21. Mercules 1-0 vs. 22. DustrO 0-1

Discussion in 'Rapmusic.com Battle League' started by Oneduh, Nov 13, 2006.

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  1. Oneduh

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  2. Mercules...

    Mercules... ya'll know the name

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  3. DustrO

    DustrO Who Is I

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    16 works for me
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  4. DustrO

    DustrO Who Is I

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    Fuck a merc I’m killing ya cause your verse just wont work/
    Im sorry your just so terrible I couldn’t help but pop a smirk/
    Im jerking ya around more than you do your dick/
    And in you click you’re the one that they call the bitch/
    I spit bone shattering shots like a chrome plated gat/
    And you don’t know who I am but I’ll lay ya flat on ya back/
    You get the privilege to hear a platinum verse/
    You aren’t Pac but ya still winding up in a hurse/
    You winning the race, wont happen im way too fast/
    Put some fuel in them lyrics cause they running outta gas/
    You need more training cause your way outta of ya league/
    So welcome to boot camp but you haven’t earned your fatigues/
    You a straight up rookie haven’t made it out the minors/
    And your clothing apparel's fake, while mines nothing but designers/

    -DustrO-
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  5. DustrO

    DustrO Who Is I

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  6. Mercules...

    Mercules... ya'll know the name

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    sorry for the lateness

    look how he spells his name.. this kid is a fag
    plus i'ma huslter.. known to put a big O in a bag
    yeah i'm bodying you .. so ya can settle into place
    replace that u with an e.. and put the metal in ya face
    punk you suck.. these few nameplays are enuff
    i'll treat my bullets like they're racer cars, and leave 'em in the Dust
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  7. ill nik-A

    ill nik-A Dirty Sanchez!!

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    Dustro...

    Fuck a merc I’m killing ya cause your verse just wont work/
    Im sorry your just so terrible I couldn’t help but pop a smirk/
    Im jerking ya around more than you do your dick/
    And in you click you’re the one that they call the bitch/
    I spit bone shattering shots like a chrome plated gat/
    And you don’t know who I am but I’ll lay ya flat on ya back/
    You get the privilege to hear a platinum verse/
    You aren’t Pac but ya still winding up in a hurse/
    You winning the race, wont happen im way too fast/
    Put some fuel in them lyrics cause they running outta gas/
    You need more training cause your way outta of ya league/
    So welcome to boot camp but you haven’t earned your fatigues/
    You a straight up rookie haven’t made it out the minors/
    And your clothing apparel's fake, while mines nothing but designers/


    ummmm this explains a lot.....dude u dont even have obne punch in this verse, no creativity, no great concepts, this isnt a battle verse

    Merc..

    look how he spells his name.. this kid is a fag
    plus i'ma huslter.. known to put a big O in a bag

    punk you suck.. these few nameplays are enuff
    i'll treat my bullets like they're racer cars, and leave 'em in the Dust

    Merc wins
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  8. A.P.O.S.

    A.P.O.S. New Member

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    man..

    umm..

    dustr0 homie..i dont wanna be a jerk so ill be nice here.

    step it up. im not sure how old you are but you sound pretty young. you need to be creative with it...develop some simple metas, some punches..because your straightfoward "i am good, you are not" style just really isnt going to get you a win around here. may i suggest the dojo.

    vote=merc. based on just common sense and good taste.
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  9. Concise.

    Concise. New Member

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    boo..

    dustro just came bad.. like stated above develope metas and punches..
    merc developed punches and posted a battle verse.. sooo

    v - merc
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  10. The Royal Penis

    The Royal Penis God.

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    this is the best breakdown.. ill nika is stupid there were punches, but like concise said they were'nt developed.. even with the developed punches it was still close, because they were so lame.. i liked the E line...but then you come with some more nameplays when you say it's enough.. sloppy writing right there.. close but

    vote-Merc... Dust, rhyme better... don't use YOU to start off 75% of your lines.. it takes alot away from a verse when you see the same word starting off alot of lines.. I.E. Georgia's verse.
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  11. Phryme

    Phryme lets get it.

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    nothing

    vs

    look how he spells his name.. this kid is a fag
    plus i'ma huslter.. known to put a big O in a bag
    punk you suck.. these few nameplays are enuff
    i'll treat my bullets like they're racer cars, and leave 'em in the Dust

    v/merc. uhhh, dustro? what were you thinking? you cant drop just half-diss lines. use some metas, similies or even personals in your verses and you'll do fine.
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  12. Are aye wy

    Are aye wy See what happens?

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    Vote-mercules
    Was very effective for all the right reasons lol.
    Dustro's verse could of been way more better if he had some harder lines.
    One sided, eh.
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  13. kungfugrip

    kungfugrip New Member

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    yeah Merc took this pretty easily lol.

    wasn't feeling anything in Dustro's verse..

    Merc's opener pretty much beat Dustro's best line.

    v/Mercules
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  14. Oneduh

    Oneduh Guest

    Merc wins.
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