21. theFRANCHISE vs 22. Alamo

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  1. Mud.Crumb

    Mud.Crumb Apollo Child! 1986.

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  2. Alamo IV

    Alamo IV God Has A Name!

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  3. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    12 it is...........

    please post something better than what you did last week...

    tired of easy victories.........
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  4. theFRANCHISE

    theFRANCHISE I'm Aloe's friend....

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    I’ll get uncanny and smug you see umm… Franny’s a thug
    Lay the Smackdown as I Basham more than Danny n’ Doug
    I’ll rape her wait first understand I’m your new found hero
    Took Papermate to New York to say he blew Ground Zero
    Listen kid I’m ranked above you so I’m better than A
    And pay respect to me last Tuesday since it was Veteran’s Day
    I’m a bully and that’s why theFRANCHISE often teases you
    This pansy stays away from Contac even with coughs ‘n sneezes too
    I have flow, multi’s, and punchlines that’s why my synergy’s ill
    You have no lights on upstairs that explains your low energy bill
    I took up knitting to show that I’m stitchin’ whitey’s doom
    So it’s fitting I can say your more bitch than Heidi Klum

    And on to the Top 10……………
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  5. Alamo IV

    Alamo IV God Has A Name!

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    Here Key,

    Its pure skill I don't need luck to have his lady spread.
    Ayo Franchise,
    & ur lady's luck wasn't just smiling on me, she gave me head
    ... originilaties the one thing he's still searchin to find,
    creavtily is pool of imagination & Franchise drowned in the depth of his mind.
    def won't help him, caz Im all over his girl like fat kids on smarties
    Look! this franchise is Up and down like a toilet seat at a mixed party
    this kid rocked the boat, then switched sails and changed tides
    Causing this kid to fall on hard times.. yea his whole left side!
    fat fuck w/destructive life problems,
    ..one day he'll will wake up, and it will all fit together w/your clothes
    & Carmelo hyped up the nuggets mostly the ones in your nose
    Franchise made the most of himself, came up an upper body short & quit
    he would a rock pile ... if he thought there was a snake in it.
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  6. 2krukid

    2krukid Unregistered User

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    I’ll get uncanny and smug you see umm… Franny’s a thug
    Lay the Smackdown as I Basham more than Danny n’ Doug
    -lol
    I’ll rape her wait first understand I’m your new found hero
    Took Papermate to New York to say he blew Ground Zero
    -nice personal
    Listen kid I’m ranked above you so I’m better than A
    And pay respect to me last Tuesday since it was Veteran’s Day
    -nice shit
    I’m a bully and that’s why theFRANCHISE often teases you
    This pansy stays away from Contac even with coughs ‘n sneezes too
    -aaight coo
    I have flow, multi’s, and punchlines that’s why my synergy’s ill
    You have no lights on upstairs that explains your low energy bill
    -ouch!
    I took up knitting to show that I’m stitchin’ whitey’s doom
    So it’s fitting I can say your more bitch than Heidi Klum
    -solid. as. fuck.

    Its pure skill I don't need luck to have his lady spread.
    Ayo Franchise,
    & ur lady's luck wasn't just smiling on me, she gave me head
    -coo
    ... originilaties the one thing he's still searchin to find,
    creavtily is pool of imagination & Franchise drowned in the depth of his mind.
    -eh
    def won't help him, caz Im all over his girl like fat kids on smarties
    Look! this franchise is Up and down like a toilet seat at a mixed party
    -lol
    this kid rocked the boat, then switched sails and changed tides
    Causing this kid to fall on hard times.. yea his whole left side!
    -coo
    fat fuck w/destructive life problems,
    ..one day he'll will wake up, and it will all fit together w/your clothes
    & Carmelo hyped up the nuggets mostly the ones in your nose
    -yuck! whoa.......
    Franchise made the most of himself, came up an upper body short & quit
    he would a rock pile ... if he thought there was a snake in it.
    -coo

    coo verses, franchise took it tho. he just hit harder
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  7. NoShit Sherlock

    NoShit Sherlock Damn Homie

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    vote= Franch, (((( i would picked tie ))) ))

    to me his verse, came with such grace and ease, and tried to come with personals

    Alamo had some good punches and creativeness buthis lines seem force
    bit long, nothing wrong wit that, i went back and forward with my vote

    and decided with fran
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  8. Conflict

    Conflict New Member

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    i dont know about grace but that ugly mofo Franny took it


    it was quite close

    I’ll rape her wait first understand I’m your new found hero
    Took Papermate to New York to say he blew Ground Zero

    nice



    def won't help him, caz Im all over his girl like fat kids on smarties
    Look! this franchise is Up and down like a toilet seat at a mixed party

    that was cool too


    but i need flow which is why


    v/Franny Drescher
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  9. Masyre

    Masyre New Member

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    My vote goes to Fran

    he had the better verse and I liked his closer.


    This was a decent battle
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  10. Imperial

    Imperial Lex

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    Judgin by the other votes, this looked real close.. so ill give a breakdown...

    theFRANCHISE:
    I’ll get uncanny and smug you see umm… Franny’s a thug
    Lay the Smackdown as I Basham more than Danny n’ Doug
    ----coo punch, 3/5
    I’ll rape her wait first understand I’m your new found hero
    Took Papermate to New York to say he blew Ground Zero
    ----coo, 2.5/5
    Listen kid I’m ranked above you so I’m better than A
    And pay respect to me last Tuesday since it was Veteran’s Day
    ----heh, pretty nice, 3/5
    I’m a bully and that’s why theFRANCHISE often teases you
    This pansy stays away from Contac even with coughs ‘n sneezes too
    ----nice, 3.5/5
    I have flow, multi’s, and punchlines that’s why my synergy’s ill
    You have no lights on upstairs that explains your low energy bill
    ----pretty good, 2/5
    I took up knitting to show that I’m stitchin’ whitey’s doom
    So it’s fitting I can say your more bitch than Heidi Klum
    ----decent closer, 1.5/5

    Flow: 3.5/5
    Overall: 19/35

    Alamo IV:
    Its pure skill I don't need luck to have his lady spread.
    Ayo Franchise,
    & ur lady's luck wasn't just smiling on me, she gave me head
    ----aight, 1.5/5
    ... originilaties the one thing he's still searchin to find,
    creavtily is pool of imagination & Franchise drowned in the depth of his mind.
    ----pretty good, 1.5/5
    def won't help him, caz Im all over his girl like fat kids on smarties
    Look! this franchise is Up and down like a toilet seat at a mixed party
    ----ehh, 1/5
    this kid rocked the boat, then switched sails and changed tides
    Causing this kid to fall on hard times.. yea his whole left side!
    ----little weak, 1/5
    fat fuck w/destructive life problems,
    ..one day he'll will wake up, and it will all fit together w/your clothes
    & Carmelo hyped up the nuggets mostly the ones in your nose
    ----ehh, .5/5
    Franchise made the most of himself, came up an upper body short & quit
    he would a rock pile ... if he thought there was a snake in it.
    ----decent closer, 1.5/5

    Flow: 2/5
    Overall: 9/35

    Overall, Fran came more witty. His punches were harder. Stay up yall.

    Vote: theFRANCHISE
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  11. Iye WunDeR

    Iye WunDeR Keepin it Real since '87

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    vote-Alamo..

    Fran wtf were u thinking with some of those lines i think between each of u there were like 2 decent lines & Alamo had the harder decent lines..

    ^how can u not like that couplet? i mean it's creative & it prolly took more than 2 millisecond to think out..

    vote-Alamo.. better verse barely..
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  12. Craven Moorehead

    Craven Moorehead Big Sloppy

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    Proof had the all around better shit. Alama started off aiight, but then just fell apart. Franchise had some up and down shit, but it was koo. Had a couple real fresh lines. Flow is always down - got this by a good margin.

    Vote: theFRANCHISE
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  13. Break it

    Break it TEXTACY

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    I'm going to have to go with franchise on this just edged it

    loved the low bill line ...killed me

    vote= franchise
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  14. Sur*5*ILL

    Sur*5*ILL Kangs

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    Punches: Franchise
    Flow: Even
    Wordplay: Franchise
    Personals: Eh...Fran Only Had One
    Appeal: Even


    Vote: Franchise, Although I've Seen You Come Alot Harder..
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  15. Worst Enemy

    Worst Enemy ex-rbl champ, so?

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    Al came good over all but Franchise murdered duke. Flips punches flow wordplay the whole nine yards. vote - Fr
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  16. Jason123

    Jason123 New Member

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    Franchise has came better than this....but it was still good...as was Alamo's......never peeped ya shit man...and you are good.....but.

    Fran didn't murder him, but he did come a lil more consistant.....whereas Alamo fell in more parts..

    My vote - Fran.
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  17. Charles

    Charles Kwelity

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    vote - franchize..

    was closer than the votes show...but fran came more consistant..alamo had some real eh lines..so it gotta go to franch..
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  18. I.deal

    I.deal The BOSS of all BOSSES.

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    i got franch too.. sorry for alamo tho, cuz his verse was pretty fucking good.. just could have been worded a bit better in places, like the lady luck.

    2 cents
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  19. Papermate

    Papermate Registered Writer

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    vote - franchise

    better lines, alamo came pretty tight though

    but, fran was more consistent with his shit
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  20. X sample

    X sample New Member

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    vote = franchise...pretty close, but he pulled the win..

    alamo had some nice lines, then there were some that were weird, lol

    franchise was consistent, got the win
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