Discussion in 'The Rapmusic Storytelling/Topical League' started by Nebz, Oct 5, 2003.
iight Trap just makin sure..thanxz 4 votin...
this shouldn't be close
Peepers is a far more developed writer
clearly out shining Sin2 in writers voice and imagery
...but not only that, his plot was better aswell.
Sin2 just was very simplistic with everything,a nd that doesn't attract me.
or 5-3....still havent seen trap name as a rstl head....
good battle peep
word good battle
any more votes plz?
SIN2 wins this hands down for me...
His story flowed so well. It didn't sound forced, like he was trying to rhyme, he just did. It came off naturally, and that's what I look for in rhymes and multies. Peepers was cool, but he had to explain himself in the end, and that usually is a red flag to me. I liked Peep's story, but the twist wasn't explained enough. I'm still trying to figure out exactly what happened.
did he mean to committ suicide or was it just an accident?
why would he need oxygen most skyscrapers aren't that high? (that may just be my ignorance of stunt work tho')
SIN2 story was just entertaining. He really went through the topic and the ending was just beautifully comical. It wasn't a twist and that's why I loved it.
peepers...flow was choppy...story line was ok...could have worked it better...just didnt feel ur rhyme scheme throughout...
sin2...less complex story...but complexity doesnt win battles for me...altho some parts were vague...u were more consistant
good win sin...peace
OUT i thought i was alone wit that complexity shit....if its a good story its a good story...
Peeps good battle famm...
trap is God Extentions
I'd like to say, you each had great stories, but I guess i'm a sucker for that falling from a building one. Peep had a great story, and a great flip at the end with it being a stunt man, and how it was all planned out from the beginning. Sick flip...
Sin, you had a great story, but I just wasn't left going, WOW in it. So I'm gonna have to go with Peepers here. Great battle guys
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