21. N. Taverez v.s 22. Linxz

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  1. Oneduh

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  2. Linxz

    Linxz What!

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    Heads gonna oneduh If this a mismatch
    knowing taverez he’s a whining bitch cat
    might of won a tourney guess u got 1up on linxz
    newbie plz! that don’t make u a vet homey
    it just give more ass of that gas flow to ya hype yo
    back to basics’ I’ve master
    you came in this league cause nyggaz scatter
    knowing you timid I’m in it to win it
    stop posing as a condom & get ya dick wet nygga
    to gutta, tough, rugged, and raw known to break laws
    since this text, I’ll strangle ya eyes instead of embracing ya jaw
    let this be ya final step! Where I take my stands’
    act hard&jock wood like ya name Jhood
    knowing that I spit flames, that a soul cant maintain
    Al murder U, you next fam! This coke admit that I’m dope
    how this became an example of a classic
    cause you got more twist in you than a pepsi can do
    shame for thinking that its gonna be a rough task
    cause this mountain I’m sprite’n is way over dew
    you catz are garbage but don’t worry that ya lack
    my hunger&thirst fitting to get rid of the trash
    I’m 24 now you was register before me clown
    so what that make you! what you really got to prove?
    A grown ass man thatz scare to make moves
    The type to sell a few dimes thinking hes’ a drug dealer
    fronting to bitches like he cocky but only rolling skimps
    call my blunts bushwick how they popeye thick
    dealing wit dro that’s so wet you thought I rolled in the shower
    teams gutta something these lames need to get wit
    honestly yall know this herb cant fuck wit it
    only way you can show thug if you CAPSLOCK ur shyt
    might else well spacebar to backspace to control alt delete ya script


    1bar kill


    before I indent ya back to front like a welcome flyer
    this rap game to you is suicidal suicide, I’m bout to catch a homicide//​





    fin!
    test
  3. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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    how many lines is that?
    let me know and ill have mine up shortly
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  4. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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    quick drop


    Look
    I'll take ya wallet and bankcard for practice yo
    And punch your face in faster than an access code
    See me? I had a helluva verse for you
    But since we talking bout Linx....they'd all be irrelevant personals
    Give it up son, you aint got the heart to win this
    When we cant tell where ya bars start OR finish
    Plus voters'll never jam to your flow
    they gonna say you "lost son" like the offspring of Anna Nicole
    So you can peep how I bop with it------cuz you such a fucking scrub
    I'ma cut your head off and clean some pots with it
    I will rope this geek from both his feet
    I already dropped Linx....do I really hafta vote this week?
    You gets no pussy son ya ass is gay
    so why create a diversion? <--that'll happen when he pass away
    Fuck the bullshit , Im the man to shelf ya
    I aint playing with Linx son, aint ever been a fan of Zelda
    Why fight with a bitch, seriously I dont need that
    If I wanted to see scratches, I'd have ya girl show me her kneecaps
    You peep that? you shouldve no showed kid, u knows this
    Shit is a bigger waste than all those lines you posted
    You ding demos like you plan to get rich----when bottomline
    A broken finger wont really wanna jam to your shit
    Stop spitting Linx, you need to dead that shit
    Shouldve quoted from the mag....at least people read THAT shit
    I'm keystyling...have it up before lunchtime
    It took me longer just to seperate ya setups from ya punchlines
    And bitches call ya shit filler son they liken it to trash
    Ya bitch call me Dick filler cuz she like it in the ass
    So ima let my 45 finish him quick
    bullets my clip hand off...will have him running scrimmage in a ditch
    This shit is wack, really son Im only playing with targets
    Cuz who the fuck needs 34 lines to call you garbage?
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  5. youngflow

    youngflow New Member

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    tavarez killed him.....linxz flow was too confusing.....he didnt say anything good

    tavarez had nice flow and hard punches



    fav punch....voters'll never jam to ya flow....they gonna say you"lost son" like

    the offspring of anna nicole




    vote-tavarez
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  6. Linxz

    Linxz What!

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    lol.....
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  7. Ivy League

    Ivy League A League of his Own......

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    obvious..........


    v- Taz

    This shit is wack, really son Im only playing with targets
    Cuz who the fuck needs 34 lines to call you garbage?

    -bwhahaha
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  8. Quite Strange

    Quite Strange New Member

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    Linxz last bar didnt even rhyme...Tav's opener was nice and closer was sick too, Linxkz verse seemed all over the place not many lines hit at all...Vote-Tav
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  9. SPuL

    SPuL SP

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    nothing really

    v.s.

    Give it up son, you aint got the heart to win this
    When we cant tell where ya bars start OR finish
    Plus voters'll never jam to your flow
    they gonna say you "lost son" like the offspring of Anna Nicole
    I will rope this geek from both his feet
    I already dropped Linx....do I really hafta vote this week?
    This shit is wack, really son Im only playing with targets
    Cuz who the fuck needs 34 lines to call you garbage?


    Overall, this was one-sided as hell. Linx, you gotta really work on your structure man. couldn't even tell where your set up and punchlines were. And it seemed like you were just saying shit. Try to add some witt into your lines. And DO NOT go that many lines if you can't bring shit to the table, nah mean? Lower the number of lines down, maybe you'll have more time to focus on those few lines. Cuz iunno, your verse did nothing for me. But keep tryin' man. You'll eventually get shit poppin'. Don't stop, just focus more. Taverez on the other hand killed this. He didn't even need to try and he won this with ease. He had some ill bars. Drop linx and closer were both dope. He got this without a doubt.

    v/NT
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  10. Linxz

    Linxz What!

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    Word i got my next battle to show and prove in, and i said the samething when i seen who i was facing. But hey good shyt.
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  11. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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    im leaving on a trip so i will make up votes next week
    dont DQ me lol ill make it up
    no access whatsoever this weekend
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  12. N.Tavarez

    N.Tavarez .....

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  13. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    im not reading everything, im basing my vote off of the first ten lines of each. we all know who won anyway.


    Heads gonna oneduh If this a mismatch
    knowing taverez he’s a whining bitch cat
    might of won a tourney guess u got 1up on linxz
    newbie plz! that don’t make u a vet homey
    it just give more ass of that gas flow to ya hype yo
    back to basics’ I’ve master
    you came in this league cause nyggaz scatter
    knowing you timid I’m in it to win it
    stop posing as a condom & get ya dick wet nygga
    to gutta, tough, rugged, and raw known to break laws


    I'll take ya wallet and bankcard for practice yo
    And punch your face in faster than an access code
    See me? I had a helluva verse for you
    But since we talking bout Linx....they'd all be irrelevant personals
    Give it up son, you aint got the heart to win this
    When we cant tell where ya bars start OR finish
    Plus voters'll never jam to your flow
    they gonna say you "lost son" like the offspring of Anna Nicole
    So you can peep how I bop with it------cuz you such a fucking scrub
    I'ma cut your head off and clean some pots with it



    Tav got this so easy. started off strong, came with some direct, personal hits...humor, and creativtiy. the last line was pretty original, although the setup was filleresque....


    Vote N



    nothing at all worth mentioning in linxz cverse, i gave him too much credit by even putting his ten lines in my post.
    test
  14. Mc Witha Temper

    Mc Witha Temper New Member

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    vote= NT

    linx shit was VERY porrly worded and seemed like ajumble of words more than anything..kinda like WRENCH or maddrapper shit..just horendous..had potential to be creative and different but lacked consistancy...

    NT had many p[ucnhes in there name plays were good i felt even tho sum seemed old becuz of linx name but they fit and they hit...solid...way more than enough to beat Linx innability to write one normal battle line
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  15. Al Murder U

    Al Murder U Lyrically...

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    lol @ maddrapper


    aint seen that nigga in forever
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  16. Mc Witha Temper

    Mc Witha Temper New Member

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    he's gotta be maddrapper...Wrench 145

    check the open mic
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  17. Oddwirdz

    Oddwirdz New Member

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    one sided ass battle.. linx verse was all over the place..and sme line didnt really hit for me..

    so my vote goes for

    vote. Taverez

    This shit is wack, really son Im only playing with targets
    Cuz who the fuck needs 34 lines to call you garbage?

    ^^shit was sick..
    test
  18. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Over noshows.
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  19. macmilimeterhyms

    macmilimeterhyms Product of the 80s

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    linxz verse was not worth reading the whole thing no offense but time is money and I ain't rich

    Tavarez verse was alot better flow and punches throughout the whole thing so it had to beat what I read of linxz regardless

    vote- Tavarez
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  20. Venamis

    Venamis Moderator

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    Linxz:

    how this became an example of a classic
    cause you got more twist in you than a pepsi can do
    shame for thinking that its gonna be a rough task
    cause this mountain I’m sprite’n is way over dew

    Wow overall horrible blah verse, that was all that really hit and I had to quote all four lines to tell you that the pepsi twist flip is all that hit in that shit, it was rediculous. You need some help man, go to the Dojo or ask a vet for some tutoring. Better luck next week, don't key that much if it's going to be trash, no offense.

    N. Taverez:

    See me? I had a helluva verse for you
    But since we talking bout Linx....they'd all be irrelevant personals
    Give it up son, you aint got the heart to win this
    When we cant tell where ya bars start OR finish

    These two first few bars knocked it out the park for him, he slaughtered Linxz on four lines right here... Decent verse, it was long so a few things fell, a few things I wasn't feeling, but these four were flames. Decent battle.

    Vote - N. Taverez
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