite my vote even though shit was played as mofuckin fuck........just so ibeechu votes for you


    thats how bitch this league is.........call a spade a mofuckin spade
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  15. Sonz1

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    I wont vote on your battle if it makes u happy...
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  16. headless verseman

    headless verseman JERSEY NUCCUH

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    nah, this one wasnt even a knock on you...i did that with my vote cuz of some of your lines


    this is callin creabitch
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  17. Justin Control

    Justin Control LIVING LEGEND

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    I thought this battle was closer than the voters are sayin...

    I won't aim for ur face, if you wanna be left with a clean grill
    ur teeth won't need braces, but ur neck and ur knees will - Ibeechu

    That was the line of the battle.. Ibeechu had some more quotables too. Tony had better personals. The drugs diss was nice. But Tony wasnt consistent enough.. IF was nice the whole way through. Tony started slower.

    VOTE Ibeechu
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  18. serge

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    Imma knock you out first thing, first round, ur not as worthy
    I'll promise you this verse wont be the only thing droppin early


    i beetche uses my style so coo i love him he sexy come sign my keyboard
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  19. IgloS

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    Imma knock you out first thing, first round, ur not as worthy
    I'll promise you this verse wont be the only thing droppin early
    -ok
    I won't aim for ur face, if you wanna be left with a clean grill
    ur teeth won't need braces, but ur neck and ur knees will
    -raw
    tony's record semi impressive, but still knew this dick was nuttin
    cause If tony ever had any elbow room, he woulda got evicted from it
    -this was decent
    when the bullet holes surround him, tony will cry and yell
    and make no bones about it...
    when I put one in his wig like side show mel
    -haha, fire
    you never was intricate..poor tony, nobody likin ur raps?
    cause ur style went to shit...then came out without wipin its ass
    -alright
    u had a chance wit Dis Honor, but he ended ur life faster
    face it, you wouldn't come before DH if you was the 9th batter
    -not bad
    u lose alot, ur excuse is u don't give a fuk about text
    and if that were the Case,
    then the people u lost to must've brought a couple of kegs
    -good idea, but worded odd
    this fight is worthless, especially since the end of your life is certain
    when Im the reason your always denied when u apply for life insurance
    -ok

    you even called me impressive, mayne my head might swell
    ‘n as for the Elbow room..you can bet your bitch knows it quite well
    -so so
    yeah my big dick’s crazy..fa’ real Tony rips sluts daily
    when it comes to your sexuality it’s all IF’s butts ‘n maybes
    -didn't care for it
    bring dissy into this, like he’s your boy..herb your killing me
    coz the only dis been connected to you concerns ability
    -good playing off, bitch move
    need to sharpen your angles coz I spit darts that’ll mangle
    ‘n fuck farensquare, I beechu into a hole that’s dark ‘n rectangle
    -dope
    you see hedz use alias once they’ve got proven game
    sad things is, your just a newbie lame, with a stupid name
    -ehh, good multis but not much else
    son is kinda dumb, I guess he needs love
    like how you gonna take a big bite of canibus..’n expect to beat drugs
    -dope
    idiot, I’ll pack the infra red, just incase I miss ya head
    'n have ya body covered in more dots than a prediction thread
    -dope
    my shoe’s ‘n feet will bruise ‘n beat this proven geek
    but still say big ups, on helping me out of my losing streak
    -okay


    voe=I beat you
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  20. castro'DAMUS

    castro'DAMUS j o e y h o f f a

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    u had a chance wit Dis Honor, but he ended ur life faster
    face it, you wouldn't come before DH if you was the 9th batter
    / - Ibeechu

    teehehehe

    This was a decent battle, but v/ Ibeechu (and not because of that line, haha)

    Tony came decent, a few good lines here and there, wasnt really consistent, had a steady flow throughout the verse.

    Ibeechu had a few better quotables, and stayed more consistent from begining to end. Good flow throughout, steady pace. Overall, a better battle verse.

    v/ Ibeechu
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